FFR Community Pack

[dore]

Re: FFR Community Pack

I sent my file in, I'm not sure I'm happy with everything yet but I'd like other opinions. I had to fix some scoring to get the song to agree with where I wanted my file to go, but other than that I think it's good.

[omgitznpv]

Re: FFR Community Pack

Only if you want to.

If you're up for taking at least some of the suggestions, sure. I'll be more than glad to. The better a file is, the more people will like it, and it contributes to this pack with a much greater magnitude.

I personally want this pack to be an actually decent pack, not some random pack thrown out there nobody's going to bother with. Being an amazing pack, I'm not sure, but I still want it to be cool and fun.

[moches]

Re: FFR Community Pack

If you're up for taking at least some of the suggestions, sure. I'll be more than glad to. The better a file is, the more people will like it, and it contributes to this pack with a much greater magnitude.

I personally want this pack to be an actually decent pack, not some random pack thrown out there nobody's going to bother with. Being an amazing pack, I'm not sure, but I still want it to be cool and fun.

Yeah, you pretty much said it all there.

Doing homework right now (apparently), and starting on All of the World.

[trumaestro]

Re: FFR Community Pack

If you're up for taking at least some of the suggestions, sure. I'll be more than glad to. The better a file is, the more people will like it, and it contributes to this pack with a much greater magnitude.

I'm always open for suggestions. Go ahead, then.

[omgitznpv]

Re: FFR Community Pack

Alright. Once I finish with my work (hopefully really soon), I'll get straight to it and give you a hugeass tear-up of your file.

[trumaestro]

Re: FFR Community Pack

If you could email me a .txt file, that'd be really cool.
Send to trumaestro[at]hotmail[dot]com

[omgitznpv]

Re: FFR Community Pack

*edit*
SORRY TOO LATE
*/edit*

Keep in mind if I state something for one part of the song that repeats, apply it to all of them. In addition, a lot of this is just personal opinion, so if you disagree with some of my suggestions, you don't need to take them.

Blood For Justice

m1- the 8th jumps that go to the guitar or w/e, play around with them because it's a little strange for me. dunno what to do, but if you can't improve it then leave it because it's big deal at all.

m2- the 2nd 8th beat (the first 8th jump of the measure) has a 16th triplet (24ths) leading to the 2nd beat of the measure, but its not too audible so you can leave it be.

m2 again- the 24ths starting from the 3rd beat are incorrect. assuming x = 24th and - = 24th rest, it goes like this xx-x-xx-xx-xx. it's a little awkward so play with the patterns a bit and you can go ahead and layer something in if you want to try that

m4 and m6- third beats could be a hand

m7- the jump on the 2nd beat actually starts on the 16th following that. the 3rd beat could also be a hand but that = jack and might disrupt flow and may not be fun so idk

m8 9 10 whatever- try stepping the slide thingies no idea how theyll turn out though

same area as above- since its a pretty intense area with few actual hits and stuff, try "intensifying" the steps to the beats or something

m14- the jumptrill thing should be 3 16th jumps, a 16th arrow, then 7 16th jumps not 5 jumps single arrow 5 jumps again

m15-21 or whatever- the percussion is not too dominating here; the bass is. try stepping that?

m23-28- oh god this part could DEFINITELY have more jumps/hands to the heavy downbeats and accents coming from things besides from solely the percussion. try some holds to the guitar too

m29-37 area and whereever it repeats- holds to the guitar would probably be better

m38-some measure later area (too lazy lol)- try adding holds to everything thats an 8th beat long or longer than that (not 16ths for example) from the guitar. add hands too on louder beats.

m38- pick-up to m39 you missed a 16th from the guitar

m39- 8th beat between 3rd and 4th beat- check the sync on the guitar here. i changed it to 3 16ths and the 3rd beat was a jump, then a 24th right after that (pink arrow thing) and an 8th before the next measure

m41- quad is no. also, the guitar syncing is actually a 12th note before the 3rd beat, 8th note after the 3rd beat, and another 12th right after the 4th.

m42 4th beat- try a (26) jump instead of a (86) for PR purposes

guitar solo place- bring out the guitar notes a little more (example you'll have a triple thingy when its 8ths on from the rhythm and a lone from the guitar- place a jump on the guitar there to bring it out or something)

m62- 4th beat- guitar thing- starts on the 4th beat, 32nd right after that, then it's a 12th note after the 14th beat, and a 16th before the start of the next measure. check syncage like this where its like that.

guitar solo area generally needs more work

m123- should be 2 16th jumps from 16th note before the 3rd beat and on the 3rd beat (shift down a 16th value)

m124- continue stepping the rhythm guitar 16ths here and place a jumptrill at the final beat

also you did use copy&paste for a lot of the file right? it annoys me a bit so change up some patterns


i missed some stuff out of laziness btw

*edit 2*

starting on judging the newer files tomorrow.

*edit 3*

hey dore is it actually pronouced door not dore because i always viewed it that way because of the word dore in japanese

[kommisar[os]]

Re: FFR Community Pack

trumaestro i havent had a chance to get an in-depth review of your file but i guess npv made one. can't say how accurate it is though hehe

[dore]

Re: FFR Community Pack

Yeah it's dore as in commodore.

EDIT Now that I think of it I always pronounced your named omgpitzpov so I guess we're even.

[trumaestro]

Re: FFR Community Pack

post

I am currently looking through this side-by-side with SM open. Adding stuff, getting rid of stuff. yea. Thanks!

post

Well, whatever. If you still want to, I'm not stopping you.

[omgitznpv]

Re: FFR Community Pack

can't say how accurate it is though hehe

could be a lot longer and more accurate if i had the time to bother lol. i still had some things to get done, so i made it a big more concise (rofl). would've been like twice or three times as long lmfao

i'd still say go ahead and make an in-depth review yourself since most of my reviews and judging reeks of bias and junk so yeah

Yeah it's dore as in commodore.

EDIT Now that I think of it I always pronounced your named omgpitzpov so I guess we're even.

pitzpov what the hell lmao

skcwbtgrobhwld (9:30:57 PM): EDIT Now that I think of it I always pronounced your named omgpitzpov so I guess we're even.
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:08 PM): rofl
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:20 PM): nono
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:21 PM): no
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:22 PM): rofl
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:27 PM): rofl
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:28 PM): hard
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:30 PM): hard
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:30 PM): rofl
TeRaDoesNothing (9:31:37 PM): hard rofling

[dore]

Re: FFR Community Pack

I have trouble making a 9 letter name 7 syllables long so I kinda condensed it rofl

[kommisar[os]]

Re: FFR Community Pack

yeah if i were to make a long in-depth review dondon style it would take a little while. although i think he has good guidelines to make his file better.

[Nightfirecat]

Re: FFR Community Pack

WOW... Sorry guys... I haven't been at home much for the past few days... I'll get the batch notes for batch 2 done, and get to work on all of these files...

EDIT: Yeah... the batches are REALLY short... Could we PLEASE make them like a week long or something? this 3 or 4 day thing is really screwing me up...

EDIT2: Dicks is gay and that marathon song is boring as hell... I'll post my batch notes tomorrow probably, if I have time to play the rest of the songs...

[kommisar[os]]

Re: FFR Community Pack

why make batches? just judge the files as they're submitted