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  • burningeyes88
    FFR Player
    • Nov 2006
    • 359

    #1

    for the girl i love

    here i the poems i wrote for her

    Your face eclipses the sun
    But the sun pails in comparison to your warmth
    Your glow
    And the moon like your eyes
    Big and bright
    I have never seen the cold stare of those two moons
    But only the luminous loving gaze of my lone and only


    and


    Every time you walk away
    I think
    I think about the times we’ve spent
    Just sitting in the grass
    As the sun goes down
    As the nights cold grasps me
    Your warmth keeps it at bay
    It feels like the sun has just reappeared
    But I was not hosted by the sky
    But by your eyes
    Like a bonfire
    Its heat reddens my skin
    Or is it just your beauty
    Making me blush a crimson red
    Originally posted by 6 p01nt3d*st@r
    You spelled FFR wrong.

    Originally posted by Shashakiro
    Yeah, FFR is addicting...I don't think I'll get bored with this game unless I somehow become the best at it, which won't happen.
    Originally posted by Synthlight
    I usually just get all naked and tell them they will turn gay if they touch me.

    Cheers,

    Synthlight
  • ~sheneen~
    FFR Player
    • May 2007
    • 11

    #2
    Re: for the girl i love

    =D
    =O
    <3!

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    • mead1
      Cerebellumberjack
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Aug 2003
      • 3960

      #3
      Re: for the girl i love

      She won't love you if you give her these.

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      • -Moo-
        FFR Player
        • Jan 2007
        • 1199

        #4
        Re: for the girl i love

        lol

        touch my pokeballz

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        • omgitznpv
          cohoooooon
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Aug 2005
          • 6980

          #5
          Re: for the girl i love

          Your posting these poems should make you blush a crimson red.

          To be less offensive, you can still improve on them, drastically.
          Originally posted by DossarLX ODI
          What's the point of using drugs anyways? I heard they help you relax but that's pretty much it. (Not talking about medicines)

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          • ShastaTwist
            FFR Veteran
            • Sep 2004
            • 599

            #6
            Re: for the girl i love

            ... Uhm... So cheesy.

            But, uh... If she's at all into literacy, then she won't appreciate these.

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            • burningeyes88
              FFR Player
              • Nov 2006
              • 359

              #7
              Re: for the girl i love

              eh
              whatever
              oh well
              and it was for the girl that posted after me
              she seems fine with it
              Originally posted by 6 p01nt3d*st@r
              You spelled FFR wrong.

              Originally posted by Shashakiro
              Yeah, FFR is addicting...I don't think I'll get bored with this game unless I somehow become the best at it, which won't happen.
              Originally posted by Synthlight
              I usually just get all naked and tell them they will turn gay if they touch me.

              Cheers,

              Synthlight

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              • ~sheneen~
                FFR Player
                • May 2007
                • 11

                #8
                Re: for the girl i love

                Yeah, I am fine with it. I think it proves he's not an ass like my ex... who never even hugged me, let alone write a poem.

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                • beaner692
                  FFR Player
                  • Oct 2006
                  • 1071

                  #9
                  Re: for the girl i love

                  Your 13, get over it


                  Oh and for the poem, I would make it a lot more complex, but good start.


                  wewt10k aim: IMB3AU


                  http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...&q=vertex+beta
                  I play Vertex BETA :O

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                  • ShAiOnEi
                    FFR Player
                    • May 2007
                    • 1110

                    #10
                    Re: for the girl i love

                    Originally posted by ShastaTwist
                    ... Uhm... So cheesy.

                    But, uh... If she's at all into literacy, then she won't appreciate these.
                    In other words she slightly enjoyed it. I'm not into poetry or hardcore love obsessing things but that was a good one I guess..
                    I love my son Auron

                    Epic thread killer

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                    • burningeyes88
                      FFR Player
                      • Nov 2006
                      • 359

                      #11
                      Re: for the girl i love

                      Originally posted by ShAiOnEi
                      In other words she slightly enjoyed it. I'm not into poetry or hardcore love obsessing things but that was a good one I guess..

                      ...thanks??
                      Originally posted by 6 p01nt3d*st@r
                      You spelled FFR wrong.

                      Originally posted by Shashakiro
                      Yeah, FFR is addicting...I don't think I'll get bored with this game unless I somehow become the best at it, which won't happen.
                      Originally posted by Synthlight
                      I usually just get all naked and tell them they will turn gay if they touch me.

                      Cheers,

                      Synthlight

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                      • greekanilater
                        FFR Player
                        • Mar 2007
                        • 352

                        #12
                        Re: for the girl i love

                        stalker?

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                        • beaner692
                          FFR Player
                          • Oct 2006
                          • 1071

                          #13
                          Re: for the girl i love

                          possibly the largest sig I've seen to this day


                          wewt10k aim: IMB3AU


                          http://video.google.com/videoplay?do...&q=vertex+beta
                          I play Vertex BETA :O

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                          • -Moo-
                            FFR Player
                            • Jan 2007
                            • 1199

                            #14
                            Re: for the girl i love

                            Originally posted by beaner692
                            possibly the largest sig I've seen to this day
                            I was thinking the same thing.

                            touch my pokeballz

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                            • burningeyes88
                              FFR Player
                              • Nov 2006
                              • 359

                              #15
                              Re: for the girl i love

                              hly **** greek
                              Originally posted by 6 p01nt3d*st@r
                              You spelled FFR wrong.

                              Originally posted by Shashakiro
                              Yeah, FFR is addicting...I don't think I'll get bored with this game unless I somehow become the best at it, which won't happen.
                              Originally posted by Synthlight
                              I usually just get all naked and tell them they will turn gay if they touch me.

                              Cheers,

                              Synthlight

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