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  • mead1
    Cerebellumberjack
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 3960

    #16
    Re: for the girl i love

    Originally posted by ~sheneen~
    Yeah, I am fine with it. I think it proves he's not an ass like my ex... who never even hugged me, let alone write a poem.
    I'll write you more than two poems, it means I'm a better person than your boyfriend.

    they can be found here:

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    • jugglinguy
      Use me as a porta-potty
      • Dec 2006
      • 4319

      #17
      Re: for the girl i love

      Originally posted by beaner692
      possibly the largest sig I've seen to this day
      I said that to myself right when i saw his post.
      Originally posted by Jem
      Jem is my name. No one else is the same!

      You're Aja Leith of the Holograms! You're very exotic, intelligent and sophisticated.

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      • ShastaTwist
        FFR Veteran
        • Sep 2004
        • 599

        #18
        Re: for the girl i love

        Originally posted by ~sheneen~
        Yeah, I am fine with it. I think it proves he's not an ass like my ex... who never even hugged me, let alone write a poem.
        You're definitely going to be with this guy for the rest of your life.

        Sheerly because he writes you mediocre poetry.

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        • sakura080789
          Rapture Universe
          • Feb 2007
          • 1751

          #19
          Re: for the girl i love

          ok i liked it i write poems for my gf all the time

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          • omgitznpv
            cohoooooon
            FFR Simfile Author
            • Aug 2005
            • 6980

            #20
            Re: for the girl i love

            Originally posted by ShastaTwist
            You're definitely going to be with this guy for the rest of your life.

            Sheerly because he writes you mediocre poetry.
            It's mediocre?
            Originally posted by DossarLX ODI
            What's the point of using drugs anyways? I heard they help you relax but that's pretty much it. (Not talking about medicines)

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            • phe0nixblade
              Praise the sun mofo
              • Sep 2005
              • 4281

              #21
              Re: for the girl i love

              Location: CT
              Location: Canada
              Oh. Ok.

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              • arsonistsgetallthegirls
                FFR Player
                • Jun 2007
                • 459

                #22
                Re: for the girl i love

                awwww!!







                i microwaved my pizza for too long and now it's all rubbery.... :/
                one hand, no mercy...

                [Trust me, This user is your friend.]

                Originally posted by Zeron
                Holy ****, civility in the forums?! My head just asploded.
                Wait, What?

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                • burningeyes88
                  FFR Player
                  • Nov 2006
                  • 359

                  #23
                  Re: for the girl i love

                  Originally posted by ShastaTwist
                  You're definitely going to be with this guy for the rest of your life.

                  Sheerly because he writes you mediocre poetry.
                  did anyone ever tell you your a bitch...i think so
                  Originally posted by 6 p01nt3d*st@r
                  You spelled FFR wrong.

                  Originally posted by Shashakiro
                  Yeah, FFR is addicting...I don't think I'll get bored with this game unless I somehow become the best at it, which won't happen.
                  Originally posted by Synthlight
                  I usually just get all naked and tell them they will turn gay if they touch me.

                  Cheers,

                  Synthlight

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                  • omgitznpv
                    cohoooooon
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    • Aug 2005
                    • 6980

                    #24
                    Re: for the girl i love

                    Originally posted by burningeyes88
                    did anyone ever tell you your a bitch...i think so
                    But she speaks the truth!
                    Originally posted by DossarLX ODI
                    What's the point of using drugs anyways? I heard they help you relax but that's pretty much it. (Not talking about medicines)

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                    • ShAiOnEi
                      FFR Player
                      • May 2007
                      • 1110

                      #25
                      Re: for the girl i love

                      Posted this on her profile
                      I figured you needed some mediocre poetry yourself so here.
                      One time
                      I made a rhyme
                      for a girl on FFR
                      who tried so hard to raise the bar
                      who never had the chance
                      to experience romance
                      so once she conveyed this little scheme
                      I was forced to right a poetry theme

                      Shastatwist is cool though this wasn't to be offensive or anything I was just bored lmao..
                      I love my son Auron

                      Epic thread killer

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                      • Verruckter
                        FFR Player
                        • Apr 2004
                        • 2707

                        #26
                        Re: for the girl i love

                        Originally posted by ShAiOnEi
                        Posted this on her profile
                        I figured you needed some mediocre poetry yourself so here.
                        One time
                        I made a rhyme
                        for a girl on FFR
                        who tried so hard to raise the bar
                        who never had the chance
                        to experience romance
                        so once she conveyed this little scheme
                        I was forced to right a poetry theme

                        Shastatwist is cool though this wasn't to be offensive or anything I was just bored lmao..
                        You forgot to make a rhyme with "meme".. haha
                        Truth lies in loneliness, When hope is long gone by -Blind Guardian, The Soulforged
                        Image removed for size violation.

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                        • ShastaTwist
                          FFR Veteran
                          • Sep 2004
                          • 599

                          #27
                          Re: for the girl i love

                          I've been told I'm a bitch, I can deal with that, it's all good.

                          You, on the other hand, you post a poem on a forum and you expect people to praise you like the poetry god you are. Well, here's something for you, I'm not going to bow down to your cheesy, cliche poetry about how great your girlfriend is and how great your relationship is and how great your rhyme scheme is. Learn to take some criticism. If you ever want to make anything out of yourself in the way of literary arts, you'd better learn to actually spell out your words. Furthermore, if you ever hope to become a poet or author of any kind or, rather, if you ever hope to make anything of yourself, you're going to have to realize that not everybody is going to be candy-coated with their criticism.



                          P.S.

                          Originally posted by omgitznpv
                          It's mediocre?
                          I was being generous, much more generous than most of the other people in this thread, but he decided to attack me. Awesome.

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                          • ShAiOnEi
                            FFR Player
                            • May 2007
                            • 1110

                            #28
                            Re: for the girl i love

                            Originally posted by ShastaTwist
                            I've been told I'm a bitch, I can deal with that, it's all good.

                            You, on the other hand, you post a poem on a forum and you expect people to praise you like the poetry god you are. Well, here's something for you, I'm not going to bow down to your cheesy, cliche poetry about how great your girlfriend is and how great your relationship is and how great your rhyme scheme is. Learn to take some criticism. If you ever want to make anything out of yourself in the way of literary arts, you'd better learn to actually spell out your words. Furthermore, if you ever hope to become a poet or author of any kind or, rather, if you ever hope to make anything of yourself, you're going to have to realize that not everybody is going to be candy-coated with their criticism.
                            if you ever, if you ever, if you ever, if you ever want.

                            Edit:I don't think they were going all out for novel quality shasta 8/.
                            I love my son Auron

                            Epic thread killer

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                            • omgitznpv
                              cohoooooon
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Aug 2005
                              • 6980

                              #29
                              Re: for the girl i love

                              Originally posted by ShastaTwist
                              I've been told I'm a bitch, I can deal with that, it's all good.

                              You, on the other hand, you post a poem on a forum and you expect people to praise you like the poetry god you are. Well, here's something for you, I'm not going to bow down to your cheesy, cliche poetry about how great your girlfriend is and how great your relationship is and how great your rhyme scheme is. Learn to take some criticism. If you ever want to make anything out of yourself in the way of literary arts, you'd better learn to actually spell out your words. Furthermore, if you ever hope to become a poet or author of any kind or, rather, if you ever hope to make anything of yourself, you're going to have to realize that not everybody is going to be candy-coated with their criticism.



                              P.S.



                              I was being generous, much more generous than most of the other people in this thread, but he decided to attack me. Awesome.
                              Aware.



                              And good job saying that, said what I had in my head as a general thought. And at least you can deal with being called a bitch- what you say is the truth anyways. :\
                              Originally posted by DossarLX ODI
                              What's the point of using drugs anyways? I heard they help you relax but that's pretty much it. (Not talking about medicines)

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                              • ShastaTwist
                                FFR Veteran
                                • Sep 2004
                                • 599

                                #30
                                Re: for the girl i love

                                Originally posted by ShAiOnEi
                                if you ever, if you ever, if you ever, if you ever want.
                                There were only three.

                                Originally posted by ShAiOnEi
                                Edit:I don't think they were going all out for novel quality shasta 8/.
                                And I'm just saying, criticism is a natural thing in life and if you can't take the truth in a brutally honest way, you're pretty much screwed.
                                Last edited by ShastaTwist; 10-8-2007, 09:37 PM.

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