FFR Community Pack 3

[sakura080789]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

if you guys need graphics i can do that

[Korygon]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

cool. raine is doing piktures for the pack too so just make sure ya dont do the same ones k

[t-rogdor]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

Sent in 2 more files. Watch out for that rainbow trill

[gnr61]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

first expanded notes

Lunatic Gays -
-pr is kinda gay but you might as well Get It Right with slow broken 8th notes (m8 etc. 3,23 not 3,12).
-medium-length piano holds seem utterly unnecessary throughout; propper patterning should accentuate these melody notes i think.
-192nds sometimes seem aidsy/unneeded.
-RANDOMLY PATTERNED SNARE FILLS DETECTED; in a file with long 16th jumpstreams it seems important to emphasize 16th fills as separate, try some jacks or right hand jump patterns.
-more bass plz
-not a bad file at all just sort of generic and the song might have more potential

Disconnected Hazard -
-review probably isn't very necessary but most generic/boring song choice possible and randomly patterned fast-percussion jumpstreams with 8th jacks no thanks

Amaryllis V2 -
-really cool file
-without headphones feels vaguely like a lot of invisible arrows but it comes together very nicely if you listen close
-nice bass 8)
-layering is mostly effective but maybe consider deviating for some accentuation snare jumps etc, chains of rainbow single notes going to different instruments is disorienting and can be inexpressive
-m21 seems like missing bass drum note, percussion is pretty prominent here
-fill around m24 i'm not sure i'm feeling; jack theory applies for those minijacks you have but both melody and percussion changes there so idk maybe mix it up/add some jumps or something
-m28 seems like those super soft chords just stopped being layered for a couple bars not sure if intentional
-everything past that is quite awesome imo

im going to move on to completely unjudged submissions before i go any further with the 'accepted' files since apparently those are going through an overhaul anyway

[Detrimentalist]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

Disconnected Hazard -
-review probably isn't very necessary but most generic/boring song choice possible and randomly patterned fast-percussion jumpstreams with 8th jacks no thanks

Torrent chose song so blame him xd, P.S. it's a collab nice job telling me which chart you reviewed.

[gnr61]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

nice job making the second chart light instead of oni or something i obviously didn't see it v_v

i'll try da light chart but it'd have to be awfully clean and interesting to redeem the song imo

[who_cares973]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

i submitted guitar vs piano hope you guys like it!!

[Wineandbread]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

lmao guitar vs piano

that's one of the first songs I tried to step back in da day xddd

[i love you]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

get outa here

yes/no's based on random sampling of accepted files, obviously more in depth notes pending i'm just inarush


(Silvuh) A Place in Time - no =\
(Scylaax) A Showcage
(Gundam-Dude) Amaryllis
(Icyworld) Artificial Intelligence Bomb
(Xayphon) Clione
(Rogdor) Cocaine Voltron
(Kommisar) Computer Music
(Gundam-Dude) Crescendo - yes
(moches) Croqel part.2 - very yes
(Detrimentalist + 0) Disconnected HaZaRD - very no
(AsphyxZero) Do Back Burn - no
(bmah) EXTREMA PT.2 - god yes
(Xayphon) Fast Asleep
(Scylaax) Hiyayaka ICE
(Xayphon) In Love With You
(wc) Intermission
(Icyworld) Liberi Fatali
(Dimentio) Lunatic Gaze - no
(Rin-Dude) MENTAL MELTDOWN
(Yotipo91 vs Detrimentalist) My Crutch - bad song
(Kommisar) Nix-Tek
(Scylaax) Only my Railgun
(ddrace) rAAw Battery
(Wineandbread) Rambling Feather - PENDING
(haru-ko) Sequentia
(Gundam-Dude) Shoreline - yes cool song
(Scylaax) Snakeman Stage
(Rogdor) Song for Dead Malls
(Kommisar) Steel Bomber
(Wyde) The Black Monster
(Gpop) The Darkness Within Bits
(Scylaax) Tornadoman Stage - no
(Rebound) Witchcraft - yes (want fixes but fun)
(Dimentio) The Ultimate Show (vs. Super Dimentio)

i hv spoken

Sweet 8)

Also about my witchcraft file, I'm already aware that some parts got a bit repetitive and that the ending was a bit awkward to hit but overall, i still find it pretty fun.

[kommisar]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

nig is back.


master beta1 will be uploaded tonight and sent to my selected judges aka coul ppl.

expect good pack

[FFR4EVA_00]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

send it to me and i'll point out the worst 30 files for ya

[kommisar]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

they're all gonna be kommisar files B)

[FFR4EVA_00]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

i'm willing to say at the very least you aren't icyworld

[kommisar]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

though it would be hypocritical to say so, judging by how many files you've made hehu


sent beta to ppl

[Detrimentalist]

Re: FFR Community Pack 3

though it would be hypocritical to say so, judging by how many files you've made hehu


sent beta to ppl

I'm anxious to find out what's in the beta :')