Im writting a book...

[earth_lord]

thank you, more detail will be added

[Lightknight924]

yeah it's a good book ao far.

[earth_lord]

once again i thank everyone for there comments

[pfff]

Dude your story is like freaken awesome, if you got it published i would surely buy it.

I thank you for your comment but dont count your chickens before they hatch

in other words wait until your read the whole thing im writing then make your most awesome opinion

okay i got it, i look forward to reading the rest

[earth_lord]

good thank you for understanding

[Snapps]

What grade are you in? Because at higher grades they tell you how to use better wording, sentence structure, and other little things that would be amazing for a story if a person wrote it.

If you say your grade, I can think back at what they taught me then and tell you what you are missing.

[Afrobean]

Guys, this kid was banned a bit back for being underage. Don't you guys remember?

I'd say he's a freshman in highschool, or in junior high still. That is definitely not the time to be "writting" a book, unless one is very advanced, which I can see that this earth_lord is not (No offense intended).