Rap battle thread
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Just another day in Dallas,
Im smokin up out my chalice,
Soaking in the positive negating all the malice,
That surrounds us and hounds us,
It's through ounces and ounces,
That I find alleviation,
avoiding inebriation,
Its my own self mediation remedied through inhalation,
we need to be the change we wanna see please be patient,
The sudden realization,
Your apart of the creation,
of vicious perpetuation,
talkin self preservation,
the conversations made from surface level confrontation,
I'm just makin a statement i've made from honest observation.Comment
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I wrote the last one just fine, you and many others just didn't read it the right way. I do understand your point and don't disagree with it.Adapt to your medium. If something is being read and not heard then you better damn well make it read how its intended to be read. If you write something and say out loud differently than how its written then that's a problem you have to fix.
By all means though record yourself rapping so we can stop bagging on you
I don't have a working mic atm or else i'd write something similar to my second one and record it. I do however have this that I made for fun last year to a song I liked. I think it came out decent (but hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to it). It's nothing like my second rap, but it has a few lines where if you said the words exactly how they're supposed to they wouldn't rhyme exactly, but they're really close and it flows well which is all that matters in the long run. And for the record, I didn't auto-tune myself if anyone was wondering. My part starts at 1:42 but listen to the whole song so at least my part will make more sense.
Thank you.Lots of arbitrary claims in here. Personally I was able to rap to Ssbmchamps second rap after briefly skimming over it and think its better than anything mi40 wrote especially flow wise. Lyrical content on both ends is whatever, but I don't see how Ssbm champ "lost" anything. Enlighten me.Comment
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Re: Rap battle thread
bit too much drama
up in this thread
shut your damn mouths,
or get filled with lead
'bout to load up my
verbal banana clip
fully automatic,
but still shoot from the hip
finger on the trigger
"Post Quick Reply"
brace yourself, fool,
and get ready to dieComment
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but hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to itbut hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to itbut hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to itbut hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to iti hate itbut hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm sure people will say they hate it even before they listen to itComment
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this is how i read your postI do however have this that I made for fun last year to a song I liked. I think it came out decent (but hey i'm ssbmchamp and everyone is against me so i'm surrre peohgople wggggggggghfdill say they hafdghkoote it even befhgggggggggore fhgdddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddddComment
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