Re: Japanese
The Hiragana there is a little off. You didn't use the particle は and you put "on'a" (おんあ) instead of "on'na" (おんな).
That's right if you like cute girls. I'm not exactly sure what age range "girl" covers and when it should become 女の人 (おんなのひと), though.
My guess would be レーヴ (reivu) or レーッヴ (reivvu). The extended "E" sounds more correct... I'll let someone who knows for sure answer.
Found something else wrong with the opening:
はいたい is "pregnancy". ケータイ (携帯) is "mobile phone". keitai no bangou.
The Hiragana there is a little off. You didn't use the particle は and you put "on'a" (おんあ) instead of "on'na" (おんな).
That's right if you like cute girls. I'm not exactly sure what age range "girl" covers and when it should become 女の人 (おんなのひと), though.
My guess would be レーヴ (reivu) or レーッヴ (reivvu). The extended "E" sounds more correct... I'll let someone who knows for sure answer.
Found something else wrong with the opening:
Originally posted by Sunako_Nakahara_Girl

i all i see is squares where the words should be 




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