Batch Review Thread (2007-2009)

**Tasselfoot** · 08-23-2007, 12:59 AM

Re: Batch Review Thread

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[b][size=+3]8/22/07[/size][/b]

Even if your file was queue'd...  make sure to read the notes from all 3 testers.  Also, you'll note in my comments that I agree with jx a ton but never with rebirth.  That is because I had jx's notes in front of me, but I did not have rebirth's notes in front of me.

[b][size=+1]The Queue:[/size][/b]
Air Breeze - Vote4Nixon
Ancient's Death - SulferDragon
Ascii Art Core - Neonatrias
Baby Want Me - MixMasterLar
Beaker Sunset - L Endorphin L
Black Noise - Scytlock
Blue Army - dore
Brooks Was Here - dore
Bundy - BDN
Casio Destroy Toy - ElectricWerewolf
Charge!!! - SulferDragon
Chlorophyll - BDN - oni - 2 24th alien sounds not stepped near end
Choprite - BDN - no 3 framers
Crazy Hair Day - stargroup100
Digital Intervention - vemuck
Disconnected Sanxion7 Remix - eastsideman09
Duality - eastsideman09
Electro Rush x8 - ElectricWerewolf
Euphoria - eastsideman09
Field of Snow - SulferDragon
Fluity Loops - ElectricWerewolf - verify for me that you got permission from Vospi again?
Happy Happy Shinig Star!! - Cyanite
heel and toe - bmah
Hero's Theme (wip) - stargroup100 - Tass feels that it is overstepped, but rebirth and jx like it, so tass is queue'd it.
Hiszekeny - ELectricWerewolf
Horizon Remix - rshadow888
Hyperactivity - stargroup100 - who is the artist of this song?
I am maid - .dot
Indigo - who_cares973
Lost - starfalcon176
Matador - xSerpentinex
Midnight of the North - blah x6
Nanatsuropanda - stargroup100
Over the frail dream - sulferdragon
Plunging Hornets - BDN
PSYCHIC DiVE - SulferDragon
Pupil of Frenzy - Neonatrias - see jx's comments
Purple - dore - the 225bpm version
Reversing Darts - jx
Rock Paper Snippers - ElectricWerewolf - Rock song
Rocking Ass - dore - my fault probably...  jx/rebirth didn't get the dwi/mp3 for this, so i was the only one to test.  fun though.
Shin Trigger - SulferDragon
Sing a Song - Kalazor
Snow Stream - BDN - verify for me again permission from Vospi?
Southern Cross - jx
Syndrome - Ben Speirs
Synful Sub - Valtrix - seemed a wee bit overstepped
The Final Fantasy - Kalazor
The Worst is Yet to Come - SulferDragon
Underground - blah x6
X - MeaCulpa
You're Not Alone Remix - vemuck
600 AD in Piano - Knoobish
{Arabian Assassin} - DarkbearX - replaces ledwix's file
{I Don't Need You Anymore} - dore
{James Bond Breakbeat} - Vote4Nixon - this goes in queue...  but i doubt i'll ever put it in game.  this song is just awful for a bond mix.  i forget who, but some artist is working on a better one.  so, hopefully someone will step that.


[b]Songs Tass Played But Didn't Queue[/b]
a dragons final roar - see jx's comments
a nightmare before kefta - missing ending notes, should be a break in the 5th jumps where there is no music, 32nds are overstepped compared to rest of file
a2 sauces op - this is garbage, although i did get my first ever AAAA testing it
all of your love - cut it around note 500.  also, i'm very wary of using remixes of commercial songs
anaconda remix - what jx said.  slow 32nds... are they onsync?
angel stays on this ground - few parts overstepped, vocal mix should go more with vocals
barney remix - see jx's comments
crying soul - sync, boring, extra 8th note at end of bursts in beginning, 8th jumpstream seems overdone
destined marionette - agree with jx
dot matrix hero - what jx said.  especially 1st mario land section
extra terrestrial - what jx said; 550ish especially
fascination maxx - i think i deleted this for some reason.  i'm guessing ben asked me to.  so, i didn't play it.  but both jx and rebirth did and both +d it.
hadazamui rittou - cut part of beginning
hardcore symphony - permission, jx is right, song is a bit repetitive
healing smile - what jx said
i once was a hero - cut this.  8ths near end felt overstepped
venetian spirit - what jx said
legacy - deleted this file.  i'm guessing at eastsideman's request.  didn't play it, but both jx and rebirth +d.
otters dance - agree with jx, would even tone down whole file's difficulty a notch
progression - agree with jx
same dream - song not all that great.  what jx said.
secret zombie room v2 - 24ths = 3 framers; what jx said.
sonic green hill zone - what jx said
starwolf - 32nds need to go
summer in believe - permission, try to tone down jumpstream in middle
surface - what jx said
the creeps - permission, what jx said
violent syndrome - agree with jx.  song is kinda bland for stepping.
waverip - overdoubled
you dont know what - what jx said
101 kittens - 32nds near beginning; more consistent on which sounds you're stepping to
{Adrinaline Pumper} - cut the last few arrows.  not really a fan of thos chart/song overall
{Barbed Wire} - fix colors and sync
{Firestorm} v2 - tass doesn't like v2's.  easier version of v1, not really original, trills are weird.
{Mercury} - agree with jx.


[b][size=+1]Rebirth's Notes:[/size][/b]
(Too Much) Bass: ?
- Those pink notes you have before the jumps in the 20s measures are supposed to be yellow notes
- Has too many jumps

101 Kittens: +
- Goes offbeat after one freeze near the end (I can fix easily)
- I don't think any of those brown notes are really there
- Fun simfile though

260: -
- Exited out because more than half of the simfile was offbeat as hell. Those weird yellow note 8th streams are wrong

600 A.D.: +
- Very nice syncing
- We need more files like this. Very cool file

A Dragon's Honor: +
- Has a bunch of 12th jacks at 133 bpm, but I know what you stepped them to so I guess its ok

A Nightmare Before Kefka: + (Permission?)
- Do we even have permission for this?

A2 Sauce's OP (dore): +
- Uh.. technically its a correct simfile, but its pretty stupid

A2 Sauce's OP 2 (Engler) +?
- Has one 16th minijack which is bad for FFR when its 140 bpm
- Like the first OP, its stupid but I guess its an alright file

Air Breeze: +
- Repetitive 16th triplets..
- File is good for what the music gives you to use though

All of Your Love: +
- Was a little understepped in a couple parts, but you tried to make an easy file out of the song so thats ok

All The Memories: +?
- A few minor sync issues
- Simfile couldv'e been more interesting. Fill in some dull spots and make those parts fun to play

Alpha Helix v2 (omgitznpv): ?
- Those 24th streams look like they'd have some 3 framers in them
- Feels overdone. Too hard
- I don't think this song really needs a v2

Alpha Helix v2 (Ben Spiers): +?
- Better than the other submission for a Alpha Helix v2, and its an alright file, but I still don't think the song needs a v2

Anaconda Remix: +
- lol drum and bass music is always repetitive
- Good file though

Ancient's Death: +
- File fits the music so its alright

Angel Stays On This Ground Vocal: +
- The gap should be 1003 instead of 1040
- Once I changed the gap, it was a REALLY fun file

Ascii Art Core: +
- This will be a pretty hard file once/if it goes into the game

Aurora: +?
- That part near the end is kinda overstepped. It'd be fun for SM but I'm not sure about for FFR
- Otherwise good

Baby Don't You Want Me: +
- Those yellow notes should all be blue notes

Barney Remix: +
- lol missing note on the fourth beat of measure 35

Battleman Zero Theme: +?
- 155 bpm part feels very weird. Might be offbeat, I didn't check for sure

Beaker Sunset: +
- once I changed the gap by 80 it was pretty good >_>

Beatlejuice Theme Remix: ?
- Gap is way off
- Rainbow notes were stupid
- Really uninteresting

Black Noise: +

Blue Army: 
- I can't really judge this since I have a Blue Army simfile of my own in the queue

Brooks was Here: +
- Good file lol

Bundy: +
- Has a few sync issues. I'll fix before it goes into the game, if it does

Casio Destroy Toy: +
- Fun file

Charge!!!: +
- Fun file

Chlorophyll (Oni steps): +
- Might have 3-framers, not sure
- Technically correct file, but it might be a little too much for FFR

Choprite: +
- File might be too much for FFR, like Chlorophyll
- Accepting it but I HIGHLY RECCOMMEND you change those 48th jumps right after the red note jump. Maybe take those teal jump notes out, because those are almost quads

Composer: +?
- The pink and purple notes in that one 48th stream at the end of the song would be a 3 framer or worse. Change it, then its queueworthy

Crazy Hair Day: +
- Repetitive rhythms and patterns
- 16th jacks but its 100 bpm so I guess thats alright

Crying Soul: +
- notes are early in the simfile. Might need a tiny bpm tweak so everything is the same. I'll change if/when it goes into the game

Destined Marionette: +

Digital Intervention: +
- changed gap by 40
- cool file

Disconnected Saxion7 Remix: +

Disconnected Disco: +?
- Pretty good file but there are some 16th jacks near the beginning, where you have those small 32nd triplets. 16th jacks + 139 bpm = almost 2 framers. Change those then queueworthy

Dot Matrix Hero: +
- Fun file, no changes needed

Duality: +
- 12th jack in the middle of measure 45. It might need changing

Electric Candles: 
- I didn't play any of the charts because I don't know which one I'm supposed to be playing

Electro Rush X8: +
- I'd like to see a crazy hard file for this but this sim is ok

Elevated: ?
- Uh, the downbeat of the simfile shouldn't be a yellow note. Move it up to a red note then resubmit. Its good otherwise

Enjoy the Silence: ?
- Not entirely all correct rhythms but whatever. Some of those notes shouldv'e been yellow arrows instead of just blue or red. Listen closely to the music and make changes where needed
- 30 bpm part is really really early, but when it goes to 125 bpm its fine
- Repetitive song/simfile + easy simfile + 5 minute long song = incredibly boring
- I'm not so sure this song is step worthy becuase of the third comment

Esperanza: +?
- 24th minitrills in about measure 35 might be troublesome
- 32nd trill at around measure 50 at 147 bpm = almsot 2 framer = no
- Change those things and its queueworthy

Euphoria (eastsideman09): +?
- In the slow part, you have a few 64th bursts ending in a jump. That might cause 3 framers and will probably need a change
- Very good file

Euphoria (Spenner): ?
- Change gap by 40
- eastsideman's was better

Extra Terrestrial: +
- Bunch of 4th jumps that felt meh, but whatever

Fascination MaxX: + (Permission?)
- Those gallop things at 400 bpm were pretty weird
- Do we even have permission?
- Good file

Field of Snow: +

Fillipino style hardcore: -
- Might be a technically correct file but its too insane for FFR

Final Audition: +?
- Change gap by 40
- 24th streams in thewill probably pose a problem. 3 framers (12th jacks)
- Otherwise good, queueworthy

Final Fantasy VII Fighting Mix: +?
- Those blue jumps in the beginning are supposed to be red. You're off by an 8th note on those jumps
- Big syncing problem after about 20 - 30 seconds in

Fruity Loops: +
- Good file. 
- Gets a little repetitive

Forsaken Neon: ?
- Boring, weird patterns/rhythms
- Some of those 12th streams are supposed to be 16th streams
- Seems like you're missing some notes in the middle

From Mount Chorus v2: ?
- I don't think that song has any 16th notes lmao
- 8th jacks and crap
- This song doesn't need a v2

Gargoyle: +?
- Repetitive rhythms and patterns...
- Patterns don't feel too fun

Geno's Forest F-Zero vROFLOL: -
- Retarded. I exited out after measure 4

Hadazamui Rittou: +
- I almost fell asleep becuase this was so meh
- Incredibly repetitive. Not a song that should really be stepped, but I'll accept it since the simfile is technically correct

Happy Happy Shining Star: +
- Its a really fun file, but it'd be even better if you took out those 8th jacks in the 4th jump parts. I reccommend you do that because that'd make this file even better

Hardcore Symphony: +
- Pretty good file

Healing Smile: +
- aisdufnaisdf fun fun fun

Heel and Toe: +
- What was that last note two measures after all of the steps? I'd remove that and send the fixes to one of us (if its accepted into the queue)

Hero's Theme: +
- It'll be a pretty hard file for FFR, but thats ok
- Fun

Hiszekeny: +?
- Yes the file is good, but I feel its a bit overstepped, for FFR. The song is really calm and quiet, and the simfile has a bunch of jumps. I don't think all of those are really needed

Holy Orders: +?
- Some of those longer 24th streams have 12th jacks if you look closely. Might pose a problem in the game
- I'd prefer a harder file for this. One that uses the song to its full potential
- Those teal notes at around measure 108 aren't in the music lol. Sounds like 32nds or something, I didn't pay too much attention to the music there

Honey, I've Never Had Sex That Wasn't Awkward: -
- Probably too insane for FFR. Jumpstream, and a bunch of trills that will definitely cause 3 framers. Maybe even 2 framers
- Don't get me wrong though.. the file is alright. Its much better suited for Stepmania though

Horizon Remix: +

Hyperactivity: +
- Interesting patterns

I Am Maid: +
- Good file, though it couldv'e been done differently and wouldv'e really stood out more to me. I guess I just like Bursurk Lurk's Stepmania file for it too much


I Once Was a Hero: +?
- Has one 12th jack that doesn't fit the with the rest of the simfile. I suggest you change that

Ice Cap Zone: +?
- Fun simfile, I like it.
- One 16th minijack at measure 64. We can't have those at 145 bpm, change it

Indigo: +
- Good, fun file

Indulgence: +?
- One of my favorite files in the batch, but we can't have those 24th trills in there. Change them.

Venetian Spirit: +
- Good file. A bit repetitive, but that can't be changed.

Ken's Theme: +?
- Long ass 8th streams with a ton of running men. Running men aren't a problem but its really boring and repetitive
- Whole file is just repetitive. 

Kirby's Dream Land: +?
- I love these songs XD. Good simfile too, but its missing some notes. With a song this cool, I want it perfect. It just NEEDS those few 16ths you left out in the melody (or were they 32nds?)
- Has some 16th jacks which might be a little problem as well. 4 framers for sure. 

Legacy: +
- Has a few jumps that I thought were out of place in the slow part

Live at the Abbey: -
- Exited out after about 30 seconds. The file is way too much for FFR. Too many jumps, too fast and too many 8th jacks at 245 bpm

Lost: +

Lucid Quasar: +?
- Those yellow notes are supposed to be blue (From the beginning to measure 12 and from about measure 30 to measure 36)

Matador: +

Midnight Dragon (omgitznpv): -
- Incredibly offbeat, exited out

Midnight Dragon (behanjc): +?
- I'm going to assume the one in the queue is better. This file is missing some notes and some notes are off near the end

Midnight of the North: +
- Nice file. Fun easy file

Motherboard March: +?
- Sync is off and goes further off as the song progresses. Probably a bpm problem

Nanatsuropanda: +
- So incredibly fun, and its a really unique file. Possibly my favorite out of the whole batch

Neon-213: +?
- Felt like the same patterns and stuff throughout the whole 16th stream. 
- A bunch of un-needed jumps in slow parts too

Otter's Dance: +
- Mild jumpstream and 32nd bursts...Interesting. File would be pretty hard but thats ok

Over the Frail Dream: +

Plunging Hornets: +
- Might be too much for FFR, like 99% of Venetian Snares songs are, but I'm accepting it because its correctly stepped.

Progression: +
- Pretty cool once it gets to the second half of the sim

PSYCHIC DiVE: +

Pupil of Frenzy: +
- holy **** I love dBu simfiles
- Very good. Every note felt perfect
- I think you missed a couple notes in the 30 BPM part XD

Purple: +

Rendering My Boredom: +?
- Could use some less jumps
- the teal notes are supposed to be yellow

Rendering My Boredom 2: +?
- Those yellow jumps in the middle are off (Measure 20 something, and around measure 50)

Reversing Darts: +

Rock Paper Snipers: +

Same Dream: +
- One of my favorite sharpnel songs but its so repetitive
- Its hard to tell what those jumps were going to in the big 8th stream in the middle of the song. I still don't really know

Scythe of 13: +?
- Has a ton of jumps but I know a lot of those are necessary for a song like that
- Not sure about that 32nd streams 
- It does feel a bit overjumped once you get past measure 110

Secret Zombie Room v2: +

Shin Trigger: +

Shind Bad: +?
- Needs some more 16th fillers on a song like that. little 5 note 16th streams in the beginning and stuff like that
- First 40 seconds of the sim were pretty boring. Definitely needed to be more interesting

Sing a Song: +
- Would be nice if you didn't have a jump go to every beat in that one long 8th stream at measure 20 - 30 (about), but have jumps going to that one sound you put jumps to everywhere else

Sly: +?
- Gap is off a little bit
- Some notes offbeat even after I fixed the gap

Snow Stream: +

Sonic Green Hill Zone: +

Southern Cross: +
- Epic song
- Jumps in measure 85 - 87 are off a whole beat. Fix those because this sim is good
- You missed some jumps throughout the whole song since I can tell you did jumps to the lyrics

Starwolf: +
- Not sure about that 32nd stream at the end

Summer in Belize: +

Surface: +
- Pretty repetitive with weird pattern combinations

Survive: +?
- Once it goes to the higher bpm it goes offbeat slightly (First bpm change after like 20 seconds)
- Sync the simfile as best as you can, because its pretty good.
- At around measure 100 to measure 120, I suggest you not make those all jumps. Where there is no drum sounds in the background, and just vocals, put single steps, not jumps.

Sync: +?
- I suggest you step the sounds you missed in the beginning
- Goes offbeat as the song gets to the end. Resync and resubmit, because I enjoyed it otherwise

Syndrome: +

Synful Sub: +

Tell Me A Story: ?
- tons of offbeat notes on both charts

Terror From Beyond v2: +?
- All of the green notes in the middle are off
- Jumps from measure 86 to 93 (about) don't seem to go to anything

TGTMN: +?
- I think you have some of the rhythms off in the beginning.
- Overjumpped a bit

The Attic: +?
- Has a 24th jack in the middle of the measure 20 - 29 area

The Creeps: +

The Final Fantasy: +

The Worst is Yet to Come: +

Three: ?
- I had to change the gap by like 80
- Some notes are offbeat
- 32nd trill at measure 39. Can't have that at 135 bpm

Touched By The Light: +?
- I think some notes were a little offbeat, I didn't pay too much attention
- Song felt boring and repetitive..

Underground: +

Violent Syndrome: +

WaveRip: +?
- Felt overjumpped

X: +
- Fun file

You Don't Know What: +
- Pretty fun for a sharpnel file. Nice job, I like it.
- Seems to be slightly off early near the end. Try to fix that

You're Not Alone Remix: +

{Adrenaline Pumper}: +

{Arabian Assassin}: +
- Some parts seem offbeat. Not perfect syncing, but I think it might be close enough for nobody to notice. Please try to fix though

{Barbed Wire} MAC7: +
- ohi weird colored notes that are supposed to be 16th streams or something
- Good sim though, I guess

{Firestorm} v2: +

{Flying Away}: +?
- Notes should be moved up or down an 8th beat. Downbeat should almost always be a red note

{I Don't Need You Anymore}: +
- Well stepped file

{James Bond Breakbeat Remix}: +
- Very nice stepchart for the song

{Mercury}: +
- Quite a few jumps but they seem alright



[b][size=+1]JX's Notes:[/size][/b]
A Dragon's Honor (SulferDragon) [+?] - if going for jacks, want more pitch relevant patterns

A Nightmare Before Kefka (Scytlock) [+?] - should be notes on last orchestra hits, stream patterns. rhythms are good.

A2_Sauce's OP by dore (Engler) [-] - too boring, etc

a2_sauce's op part 2 (Engler) [-] - minijack, etc

Air Breeze (Vote4Nixon) [+] (8)

All of Your Love -Sanxion7 Remix- (blahblahblahblahblahblah) [+?] - song should be cut for this difficulty.

All the Memories (_GanonMetroid_) [?] - offsync at parts

Alpha Helix v2 - Ben Speirs [+?] - want more difficulty difference from V1, 16th long trills don't fit other parts

Alpha Helix V2 (omgitznpv) [?] - potential 3-framers, stream patterns, repetitive triplets

Anaconda Remix(who_cares973) [?] - partially understepped and repetitive

Ancient's Death (SulferDragon) [+] (7)

Angel stays on this ground -Vocal Remix- (bmah) [+] (8) - rhythms could go for the vocal more, but ok

Ascii Art Core (Neonatrias) [+] (10) - some stream patterns are a bit awkward but ok

Aurora [eastsideman09] [+?] - felt a bit overdoubled to the song for being 1000 combo

Baby Want me(MixMasterLar) [+?] - sync on the vocal, actually last notes on the vocal should be a bit more late

Barney Remix (xSerpentinex) [+?] - too long intro, cut or step. others are fine

Battleman Zero Theme (argo15) [?] - partially off, stream patterns

Beaker Sunset(L Endorphin L) [?] - offsync (gap late, and maybe bpm), got like all greats

Beetlejuice theme remix (cyrx900) [-] - offsync, stream patterns, placement of bursts

Black Noise(Scytlock) [+?] - stream patterns, last 8th trills are a bit repetitive

Blue Army [dore] [+] (10) - rhythms in m50-80 are a bit repetitive, but ok 

Brooks Was Here [dore] [+] (9)

Bundy (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?] - 12th jumpstream at the end, that part isn't that intense

Car Sax (Classic_Rocker) [-] - use dwi or sm format

Casio Destroy Toy (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Charge!!! (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Chlorophyll (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (10)

Choprite (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (11) - no 3-framers?

Composer (D.J. Cristo) [?] - blue note on 4th, potential 3-framers, 32nd trill placement doesn't fit well

Crazy Hair Day (Stargroup100) [+] (7) - jacks are ok at this speed, 48th + double would be like triple tho

crying soul(who_cares973) [+?] - offsync (gap early)

Destined Marionette(.dot) [+?] - partially overdoubled, wrong rhythm at m77, ending 8ths should follow the music more. others are fine

Digital Intervention (vemuck) [+] (6) 

Disconnected Disco (solopro) [?] - jacky 32nds, stream patterns

Disconnected -Sanxion7 Remix- [eastsideman09] [+] (7)

Dot Matrix Hero (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10) - still fun, but wanted some flows with the synth melody

Duality [eastsideman09] [+] (9) - potential 3-framer (12th jack), ok if it can be fixed

Eating Candies (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [-] - multi difficulty

Electro Rush x8 (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

elevated(who_cares973) [?] - YNS, stream patterns

Enjoy the Silence (Ssonik) [?] - offsync (gap early), extremely boring so cut the music

Esperanza (meb_mmm) [?] - 24th/32nd trills, minijack

Euphoria (eastsideman09) [+] (8) - not very audible parts but 48th bursts are actually 64ths + 32nds for me, not a big deal for playing tho.

Euphoria (Spenner) [?] - 32nd trills, minijacks, rhythms don't flow well at parts

Extra Terrestrial(Scytlock) [+?] - want more variety in rhythms/patterns, kind of repetitive

Fascination MaxX (K2 Chaos Remix) - Ben Speirs [+] (10)

Field of Snow (SulferDragon) [+] (8) - partially a bit overdoubled tho

filipino style speedcore 4 pre (WTFBrandon) [-] - totally doesn't make sense

Final Audition (omgitznpv) [-] - 24th staircase, stream pattern, who's music is this?

Final Fantasy VII Fighting Mix (freakysnots) [?] - offsync, double placement is weird

Fluity Loops (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Forsaken Neon (coolboyrulez0) [?] - 460bpm isn't needed, stream patterns, potential 3-framers

From Mount Chorus v2 (D.J. Cristo) [-] - JE songs shouldn't be that hard

Gargoyle-behanjc [+?] - patterns are awkward, middle-ending parts are repetitive

Geno's Forest F-Zero vROFLOL (coolboyrulez0) [-] - waste of time, dude

Hadazamui Rittou (Silvuh) [+?] - felt patterns of beginning is repetitive

Happy Happy Shining Star!! (Cyanite) [+] (10)

Hardcore Symphony (Shad0wlord) [+?] - 16th streams at the middle don't fit other parts, others are good

Healing Smile - Rednanaki [+?] - stream patterns at the middle, rhythms m26-33, m73-84 could be less boring, last measure is mis rhythm'd

heel and toe (bmah) [+] (8)

Hero's Theme (w.i.p) (stargroup100) [+] (9)

Hiszekeny (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Holy Orders (Silver_Brian) [+?] - rhythms are almost correct but missing some bursts and doubles (stepped too simply at parts), 24th stream patterns

Honey, I've Never Had Sex That Wasn't Awkward [dore] [+] (9) - discuss about potential 3-framer trills. pretty technical file overall

Horizon Remix (Final Cut) - rshadow8888 [+] (9)

Hyperactivity (Stargroup100) [+] (7)

I am maid (.dot) [+] (9) - this song has so obscene lyrics

I Once Was a Hero (WTFBrandon) (4) [+] - felt a bit long for an easy file tho

Ice Cap Zone (Glacial Mix)-(Alioth) [+?] - minijacks, felt long so song-cut is better

Indigo(who_cares973) [+] (6)

Indulgence [eastsideman09] [+?] - 24th trill should be other patterns

KaW-Venetian_spirit(Scytlock) [+?] - mis-rhythm around m50

Ken~Sharpnal~(MixMasterLar) [?] - 8th/16th stream pattern, double placement, felt a bit long

Kirby's Dream Land (freakysnots) [+?] - 32nd rhythms could follow the music better

Legacy [eastsideman09] [+] (8)  

Live At The Abbey (omgitznpv) [?] - not bad rhythms but way less 16th trills/8th jacks please, those don't work well on FFR at this BPM

Lost (starfalcon176) [+] (7)

Lucid Quazar (Vote4Nixon) [?] - offsync at parts

Matador (xSerpentinex) [+] (9)

Midnight Dragon (omgitznpv) [?] - YNS, off at parts

Midnight Dragon-behanjc [<] - the one in the queue is a bit better overall for not being too understepped, although some bursts and some pitch relevant patterns are better on this one

Midnight of the North (blahblahblahblahblahblah) [+] (7)

Motherboard March (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - a bit BPM wrong

Nanatsuropanda (Stargroup100) [+] (9) - quite a bit late at last 12ths but ok

Neon-213 (three17s) [?] - stream patterns

Otter's Dance (Hotroot Mix) (Silvuh) [+?] - rhythms are good, but tone-down right handed biased bursts at m32/46

Over the Frail Dream (SulferDragon) [+] (10)

Plunging Hornets (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (12)

Progression (Silvuh) [+?] - some 32nd bursts (and doubles with them) are a bit overdone to the music

PSYCHIC DiVE (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Pupil of Frenzy (Neonatrias) [+] (9) - a bit off on some slow vibraphone part but ok

Purple[dore] [+] (11) 

Rendering My Boredom (coolboyrulez0) [?] - offsync at parts, stream patterns

Rendering My Boredom 2 (coolboyrulez0) [?] - YNS, stream patterns

Reversing Darts (jimerax) [+] (9)

Rock Paper Snippers (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8) - sync is almost ok for FFR

Rocking Ass [dore] [-] - no dwi/sm?

Sly (rel89) [?] - offsync at parts, stream patterns

Same Dream (ledwix) [?] - 8th parts are boring, weird ending, need a better music cut

Scythe of 13 (Xandertrax) [?] - streams/doubles pattern

Secret Zombie Room v2 (eastsideman09) [?] - 24th trills, second half parts are understepped

SGX - Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (coolboyrulez0) [-] - multi difficulty

Shin Trigger (SulferDragon) [+] (8) - jumpstream part is a bit overdone tho

Shind Bad (rednanaki) [+?] - stream patterns, overuse of jumptrills

Sing a Song [Instrum] (Kalazor) [+?] - a bit repetitive, d-s-d 16th patterns

Snow Stream (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (8)

Sonic Green Hill Zone (MrPopadopalis25) [?] - patterns/rhythms are boring even for an easy song

Southern Cross (jimerax) [+] (11)

Starwolf(blindreper1179) [+?] - rhythms need to go with melody at some parts, tone down last 32nds stream + double

Summer In Belize (Shad0wlord) [+] (8)

Surface (EI_Tizzy) [+?] - felt a bit too long/repetitive, 8ths and stream patterns are a bit too 4-framer biased overall

Survive (bluguerrilla) [+?] - offsync at parts, especially chain parts at later-middle. less 4-framer patterns are better overall

sync (FOURSPLIT Remix) - Ben Speirs [+?] - ok but felt understepped at parts (beginning and ending)

Syndrome (Ben Speirs) [+] - (6)

Synful Sub(Valtrix; revised) [+] - (8)

SGX - Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (coolboyrulez0) [-] - multiple difficulty

Terror from Beyond V2 (customstuff) [-] - offsync, GNS, need to be harder for V2

TGTMN [oni] - Cj_leonine [?] - patterns overall, apparantly overdoubled

The Attic(Scytlock) [-] - multi difficulty

The Creeps (Fedde Le Grand Remix) (TK_pavonineukon) [+?] - one handed trills at the beginning

The Final Fantasy (Kalazor) [+] (8) - a bit weird double placement tho

The Worst is Yet to Come (SulferDragon) [+] (5)

Three (Redorigami) [?] - offsync use BPM changes, 32nd patterns at parts

Touched by the Light (FFR Edit) (spinal_compression) [?] - some notes are off, understepped at parts

Underground (blahblahblahblahblahblah) [+?] - slightly gap late, stream patterns

Violent Syndrome(Scytlock) [+?] - long 8th jack patterns without good reason

WaveRip(remastered) (Silvuh) [+] (10) - ending is a bit overdoubled but not a bad double placement

X (MeaCulpa) [+] (8)

You Don't Know What (Cyanite) [+?] - fine, but felt a few notes are missed, and song is a bit too long/repetitive

You're Not Alone Remix (vemuck) [+] (6) - want a better song cut (fade out, etc) though

101 Kittens (dag12) [?] - gap early, some 32nd rhythms are a bit weird

260(who_cares973) [-] - most yellow notes are off

600 AD In Piano (Knoobish) [+] (8) - sync is fine other than 1 off note at m29

(Too Much) Bass (lol) - rshadow8888 [?] - 24ths don't make sense, overdoubled at parts

{Adrinaline Pumper} (ledwix) [+] (9) - last a few arrows aren't needed IMO though (they just make ending weird)

{Arabian Assasin} (DarkbearX) [+] (8)

{Barbed Wire} MAC7 (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - cute, unique colors but a bit offsync at parts

{Firestorm} v2  - rshadow8888 [-] - file is ok, but not enough difference from V1 except for double placement

{Flying Away} (Zageron) [-] - offsync, orange, green, etc

{I Don't Need You Anymore} [dore] [+] (10) - it's a non-boring marathon song

{James Bond Breakbeat Remix} (Vote4Nixon) [+] (7)

{Mercury} - rshadow8888 [?] - want songcut, slow jumpstreams are repetitive

All comments can go in the queue thread. Submissions for the next batch need to be in to me by Friday evening.

**Tasselfoot** · 09-24-2007, 02:19 AM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]9/25/07[/size][/b]

Again...  just because one of the 2 +d it didn't guarantee that I played it.  If both gave the same negative feedback on a file, I did NOT play it.

[b][size=+2]THE QUEUE[/size][/b]
A black cat plays... by EW
Aurora by eastsideman09
Blue Noah by Rednanaki
Chariot by EW - weird song
Cid's Theme Piano Concerto by vemuck
Clockwork Genesis by eastsideman09
Comptine D'un Autre Ete Techno by Kotarouchan
Dishwater by dore
Dot Matrix Hero by EW - I agree with jx's comments
Dragons Bane by hi19hi19
Emerald Hill by SulferDragon
Final Fantasy Final Battle Festival by jx
Fight Through the Forest by MrZombie
Final Step by behanjc
Floating Bridge by dore
Forsaken Neon by Rebirth0 - 2 3 framers...  maybe fix so I don't have to?
Hadazamui Rittou by Silvuh
Hajnal by EW
Happy Happy Shining Star by Cyanite
Haven by tk_pavonineukon - is this the SIU menu music?
Ice Candy Pop by hi19hi19 - i hate you....  this will be a bitch to fix the 4-framers on an easy file
Indulgence by eastsideman09
Into the Night by Rebirth0
iPatch's OP by EW
Kirby's Dream Land by Rebirth0
Kire Kire Mayoi by jx
Koala in the Spiders Web by three17s
Legendary Etude by hi19hi19
Life Light by Cyanite
Lucid Quasar by Vote4Nixon
MAMA by hi19hi19 - i love this concept
Mario Eurobeat by vemuck
megane de ne by jx
Metal Geat Solid Piano Remix by hi19hi19
Metropolis Zone by SulferDragon
Ninja Turtles Theme by hi19hi19
Pavlov's Dog by Vote4Nixon
Power by hi19hi19 - lol, 1 footer.  i AAAAd.
Progression by Silvuh
Raindrops v2 by Vote4Nixon
Say It Right by eastsideman09
Shanghai Girl of Meiji 17 by behanjc
Shapeshifter by EW
Shind Bad by Rebirth0
Sunny Side Up by stargroup100
Teh Tricky Techno by Xandertrax
Tell v2 by dore
The Wanderer by SulferDragon
Utopia by Rebirth0
Zelda Quatro by Ben Speirs - probably could use a cut...  maybe remove some off the beginning?
{Adrinaline Pumper} by ledwix
{Paranorma} by SulferDragon

[b]Songs Tass Played But Didn't Queue[/b]
101 Kittens by rednanaki
Breaker Sunset - overstepped
Car Sax - definitely parts offsync
Destined Marionette - agree with rebirth; whole song?
Elevated - remove final arrow, cut better, maybe no jumpstream
Emerald Hill Zone - only need 1 emerald hill file, other is better song and more fun steps
ESC - reminds me too much of current ESC. do we really need a 2nd ESC?
Eternus v2 - no eternus v2
Fascination maxx - file not fun
Growth - what rebirth said.  song and file are bleh.
Healing Smile - what jx said
Huzzah - change the 2 middle faint 32nds.
Lataia - agree w/ rebirth
Lazy Dog Funk - fix 1 note, resubmit dwi to queue
Legacy - what jx said.  not the best KaW song either.
Lolot Speed - what jx said, parts should go to melody
Lost - this song is ****ing annoying.  SM Assist Tick? Repetitive as ****.
Matricide - agree with rebirth. near beginning, too many notes in bursts. song sucks. permission?
Metropolis - don't need 2 Metropolis Zone files, like other better.
Mortal Combat at the Disco - cut around 600
Robotnik Theme - way too similar to boss machine
Starwolf - queue is better
Street Fighter techno - 2 16th streams don't go with the difficulty of the rest of the file. cut around 400?
SYNiC - what jx said.  permission?
WarioLand3 Overworld - bad cut, notes missing
{Big Boss} - what rebirth said

[b]Songs Tass Didn't Play Because Rebirth and jx Said The Same Thing[/b]
Cruel Whole - already added to game
Delta Beat - overdone
Disconnected Exodus
Distorted Reality
Dragonic Rage
Fairy in a Jar
Fierce Combat - already in game
Guitar vs Piano - cut
Lapis - jumpstream
Midnight Dragon by hi19 - played and added to game
Painkillers - trills
Pirates of the Ciribbean - understepped
Scythe of 13
Superstar - doubles
twinklesky - jacks
Variations 2 - understepped
Vertex
WaveRip - overdoubled
Wish - don't need a 3rd file for Wish
{Barbed Wire} fix sync
{Lazy Summer Days} by Xandertrax

[b][size=+1]Files Tass Wants to Discuss with Rebirth and jx[/size][/b]
Dies Irae - maybe overstepped?
Lunar Saturation - similarity in music to Brain of the Moon?
Mr Evil - boring


[b][size=+2]JX[/size][/b]
15 [Engler] [+?] - 16th rolls are off, under 30 sec file

101 Kittens (dag12) [?] - sry, no comment

101 kittens (flipsta_lombax) [?] - sry, no comment

101 Kittens (RNanaki) [?] - sry, no comment

300 - Ben Speirs [?] - 300 BPM long streams don't work on FFR

A black cat plays intense jazzy phrases (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8) - doubt last part is needed though

Aqua Zone Remix (BzT) [?] - problem with the double placement

Aurora [eastsideman09] [+] (9)

Beaker Sunset (hi19hi19) [+] (10)

Beneath The Sand (Sequal) [?] - 24ths don't make sense, minijacks

Big Blue (rednanaki) [?] - overall misrhythm on 16ths, many potential 3-framers

Blue Noah (RNanaki) [+] (10) - minor pattern problems tho

Bowser the Shredder (WTFBrandon) [-] - jacks

Car Sax (Cyanite) [?] - extremely offsync, gap early?

Chariot (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (9) - rhythm is a bit weird for me though

Cid's Theme Piano Concerto (vemuck) [+] (3)

Clockwork Genesis (eastsideman09) [+] (9) - a bit overdoubled but ok

Comptine D'un Autre Ete Techno Remix (Kotarouchan) [+] (8)

Core - customstuff [+?] - missing some 32nd rhythms, felt boring around m60-90

Crowdpleaser V2 (RNanaki) [?] - missing some rhythms, not much better than/different from V1 

Cruel Whole (Abelcain Remix) (~Zero~) [+] (8) - potential 3-framer?

Delta Beat (0 Vector Mix) (Silvuh) [+?] - many overdoubled parts

Destined Marionette (~Zero~) [+] (9)

Dies Irae (Rednanaki) [+] (9)

Dimensions (SulferDragon) [+] (9) - 24ths at m114?

Disconnected EXODUS (Arcsynth) [?] - this song has really clear melody, please try to follow the rhythm (especially 16ths, 24ths) accurately.

Disconnected HaZaRD (Rednanaki) [+?] - understepped part/stream patterns at middle, ending 12ths aren't needed

Dishwater [dore] [+] (6)

Distorted Reality (hi19hi19) [+?] - some 24ths on 32nd rhythms

Dot Matrix Hero (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10) - although I hate rhythms in m40-52 or some parts of ending because fun melody is ignored.

Dragonic Rage (Silvuh) [+?] - overdoubled/4-framers 

Dragons Bane (hi19hi19) [+] (8)

Electronic Torture (Liquid3arth) [?] - a bit gap off, overuse of 4-framer 24th trills

Elevated (Vote4Nixon) [+] (8) - last arrow isn't needed, want a proper song cut

Emerald Hill (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Emerald Hill Zone (HammyMcSquirrel) [+] (8)

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [?] - offsync at parts, too many potential 3-framers, 32nds on 24th rhythms

ESC (Amplified T Squared Mix) - Ben Speirs [+] (8)

Eternus v2 (behanjc) [+] (8) - file is fine but difference is just some doubles and bursts, need to discuss V2 is needed

EternuS v2 (KH Luxord) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

Evasive Maneuvers (DJ SBX) [?] - double placement and some rhythms are a bit weird

Apex Ultima (Neonatrias) [?] - offsync(gap early), minijacks, overall understepped for the hard rock rhythm and its length

Fairy in a Jar (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - ok but random/just continuous 8th patterns could be improved

Fascination MAXX (Triple CHAOS Mix) - Ben and Detach [?] - offsync at the last part, backing 16ths don't flow well, want more pitch relevant patterns

FF last battle festival (JX) [+] (11)

Fierce Combat (hi19hi19) [+] (6) - gap early, others are fine though

Fight Through the Forest (MrZombie) [+] (4) - fine for easy file but it's still sad missing some 16ths/24ths which are great fun factors for this song

Final Step-(behanjc) [+] (10) - minor syncing/pattern problem around m70-72, but quite nice rhythms overall

Floating Bridge [dore] [+] (4)

Flower Forever (psychopete) [?] - gap off, way understepped

Fluity Loops (trumaestro) [+?] - purple note on 4th, m112-113 are off

For FFR v2 - Ravia [?] - it has some difference, but want harder/better version for its V2

Forsaken Neon (Rebirth) [+?] - bunch of potential 3-framer patterns, could be less

Gradeus V2 (adlp) [?] - ok file but similar to V1 in difficulty and same type of steps as V1 at most parts, has differences on some parts tho

Growth (MixMasterLar) [+] (6) - gap early

Guitar Vs. Piano (Xandertrax) [+] (6) - pitch relevant, but felt a bit too long 4-framer song, and last note isn't needed

Hadazamui Rittou (For FFR) (Silvuh) [+] (7)

Hajnal (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (11)

Healing Smile - Rednanaki [+?] - m25-33 could be better rhythms, awkward stream patterns

Happy Happy Shining Star!! (Cyanite) REVISION [+] (10) - nice usage of your style

Happy Rainbow (Rednanaki) [+?] - stream patterns

Haven (for FFR) (TK_pavonineukon) [+] (8)

Holy_Orders (rednanaki) [?] - a bit BPM late, missing 24th rhythm at beginning, misrhythm at parts, use 24th notes instead of BPM change at middle

Huzzah!! (SulferDragon) [+] (8) 

Ice Candy Pop (hi19hi19) [+] (6)

I'm Not Ready (iPatch) [+?] - fine but felt a bit repetitive overall for me

Indulgence [eastsideman09] [+] (8)

Into the Night (Rebirth) [+] (9) - have permission of cranky's old stuff?

iPatcH - Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - too many crossovers/runningmen without good reason

iPatcH's Opening Theme (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Ivaltek (Chromer) [-] - offsync, YNS

Kirby's Dream Land (Rebirth) [+] (10)

kire kire mayoi (jx) [+] (8)

Koala in the Spider's Web (three17s) [+?] - stream pattern should be better, rhythm is fine

Lapis -The Heavens Remix- (bmah) [+] (10) - jumpstreams in m13/69 are a bit overdone though

Lataia (RNanaki) [+] (7)

Lazy Dog Funk (Tibs) [+] (7) - one potential 3-framer

leeroy jenkins fun times mix (Coolgamer) [?] - gap off, YNS

Legacy (meb_mmm) [+?] - double jacks

Legacy [eastsideman09] [+?] - gap off, continuous long stream is a bit weird (not a pattern issue, rhythms) for me

Legendary Etude (hi19hi19) [+] (9) - 3-framers? last 48th double isn't needed, seriously

Life Light (Cyanite) [+] (10) 

Lolit Speed (hi19hi19) [+?] - overdoubled/too continuous

Lost (~Zero~) [+] (7)

Lucid Quazar (Vote4Nixon) [+] (4)

Lunar Saturation (Rebirth) [+] (11)

M.A.M.A (hi19hi19) [+?] - played whole thing this time. pot 3-framers in 32nds at m24/40/48. otherwise add it if you guys like this style.

Mario Eurobeat (vemuck) [+] (6)

Matricide (Liquid3arth) [+] (8)

Megane de ne! (jx) [+] (10)

Metal Gear Solid piano remix (hi19hi19) [+] (4)

Metroid Evacuation Theme Remix (Calcium Deposit & spookymagician) [-] - offsync

Metropolis (HammyMcSquirrel & brothaice) [+] (8)

Metropolis Zone (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Midnight Dragon (~Zero~) [>] - organs rhythms could be more accurate. 24ths rolls on organ are kind but pitch relevant patterns are better.

Midnight Dragon (DarkbearX) [>] - pitch relevant patterns are good overall, but in double placement and 24th patterns hi19's is better.

Midnight Dragon (hi19hi19) [+] (11) - missing some organ burst rhythms but non jacky pitch relevant 24th patterns are good, patterns on piano are also good.

Mortal Kombat - At the Disco (freakysnots) [+?] - minijacks, weird 64ths, others are fine

Mortal Kombat At The Disco - Ben Speirs [+?] - gap early, felt a bit too long

Mr. Evil (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Music(TK_Breed) [+?] - ONS, file is ok

Netbattling Gospel (intensez) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

Ninja Turtles Theme (hi19hi19) [+] (7)

One Winged Angel 8bit (freakysnots) [?] - blue notes on 4th, a bit offsync, 24ths going with nothing

Only Medicine (Cedolad) [-] - offsync (it's not constant BPM), weird rhythms

Over The Frail Dream (Liquid3arth) [+?] - stream pattern, the one in the queue is better

Painkillers (MixMasterLar) [?] - gap off, trills

Paradice (RB_IcePh0enix) [+?] - minijacks

Pavlov's Dog (Vote4Nixon) [+] (7)

Pirates of the Ciribbean - Remix (MrZombie) [+] (3) - kinda understepped though

Pound To My Senses(Shadowlessheart) [?] - minijacks, rhythms should go with the music better

Power (hi19hi19) [+] (1) - lol understepped, going with slow organ

Progression (Silvuh) [+] (9)

R3 (Omega Mix) (Vote4Nixon) [?] - not different/better enough as a V2

RainDrops (Vote4Nixon) [+] (8) - honestly want a songcut tho

Robotnik Theme (MVL Redux) (daikenkaifreak) [+] (5) - everything is similar to Boss Machine 2 tho

Say it righ t-Sanxion7 Remix- (eastsideman09) [+] (8)

Scars Throughout Time (coolboyrulez0) [?] - offsync

Scythe of 13 (Xandertrax) [+?] - 32nds should be toned down (even have 3-framers), long one handed trills should be changed

Secret Zombie Room v2 (WTFBrandon) [?] - 24ths, want more difference on other parts

Seven v2 (KH Luxord) [-] - offsync, this song doesn't need V2

Shanghai Girl of Meiji 17-(behanjc) [+] (10)

ShapeShifter (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10)

Sheen Screen (sente3) [?] - jacks

Shind Bad (Rebirth) [+] (10) - song cut is good

Shonen JUMPstyle (Arcsynth) [+?] - 16th gallop rhythm is weird for me

solar carona part 3(who_cares973) [+?] - pattern should be fixed for long streams

Starwolf(blindreper1179) [+] (8) - can the beginning be fixed?

Strangeprogram v2 (Ravia) [-] - no need for V2

Street Fighter (Techno Remix) - Ben Speirs [+] (7)

Sunny Side Up (stargroup100) [+] (9) - potential 3-framers on 32nds?

Superstar (MeaCulpa) [+?] - a bit overdoubled

SYNiC (Arcsynth) [?] - overuse of spins in streams

Teh Tricky Techno! (Xandertrax) [+] (8) - a bit werid patterns tho

Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (D.J. Cristo) [?] - 16th jacks

Tell v2 [dore] [+] (9) - trill patterns are left-hand biased tho

The Crow's Eyes (hi19hi19) [?] - 24th jacks

The Wanderer (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (Coolgamer) [?] - yellow notes on 4th, jacks

Token Whore (hi19hi19) [-] - no file?

twinklesky (bmah) [+?] - 12th jacks(potential 3-framers)

Utopia (Rebirth) [+] (8)

V1 V2 (hi19hi19) [+] (5) - file is ok, but I doubt easier V2 is needed

Vanity Angel (bluguerrilla) [+?] - long 32nds are a bit overused.. especially first 2 bursts are weird

Variations 2 (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (7) - understepped at parts though

Vertex (omgitznpv) [?] - really repetitive, needs song cut

Vertex Alpha (u9hq5yqh) [-] - no comment

Vertex GAMMA (Silvuh) [?] - way too long/repetitive jumpstreams

W@REZ (V3T_ddrultramix3) [+?] - minijacks

Warioland 3 Overworld (freakysnots) [+?] - steps are ok, repetitive music and weird ending?

WaveRip(remastered) (Silvuh) [+] (10) - overdoubled tho

Way out of the dungeon (cyrx900) [?] - jacks

Zelda Quatro - Ben Speirs [+] (7) - a bit gap early

{Adrinaline Pumper} (ledwix) [+] (9)

{Barbed Wire} MAC7 (Vote4Nixon) [+] (7) - a bit off on a few notes tho

{Big Boss} (~Zero~) [+] (8)

{Big Boss} (jugglinguy) [>] - nearly as good, but liked zero's a bit more.

{Factory} - (d4u7211) [+?] - double placement/stream pattern at parts

{Flying Away} (FFR edit) (bmah) [?] - BPM change is better on beginning, 8th trills in m71-78 are weird for the song

{Flying Away} (Nul) [?] - beginning is a bit off/blue notes on 4th, use BPM change, stream patterns

{Flying Away} (Zageron) [?] - has better sync, but use BPM change to sync the beginning, long trills

{Lazy Summer Days} (Aa_Doodaa) [-] - steps end suddenly in the middle of the song

{Lazy Summer Days} (dudelogan14) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

{Lazy Summer Days} (Silvuh) [+?] - burst around m59 is overdone, overdoubled at parts

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [+?] - avoid 12th jacks and long one-handed trills

{Paranorma} (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

{The Traveller} - Cornandbeans (Cyanite) [?] - off at parts, especially m70-80, m112 is early

{Timebomb} (D.J. Cristo) [+?] - offsync (gap early), 64ths?

+R+ Anthem (Liquid3arth) [+?] - yellow/blue notes on 4th

+Shind Bad (Silvuh) [?] - patterns/a lot of spins, rebirth's is better



[b][size=+2]Rebirth[/size][/b]
<+R+> Anthem: ?
- Downbeat isn't a red note the whole time. It should be
- Offbeat throughout the whole file. Probably a gap problem but I'm not sure

101 Kittens (dag12): +?
- Offbeat after that first stop

101 Kittens (flipsta_lombax): +?
- rednanaki's is better

101 Kittens (rednanaki): +
- Best of the three
- Still, a little weird. I'll accept for the fact that its the best of the three. Other judges can really decide on this one
- 12th jacks might be a little problem

15: +?
- In those 8th jumps near the end, make them single notes and a jump to that dynamic note every two beats

300: +?
- Its pretty cool how the bpm progresses throughout the song and everything
- Aw.. that large 300 bpm 16th stream at the end is the only thing that will keep this file from the game. We just can't have that long of a really fast stream in there
- I really liked the file otherwise

A black cat plays intense jazzy phrases: +
- Pretty cool file

Apex Ultima: +?
- Is that bubble bobble I hear in that? Nice. I like stuff thats TGWP related rofl
- Good file. LONG, but thats ok.
- Has a 32nd jack at measure 120. 2 framer for sure, remove it
- Also check the sync throughout the whole file. Make a couple syncing bpm changes, because the song sounds like it goes a little off on some parts

Aqua Zone Remix: ?
- From what the song sounds like, I think it needs a really easy stepchart.
- This is a bit overstepped anyway

Aurora: +

Breaker Sunset: ?
- That beginning stream with the tons of jumps in it, I think it should be gallops and single notes and stuff. No big 16th stream
- Seems to go offbeat

Beneath the Sand: ?
- Goes offbeat
- I don't think it needs any 24ths at all
- Repetitive as hell rhythms/patterns. Song shouldn't really be stepped because of that
- Way overstepped after the middle

Big Blue: +?
- Needs more filler notes in some empty spots
- Jimerax's file is better (one for 3rd style)

Blue Noah: +
- I don't think that part was 22 bpm lol
- Pretty good file

Bowser the Shredder: ?
- Has 16th jacks at a high bpm. They're correctly placed, but FFR can't have them. Release the file for SM

Car Sax: +

Chariot: +

Cid's Theme Piano Concerto: +

Clockwork Genesis: +
- Really fun

Comptine D'un Autre Ete Techno Remix: +
- Weird jump placements during those triplets

Core: ?
- Would be nice if it had the correct rhythms
- Second half was incredibly dull

Crowdpleaser v2: +?
- Has some 16th minijacks
- Not sure if I'd want this as the Crowdpleaser v2 in the game

Cruel Whole: +
- Would be nice if a lot of those little 16th streams ended in jumps, because that last note is is a different, louder sound (in the first half)
- Kinda boring after a while

Delta Beat: +
- Middle part might be a little overdone. I'll be nice on this one because its pretty fun

Destined Marionette: +
- Accepting but I think this can use a better chart

Dies Irae: +?
- A lot of unnessesary jumps
- Seems like the song needs an easier stepchart

Dimensions: +
- Some weird patterns but ok

Disconnected EXODUS: +
- Has 12th jacks but they're not that bad

Disconnected Hazard: +?
- Weird streams
- Could use a better chart
- Weird filler notes
- That 12th thing at the end doesn't have to be there

Dishwater: +
- I changed the gap by 40 (F12 two times)
- Kinda repetitive..
- Weird simfile. Not sure if its FFR material but I'm accepting it because the steps fit the music

Distorted Reality: +
- Really repetitive patterns
- I think all of those little bursts are 32nds. Not 32nds and 24ths.
- That weird 24th gallop you have every once in a while sounds like its a 16th

Dot Matrix Hero: +
- That was a pretty fun simfile

Dragonic Rage: +
- Fun simfile. I like it
- Lot of jumps but thats alright. They're fun to hit
- Repetitive after a while

Dragons Bane: +

Electronic Torture: ?
- Bunch of trills, including 24th trills which will make tons of 4 framers
- Difficulty within the simfile isn't distributed too evenly. i.e. some parts are piss easy while others are harder, and those easy spots can be stepped much better
- The simfile is pretty boring because of that

Elevated: +
- Not sure why you have streamy stuff (in the second half) then stop and put just 4ths for a measure or two, then start back up again with streams. I guess to make the simfile seem easier
- Simfile is alright, even with jumpstreams

Emerald Hill: +
- A total of one jump? uh ok, thats boring

Emerald Hill Zone: +
- Fun

Endless Maze: +?
- Changed gap by 40 (F11 two times)
- The jacks and stuff are actually fun, in the middle, but 16th jacks at 130 bpm.. not sure. 
- It is a good file though

ESC: +
- Could have more interesting steps

EternuS v2 (behanjc): +
- This is a little bit like hi19's simfile, but it has a few things that make it different, and fun. 
- Letting the other judges decide on this for sure

EternuS v2 (KH Luxord): -
- Such a terribly off file lmao. Quit out after 20 seconds but came back to watch the whole thing because its funny

Evasive Maneuvers: +?
- Pretty boring and repetitive

Fairy in a Jar: +
- A little boring but ok

Fascination MAXX: +
- Changed gap by 20 (should be 30 actually) F11 once

Final Fantasy Final Battle Festival: +
- LONG FILE NOT FUN TO JUDGE
- Really fun simfile though, despite the length. Nicely stepped
- After the 196 bpm part or whatever it is, the sync went off a little. I'll fix that myself before it goes into the game, if it does

Fierce Combat: +
- Changed gap by 40. F11 twice

Fight Through the Forest: +
- I guess this was intended to be an easy file

Final Step: +
- Fun steps + OSTER project = Very nice simfile

Floating Bridge: +

Flower Forever: ?
- Understepped. File needs a harder chart

Fruity Loops: ?
- File thats in the batch is better

For FFR v2: +?
- Its a pretty nice file, but I don't think that song needs a v2, even if its got the blue noteskin and is hard with the rolls

Forsaken Neon: +
- lol my simfile

Gradius v2: +?
- A lot like the v1. Doesn't really need a better stepchart

Growth: ?
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- I don't know how to explain it, but the file is just meh. I don't know what to say to improve on. I guess that it doesn't need those gallops and triplets. It sounds like it should be a really easy file

Guitar vs. Piano: +
- Gets really repetitive, but ok

Hadazamui Rittou: +

Hajnal: +

Happy Happy Shining Star *REVISION*: +
- Much better

Happy Rainbow: ?
- Awkward simfile
- Needs to be stepped differently, and more to the music with fun steps

Haven: +

Healing Smile: +
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice. (Actually it should be by 37 but whatever)
- This one is kinda iffy, but I'll accept it

Holy Orders:
- That slowdown in the 30s measures is not in the music
- Opening stream seems to have too many jumps than whats needed
- 136 bpm 16th jack triplets
- I just think there can be a better chart for this. The chart isn't too bad though

Huzzah!!: +

I'm Not ready: +?
- Seems to go offbeat at parts
- Repetitive and boring as hell

Ice Candy Pop: +
- Yossy music is pretty nice. Fun file/music too

Indulgence: +

Into the Night: +
- lol my simfile

iPatch's OP: +
- Changed gap by 20. F12 once
- Really nice file

Ivaltek: -
- lol wut. Super off simfimle

Kirby's Dream Land: +
- lol my simfile

Kire Kire Mayoi: +
- Nice

Koala in the Spiders Web: +

Lapis: +
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice
- Some jumpstream that might be hard, but thats ok, it goes to the music.
- Its good. Something I'd expect from bmah

Lataia: +
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice
- Its a pretty good file, but I think more can be done with it. Accepting anyway

Lazy Dog Funk: +
- rofl tibs made a simfile for FFR. Its good though. Nice file
- That one handed triplet at measure 68 has a 16th jack in it.. 118 bpm, not sure. File is really good though, so I'll disregard that jack

Leeroy Jenkins fun times mix: +?
- Changed the gap by 40 or 60, I forgot already rofl. F12 two or three times
- Downbeat of a file should almost always be a red note. Change that and resubmit

Legacy (meb_mmm): +?
- Changed gap by 20. F12 once
- 16th double jacks in the middle. Somewhere in the 20s measures

Legacy (eastsideman09): +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Better of the two Legacy files. Good file as well.

Legendary Etude: +
- Fun file. Nice pitch relevancy

Life Light: +
- Pretty fun once you get to the second half

Lolit Speed: +
- Aw its a cut of the song, but its got the vocals. Nice. I wish it had more 16ths but that'd make big problems for FFR since its so fast XD

Lost: +
- Could use some jumps in spots where it doesn't have them. During the loud claps

Lucid Quasar: +

Lunar Saturation: +
- lol my simfile

M.A.M.A.: +
- lol you don't use a single left arrow in the whole simfile. That's actually unique. Its probably a joke file, but its actually good.

Mario Eurobeat: +
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice
- Its actually a pretty cool file.

Matricide: +?
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Random 8th and 16th patterns that make the file really weird. I don't know about this one

megane de ne: +
- <3 MOSAIC.WAV
- Good file. As expected from JX. This makes me want to step more MOSAIC.WAV rofl

Metal Gear Solid Piano Remix: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once

Metroid Evacuation Theme Remix: -
- Very offbeat. I can't even tell how much to change the gap

Metropolis: +
- That one handed 8th note trill shouldv'e stayed the same pattern because the music doesn't change

Metropolis Zone: +

Midnight Dragon (DarkbearX): +?
- The one in the queue is a bit better

Midnight Dragon (hi19hi19): +
- Good enough to compare to the queue file
- There seems to be a little sync issue with the second half. I'll fix that if it goes into the game

Midnight Dragon (~Zero~): +?
- The one in the queue is better

Mortal Combat - At The Disco (freakysnots): +?
- What the hell are those 64th things supposed to be? Get rid of those
- 16th minijack at measure 25 I think
- Repetitive

Mortal Combat - At The Disco (Ben Spiers): +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Seems to get early at the end. I'll fix if it gets into the game
- Like the other file.. its repetitive, but good enough

Mr. Evil: +
- Repetitive.. but alright

Music: -
- Every single note in the file is brown. Change it to the correct noteskin before I even look at the file

Netbattling Gospel: -
- offbeat as hell

Ninja Turtles Theme: +

One Winged Angel 8Bit: +?
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Strange file, kinda
- That 16th jumpstream in the 60s measures, doesn't need to have a jump every 8th beat. Only every 4th
- Try getting rid of the 12th jacks in the first half of the file. In those short 12th streams

Only Medicine: -
- Offbeat. I couldn't really tell what to change it to, so I just quit out

Over the Frail Dream: ?
- After thinking for a while about what type of stepchart that song should have... its either an easy 8th note stepchart, or something like what you have. For FFR, I'd like to see the easier one of the two

Painkillers: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Weird simfile because of song, but I'll accept
- lol trills

Paradice: +?
- Sounds like the 16th stuff after measure 43 is off by one 16th or something
- 16th minijack at measure 44, one at 66, and one at 70

Pavlov's Dog: +

Pirates of the Ciribbean Remix: ?
- lol its spelled 'caribbean'
- Changed gap by 20. F12 once
- After changing the gap, it is an alright easy file. I'd like to see a harder stepchart for this song though. One that goes with the melody

Pound My Senses To TB: +?
- heh filler arrows. Those made it cooler and more interesting
- 16th minijack at the end of measure 63. Another one at measure 90, and 92

Power: +
- I remember Tass rejecting this before for some reason, but it looks ok to me. I know its infectionous bladder piss easy but I see what you stepped it to, so I approve. I would like to see a harder stepchart though

Progression: +
- Fun

R3 Omega Mix v2: +?
- Seems to have a sync problem
- Its a bit different, but I think its too much like the v1. Or that with stricter judging on v2 files, this isn't good enough

Raindrops v2: +
- This is about what I'd be looking for in a v2 for this song. Nice.

Robotnik Theme: +
- Has a sync problem in the second half. I can fix

Say It Right: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once

Scars Throughout Time: -
- Sync the file. Until then, no

Scythe of 13: +
- Enormous amount of jump, but this song calls for them
- Those 32nds might be too much though. I'll let Tass decide for sure

Secret Zombie Room v2: +?
- Stricter judging for v2 files makes me say its not quite good enough. 

Seven v2: -
- Terribly synced

Shanghai Girl of Meiji 17: +

Shapeshifter: +

Sheen Screen: ?
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- 16th minijacks all over this song

Shind Bad (Silvuh): +?
- Mine is better imo
- Might be a little overdone in the middle with all of the jumps and 16ths

Shind Bad (Rebirth): +
- lol my simfile

Shonen JUMPstyle: ?
- Understepped in my opinion. It needs all of the 16ths that you hear in the song or something a lot easier than this
- Very weird jump placements throughout the whole file

solar carona part 3: -
- Theres a big gap problem in the simfile. If I change the gap to make the steps come later, it throws off the whole file, if I make the gap make the steps come earlier, it does the same thing. I can't really say anything about this because of that. Fix the sync

Starwolf: +?
- One in the queue is better

Strangeprogram v2: ?
- Weird sim/steps. Too close to the difficulty of the v1

Street Fighter techno remix: +
- Could use more interesting filler notes, but this is good enough.

Sunny Side Up: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once
- Its a pretty fun file with the 48th things

Superstar: +
- Jumpstream at the end might be too much but I think its a good file.

SYNiC: +

Teh Tricky Techno: +
- Repetetetetitititveveve but short so its probably ok

Tell Me A Story: ?
- Has some 32nd jacks in the 60 bpm part. Change those. Also some minijacks after that 60 bpm part.
- File is good otherwise

Tell v2: +
- Changed gap by 20. F12 once
- Very good file. The one handed triplets are actually really fun

The Crows Eyes: +?
- It has a bunch of 24 jacks which I should autoreject. The file is really good though, so its hard to reject. Those need to be changed for FFR though.. 

The Wanderer: +

THIS IS SPARTA: 
- Needs the downbeat to be a red note.

* twinklesky *: +
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice
- It has some 12th jacks in the beginning, in those 24th bursts. The file is really good though, so I can let that slide. If this gets rejected, its because of those. Fix those up and it should be a GREAT file (this is if its rejected)

Utopia: +
- lol my simfile

V1 v2: +?
- Feels a lot like the v1 to this simfile. I know the v1 has about two times the amount of arrows though

Vanity Angel: +?
- 32nd rolls feel a bit long. They probably need to be taken out. File is ok other than that

Variations 2: +
- I wish it had those really fast bursts that are in the music. But its a good file

Vertex: +
- Jumps are placed in weird locations as it gets close to the climax
- Fun file though, even if its repetitive
- Has some 12th jacks at the end, in that 24th stream. That might be too much, but I'll let tass decide for sure.

Vertex ALPHA: -
- lol stepmania file with hands, freezes, hyper jumpstream and jacks during the hyper jumpstream

Vertex GAMMA: ?
- Jumpstream is a little much in the middle. Overstepped I'd have to say. The file was good before the big jumpstream though haha

W@REZ: ?
- Incorrect rhythms
- 16th minijacks at 200 bpm

Warioland 3 Overworld: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once

WaveRip: +
- Might be a little overstepped but I think it'd make a good hard file

Way out of the dungeon: -
- Changed gap by 60. F12 three times
- Incorrect 24th rhythms
- 16th jacks
- Weird patterns and simfile overall

Wish: +
- Good simfile

Zelda Quatro: +
- Changed gap by 40. F11 twice

{Adrinaline Pumper}: +

{Barbed Wire} MAC7: +
- Those yellow jumps sound off, but not by too much

{Big Boss} (jugglinguy): +?
- 12th jack during that 24th triplet. Might be alright though

{Big Boss} (~Zero~): +?
- It doesn't need 32nd rolls
- 12th jack during the 24th triplet, like jugglinguy did

*Both files didn't have jumps where I saw it needed them*

{Flying Away} (bmah): ?
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice.
- Patterns were repetitive. Song is repetitive as well
- Seems to have a sync problem. Its onbeat in the beginning and gradually goes off near the end

{Flying Away} (Nul): +?
- Weird steps and rhythms sometimes
- Tons of jumps every beat near the beginning and stuff. Really boring when they drag on that long

{Flying Away} (Zageron): +?
- Same thing as Nul's file. I don't think Flying Away is a song that would enable a good stepchart

{Lazy Summer Days} (Aa_Doodaa): +?
- Changed gap by 40. F12 twice
- Xandertrax's is better

{Lazy Summer Days} (dudelogan14): -
- Can't even begin to describe the errors in this file. Needs complete overhaul. Its not supposed to be stepped in 24ths

{Lazy Summer Days} (Silvuh): +?
- I thought it was the best file of the four until that jumpstream in the middle. That seems like too much when you compare it to the rest of the song

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax): +
- Both silvuh's and xandertrax's files are rated 9 footer heavy on SM, so I honestly don't know which one is which. This is the one with 1154 steps. I'm assuming its Xandertrax's file because I recognize his style of stepping
- Those 24th bursts have 12th jacks in them. Might need a change
- Best of the four but still flawed a little

{Paranorma}: +

{The Traveller}: +?
- Slowdown part isn't synced correctly enough
- Its really easy to tell what patterns to place for this song, and you have something a little different. I think it can be better

{Timebomb}: +?
- Beginning feels overstepped kinda
- Gap is off by like 60 - 80. I don't remember

**Tasselfoot** · 10-16-2007, 12:34 AM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]10/15/07[/size][/b]

[b][size=+2]THE QUEUE[/size][/b]
Devotion and Desire - DSC & blu
Dimensions - SulferDragon - any way to fix up the 1st 2 vocal sections?
Do a barrel roll - EW
Fantasia - eastsideman
Frictional Nevada - jimerax (this is a FGO people!)
Gameboy Rave - EW - make sure to only include 1 difficulty...
Glove Stage - EW
Guitar v Piano - Xandertrax
Hybrid - eastsideman - should 550-600ish go to guitar?
Hyper Hyper - eastsideman
Infinity 301 - SulferDragon
L9 - jx
Lapis - bmah
Love - EW - got 3 perfs on this...
MegaScorcher - eastsideman - didn't notice what rebirth said
Psychopathy 101 - silvuh
Read the Mind - SulferDragon
ROAR - SulferDragon
Rumia, Sealed... - EW - agree w/ jx
Same Dream - EW
Survive - bluguerrilla
Toph's OP - EW
Tougenkyou - jx
twinklesky - bmah
00.01 - SulferDragon
101 kittens - stargroup - about damn time a file for this song got in the queue


[b]Songs Tass Played But Did Not Queue, Or Didn't Play[/b]
a dragon's honor - 77 4 framers, very similar song to dragon's final roar
am3p - not good enough. bland.
angel stays on this ground vocal - agree w/ jx, esp 1st vocal section
ascii art core - way overstepped.  right hand biased.
balamb style - what jx said
bang bang bang - vocals
bouff - too many 4 framers
chaos sphere - DNP
crystal monolith - what jx said, maybe less jacks
delta beat - what jx said. few16th patterns awkward.
dragonic rage - overstepped, go to melody. all ****ing dragon songs sound the same!
dreamin in the 80s - bit overstepped
endless altercation - what rebirth said
experience - DNP
flower forever - step the whole thing
happy rainbow - what jx said
high - no permission
highway star - repetitive
huzzah - what jx said
i am maid - DNP
ice disk - what jx said
intergalactic - DNP, fix noteskin issue
mr evil - little more to vocals
oh em gee 3 - i will shoot myself before this gets into ffr
skeletones - no 3 framers in the file, but what rebirth said
lunatic princess - DNP, overstepped
phonograph plays part and parcel - understepped...  and didn't i put a ban on JE?  lol
variations2 (jx) - 158bpm vs 160bpm for EW? also, what rebirth said...  fix up a bit still?
vertex - what rebirth said
wave rip - what they both said
wow wow 220 - any way to change single-double jacks so they aren't jacks?
too much bass - song.



[b][size=+1]Rebirth[/size][/b]
(Too Much) Bass: +?

00.01: +

101 Kittens (flipsta_lombax): +?

101 Kittens (SulferDragon) +?
- Best 101 Kittens file I've seen yet, but its still not quite what I'd be looking for
- Has some 12th jacks that mightv'e been a problem

4 Chord: -
- Fun, but overstepped for FFR

Eleventh Hour: +?
- 12th jack

A Dragon's Honor: +
- Has a lot of jacks, but its correctly stepped. 

Aidra: ?

AIRWAVE: +?

AM-3P: +?

Angel Stays on this Ground Vocal: +
- Changed gap by 20. F12 once

As Do I: ?
- Needs a harder simfile

Ascii Art Core: +
- Should be rejected for hyper jumpstream and 24th/32nds bursts at high bpms and stuff. But I think we need another good guru file

Balamb Style: +?

Bang Bang Bang: +?

Beneath the Sand: ?
- 16th jacks lol

BOUFF: +

Chaos Sphere: +
- Only accepting because I think it'd make an alright easy file. The song is boring, and with strict judging, I'd normally reject this for the song

CIA Rave v3: ?
- v3 for this sim would have to somehow be incredible

Clockwork Genesis: ?
- 16th jack at beginning lol.
- The queue'd file is better anyway

Close Combat: +?

Cloud Control (Knoobish): +?
- Jumpstream was kinda a little much. File is good otherwise

Cloud Control (OMEGAspike): 
- Same problem as the other one. Jumpstream. This file feels better than the other though

Club Beats: -
- Way offbeat, probably wrong bpm and everything

Cool: ?
- Needs a harder, better file for this song

Cosmos: -
- Freezes lol

Crystal Monolith: +
- Changed gap by 20. F11 once

CY.5: +?

Darkened Lights: +?
- Kinda had too many one handed trills. Could be fixed up some too

Delta Beat: +
- Missing a couple jumps in random spots, but its good (even with that climax at measure 68)

Demon(s): -
- I have no idea what the hell these notes go to. Incredibly offbeat

Devotion and Desire: +
- I expect a bunch of 4 framers, but the file is good

Dimensions: +

Disconnected Hazard: ?
- Song doesn't have any of those 12th/24th note stuff. Offbeat, etc. Needs a better chart

Do a Barrel Roll: +

Dont Call Me Peanut: ?
- Song makes simfile incredibly boring

Dragonic Rage: +
- I enjoyed this one. Jumps made it fun

Dreamin in the 80s: +
- I think those 200 bpm parts just shouldv'e been 100 bpm 32nd streams maybe, but ok. Good file

DS Boss: -
- offbeat. Needs better file

Electro Rush X8: +?
- ElectroWerewolf's file was better

Endless Altercation: +?
- Change those green jumps to red ones. Resubmit, because other than that its good

Enigma: +?
- minijacks

Epidermis v2: -
- I can tell just by the arrow count that this is going to look a lot like the v1 thats in the game
- No v2, at least not for a while. v2 for this file needs to be easier anyway

Experience: +
- I was going to reject this, but you did a nice job in some parts which made it a lot more interesting

Fantasia: +

Fantasy Impromptu (Zeron): +?
- Can have a much more pitch relevant chart, which is what I'd like to see for this file
- Streats felt too freeform

Fantasy Impromptu (i love you): +?
- Same thing as the other Fantasy Impromptu file

Final Audition: +?
- Had to change gap by 100 lol
- File didn't seem too fun anyway

Final Fantasy VII Fighting Mix: ?
- There aren't any 12th notes in the song lol
- Boring steps
- Offbeat

Flower Forever (Cyanite): ?
- Offbeat. It has a constant bpm
- Wasn't fun to play at all. Cyanite, you can do much better...

Flower Forever (eastsideman09): ?
- During the red-yellow-yellow note part thing near the beginning, you don't need jumps in there. 
- Wasn't too fun

Forsaken Neon: -
- Mine was better

Flight of the Bumblebee v2: -
- lol no

Fictional Nevada: +
- holy crap FGO file for sure
- Those green note things looked pretty stupid
- Might be too much for FFR

Futurescope.exe: +?
- Wasn't fun to play

Gameboy Rave (heavy): +

Gargoyle: +?
- Wasn't what I was looking for in this sim. Rhythms, patterns, etc

Geno's Forest: -
- Wrong bpm or something

Gerudo Interlude: ?
- Song is kinda meh. Gives for a boring simfile

Glove Stage: +
- Kinda seems like correct rhythms so ok

Guitar vs Piano: +

Happy Rainbow: +

Haven: ?
- Random jumps and streams and stuff. Missing some notes as well

Heart Attack (Codyboyrulez0): ?
- Song is too quiet for a simfile. Shouldn't be stepped at all

Heart Attack (RB IcePh0enix): ?
- Same reason as above

Higasi: +?
- Not quite what I'd be looking for in a sim for this. Less jumpstream, even though it was minor. The melody is a 5 note 16th stream, not a 7 note

High: +
- It has a stupid random quad at the end, so we'll just remove that if its accepted. (Tass - don't reject for this, just simply remove it)

Highway Star: ?
- This was just a weird sim. Needs to be different

HOT PEPPERZ: -
- lmao this looks exactly like Exige's simfile for this song

Huzzah: +

Hybrid: +

Hyper Hyper: +
- Fun file, but I have a suggestion. You have some blue-yellow gallops where the yellow note is a jump. I think you should put a red note after all of those. It'd be really fun then

I am Maid: ?
- Isn't this simfile in the queue already? By this very sim author?
- Stricter judging says no on this simfile now. Its not quite what I'd be looking for, and there are some really easy parts where everything else is 8th jumps and stuff like that

I'll Be Here For You: ?
- Had minijacks, and rhythms not stepped correctly

Ice Disk: +

Infinity 301: ?
- Felt meh to play

Intergalactic: +
- Despite the green and orange notes... its correctly synced and everything... good job 

Introder: +?

Intruder Alert: +?
- Didn't feel too fun I guess. Mightv'e been because of the song

L9: +

Lapis (Xiaounlimited): ?
- Random steps everywhere and stuff. Overstepped

Lapis (robertsona): -
- bmah's is better

Lapis (bmah): +
- Change gap by 40. F12 twice
- THIS one is fun

Life: ?
- It mightv'e been stepped correctly, but the song isn't one that should be stepped. Boring sim because of that

LOLtechno: -
- tons of offbeat notes

Look to the Future: +?
- It has some minijacks that don't need to be there

Love (ElectricWerewolf): +
- Really fun easy file, nice job. VERY FUN on pad

Love (XPTRIRRYNESSXD): -
- EW's was better

Mad Girl: +?
- It has a near quad thing near the beginning. Two 32nd jumps. Get rid of it

Makiba: ?
- First part of the sim was pretty good, but it got stupid after 30 seconds
- Might have a sync problem too

Super Mario - Plumber's Underground: -
- Wrong bpm it looks like

MegaScorcher: -
- Fix the stop, because it gets really offbeat after that. 

MODEL DDX: ?
- This sim seemed alright.. but its way too much for FFR I think

Lucky Star OP: -
- Rejecting before I even play it, because I KNOW we do not have permission for this

Mr. Evil: +

Music: -
- Change them to the correct note colors...

Never Give Up: ?
- Boring/dull song makes for boring/dull simfile

Neverland: ?
- Not fun to play. Random notes

Novo Mundo: +?
- Its a very good simfile, but we can't have the 140 bpm 16th minijacks in FFR. Change those and resubmit. Easily accepted afterwards

OH EM GEE 2: +?

OH EM GEE 3: +?

Orchestral Angels: +?
- Boring/repetitive

Otter's Dance (Silvuh): +?
- I think it can be fixed up a little. Can be made a little better

Otter's Dance (Arcsynth): ?
- Thought Silvuh's was better

Paranoia Sigma: +?

Pump Me Up Amadeus: +?
- Do we have permission?

Popcorn Remix: -
- It was offbeat, and I can't tell where to sync it to

Procrastination on a Paper: ?
- Sounds like you missed a lot of notes

Psychopathhy 101: +
- The purple/pink notes part seemed offbeat, but since you made the song, I'll assume its correct

Read the Mind: +

ROAR: +

Rumia, Sealed Youkai of the Night: +

Same Dream: +

Saria's Song: +?
- Some offbeat notes

Sasoribi: +?
- Get rid of that final jump. I'm sick of seeing songs with those

Scream of Roki: +?

Scythe of 13: +?
- Still think its a little overstepped. For example, measures 100 - 114 don't need to be a constant 8th stream. Theres nothing in the music but those 4ths

Shind Bad: +?
- Mine was better
- Didn't feel very fun at all

Skeletones: +?
- Do we have permission?
- Fix the sync up, it gradually goes off as you get further into the simfile
- Sounds like you missed a few notes near the beginning

Sly v2: -
- Doesn't need a v2

Smithy Showdown: +?
- Not a very appealing simfile

Smitty's Downfall: +?
- Dull simfile. I think it can be better
- Couple offbeat notes

Stronger: -
- rofl this simfile has freezes

Super Mario 3 - Overworld Theme 2: ?
- It doens't need all of those jumps

Superstar: ?
- Song doesn't really work for any kind of simfile

Survive: +

Sword Strike: -
- These notes don't even go to anything...

Terror: +?

The Doomsday: +?
- I don't really think it needed some of the 16th jumpstream... not sure

The Euphoria: +?
- Song was meh. Doesn't make for a good simfile

The Lunatic Princess: +?
- Kinda overstepped
- I can tell you copied the dwi file from my simfile and made your own steps from that. My SM simfile for it is how it should be done

The Phonograph Plays Part and Parcel: -
- Easy simfile for this... doesn't work

Thinking Different v2: -
- Doesn't need a v2

Together As One: ?
- Wasn't a very fun simfile

Toono Youkai Zensen: +?
- Needs more jumps to make it a good file

Toph's OP: ?
- Felt like a weird file. 24th gallop things aren't in the music from what I can hear

Toph's OP 2: ?
- File is good, but the music in the beginning is just far too quiet
- Has a minijack at the end of measure 36

Tougenkyou: +
- Fun

Tricky Disco: +?

Truly, Truly This Is The End: ?

Twin CHevron Remix: -
- What the hell is this?

* twinklesky *: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once
- Awesome simfile

Vampire Killer: ?

Vanity Angel (bluguerrilla): +?

Vanity Angel (omgitsnpv): ?

Variations 2 (ElectricWerewolf): +?

Variations 2 (jimerax): +?
- The better of the two, but still not quite good enough

Vertex: +?
- Still just a dull simfile

Vertex GAMMA: +?

Viral Unity: +?
- It just seems like the steps can be arranged better

WAIWAI230: +?
- Didn't seem like it needed all of those jumps. Needs some more filler notes too

Wave Rip: +?

Way of the Dungeon: +?

WOWWOW220: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once

Yager: -
- Change the notes to the correct colors...

{Flying Away}: +?
- Song just won't give a good simfile

{Lazy Summer Days} (Silvuh):?

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax): ?
- Silvuh and Xandertrax, I think you two should collab on a Lazy Summer Days file. There were parts that I liked in both of these files, and parts that I disliked. If your files were combined, I think it'd be a very good file if done right.



[b][size=+1]JX[/size][/b]
A Dragon's Honor (SulferDragon and ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - nice PR patterns, some weird double placement on 12ths, others are fine. 

Aidra (MV_Kingslayer) [-] - offsync, YNS

AIRWAVE (i love you) [+?] - not bad, but it's better to use more 16th rhythms with percussion inside 8th streams

AM-3P (Sanxion7 'House Party' Dub) (Wyde) [+] (7)

Angel stays on this ground -Vocal Remix- (bmah) [+?] - want to go with the vocal more without being too inconsistent in difficulty, minor layering problem. other parts are good.

As Do I ~FFR~ (MixMasterLar) [?] - offsync(gap early), felt understepped even for an easy file

Ascii Art Core (cetaka) [+?] - doubles should be toned down overall, some 24ths are actually 32nds. other rhythms are good

Balamb Style(scottish) [+] (5) - patterns could be more PR tho

Bang Bang Bang-(behanjc) [+] (6) - funny attempt

Beneath the Sand(Sequal) [?] - jacks, stream patterns, rhythms

Bouff (eastsideman09) [+] (9) - a bit jacky overall tho

Chaos Sphere (SulferDragon) [+?] - felt a bit repetitive at the beginning

CIA Rave v3 (i love you) [-] - too similar, no V3 for this

Clockwork_Genesis (Spenner) [?] - jacks, the one in the queue is better

Close Combat-behanjc [+?] - overdoubled on 8ths zone, patterns are PR but a bit too repetitive for me

Cloud Control (Knoobish) [?] - seems a bit off(gap late?), tone down jumpstreams

Cloud Control (OMEGAspike) [+?] - streams are a bit too continuous, also tone down jumpstreams a bit

Club Beats (Garenzo) [-] - offbeat

Cool (verra) [?] - both song and steps are boring for me, easy song though

Cosmos (Sheckler) [-] - freezes

Crystal Monolith (Neonatrias) [+?] - tiny awkwardness on patterns (more PR patterns are better)

CY.5(TK_Breed) [?] - offsync at parts, jacks are slow but shouldn't be there

Delta Beat (0 Vector Mix) (Silvuh) [+?] - overdoubled

Demon(s) (KH Luxord) [-] - offsync (wrong BPM), totally weird steps

Devotion And Desire (DrugstoreCowboy & bluguerrilla) [+] (8)

Dimensions (SulferDragon) [+?] - doubles on vocal = better IMO, because rhythm part of this song is repetitive

Disconnected HaZarD (insomniac_platypus) [-] - a lot of misrhythms

Do A Barrel Roll (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10) - rhythms aren't very audible tho

Dont Call Me Peanut (DrugstoreCowboy) [?] - offsync at parts, it's not constant BPM

Dragonic Rage (Silvuh) [-] - music ends halfway, and steps are going with silence..

Dreamin' In The 80's (bluguerrilla) [+] (10) - could be less jacky tho

DS Boss (t-rogdor) [-] - offsync

Electro Rush X8 (unkdavar) [-] - overdoubled, no 260 BPM stream for FFR

Endless Altercation (smartdude1212) [+] (10)

Enigma(Sequal) [?] - patterns, jacks

Epidermis (Cyanite) [-] - why do you even try to make a V2 of this?

Excite Bike v2 (Mitchtyler) [-] - no dwi, and just no V2 for this

Experience (Sweet_Feet) [?] - blue on 4th, patterns could be better, if you use 24th long burst you shouldn't miss some other small bursts

Darkened Lights (tepsu) [-] - song is a bit boring, onehanded trill overuse, jacks

Fantasia (eastsideman09) [+] (8)

Fantasy Impromptu (Zeron) [?] - need better stream patterns

Fantasy Impromtu (i love you) [?] - stream patterns, doubles should be put on proper places.

Final Audition (omgitznpv) [?] - offsync, weird rhythms/patterns

Final Fantasy VII Fighting Mix (freakysnots) [?] - off at parts, 16th + 12th rhythms at beginning?

Flower Forever (Cyanite) [>] - m63-78, m93-94, m109-110, m125-126 should be different rhythms(understepped).

Flower Forever [eastsideman09] [+] (8)

Forsaken Neon (Darkstalker X) [+?] - 24th minijack, less 8th jacks at this speed, oterwise good

Fotbb v2 (Mitchtyler) [-] - offsync, understepped

Frictional Nevada (JX) [+] (12)

Futurescope.exe (omgitznpv) [+?] - felt repetitive at parts, double placement

Gameboy Rave! (ElectricWerewolf) [-] - multi difficulty

Gargoyle (eastsideman09) [+?] - off at parts(especially 8ths at second half), most small bursts should be the same rhythms, 32nds are closer IMO.

Geno's Forest - 8 Bit Rock (Coolboyrulez0) [-] - the music isn't enough different from/better than the one in the game IMO

Gerudo(MixMasterLar) [+?] - off notes at m29, less small spins, others are fine

Glove Stage - Ultra Sweden (ElectricWerewolf) [++] (10) - fun/great rhythms, perfectly done

Guitar Vs. Piano (Xandertrax) [+?] - steps are going on after the song ends, hopefully shorter music for this concept. nice full pitch relevancy tho

Happy Rainbow (bmah) [+?] - a bit understepped.. more 16th streams on some 8th section are better. not bad as it is though. 

Haven (Shadowlessheart) [-] - missing some rhythms, jacks/stream pattern, cut the music

Heart Attack (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - problem with the song, repetitive, stream patterns

Heart Attack (RB_IcePh0enix) [?] - problem with the song, stream pattern

Higasi (omgitznpv) [?] - double placement, patterns, 12th minijack?

High (Oni-Paranoia) [-] - wtf last quad, others are queueworthy (difficulty might be 6)

Highway Star (i love you) [+] (9) - BPM is just 150.000 I guess

HOT PEPPERZ (Sheckler) [?] - overdoubled, stream patterns

Huzzah!! (SulferDragon) [+?] - PR patterns are better on clarinet parts, some 32nds roll pattern?

Hybrid[eastsideman09] [+] (9) - at this BPM overall a bit too jacky tho

Hyper Hyper-Definitive Version- (eastsideman09) [+] (8)

I am maid (.dot) [+] (9) - isn't this already in the queue from you? awkward double placement at a few parts tho

Ice Disk (ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - good file but rhythm issues, m66-81 could be long streams, after m81 a bit repetitive/24ths don't fit the music

I'll Be Here For You (Shadowlessheart) [-] - jacks, patterns, rhythms, double placement

Infinity 301 (SulferDragon) [+] (9)

Intergalactic -Zenon Mix-(Scytlock) [-] - offsync

Introder (DnB Edition) - rshadow8888 [?] - gap early, song is a bit repetitive, rhythms/patterns(especially trills) could be better

Intruder Alert! (Scytlock) [+?] - felt jumpstream parts are a bit overstepped

L9 (jx) [+] (10)

Lapis -heavens remix- (Xiaounlimited) [+?] - overdoubled overall

lapis -the heavens mix- (robertsona) [?] - difficulty inconsistency, patterns could be better		

Lapis -The Heavens Remix- (bmah) [+] (10)

Life(TK_Breed) [+?] - felt 8th + mini-16th rhythms are repetitive, tone down 8th jacky patterns

LOLtechno (Garenzo) [-] - offsync

Look To The Future (Shadowlessheart) [?] - off at parts, many 16th jacks without good reason, most 24ths/32nds aren't needed

Love - (XPTRIPPYNESSXD) [?] - offsync, YNS, double placement

Love (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (5) - a bit long for this difficulty tho

Mad Girl (HK_Keith!) [?] - off at parts, continuous 8th streams, double placement

Makiba - cyrx900 [?] - repetitive song, and patterns don't flow well overall, especially jumpstreams and 24ths

Mario - Plumber's Underground (Poleaxe & Coolboyrulez0) [-] - notes are totally off

MegaScorcher (eastsideman09) [+] (9)

Model DDX (Sulferdragon and bmah) [?] - double placement (m2-17), 24ths at m21?, 24th patterns are bad plus they have a lot of pot 3-framers

Motteke Sailor Fuku!! (Lucky Star OP)  (damanwithdaskillz & MeaCulpa) [-] - no permission

Mr. Evil (SulferDragon) [?] - steps are going on after the music ends.. just for me? and it's better going with the vocal, extra voices more

Music(TK_Breed) [?] - ONS

Never Give Up (Goldenwind) [?] - song is boring IMO, a bit jacky patterns

Neverland (Eternity Mix) (Shadowlessheart) [?] - misrhythmed at parts, pattern/double placement coule be better, long for this difficulty 

Novo Mundo (Dj_Ossa) [+?] - 16th minijacks

OH EM GEE 2!!! (MrZombie and Macgravel) [-] - freezes, jacks

OH EM GEE 3!!! (MrZombie and Macgravel) [+] (8) - joke file lol

Orchestral Angels-(behanjc) [+?] - a bit repetitive/overdoubled at second half, song cut is better IMO

Otter's Dance (Hotroot Mix) (Silvuh) [+?] - weird 32nd rhythms/patterns at parts

Otter's Dance (Hotroot Mix) [Arcsynth] [+?] - minor misrhythms with the melody, need to step bursts correctly (mostly 32nds)

PARANOiA ~SiGMA~ [DXY] [?] - jacks, weird rhythms at parts

PMU Amadeus (i love you) [-] - no permission

Popcorn Remix LOL (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?] - understepped, and simple 4ths don't flow the music too well 

Procrastination on a Paper (omgitznpv) [?] - rhythms/patterns could be better

Psychopathy 101 (Silvuh) [+] (5) - weird music though

Read the Mind (SulferDragon) [+] (7)

ROAR (Rage Mix) (SulferDragon) [+] (9)

Rumia, Sealed Youkai of the Night (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (9) - ending should go with the piano instead of less audible hihats tho

Same Dream (ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - difficulty/rhythm are ok, but beginning/ending are repetitive

Saria's Song (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - offsync/misrhythm at parts

Sasoribi (Cyanite) [?] - m25-33, m75- should be streams, a lot of misrhythms (32nds in m38 are 24ths, 16ths in m41 are 12ths, at m50 pianos are 32nd double rolls... etc)

Scream of [roki] (roundbox) [+?] - fine but missing small burst rhythms, patterns could be more PR

Scythe of 13 (Xandertrax) [+?] - funny concept but fix 32nds(apparently overdone + 3 framers) and one-handed trills

Shind Bad (Silvuh) [>] - the one in the queue is better

Skeletones (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (10) - could have some 3-framers?

Sly (omgitznpv) [-] - no V2s for this

Smithy Showdown [SMRPG Remix] (Coolboyrulez0) [+?] - felt some notes are off, more PR patterns

Smitty's Downfall (DrugstoreCowboy) [?] - offsync at parts, 8th patterns are a bit repetitive

Stronger(JTPROG) [-] - freezes, 24ths don't make sense, etc

SuperMario3 - OverworldTheme2 (Ravenazin100) [+?] - overdoubled, rhythms are fine

Superstar (MeaCulpa) [+?] - ending jumpstreams are overdone, others are fine

Survive (bluguerrilla) [+] (9)

Sword Strike (Shadowlessheart) [?] - jacks, rhythms/double placement could be better

Terror (DAshoe93) [-] - jacks, could be better stream patterns, 8ths are overall repetitive, 

The Doomsday (Zeron) [+?] - missing some drum rhythms, rhythms at m32, others are good

The Euphoria-(behanjc) [+?] - fine but a bit boring, could be better rhythms/double placement

The Lunatic Princess-(behanjc) [+] (11) - a bit overdoubled in general but not bad placement.. good rhythms, non boring long file

The Phonograph Plays Part and Parcel (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+] (4)

Thinking Different v2 (Knoobish) [-] - a bit harder, but basically quite similar to V1. plus 16th jacks aren't recommended

Together As One (D.J. Cristo) [+?] - a bit overdoubled

Toono youkai zensen-(behanjc) [+?] - decent file but 24th small bursts are all spins.

Toph's OP (ElectricWerewolf) [++] (9) - success in going with the rhythm

Toph's OP Remix (ElectricWerewolf) [-] - multi difficulty

Tougenkyou_H.E.Remix (jx) [+] (10)

Tricky Disco (revolutionomega) [-] - multi difficulty

Truly, Truly This Is The End (D.J. Cristo) [?] - offsync at parts, missing some rhythms

Twin Chevron Remix (verra) [-] - offsync

twinklesky (bmah) [+?] - 12th jacks at 172 BPM(= pot 3-framers), pattern is PR tho. ok if they are manually fixable 

Vampire Killer (Neo-Thunder Mix) (DAshoe93) [?] - stream patterns, and I don't think this song has any 12th/24ths

Vanity Angel (bluguerrilla) [+?] - weird 32nd streams (first two)

Vanity Angel (omgitznpv) [?] - first 8ths, stream patterns could be better

Variations2 (jx) [+] (9) 

Variations 2 (ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - understepped, mine's better IMO

Vertex - revised (omgitznpv) [+] (8)

Vertex GAMMA (Silvuh) [?] - rhythms are fine, off/overdoubled at parts, steps are going on after the music ends? 

Vital Unity (2007 Remake for FFR) (Oni-Paranoia) [+?] - wtf last quad, others are fine

WAIWAI230 (bmah) [?] - guitars are 24th at m9, m11-13, m59-64 are understepped

WaveRip(remastered) (Silvuh) [+] (10) - a bit overdoubled tho

Way out of the dungeon (cyrx900) [?] - gap off, jacks, rhythms are fine

WOW WOW 220 (bmah) [+] (8) - a bit 8th jacky tho

Yager (RubiedCross) [-] - ONS, jacks

00.01 (SulferDragon) [+] (8) - nice patterns

101 kittens (flipsta_lombax) [>] - minijack, decent but sg's is better

101 Kittens (stargroup100) [++] (9) - pretty nice detailed rhythms, only framer issue would remain I guess

4 chord touhou (cetaka) [+?] - good rhythms, but try to avoid 24th trills and other 3 framer jacks

(Too Much) Bass (lol) - rshadow8888 [+] (7) - song is lol

[SHD]Eleventh Hour (i love you) [+?] - 12th jacks, some notes are off

{Flying Away} (Shadowlessheart) [?] - BPM should be doubled, beginning is off use BPM changes, jacky patterns are overused without good reason

{Lazy Summer Days} (Silvuh) [+?] - overdoubled at parts

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [+?] - many 12th jacks at 165 BPM, change the patterns, others are fine

**Tasselfoot** · 11-7-2007, 08:27 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[size=+3][b]11/07/07[/b][/size]

[size=+2][b]The Queue[/b][/size]
101 kittens - stargroup100 (again.  beat out bmah's)
Angel stays on this ground vocal - bmah
Comfort Betrays - EW - is this the song that I got for you from AILD?  if not, do we have permission?
Crystal Wind - EW
Delta Beat - Silvuh
dr0p - eastsideman
Endless Altercation - smartdude
Grandolin - Sulfer
Happy Rainbow - bmah (finally) - could have stream though, as jx said
Kamone 100% - Sulfer - so... many... 4-framers...
Lover Reef - Silvuh - agree w/ jx; not overdoubled?
Oasis - eastsideman - agree that it feels a bit long and repetitive
PianoXForte - scottish
Relic Expedition Inanotherstar - jx
Scythe of 13 - Xander
Shining Sky - Sulfer
Sicilian Sun - jx and scottish
Sword Strike - EW
SYNiC - eastsideman
The Entertainer - behanjc - to rebirth: ragtime, not classical...  and 0 4-framers buddy.
Toono youkai - behanjc
X-Tinction - Sulfer


[size=+1][b]Played By Tass, Not Queue'd[/b][/size]
Vanity Angel - what rebirth said
Tops OP Remix - seems ok...  but i can't hear it to be sure.
theme of the dragoon - agree w/ jx. 3-4 spots could use jumps
tell me a story - agree with jx. best so far.  hard song to step.
sting chameleon - agree with jx
rumia - replaced in the queue, was just a minor fix
Quickdraw - Silvuh - whole file feels overstepped
Otters Dance - what both said
Orchestral Angels - agree with rebirth. copypasta much in the 1st half?
Lazy dog funk - cut plz
ice disk - feel like a bad song choice. song is very repetitive. file seems overstepped throughout
hyperactivity - felt the notes going to background near beginning hard to hear vs main melody in rest of the file
hp song - what jx said
flying high - already in game for a widget
blue sky - either cut or make it get harder w/o overstepping
blue rose - fix up sync a bit.  technically accurate, fun, maybe 64th jumpstream a bit much?  remove 3 framers.
6 - what jx said.  if it was 180bpm, would be ok.
101 kittens - bmah - stargroup's is more fun.


[b][size=+2]Rebirth's Notes[/size][/b]
                     
101 Kittens (bmah): +
- Very nice

101 Kittens (stargroup100): +?
- bmah's is better

6: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once

[g-rain47 2 g-R]: ?
- what the hell kind of title is that?
- Didn't seem too good

.={A Warm Wind in Avalon}=.: +?
- I think you have a few notes off a whole beat in the beginning or something

Activity Unbroken v2: ?
- The song could use a v2, but I don't think it should be like this

Angel Stays On This Ground Vocal Remix: +

Balamb Style: -
- Change the downbeat to a red note then resubmit

Bizarre Beat!: ?
- oh god no. Song sucks

Blue Rose: +?
- Check the sync on some of those colored notes. I don't think those are all what you put them
- Change some of those and resubmit, because this is a very good file

Blue Sky: +

Comfort Betrays: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once

Core: +?

Crystal Wind: +

Delta Beat: +

Ding Dong Song: +?

Disconnected Hazard: +?

DMYK: +?
- A few parts couldv'e been better. Like the part near the beginning, where its just 4th jumps

Dr. Mario Remix: ?

dr0p: +

Dragonic Rage: ?
- Don't we already have this song in the game?

Electric Heart: +?
- Kinda good simfile, but its not quite up to what I'd want for this song. Some parts were weird

Elevated: ?
- Kinda boring simfile

Elixir: +?

Endless Altercation: +

Eternal Nightmare: +?

Excite Bike: -
- Isn't this the same chart tear made? >_>

Fantasy Impromptu: ?

Fight Through the Forest: +?

Fish on a Parachute: ?
- Needs a harder chart

flashflashrevolutioniscool: ?

Flying High: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once

Forsaken Neon: ?
- Mine is better

Going On Spring Wind: +?
- I love this song. Always have. And I'd like to see some more filler notes where you have a few 4ths or something

Grandolin: +
- I guess this is the best we're gonna get out of this song

Half Symphony v2: +?
- That little 32nd gallop near the beginning should be a 64th. Change and I accept

Happy Gang Bang!: +?
- man i love gang bangs this simfile must be cool then
- Actually it needs a few less 16ths. Its pretty nice but a few less 16th streams would make the file perfect, because some of the 16ths you placed aren't in the music, and felt like you put them there just to continue the streams

Happy Rainbow: +

Hit The Ground Running: ?
- Some notes felt offbeat, incorrectly placed
- Simfile wasn't very fun

Holy Orders (behanjc): +?
- Its a little overdone

Holy Orders (Neontarias): +?
- The minijacks in the beginning don't need to be there
- You started a nonstop stream from measure 15 to 19 (with one or two breaks), then the music repeated and you had some other pattern. Use the same pattern for that repeat
- I think this could be made more interesting. Have some things changed around and stuff

HP song: +
- I know there has to be a different title for this. Its a remix of Angel Eyes, so its probably "Angel Eyes Remix" or something

Hydrocity Zone Act 1: +?

Hyperactivity: +
- Change gap by 20. F11 once

Hypnosis: ?

I LOVE ****: ?
- HOLY **** REALLY? I DO TOO
- It'd be cool if it didn't repeat the same stuff 50 times

Ice Disk: +?
- What the hell was that jump every 3 16ths near the end? That's the only reason I'm rejecting it. Change those to some other rhythm and resubmit

Into the Night: +?
- We already have a simfile for Into the Night in the queue. Its a different song, so I'm not sure what to do about this. If we allow multiple songs with the same title, then I accept this sim

Kamone 100%: +
- It has some bpm problems. It goes offbeat near the end. (Tass: disregard the sync, and if you accept it, let me know. I'll fix the sync and send back to you)

Lawn Wake I: ?
- A bunch of weird offbeat stuff. Weird simfile. Wasn't very good

Lazy Dog Funk: +

Lively Days: ?
- Needs a better simfile

LOLOMGWTFLMAOROFLBBQ: -

Lover Reef: +
- After looking at this simfile, I finally completely understand silvuh's stepping style. Wow lol

Luna Marionette v2: ?

Luvin' You:
- 32nd trill at the beginning. 32nd trills at 160 bpm shouldn't be a problem really. 2 framers don't exist so this couldn't possibly have any

Mortal Kombat - At The Disco: +?

My World: ?
- You put gallops where there are triplets, 4 note 16th streams where there are triplets
- Simfile is just weird. Should be stepped differently

Netbattling Gospel: ?
- A bunch of offbeat notes

Nightfall: ?
- Overstepped. The song should be made into a very easy simfile

Oasis (Vote4Nixon): ?
- eastsideman's is better

Oasis (eastsideman09): +

One Winged Angel 8bit: ?
- Can be done a bit better. Whole simfile needs to be redone

Orchestral Angels: +?
- Patterns felt kinda crappy. Change some of the patterns around in the second half of the file then resubmit

Otter's Dance: +
- 32nds are a bit hard, but it seems ok

Outside the Skies: +

Piano Forte: +
- Man this song is awesome. Simfile is pretty good as well

popcorn: ?
- unknown artist? Figure out who the artist is
- meh simfile anyway

Pound My Senses to TB: ?
- Weird simfile. A lot of missing notes, a lot of offbeat notes

Quickdraw (Silvuh): +
- I guess its technically correct. A bit overdone but I can see how its layered, so ok

Quickdraw (Vote4Nixon): +?
- Silvuh's was more fun to play

Relic Expedition Inanotherstar: +

Rumia: +
- I'd like to see filler notes in the less active parts in measures 36 - 50 but it looks good overall

Scythe of 13: +?
- Macgravel's file for it is better (for my 3rd style project) I'll submit that for him so his will go in

Shattered Dreams: +?
- Just wasn't fun to play

Shind Bad: +?
- I still think my file for it is better. jx/tass should compare and decide for themselves over it

Shining Sky: +
- Change gap by 20. F12 once

Sicilian Sun: +
- You guys missed a yellow note in the middle of measure 36 lol

Sly v2:
- Too similar to the v1, not to mention 12th notes in this sim aren't correct

Sought Freedom: -
- 175 bpm 16th minijacks, 24th jacks, etc

Soul of the Ninja: ?
- Really really repetitive and meh

Star: ?
- Just didn't feel like a quality file for this song. Arrow placement is weird

Sting Chameleon!: +

Sword Strike: +

SYNiC (Archsynth): +?
- eastsideman's is better

SYNiC (eastsideman09): +
- Change gap by 20. F11 once. (Actually change it by 29, but you'd have to go into the notepad file and change it if you want to do it other than multiples of 20)

Tell Me A Story: +
- Out of all of the Tell Me A Story files I've seen over the months, this is the first one I've liked. Good job
- Could 3 framers at the end though. Maybe change those. Queue worthy anyway

The Beginning of Time: ?
- some offbeat notes
- Simfile wasn't fun to play

The Entertainer: +
- An enjoyable classical file. I like it
- Probably has over 300 4 framers

The Final Hour: ?
- Use better patterns
- Cut down on the streams if possible

The Frequency: ?
- Change gap by 20. F11 once
- Needs better patterns. The sim looks crappy because of the patterns it has now

The Pants of Eternal Darkness: +?
- I don't really think it needs that jumpstream in the beginning

Theme of the Dragoon Knights: +

Toono youkai zensen: +
- Borderline, but I'm gonna accept
- Is there an english title for this?

Toph's OP 2: +

Twilight Techno v2: ?
- Doesn't need a v2 really

UNtitled Gabber Song: +?
- You sure we have permission for this?
- More can be done with this song imo. Make it feel cooler to play

UNTITLED: ?
- Bad song to step
- Repetitive
- 200 bpm 12th double jacks in measure 38 too great

Vanity Angel: +?
- That 8th stream from measure 9 to 15 just made the sim feel dull. Do something other than a boring 8th stream there. 
- Once you fix that, this sim has my approval

Vertex GAMMA: +?
- I understand where half of the jumps go to, but I don't get where some other ones to go
- Some parts are still a little overstepped. 

Virtual Emotion: +?
- Change gap by 20. F12 once
- The jumps from measure 28 to the middle of 33 should all be single notes imo

Waverip: +?
- This sim has a lack of jumps where jumps are needed. I don't get that, since your sims always have plenty of jumps in them but this one doesn't. Add jumps to the accented notes

Waves of Opression: ?
- Has bpm problems
- Wasn't a very good simfile

X-Tinction: +

You Wanna Me: +?
- Has a few jacks near the end that shouldn't be there

James Bond Techno Remix: ?



[b][size=+2]JX's Notes[/size][/b]
(Ravia) Electric Heart [+?] - want proper song cut, PR pattern would be better at parts, some patterns are repetitive

[g-rain47 2 g-R] (omgitznpv) [?] - some stream patterns, jumpstreams at the end

_-={A Warm Wind in Avalon}=-_ (Kotarouchan) [?] - a bit gap off, 48ths aren't needed, double placement

{James Bond Techno} (francesco12) [?] - offsync at parts, also some rhythms are off.

101 kittens (bmah) [>] - at m11 burst should be 24ths, parts like m36-39, m51, m115 seem off

101 Kittens (stargroup100) [=] (9) - minor fix

6 [eastsideman09] [+?] - overuse of chains/8th jacks

Activity Unbroken (Cyanite) [?] - 16th trills in quiet places are a bit overdone, some 24ths aren't needed.

Angel stays on this ground -Vocal Remix- (bmah) [+] (8)

Balamb Style (MV_Kingslayer) [-] - offsync, YNS, BNS

Bizarre Beat! (customstuff) [?] - off at parts, missing some rhythms

Blue Rose (stargroup100) [+] (11) - felt some notes are a bit off, pot 3-framer, but ok

Blue Sky (i love you) [?] - rhythms could be better, should go with drums more, want songcut somehow maybe

Comfort Betrays (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (9)

Core (customstuff) [+?] - rhythms are weird for me

Crystal Wind (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10)

Delta Beat (0 Vector Mix) (Silvuh) [+] (8) - double placement in m64-74 is a bit weird but ok

Ding Dong Song (You Touch My Tralala) (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - blue note on 4th, should go with vocal more, also want notes on the man's voice rather than a blank

Disconnected Hazard [eastsideman09] [+?] - missing some rhythms, some 8th jacks aren't PR

DMYK (ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - m33-57 could go with the vocal more, others are fine

Dr. Mario Fever (megamon88) [+?] - ok but seems missing some fun rhythms, 8th jacks aren't recommended at this BPM

dr0p [eastsideman09] [+?] - m42-57 could go with melody synth with doubles for percussions, some patterns could be more PR (some of them are ok)

Dragonic Rage (Silvuh) [?] - double placement, could be more PR, honestly I'm getting sick of this series

Elevated (Vote4Nixon) [?] - jumpstreams are a bit overdone, sparse places are weird overall

Elixir (omgitznpv) [+?] - overdoubled at parts

Endless Altercation (smartdude1212) [+] (10)

Eternal Nightmare (cut) (ElectricWerewolf) [+?] - some 16th jumpy burst patterns are a bit jacky, doubles on vocal is better in some parts, IMO

Excite Bike (stargroup100) [-] - no

Fantasy Impromptu [eastsideman09] [+?] - felt some parts are understepped

Fight Through the Forest! (SulferDragon) [-] - withdrawal

Fish On a Parachute(who_cares973) [-] - understepped, boring

FL45HFL45HR3V0LU710N15C00L (omgitznpv) [+?] - weird song, double placement at parts

Flying High (cut) (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (9) - sync of the guitar part could be better but it's fine

Forsaken Neon(who_cares973) [?] - 3-framer 16th jacks/32nd streams, more doubles are needed

Going On Spring Wind (Electricwerewolf) [+?] - rhythms aren't wrong, but felt some sparse parts are quite understepped, and want more doubles. It should be mid-FMO at least.

Grandolin (SulferDragon) [+] (9)

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - patterns could be more PR, last 32nds could go with bass drums(12th doubles?)

Happy Gang Bang!-(behanjc) [+?] - a bit inconsistent double placement

Happy Rainbow (bmah) [+?] - felt a bit repetitive and difficulty inconsistency, you don't need to avoid streams so much, there IS a part that goes with it.

HitTheGroundRunning (HighBuddha) [?] - some notes are offsync, stream patterns

Holy Orders (behanjc) [+?] - 24th patterns, double placement could be better

Holy Orders (Neonatrias) [?] - minijacks, 24th trills at m82, double placement could be better

HP song(who_cares973) [?] - blue notes on 4th, missing some notes, patterns could be more PR

Hydrocity Zone Act 1 (Professor Raine) [?] - some notes are off (i.e. 16th should be 24ths, 48ths are off), missing some rhythms

Hyperactivity (stargroup100) [+?] - felt patterns are awkward (many spins, etc), felt doubles aren't needed on every 4ths

Hypnosis (customstuff) [?] - need proper double placement, patterns could be more PR

I LOVE ****[dore] [-] - lol 330 BPM long streams (and not fun sry), too long blanks

Ice Disk (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (9)

Into the Night (Silvuh) [?] - a bit gap off, weird 32nd patterns, overall song is repetitive

Kamone 100% (SulferDragon) [+] (10) - song is very repetitive, but ok

Lawn Wake I (HK_Keith!) [?] - not sure about permission, stream patterns are retarded, some notes are off

Lazy Dog Funk (Tibs) [+?] - funny concept, but this song has few variation in rhythms so needs a songcut

Lively Days ({Zero}) [-] - gap early, some rhythms are off, especially 24ths aren't put correctly

LOLOMGWTFLMAOROFLBBQ (omgitznpv) [?] - weird short song, offsync at parts, stream patterns, 3-framers

Lover Reef (Silvuh) [+] (8) - a bit weird double placement tho (YN ones, I know he put them on BDs)

LunaMarionette v2 (psycho) [?] - ok file, but not enough difference other than a bit easier difficulty

Luvin' You (i love you) [?] - 32nd trills/minijacks, rap section could be better rhythms

Mortal Kombat - At the Disco (freakysnots) [?] - some 32nds are off, rhythms/doubleplacement could be better

My World [DEMO] (Shadowlessheart) [?] - some notes are off, rhythms should go with the music more accurately

Netbattling Gospel (Battle Network 2) [Intensez] [-] - offsync

Nightfall (omgitznpv) [+?] - a bit difficulty inconsistency, 32nds on m24 could be more accurate

Oasis-Long-[eastsideman09] [+] (8) - maybe better ver, felt a bit long though

Oasis (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - gap off, didn't like some rolls

One Winged Angel 8bit (freakysnots) [?] - misrhythms at parts(some 16ths go with nothing, missing some 24ths), double placement

Orchestral Angels-(behanjc) [+] (8)

Otter's Dance (Hotroot Mix) (Silvuh) [+?] - 32nd rhythm/pattern

Outside the Skies-(behanjc) [+?] - want doubles on melody piano at m21-28, others are fine

Piano Forte(scottish) [++] (10) - nice debut

Popcorn Remix(EnR) [?] - minijacks, missing popcorn rhythms, jumpstreams are boring

Pound my senses to TB (Shadowlessheart) [?] - off at parts, weird rhythms (24ths/16ths that go with nothing)

Quickdraw (Silvuh) [+?] - felt a bit overdone at parts(32nd burst/doubles)/has pot 3-framer (damn 1337 thing), rhythms are overall ok though

Quickdraw (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - misrhythms(32nds should be before 4ths, and missing some 32nds), although patterns make sense more

Relic Expedition Inanotherstar (jx) [+] (9)

Rumia, Sealed Youkai of the Night (ElectricWerewolf) [=] (9) - minor fix

Scythe of 13 (Xandertrax) [+] (11) - kinda long 4 framer file but fun intense file, low-mid FMO

Shattered Dreams (omgitznpv) [?] - m21-24 are overdoubled, 32nds at m25 are misrhythmed, m34-41, m51-64 shouldn't be whole (jump) streams.

Shind Bad (Silvuh) [>] - queue'd one is better

Shining Sky (SulferDragon) [+] (10) - felt a bit understepped compared to what I've expected though

Sicilian Sun (JX&SC) [+] (9)

Sly (Xandertrax) [-] - withdrawal

Smash Podcast perhaps (Wyde) [-] - can't load

Sought Freedom (sticklydude) [-] - offsync at most parts, jacks

Soul of the Ninja (customstuff) [+?] - rhythms in m19-22 could be better, want more doubles on some vocals. difficulty is ok

Star(who_cares973) [+?] - gap early, rhythms in m19-21, m47-54 could be better

Starwolf (Genocide101) [-] - offsync at parts, ONS, stream pattern

Sting Chameleon! (SulferDragon) [+?] - ok but double placement could be better, more PR patterns at parts(for the guitar and base)

Sword Strike (ElectricWerewolf) [++] (9) - nice rhythm/d-placement

SYNiC (Arcsynth) [+?] - a bit awkward patterns, some rhythms could be better, blanks are too long, want 32nds m16, m52, m88 as well

SYNiC [eastsideman09] [+] (8) - felt a bit understepped, but fine for this difficulty

Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (Ataraxiate) [+?] - potential 3-framers, 32nd spins, blank at m26-27, and felt bursts and doubles are a bit inconsistent.

The Beggining of Time (sticklydude) [?] - off at parts (esp. yellow/purple ones), weird double placement

The Entertainer-(behanjc) [+] (8)

The Final Hour(who_cares973) [?] - stream patterns

The Frequency(who_cares973) [?] - gap early, m17 is off, missing 1 note on 32nds in m52, overall rhythms/patterns could be better

The Lunatic Princess-(behanjc) [-] - no file

The Pants Of Eternal Darkness(who_cares973) [+?] - a bit repetitive and inconsistent in difficulty, missing the last note

Theme of the Dragoon Knights (SulferDragon) [+?] - want more doubles

Toono youkai zensen-(behanjc) [+?] - doubles on melody at m28-44 would be better, others are fine

Toph's OP Remix (ElectricWerewolf) [?] - rhythms seem to be correct but I didn't enjoy it due to the kinda unclear song

Twilight Techno (whocares973) [-] - no need for easier V2

UGS (psycho) [+?] - understepped at some parts, other parts are alright

UNTITLED - cyrx900 [?] - 12th jacks, overdone at parts, stream pattern, bursts are inconsistent

Vanity Angel (bluguerrilla) [+] (8)

Vertex GAMMA (Silvuh) [+?] - overdoubled at parts, want less jacky 24th/32nd patterns

Virtual Emotion - Starfalcon176 [+?] - not bad but wanted more rhythms in addition to the main melody

WaveRip(remastered) (Silvuh) [+?] - weird stream, going for so PR? and felt the first half has almost no doubles, should be more

Waves of Opression [augustburnsba55ist] [-] - off, totally steps don't go well with the music

X-Tinction (SulferDragon) [++] (10) - fun file, good rhythms/d-placement, high-VC or low-FMO

You Wanna Me (i love you) [?] - no permission? minijack, some rhythms could be better

**Tasselfoot** · 12-20-2007, 01:51 AM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+7]12/20/07[/size][/b]

[b][size=+3]THE QUEUE[/size][/b]
AM-3P - Wyde - maybe more syncopated ending
Battle Theme #36 - SulferDragon
brain dot wave - jimerax
Brainwave - behanjc - up to you about m37...  if you want to fix, i'll replace updated with current
Bricks - bluguerrilla
Butterflies - behanjc - overdoubled...
Disconnected Hardkore - dore
DMYK - EW - perhaps cut the song/file?
Far Away From Home - SulferDragon - long 24th minirolls seem out of place in difficulty
Get Um Up - bluguerrilla - played this a few months ago, was good then, didn't replay
Melted Marble - SulferDragon - what game is this from? overdoubled in places throughout
My Beautiful Rescue - Silvuh - played months ago, was fine then, didn't replay
Orchestral Angels - behanjc - maybe cut?
Otter's Dance - Silvuh - what jx said...  6 4-framers in 32nds also
Outside the Skies - behanjc
Overdrive - EW
Pimp Slap - dore - what jx said
Pwntendo - EW - cut could be better
seagull - bmah - ending might be a bit hard compared to rest of file
seed - EI_Tizzy
Ska Cha Cha - Silvuh - pretty repetitive
Square, Volume, Amplitude - robertsona
Szerencsetlen - ~Zero~ - no 3framers in song.  maybe cut though?
The Final Conflict - RE
The Lunatic Princess - behanjc
The Sock is Down at the Dock - EW
Theme of the Dragoon Knights - SulferDragon - Tass is getting sick of DarkeSword.
Tokyo Banging - robertsona
Toph's OP Remix - EW - still do not like the idea of both original and remix...  so similar
UMA - EW
Vanishing Gungaroon - SulferDragon
Wish Reprise - HammyMcSquirrell - still dont' like the idea of 3 Wishes being in game.  Also seems pretty similar in stepping style to the original.


[b][size=+2]Songs Tass Played But Didn't Queue[/size][/b]
Highway Star - DNP, resubmitted for next batch
Fly Away - what jx said.  cut.
Game Boy Fiend - what jx said.  MAMA meets {Firestorm}
Hardkore Atomic - what jx said
Into the Night - agree with jx.  cut.
Jingle Bells - agreed with jx.  few 8th sections in beginning should be jacks.
Purity Control - what jx said.
Quickdraw - what jx said.  cut.
Re-Rave - repetitive, overdoubled.  cut.
Sirius - behanjc - fix sync, and...  i feel it's overlayered to music that doesn't merit such steps in many of the 16th jump sections.
tete-a-tete - fix noteskin
The concept of Love - if jx questions this permission, i do too.
WaveRip - good file...  patterns odd.


[b][size=+2]JX's Notes[/size][/b]
(Alioth) Disappear -Shortened- [?] - minijacks, some 24ths should be 32nds, songcut is preferable, others are fine

(i love you) Highway Star [+] (9) - double placement could be more consistent, but ok

[techlo] (Nightfirecat) [-] - gap/BPM wrong, steps could be less boring overall

{Big Boss} (EI_Tizzy) [+?] - 12th jacks could be avoided more (not 3 framers tho), rhythms are fine

{Big Boss} (trumaestro) [+?] - missing some notes on drums, double placement could be more consistent

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - under-doubled at parts

{Big Boss} (Wyde) [+?] - rhythms are the most accurate in those 4 files, felt pattern is a bit awkward at parts though.

101 kittens (flipsta_lombax) [>] - not bad, but queue'd one is better

a time forgotten (who_cares973) [+?] - pianos on m37-40 should be stepped

A_Step_in_the_Wrong_Direction_(Nu0n_albaneenesk8r) [?] - offsync, double placement, weird termination

AM-3P (Sanxion7 'House Party' Dub) (Wyde) [Resubmit] [+] (8)

Ancient's Death v2 (Nightfirecat) [?] - IMO this song is 16ths based, not 12/24ths, double placement

Are You Happy (smartdude1212) [+?] - misrhythm in m4, m9, m17.... all similar places. also, wrong rhythm of 16th on m81, m84..

Battle Theme #36 (SulferDragon) [+] (8) - fine but m44-47 could be other rhythms tho

Beautiful Synergy(HK_Keith!) [+?] - missing rhythms that should be stepped overall (especially 24th section)

Boss Battle #1 (SulferDragon) [+?] - doubles could go with streams on middle 8ths

brain dot wave (jx) [+] (10)

Brainwave-(behanjc) [+] (9) - overdoubled at m37 tho

Bricks (bluguerrilla) [+] (8) - a bit many 8th jacks but ok since it's under 180 bpm

Butterflies Short Edit-(behanjc) [+] (8)

Card House Dreamer (Silvuh) [+?] - m12 should be 24th, some doubles don't fit the vocal

Chicken Dance NOISE MIX (EI_Tizzy) [+?] - missing 16th at m24, m48 should be streams, weird speed down at m66, last arrow isn't needed

Chocolate Magic-(behanjc) [+?] - m2 is 32nds (but it's ok), beginning of piano burst at m18/m54/m70 is wrong(32nd is ok for ffr), overall felt rhythms are a bit weird.

Clocks Rave Remix (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - gap early, 8th patterns should be PR, misrhythm on m50

Cold Storm (omgitznpv) [+?] - a bit gap late, m33-36, m40, m73-76, m80 could go with piano IMO, a bit weird stream patterns

Corneria (Zageron) [?] - too early gap, difficulty inconsistency(especially beginning), weird termination

Cosmo Canyon (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - felt layering is a bit weird. also yellow notes/green notes should be red/blue

Daydream Tuesday(scottish) [+?] - some 32nd bursts/splits should be faster, misrhythms at m18, m34, m38, m58, m74, m85, m98, m107, beginning of 32nd roll should be red/blue arrows. 

DeadAlus (~Zero~) [+?] - fun but at m11-26 doubles on guitars are better, m28-29 need 16ths, rhythms in m39-40 are weird, end of m43 is 12th, 
in m72 some 12/24ths are 16ths, m116 is offsync (partially late), also it's better if patterns are more PR overall. 

Deadfall--_-- (omgitznpv) [+?] - not enough good reason for jumpstreams (especially 2nd one), termination should be m68

Delta Beat (dandandamdandan1111) [?] - rhythm/double placement could be better overall

Disconnected Hardkore [dore] [++] (11) - nice 3-framer avoidance/BPM change for FMO, overall 4-framer inducing patterns are kinda ugly though

DMYK (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10)

Dr1010 - Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - 24ths aren't needed for this song IMO(they aren't dominant at all), overdoubled at parts

Dr1010 - FIII (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - rhythms could be better, overdoubled

dr. mario- fever gameboy rmx(blindreper1179) [+?] - pattern could be more PR, missing some sounds

Dying Beauty (Album Version)(MV_Kingslayer) [-] - offsync, BNS/YNS

Eradication (ElectricWerewolf & Bluguerrilla) [+?] - some 24ths could be 16ths in m4, want a note on first voice in m28, some 24ths/16ths could be 12ths in m34/38, JS at the beginning/ending and 16th drum + 12th guitar things are a bit overdone but ok.

Eternal Nocturne (stargroup100) [?] - m50- and m160- 24ths should be just 16ths, 24ths are 32nds in m83 and m195, 24ths are 16ths in m155, m194, and song is way too repetitive for being 5 min file IMO

Far Away From Home (SulferDragon) [+] (9)

FAREAST HARDSTYLERZ - cyrx900 [?] - overstepped, offsync/rhythms aren't correct at parts

Fascination -eternal love- (Vocal Cut) (robertsona) [-] - no need for 9sec file, plus missing some rhythms

Fascination ~Obsession Mix~ (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - stream patterns, 64th and 16ths at m32, 24ths at m56, 16ths are 12ths after m81.

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [?] - offsync after m50, missing note in m43, and also some other misrhythms. no need for 24ths for pianos. other than piano, 16ths should be put for hihats.

Fly Away (Knoobish) [+] (10) - doubles are a bit inconsistent/random though

Fly to the Sky (omgitznpv) [?] - offsync overall, green/orange notes aren't needed

Gabba No Chinko Katta(TK_Breed) [+?] - 2nd long trills/jumpstreams want pattern change

Galaxy - Ben Speirs [+?] - pattern should be PR, after m41 missing some dominant sounds

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+] (9) - 3 arrow stream and some doubleplacement are meh tho

Gerudo(MixMasterLar) [?] - need to step other instruments besides the melody

Get Um Up (bluguerrilla) [+] (7) - in some 4th section synths/drums could be stepped tho

Going On Spring Wind (~Zero~) [+?] - blue note on 4th, in patterns appear in m3/m11,m15,etc, 24th streams are better than 12th doubles. 

Going On Spring Wind (Electricwerewolf) [+?] - some snares/toms could be stepped (esp around m22) along with the flute. back piano/strings could be stepped (m42-, m76-)

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - some 16th jack patterns don't match the music, also 32nd/64th at m22?

Happy(i love you) [-]

Hardkore Atomic [dore] [+] (10) - overdoubled at parts tho

Heads Up for Tails (dean_machine) [?] - understepped for a 3+ min song. 16ths are weird at m51-66.

Hellscaper -TOUKKANKOUJI Mix- (Coolboyrulez0) [-] - totally offsync (BPM error), a lot of misrhythms

In Dream{EnR} [+?] - gap late, miss rhythms in m14-15

Insomnia_(FFR_Exclusive_Remix)(Genocide101) [?] - beginning 24ths don't match the music well, 16th jacks

Into the Night (Silvuh) [+] (9) - felt double placement is random at parts tho

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - want notes on voice sound, double placement

ISU (Genocide101) [-] - yellow notes on 4th, jacks, use BPM changes

Jingle Bells [Hardcore Remix] (rshadow8888) [+] (8) - rhythms could be better tho

Jingle Bells(i love you) [-]

leeroy jenkins fun times mix (Coolgamer) [+?] - patterns could be more PR, felt missing some dominant 16th rhythms

LOL ****!!1 (omgitznpv) [-] - I hate super short files

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - patterns around m49/m98(12th jack), want notes on melody(m49-65, 98-114)

Loopy 250(sk8mastr) [-] - no comment

Lunatic Eyes (~Zero~) [+?] - offsync at parts a bit, misrhythmed 32nds at m44, missing some piano splits

Makiba - cyrx900 [?] - offsync, double placement could be better, repetitive 

Megaman 4 Battle Theme (Mitchtyler) [-] - wtf offsync, total coloring error

Melted Marble (SulferDragon) [+] (9)

Midnight of the North (Plutonious) [+?] - minijacks, sync/coloring is ok maybe

My Beautiful Rescue (Silvuh) [+] (7)

New Rave (Silvuh) [+?] - not bad, but a bit overdoubled in general

nightfall [intensez] [?] - offsync, misrhythm at bell parts, m24 is 32nds

NovaMAX - Ben Speirs [+?] - m26-29 should be stepped

Oasis (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - a bit gap late, m28-29 should be 16th based (not 12th), m93-96 could go with the drums better

Oblique Breaks (Silvuh) [?] - offsync at some parts, misrhythm on some 32nds, doubles in 32nds are overdone

Orchestral Angels-(behanjc) [+] (8)

OTH Project (DarkbearX) [?] - gap early, m9/m13/m17/m110/m127... are 32nds, overall steps are going with things that's not very audible.

Otter's Dance (Hotroot Mix) (Silvuh) [+] (9) - m54 is 24th

Outside the Skies-(behanjc) [+] (7) - m2 is basically 48th

Overdrive! (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

PAL,36 (flipsta_lombax & trumaestro) [?] - gap early, off at parts (beginning voice, m21-22, guitar parts, etc). overall not bad concept though.

piano_forte (robertsona) [?] - most rhythms aren't wrong maybe(a few misrhythms tho), but lacks a lot of detailed piano rhythms

Pimp Slap [dore] [+] (11) - 48 rolls are a bit off

Popcorn Remix LOL (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?] - gap late, 12ths should be 16ths

Power - Ben Speirs [+?] - gap early, rhythms could be better (m25-44)

Procrastination on a Paper (omgitznpv) [?] - missing notes of the last piano sound, some 24ths are wrong, many spins, 24ths on m56?

Procrastination on Paper (Silvuh) [+?] - some 16th stream patterns are awkward, m73 should be streams(runningmen)

Pure Energy - Starfalcon176 [+?] - rhythms could be better, offsync a bit on vocal part

Purity Control (Silvuh) [+] (9) - unique file, repetitive/over doubled though

Pwntendo (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10) - didn't like songcut and could add more bursts, but ok

Quickdraw (Silvuh) [+] (9) - doubles are a bit inconsistent but overall ok

Quickdraw (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - splits are inconsistent (beginning ones don't have splits)

Quickdraw-(behanjc) [+?] - 24th splits should be 32nds, 24th rolls in m30ish aren't needed (not very audible)

RE-RAVE (omgitznpv) [+] (8) - could be less repetitive but ok

Revenge of the Nothing (Sequal) [?] - gap early, avoid unnecesarry 8th jacks/48th split, patterns could be PR

Rock Armor (SulferDragon) [+?] - BPM should be half, m52-56, m116-120 coulf be more PR. melody is so unclear..

Saria's Song (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - gap early, misrhythm at m9, 18, 27, 36, a bit understepped, patterns could be PR

seagull (bmah) [+] (7)

seed (EI_Tizzy) [+] (6)

Shind Bad (Silvuh) [>] - still queue'd one's better

Sirius-(behanjc) [+] (10) - a bit off at m3, m26, the rest is quite nice rhythms

Ska Cha Cha (Silvuh) [+] (9)

Sky Blue (omgitznpv) [+?] - JS on m49 is a bit overdone, less staircases for stream, song is a bit repetitive for 4 min

Sleezy Sunday {TMA Mix} (Kekeb) [?] - rhythms aren't wrong but boring layering(need to step some fun rhythm parts), patterns could be PR

Solace (Speedcore Mix) (robertsona) [+?] - trills don't match the music well, long blank at m46 is.. quite annoying.

Sonata quasi una Fantasia (Xandertrax) [?] - wow we have this song... but quite offsync(especially around m25, after m34), avoid 12th jack(m30, 32, 88), m36, 94 would be ok by classic rule but reallllly annoying on FFR.

Spaceful Nights (omgitznpv) [?] - gap late, stream patterns, double placement could be better, song is a bit repetitive/long

Speeding Demon - cyrx900 [?] - gap is completely late, rhythms/patterns on stream, guitars should be stepped correctly. double placement. 12ths are fine

Splash Beats (iCO Sunrise Mix) Ben Speirs [+?] - m29- 43 could be more PR

Spoonography 2 (Sequal) [?] - all 24ths should be 32nds, double placement could be better, want songcut

Square, Volume and Amplitude (robertsona) [+] (7)

StringMachine(CorelPrisonMix) (Genocide101) [-] - YNS/off after m45, gap early, want songcut, 24ths are basically 32nds

Swallowing An Avalanche -New Mix- (~Zero~) [+?] - file is good but way too many meaningless pot 3-framers, change 32nd patterns

Szerencsetlen (~Zero~) [+] (10) - would have some pot 3-framer on song 32nd-16th patterns (like m88)

Take_Me_Back_(e^2_Remix) [?] - misrhythms on m20, m28, m36, m52, m68 (no 24ths), too long blank(m77-82), more PR patterns, pot 3-framers, last arrow isn't needed

Tension--_-- (omgitznpv) [?] - weird double placement at parts, missing some note m25-32 and m41-56, m33-40 could go with rhythms part

tete-a-tete (stargroup100) [+] (8) - rhythms in m26, m30-31 should be more accurate tho. those note coloring is allowed on only 1 file for FFR maybe.

The Beginning of Time (UberCreep361) [?] - double placement could be better(overdoubled at parts), streams are where they shouldn't be

The Beginning of Time-(behanjc) [+?] - a bit weird double placement at parts

The Concept of Love (Professor Raine) [+] (7) - permission? steps/song aren't bad, but sougcut would be better

the Dream Duel (Knoobish) [?] - apparently overdoubled, misrhythm at snare part with doubles, termination is weird

The Final Conflict (ElectricWerewolf) [++] (10) - technical file as hell, impressed

The Great Giana Sisters {dore and eastsideman09} [+?] - 18ths are off(too fast) at m100-, weird rhythms in m116-117?

The Lunatic Princess-(behanjc) [+] (11)

The Siege (Sequal) [?] - stream patterns, missing notes at parts

The Sock is Down at the Dock (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Theme of the Dragoon Knights (SulferDragon) [+] (6)

This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (Coolgamer) [+?] - double placement is a bit random, missing the rhythm of voices at parts

Tokyo Banging (robertsona) [+] (7)

Toph's OP Remix (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (10) - audible

Tricky Disco (revolutionomega) [+?] - 32nds on m16-17 aren't needed IMO, missing a note on m58, 16ths on m67-69 are a bit weird

U.M.A (ElectricWerewolf) [+] (8)

Unbittersweet (xObserveRx) [?] - beginning is off, use BPM change, m25-27, m29-36 are understepped, m56-m60 are a bit overdoubled at parts

Vanishing Gungaroon (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Violet Leaves (SulferDragon) [+?] - felt missing some notes for drums (conga or bongo), basically going for them?

WaveRip(remastered) (Silvuh) [+] (9) - didn't like patterns tho

Way out of the dungeon - cyrx900 [?] - misrhythms on m24-27 (esp. 24ths), rhythms/double placement (m22-23, m39-44)

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+] (9)

Zelda TP Hyrulian Trance (megamon88) [?] - long one-hand trills, rhythms could be better overall

**Tasselfoot** · 02-3-2008, 11:41 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]2/03/08[/size][/b]

[b][size=+2]The Queue[/size][/b]
101 kittens - bmah & stargroup
Agenda X - bluguerrilla
Black Wind Metamorphosis - behanjc
Blue Rose - stargroup
Border of Maximum - rebirth
Death Piano - stargroup - omg i failed this so hardcore
Dokodemo Kawaii - eastsideman
Fruity Sweety - behanjc - wee bit overdoubled
Gacha Figumate - jx
Gacha Figuradio - jx
Garyo - behanjc
Haruka - behanjc - i guess...  very repetitive.  gets boring.  glad you cut, at least.
Here's to Life - kailure, dsc, and blu - have rebirth touch up sync
I'm Just a DJ - starfalcon - bit generic, but ok
Ketsarku Mozgalom - jx
Lawn Wake I - rebirth
Mario Minor - behanjc - rebirth tweak sync
Pure in Asia - behanjc
Quickdraw - V4N - i like the patterns better in this one than in Silvuh's.
R8U - behanjc - i do agree with jx though...
ReRicked - sulferdragon
Rise Up - sulferdragon - maybe cut around 1300?
Tell Me A Story - Ataraxiate
Casket of Star - behanjc
The Rhythm of Life - sulferdragon - cut?
Vanity Angel - blu
Virtual Emotion - starfalcon
Waiwai230 - bmah and rebirth
Washamanoose's OP - jx


[b][size=+1]Played by Tass but not queue'd[/size][/b]
big boss - v4n - good... add more jumps.  don't go overboard.
lazy summer days - xander - one mega 24th pattern out of place.  overdoubled compared to music.
bleck - generic.  repetitive.  not that fun. technically ok.
boss battle #3 - ending is more awkward than rest of the 8th jacks
bouff - overdoubled, but repetitive.  maybe cut @ 1100 or 1250?
chill penguin - try layering it...  see how it works.  bit bland as is.
church bells - jumpstream overstepped
coldstorm - what jx said.  plus at end of large jumpstream, music changes...  notes should too
cookies and cream - think we have enough skitzo raccoon for now, really.  technically ok, song is just blah.
dreamin in the 80s - what both said
fantasy impromptu - no real comments...  just ehh.  i'm thinking it's the piece, not the steps.  i gave rebirth the actual classical piece...  maybe that would be better to step?
forsaken neon 2 - would like to see harder, i think, with no framers anymore
game boy fiend - what jx said
game over - no
get ready - agree with both
happy rainbow - similar to queue'd file, but not better
hero in a dream - what they said.  cut?
keep in mind - sync.
lunatic moon - agree with jx
oasis - what both said
psi2 - what jx said
quickdraw - silvuh - see above


[b][size=+2]Rebirth[/size][/b]                      
101 Kittens: +
- I need to fix a few sync errors in the colored notes before this gets released

6: +?
- Jumps where there shouldn't be jumps, no jumps where there should be sometimes
- Overstepped in parts

7 Second Epic: ?
- pitch relevancy is a big thing when the sim is so short

A Night To Remember: ?

Agenda X: +.
- Change gap by 20. F11 once

Alpha Helix v2: -
- Yellow notechart? Change it to the correct colors. Red arrows should be the downbeat

Behind These Hazel Eyes:  ?

Black Wing Metamorphosis: +?.
- I see 2 pink notes in the beginning that shouldn't be there. Some more around measure 30 too
- Double check for syncing
- Pretty fun otherwise

Bleck: +?

Blue Blast: ?
- Very offbeat

Blue Rose: +
- very nice how much
- Maybe some very minor sync issues on some notes. I'll fix maybe before release

Border of Maximum: +
- my simfile
- Need to fix a few things before release though

Boss Battle #3: +
- I think I see why there are so many 8th minijack things. So that makes this file good and accepted

Bouff: +.
- Need to check those random colored notes at aroud measure 125

Breaking the Ice: +?

Bundy:
- I think this is a new chart for a widget sim, so I'll skip this

Celcius: +?

Chaotic CENTURY: +?
- Good simfile but there are some missing notes and jumps

Charge!!!: +?

Chill Penguin: +?
- Watch your layering in this sim because it could be an awesome layered sim
- Missing some yellow notes near the beginning

Church Bells: +
- hi jumpstream, but this is pretty fun
- Those 12th jacks might be a problem though. Don't care, because this sim is good

Cloud Control: +?
- Seems too freeform when this song could have a simfile with great pitch relevancy

Cold Storm: +

Composer: -
- Terribly offbeat

Cookies and Cream: +
- Kinda boring song that isn't too well suited for stepping, but all the notes are pretty much correct so ok I'll accept

Crystalized Trance: ?

Death Piano: +
- YES YES YES YES YES
- Might have to change a few notes around but holy **** this was fun even though one of the hardest files that I've judged for this game

Disregard: ?
- I highly doubt we have Berserker permission
- Simfile isn't too great anyway

Dokodemo Kawaii: +
- Nice enjoyable file

dr0p: +?

Dreamin' In The 80s: +?
- Shouldn't you add a jump to that slap noise?
- Missing a couple notes in the very beginning

Elements of a Party: +?

Evacuation: ?
- That green jump in the beginning doesn't need to be there
- Extremely boring file

EVERGREEN: +?
- Could use some filler notes in the easy jump parts

Fantasy Impromptu: +
- I don't like the fact that its almost all stream but its all pretty much correct

Felys: +?

Fight With Seymour: ?

Final Fall: ?

Forsaken Neon v2: +?

Fruity Sweetie: +
- I love how this thing turned out. Maybe a few things I'd change but its really nice

Gacha Gacha Cute Figu@Mate: +
- I think its supposed to be called just Figu@Mate but I don't know.
- I thought it'd be pretty hard to come up with steps for these songs, but these charts are pretty nice. 

Gacha Gacha Cute Figu@Radio: +
- CHange gap by 20. F12 once

Game Boy Fiend: +

Game Over: +
- lol my simfile

Garyo: +
- Cool song

Gene Gadget Zone: +?

Geno's Forest F-Zero: +?

Genophobia: +
- lol my simfile

Get Ready: +
- Just a boring song/sim =/

Half Symphony v2: +?
- Seems like the difficulty is too much like the v1. I don't know

Halloweenies: ?
- Boring

Happy Rainbow: +?

Hardkore Atomic: +?
- Probably can't have those 12th jacks in there

Haruka: +
- Weird sim. Looks correct though

Here's to Life: +
- A three person collaboration? haha
- Just a few sync things I need to fix for you guys, but I'm accepting this.

Hero in a Dream: +
- I might need to fix the sync during the big 12th streams part

Hutsu: +?
- The song is called Huutsu no Uta

Hydrocity Zone Act 1: ?

HyperSpeed: -
- Make the thing onbeat and have the red note the downbeat...

I'm A Maid: +?

I'm Just a DJ: +?

Infectiouz: +?

Keep in Mind: +
- I might have to fix some sync errors in the end but its a really good file overall

Ketsarku Mozgalom: +
- I wish people would stop stepping VSnares >_>

Last!Least!Regrets!!: +?

Lawn Wake I: +
- lol my simfile

lolhappy: +?

Lunatic Moon: +

Mario Minor: +

Marisa Stole the Precious Thing: +?
- One of my favorite touhou related songs so I'm judging this hard. Pretty good file but not extremely high quality, which is what I want for this song
- It looks like you took a few parts from the Zagh sim anyway

Oasis: +
- I'll fix those 12th things. They aren't 12ths

One: -
- Has 2 charts, both with freezes. Auto reject

POWER: +?
- Could make for a good easy song. I think some of those jumps should be taken out to do so

Procrastination on Paper: -
- uh... has two charts

Psi^2: +

Pulsaris: ?

Pure in Asia: +
- Awesome sim. I love the song and was waiting for a dbu version simfile for it
- Aw it has some sync errors in the second half or something. I'll fix those

Quickdraw (Silvuh): +

Quickdraw (Vote4Nixon): +?
- Silvuh's was better

Quiet: ?
- Extremely boring song and everything

Quiet Speedy Tranquil Mix: +?

R8U: +
- <3

Reality: +?
- Again, I don't think we have Berserker permission... (Tass and JX, let me know if I'm wrong here)

ReRicked: +
- rofl yes

Rise Up: +

Robotnik Theme (daikenkaifreak): +?

Robotnik Theme (Grim5768): -
- Sim has multiple charts and charts with freezes in them

Rottel-da-Station v2: ?
- Don't really need a v2. And if we did, this is too close of a difficulty to the original

Secret Zombie Room v2: ?
- no

SF-R: +?
- Not sure about the 32nd streams
- Couple parts that couldv'e been done better

Silence: ?

Skirmish in the Sand: ?

Snowstorm: ?
- Those aren't 24th gallops

Space Wave Akiba Pop: ?

Strawberry Magic: +?

Strip Mine: +?

Suite Dreams: +?
- Pretty interesting to have the band step their own song for FFR. The simfile is bad though =/ so I don't know (oh and it has freezes rofl)

Tell Me a Story (Ataraxiate): +?

Tell Me a Story (DJ Cristo): +?

the Casket of Star: +?
- Its just called Casket of Star
- Those 32nd gallops start on the red note. Not the 32nd before it
- Whats with those 425 bpm parts?

The Euphoria: +?

The Moving: ?

The Rhythm of Life: +
- I pity the players for playing a 3 minute song with under 500 notes

The Terror of Death: 
- sup .hack
- Incredibly offbeat wtf

TILL: -
- Multiple charts with freezes

Time: ?

Together As One: +?

Under Your Bed: ?

Vanity Angel: +

Virtual Emotion: +

WAIWAI230: +

Washamanoose's OP (cyrx900): ?

Washamanoose's OP (jimerax): +

Wave Rip: +?

whisKers: ?

Xxxperiment: +?

{Big Boss}: +?
- Missing some jumps

{Lazy Summer Days}: +?

{The Traveller}: +?

Under Fire: +?

Highway Star: +?

Hydrocity Zone Act 1: +?

Lawn Wake I (t-rogdor): -
- Terrible


[b][size=+2]JX[/size][/b]
(dood gone krazee) Under Fire [+?] - gap early (30), in m13-16 doubles should go with drums

(i love you) Highway Star [+?] - doubles are inconsistent (missing some), in sections like m25-32 I felt triplets randomly appear

(Professor Raine) Hydrocity Zone Act 1 [+.] (7) - it would be better if more 48ths are used

(t-rogdor) Lawn Wake I (Lawn Funeral Edit) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+] (8) - nice PR

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [+] (8) - gap late (30), in patterns like m112 24ths should be 16ths 

{The Traveller} (flipsta_lombax) [?] - offsync at parts, overdoubled, could be more PR

6 (operationstrawberry) [?] - gap early (30), apparently overdoubled, 24ths are mis-rhythmd

7 second epic (robertsona) [-] - k

101 Kittens (stargroup100 + bmah) [=] (9) - updated file, ++ worthy as well

A Night To Remember (cyrx900) [?] - gap late (30), green note on m27?, JS is overdone compared to other parts, felt a bit long

Agenda X (bluguerrilla) [+] (8) - gap early (20), m18-21 could be more accurate

Alpha Helix v2 (omegalpha789) [-] - YNS, offsync

Behind These Hazel Eyes (dj-N Remix) (TK_pavonineukon) [+.] (5) - could be more PR tho

Black Wing Metamorphosis (behanjc) [+] (9)

Bleck (megamon88) [+] (8) - missing a note on m16

Blue blast (Alfarjamie) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

Blue Rose (stargroup100) [+] (11) - 12th jack on m27/116/120/233, missing 24th on m129

Border of Maximum (Rebirth) [+] (10) - lol rfpack

Boss Battle #3 (SulferDragon) [+?] - gap early (30), 8th jack is overused (even though some of them are going with the pitch)

Bouff (D.J. Cristo) [+?] - felt a bit off, a bit inconsistent double placement, 8th jacks could be reduced

Breaking The Ice (Genocide101) [?] - gap late (20), all 24ths are weird, missing note on m58, patterns could be more PR

Bundy (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+.] (7) - a bit off at parts (beginning tends to be late), a bit long

Celcius (unkdavar) [?] - gap early (30), understepped at parts, patterns could be more PR

Chaotic CENTURY [Arcsynth] [+?] - felt missing drum rhythms at parts, m26-40 are unique

Charge!!! (omgitznpv) [+?] - gap late (20), double placement on m25-m33/m74-81 and climax parts is inconsistent, song is a bit repetitive

Chill penguin (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Church Bells (behanjc) [+?] - overstepped overall, 24th patterns are jacky

Cloud Control (trumaestro) [?] - m46 is 32nds, inconsistent in difficulty

Coldstorm (For FFR) (OperationStrawberry) [?] - felt double placement is random, could be more PR

Composer (D.J. Cristo) [-] - wtf offsync, also some notes are misplaced

Cookies and Cream (Silvuh) [+] (8) - weird color at parts but sync is acceptable, missing note in m11

Crystalised Trance (Genocide101) [+?] - 24ths on m29, felt rhythms/doubles are inconsistent

Death Piano (stargroup100) [+.] (12) - definitely hate 9 2 framer/100+ 3 framer jacks and long double jacks/trills but +'d for Tass' opinion

Disregard (D.J. Cristo) [+?] - yellow note on m19? felt off at some parts

Dokodemo Kawaii ~True Heart's Rescue~ {eastsideman09} [+] (9) - a bit inconsistent in double placement

dr0p (D.J. Cristo) [?] - bpm/gap off, 24th placement is random

Dreamin' In The 80's (bluguerrilla) [+] (8) - maybe double placement could be better, want 32nds on m50

Elements of a Party [dore] [+.] (8) - gap late (30), some part at the beginning are a bit overstepped

Evacuation (nev670) [-] - misthyrhms on a lot of parts

EVERGREEN(pokelda) [+?] - gap early (20), rhythms on m25/80 could be better, understepped on m25-40

Fantasy Impromptu (behanjc) [+?] - sync gets earlier towords the end, patterns at the ending cause a lot of 8th right jacks

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+.] (8) - gap late(20), piano section got better but not synced enough yet though

Fight With Seymour (Genocide101) [+?] rhythms on m9/m11/m20, 32nds on m53 aren't needed, could be more PR

Final Fall (Demonic Mix) (robertsona) [?] - offsync/misrhythmed in many parts

Forsaken Neon (Uncut) (Silvuh) [+] (10) - V2 of this should have less 8th jacks IMO, but just +'d for uncut version

Fruity Sweety (behanjc) [+] (9)

Gacha Gacha Cute Figu@Mate (JX) [own file] (10)

Gacha Gacha Hertz Figu@Radio (JX) [own file] (11)

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - long 3 arrow stream, JS at m33-39 is overdone compared to others

Game Over (Rebirth) [-] - k

Garyo (behanjc) [+] (11) - overdouble'd but ok

Gene Gadget Zone - Act 1 (bmah) [+?] - m26/82/m99 is 32nds

Genophobia (Rebirth) [+.] (6) - could be more PR tho

Geno's Forest F-Zero v2 (robertsona) [?] - gap early(20), IMO V2 should have steps that go with melody/drum more accurately

Get Ready (OperationStrawberry) [?] - gap early(30), 16th/32nd rhythm on m15-16, m40-41, m55-56, m65-66, streams on m75-82?

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - 32nds on m18/34 should be 48ths, 32nd+64th at the end of m22 should be 16th+48th

Halloweenies (shad0wlord) [+?] - on m8 24ths are 32nds, double placement

HAPPY RAINBOW (dag12 & .dot) [+] (10) - compare with current queue'd one

Hardkore Atomic (MilkChan) [+?] - 12th jacks(pot 3-framers), overdoubled at parts, rhythms are correct though

Haruka (behanjc) [+] (7) - gap early(20)

Here's to Life [oni] (Kailure + DrugstoreCowboy + bluguerrila) [+.] (8) - felt quite offsync at parts because some instruments are laggy

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+?] - gap early(30), m72-m73 is overdone

Hutsu (behanjc) [+.] (10) - trills on m22 should be shorter, 24th on m38/66?

Hydrocity Zone Act 1 (Professor Raine) [?] - most of 16ths are misrhythmed

Hyperspeed (Starshot) [-] - offsync, wrong BPM

I'm a Maid{EnR} [?] - 32nd on m13 is 16th, double placement on m84?, m113 should be more accurate, blue note on 4th and going off after m114

I'm Just a DJ (Starfalcon176) [+] (7) 

Infectiouz (customstuff) [?] - gap early(20), double placement, m22-23 should be 32nds

Keep in Mind (behanjc) [+?] - beginning is a bit early/a bit off at parts, some 32nd could be 24th on m52, some 24th trills are a bit annoying(4 framer) 

Ketsarku Mozgalom (JX) [own file] (12)

Last!Least!Regrets!!(Scytlock) [+?] - double placement could be more consistent

Lawn Wake I (Rebirth) [+] (11)

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.] (8) - gap late(30), weird rhythms at some parts for me but maybe technically ok

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [+?] - inconsistent double placement/overdoubled at parts

Mario Minor (behanjc) [+.] (11) - off at parts/some patterns would be gay on FFR though

MARISA STOLE THE PRECIOUS THING (Knoobish) [+.] (8) - probably steps could be better but IMO want this song with BG on FFR

Oasis (Vote4Nixon) [+?] - misrhythm in 12ths at m26-30, m98-102, could be more PR on some parts, 32nds are better on m96

One (CharonStyx) [-] - offsync

POWER (Arcsynth) [+?] - PR and double placement could be better

Procrastination on Paper (Silvuh) [+.] (9) - missing notes with drums on m46-56?

Psi2 [eastsideman09] [+?] - misrhythm on m9/54-56, m57 could be better

Pulsaris {eastsideman09} [+?] - double placement, rhythms are a bit awkward. bpm/notes are fine

Pure in Asia  (behanjc) [+] (10) - a bit overdone but ok

Quickdraw (Silvuh) [>]

Quickdraw (Vote4Nixon) [+] (8) - both are queueworthy and pretty damn close in quality, I liked v4n's a bit more.

Quiet (meb_mmm) [?] - song is way too boring.. could be more PR.

Quiet Speedy Tranquil Mix (meb_mmm) [?] - same with above..

R8U (behanjc) [+.] (9) - overdoubled at parts?

Reality (D.J. Cristo) [?] - BPM wrong/offsync, 12ths and 24ths?

ReRicked (SulferDragon) [+] (8)

Rise Up (SulferDragon) [+.] (9) - a bit off at parts due to the non constant BPM song, felt a bit long

Robotnik Theme (MVL Redux) (daikenkaifreak) [+.] (6) - music is quite similar to boss machine 2

Robotnik Theme (MVL Redux) (Grim5768) [+?] - another one is better

Rottel-Da-Station (Oni-Paranoia) [-] - a bit bpm/gap off, similar to V1, no need for V2 of this song IMO

Secret Zombie Room V2 (unkdavar) [?] - gap early(40), difficulty inconsistency.. should be harder overall

SF-R (ShadowDragon!)V2 [+?] - need songcut, 32nd pattern is a bit weird

Silence (Hap Mix) (D.J. Cristo) [?] - offsync, repetitive/too long(6 min!)

Skirmish in the Sand (unkdavar) [?] - gap early(30), until m16 doubles aren't needed, after m19 it suddenly gets 4th rhythm.. etc.

Snowstorm (three17s) [-] - gap/bpm off, a lot of misrhythms, rhythms are basically 16th based

Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop!! (omgitznpv) [?] - needs a songcut, most of 16th/24th stream in m159-195 (rap+guitar section) don't fit the music too well

Strawberry Magic (sc979) [?] - yellow notes are off at beginning, 32nd on m23/33/76.., 24th on m37/48/53.., missing notes on piano section.. etc

Strip Mine (Professor Raine) [+?] - BPM off(0.02), gap early(20), a bit overdoubled

Suite Dreams (stepfile made by band, The Offseason) [-] - offsync, freeze

Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (Ataraxiate) [+] (8) - 3-framer on m46

Tell Me a Story [Compendium Mix] (D.J. Cristo) [+?] - has some misrhythms, other one is better

the Casket of Star (behanjc) [+] (10)

The Euphoria (TK_pavonineukon) [+.] (6) - felt notes aren't going with the melody at parts, could be more PR

The Moving (spEXartELITan) [?] - misrhythms (16ths and some other rhythms are inaccurate)

The Rhythm of Life (SulferDragon) [+] (6) - gap early(20)

The Terror of Death (D.J. Cristo) [?] - offsync(especially beginning), needs songcut

TILL (stepfile by the band, Redcraving) [-] - multi, freeze

Time (robertsona) [+.] (6) - gap early(20), song is kinda meh though

Together As One (D.J. Cristo) [+.] (9) - some 16ths are kinda random though

uNdEr YoUr BeD (dandandamdandan1111) [+?] - felt missing notes at parts, also sometimes I don't get which instrument notes are going with

Vanity Angel (bluguerrilla) [+] (8)

Virtual Emotion - Starfalcon176 [+] (9)

WAIWAI230 (bmah+Rebirth0) [+] (9) - pot 3-framers

Washamanoose's OP (cyrx900) [-] - withdrawal

Washamanoose's OP (jimerax) [own file] (9)

Wave Rip (Scytlock) [+?] - stream pattern could be better (also could have some jumps in them)

whisKers (three17s) [?] - felt abuse of 4 framer jacks

Xxxperiment (dandandamdandan1111) [+?] - 32nds aren't needed IMO(inconsistent), double placement, song is repetitive

**Tasselfoot** · 02-28-2008, 12:14 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]2/28/08[/size][/b]

[b][size=+2]The Queue[/size][/b]
300 - Is this by robertsona or sulferdragon?  the email came in from robert...  but there is a cd-title for sulfer
Going on spring wind - stargroup
Kil Stage - stargroup
Okusenman! hardcore mix - bmah
Sonata quasi una fantasia - xandertrax - still need to touch up sync slightly, see other judges comments
What's what - bmah
xeno-flow - bmah


[b][size=+2]Tested by Tass, not Queue'd[/size][/b]
Blue-Violet - agree w/ jx.  change the ending stream to more audible sounds
Can you feel the sunshine - cut please, also what jx said
DeVour - agree w/ rebirth about the song.  agree w/ jx about the rhythms
HITUZI - overly repetitive, nothing special about it...  bland
Quasar angelic - the one crazy section ~625 doesn't fit with the rest of the file, even though it fits the music
Real 210 - decent for what it is, not the best paraoka song for stepping
Revolutions - agree with both
Rock Armor - fix blue on 4ths
Star of mine - what jx said
Trisection v2 - what jx said


[b][size=+2]Rebirth's Notes[/size][/b]                                   
300: +

*[GloW]*: ?

Activity Unbroken v2: +?

-Api- Anaconda: +?
- Some missing notes. Missing jumps

BEER!!!: ?
- Sync issues

Blue-Violet: +

Can You Feel The Sunshine: +
- So much better than what I was expecting

Chaotic CENTURY: +?

Devour: +
- Song is stupid but the sim is actually pretty good

Figu At Mate: +?
- jimerax's is a little better

Going On Spring Wind: +

HITUZI: +?

I Wish I Had Died That Day: 
- Sync. Move the downbeat down one 32nd. Makes the downbeat a red note instead of a brown.... As it is now, its crappy because of that

Kil Stage: +
- Change gap by 40. F12 twice

MaxX WipEout: +?

Nightfall: ?

Okusenman!: +
- Pretty interesting song. A vocals song for one of the megaman songs in FFR

One Thousand Cranes: +?
- it'd be cool to have 1,000 notes in the song. I hear a bunch of spots where you could put jumps too

Oriental Inspiration: +?

Pants Dance: +?

Quasar: +

REAL 210: +
- Better than I was expecting. Bmah definitely knows how to make a fun file out of almost any song

Revolutions: +?
- Kinda boring song and steps

Rock Armor: +
- Seems pretty boring but its done well

Saffron Beach Driving: +?

Snowstorm: ?

Sonata quasi una Fantasia: +
- After the 22 bpm part in the 70s measures it goes offbeat slightly, but I can fix that. 

Speeding Demon: +?

STAR of MINE: +

Storm Eagle Redux: +?

Strawberry Magic: +?
- Those yellow notes in the beginning are off. They're supposed to be red I think

The Beginning of time: ?

The Euphoria: +?

Trisection v2: +

Variations 2: ?
- jimerax's is better

Way out of the dungeon: +?

What's what: +

Xeno-Flow: +

~Progress~: ?


[b][size=+2]JX's Notes[/size][/b]
[GloW] (Nightfirecat) [?] - a bit offsync overall, want better patterns/layering

~Progress~ (three17s) [?] - gap late(20), 16th stream at m8- don't match other parts, care about pitch relevancy

300 (SulferDragon?) (Robertsona?) [+] (11) - some double placement is weird, but ok fun file

Activity Unbroken (Cyanite) [+?] - felt long(4.5 min), a bit inconsistent in rhythms

Anaconda (Jtehanonymous) [?] - gap early(30), understepped at parts(esp m46-), pattern/double placement could be more consistent, ending is offsync

BEER!!! (omgitznpv) [?] - quite offsync, need to sync by notes

Blue-Violet (stargroup) [+] (8) - gap early(20), after m62 what streams are going with isn't very audible but ok

Can You Feel The Sunshine (bmah) [+?] - end of m67/m101/m131/m139 is 32nds, song cut is preferable

Chaotic CENTURY (Arcsynth) [+?] - gap late(20), not a bad attempt but felt some rhythms are out of place

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+?] - gap early (20), quite interesting but too many misrhythms(most are 24th-32nd errors, missing some notes)

Gachagacha Cute Figu@mate (New Take) (omgitznpv) - I'm not going to review this, but I don't think full version is needed.

Going On Spring Wind (stargroup) [+] (10) - lacks some jumps at parts/m52 could be trills, but ok

HITUZI (SulferDragon) [+] (11) - song name is "Samayoeru Hitsujitachino Meikyu"

I Wish I Had Died That Day (vvav) [+?] - felt some 16th rhythms don't go with the music well (including streams)

I've Been Running (Arcsynth) [?] - rhythms (like m21-28) could be more accurate, want better layering in m29-40, ending is weird

Kil Stage (stargroup) [+] (11) - music is similar to glove stage (I don't mind about it at all though), green notes seem off/a few misrhythms

MaxX WipEout (championanwar) [?] - gap late(40), rhythms could be more accurate in many parts, a bit repetitive

nightfall [intensez] [+?] - misrhythm in m12/m20/m54, could be more PR overall

Okusenman! -Hardcore Mix- (bmah) [+] (10) - gap early(20)

One Thousand Cranes 1.1 (Xiaounlimited) [?] - gap late/bpm late, most 24/48ths are actually 32nds, m59-65 could be more consistent

Oriental Inspiration (gnr61) [+?] - fun but misrhythms at parts / apparently some parts of this song aren't 16th based

Pants Dance (three17s) [-] - misrhythms on some 16th parts, and I hate this song so much sry

Quasar (Angelic Blue Mix) (bmah) [+] (9)

REAL 210 (bmah) [+?] - a bit repetitive/long, also felt missing some notes

Revolutions (omgitznpv & robertsona) [+] (10) - felt stream pattern is a bit random but ok

Rock Armor (SulferDragon) [+?] - blue note on 4th, felt guitar parts are chaotic (maybe because it's so unclear), and are they synced well?

Saffron Beach Driving (robertsona) [+?] - understepped/inconsistent at parts, PR could be better (fine at parts), m50/78 is 16ths

Snowstorm (three17s) [?] - rhythms aren't correct in many parts

Sonata quasi una Fantasia (Xandertrax) [+] (11) - still felt a bit off at parts but acceptable (not just offset), now av-miss is fixed so you can get trills back I guess

Speeding Demon - cyrx900 [?] - want more 16ths etc, misrhythm at m58 

STAR of MINE (bmah) [+?] - 32nds at m103 are out of place, 24ths would be fine (and 48ths are overdone), songcut is prefferable

Storm Eagle Redux [intensez] [?] - some 32nds are 24ths, weird double placement at parts

Strawberry Magic (sc979) [?] - many errors, 16th in m2-4, 24th in m37/m49/m53, misrhythms in m76/78, m79-104 is understepped, BNS in second half.. etc

The Beggining of time (sticklydude) [?] - BPM/gap early, YNS?, should be more PR

The Euphoria (Celira) [?] - gap late/a bit bpm off, most of yellow(16th) notes don't make sense

Trisection v2 {eastsideman09} [?] - m35-m37, m51-55, m57-m61, m68-70 are 24ths, also better PR on 24th parts, m63-66 is understepped

Variations 2 (robertsona) [+?] - difficulty inconsistency, streams in m37?, misrhythms in bursts

Way out of the dungeon - cyrx900 [?] - offsync due to BPM error, want more PR

What's what (bmah)  [+] (8)

Xeno-flow (bmah) [+] (10) - a bit off at parts in beginning but overall fun

**Tasselfoot** · 03-18-2008, 04:11 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]FMO/FGO EVENT BATCH NOTES[/size][/b]

[b][size=+2]Rebirth[/size][/b]
11ELEVEN: +?
- 4:22 long sharpnel file would be pretty boring. Steps are boring as they are anyway

4 Chord Touhou: +
- Gonna have cetaka relayer this and add the necessary jacks, but this is a good sim.

Almost There: ?
- The sim is good, and would probably be accepted if you didn't pull the stupid massive 32nd stream for 8 measures. That sound is barely audible

Angelic Mirage: +?
- Parts in measures 18 - 25 couldv'e been done better. Otherwise not too bad

Are You Happy?: +?
- You've got to be kidding me, the song is incredibly incredibly repetitive and the whole thing was stepped rofl
- Make a cut and we'd be more likely to consider it

Battle Theme #37: +?
- Not bad of a sim, but I see some places where you couldv'e layered better and added hands
- Not to mention it seems to go a little offbeat as the song progresses

Big Blue: +?
- All minijacks for the triplets? Anything else wouldv'e been better. Even if that wouldv'e been the correct thing to put, for a metal song like this, and considering the notes you put those minijacks to, ou probably shouldv'e put non jack patterns down. As they are it makes the sim seem dumb while everything else about it is pretty good

Blood and Black Chocolate: +?

Blue Zenith: -
- hey thats cool, multiple charts and freezes in both

Blue-Violet: +?
- We have a version thats already queue'd. Its not an FMO/FGO but the steps fit the song better than these steps do

Boo: ?
- Long songs are not reccommended at all when they're songs like these. Quit out after like 50 seconds

Club: +
- Accepted because its my own sim and it seems about right

Core: +?
- Funner patterns couldv'e been used. It feels pretty repetitive because of the lack of many different patterns in the active 16th parts

DATA DRAIN: ?
- So repetitive. Even more so than Blurk's old version for it

Death on a Dynasty: +?
- whoa major sync error 110 seconds in
- Actually a good sim, just needs a little better layerin

Digital Confession: +?
- 5 minute sims are so dumb when they're for repetitive songs. Its a good sim and I think its just about worth accepting except for those pointless minijacks and the length. Cut the song length down and resubmit for a normal batch because it'd make a good file

disconnect the dots: ?
- Not what I'd be looking for in a sim for this event

Disconnected Exodus: +
- Great file even if it is a little repetitive

Disregard (Both versions): -
- Sorry, but I just can't see any kind of good file coming from these Berserker songs. Both sims are kinda dumb

Eclipse (Solar): +
- Note for Tass: play the oni
- 32nd streams are so stupidly hard but ok its a good sim

Electro Rush X8 v2: +

Eradication: +

Fareast Hardstylerz: +?

Feelings From The Air: ?
- Sync errors, notes placed in incorrect spots.

Happy Rainbow: ?
- That song doesn't really need to be stepped like I did the oni for it 2 - 3 years ago. Besides, we have one in the queue already thats better

Hardkore Atomic: +?
- Song kinda sucks but the simfile for it is pretty good.
- During some of the 12th double jack streams the notes aren't the same, they change every 3 notes/every beat. So the pattern should change.
- Some of the 32nd streams should have one less arrow. The blue arrow on some of those 32nd bursts should be cut out

Higan Retour: ?
- HST's sim was pretty much the best you can get for this song. It just doesn't seem to compare, even if his wasn't for FFR.
- This one just feels weird to play. 32nds in places that don't really need them. These 48th things in the slow parts probably don't go there at all

Integraation: +

Kimi Wa Nan Terabyte: +?
- Yeah this sim kinda isn't an FMO/FGO. That and theres ultimate green note syndrome at the end, but thats an SM bug, thats not you. I just don't know how to fix it

LET'S NYANCING: +
- This is like... the perfect hard file for a Sharpnel song. Except its killingscum but whatever, same guys. Hands might be a little too much but its awesome

Little God Ch@nnel (Classic Rocker): +
- I would definitely not expect a good sim out of this song. Very nice
- Few small things I'm noticing around the simfile, I might talk to you on AIM and have you fix them up or something

Lucky Star OP (TK_pavonineukon): +?
- Classic Rocker's destroys this

Maikelru's OP: + / +?
- I think that double jumpstream in the very beginning is unnecessary, but I'm not sure. Tass can look at this one and decide

MODEL DDX: +?

Molto v2: +?
- Reach's v1 is better

Nanairopanda v2: +
- My sim, etc

Nauticus' Tragic Past Revealed: ?
- Not the correct rhythms

NECROPOTENCE: +?
- In terms of fun factor, this sim isn't too great

Novo Mundo: +

OniGiri: ?
- Retarded jacks where they don't need to be. Super long streams where they definitely aren't necessary. Incredibly annoying simfile

Operation Evolution: +?
- Why do you all step such long songs like this -_-. If you're going to step something over 3:30 in length, it better be damn good
- Not FMO/FGO material anyway

Piano Etude "Gymnastics": +
- I need to look at the sync, but its accepted

Radio Heads: +?
- Few spots that need more/less layering. I'll help you with those
- Some inconsistency near the end

Rapture: ?
- Its not a bad simfile, its just stupid for the song

Reality: + / +?
- This isn't nearly as bad as the Disregard submissions but I still think any Berserker sim is stupid. I'll leave this up to tass again because I'm somewhat biased on Berserker sims

Rottel-da-STAR: ?
- Big sync error in the beginning. Random 32nds that aren't really needed at all

Saikyou OX Keikaku v2: +
- In my own opinion it might not be an FMO but I'll let tass/jx decide

Secret Zombie Room v2: -
- no

Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran: +

STRAWBERRY SWEETZ: +?

Tell v2: +
- F12 once to the gap

The Adventures of Lolo: +

The Games We Never Player: ?
- The artist is Zaghurim, not aspergian
- Rhythms in some parts are just wrong

THE OTHERS: +?
- Doesn't seem like FMo material

Variations 2: +?
- Seems like too much to be a good sim. Your original version is probably better

Vertex+i: +
- I'll have to fix some sync errors but it looks like a good sim

W@REZ: +?
- May not be FMo material

White: +?
- Some of the jump gallop parts were just put there so the sim would be more difficult. Its not really the actual layering.
- Needs some better layering in those same 8th jump parts

Your Destination: ?
- The jacks go to nothing. Long ass song, etc



[b][size=+2]JX[/size][/b]
[[White]] [[eastsideman09]] FMO event [+? - 5]
misrhythms.. at m3-m6 most of 48ths are actually 32nds + 64th triplets.
64th is 32nd/24ths are 64ths on m7-13 (this applies to all similar parts), 24th on m53?
overhanded at the ending.

4 chord touhou (cetaka) [+ / 7.5] (low-12)

11ELEVEN (omgitznpv & eastsideman09) [+? / 4.5]
inconsistent rhythms on m36-43, at m52 missing notes on 4ths, end of m92 should be 32nds, most 24ths/48ths on burst zone are actually 32nds/64ths,
also want lower-left PR there, quad placement overall

Almost There (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (high-12)
32nd stream (includes many trills, RM) is so intense compared to other parts, felt making it harder by overlayering but rhythms are correct overall

Angelic Mirage (unkdavar) [+? / 5]
some parts are fun but layering is pretty inconsistent overall.
longtrill at m51- is unfun. 16th stream on m35-41?
Besides 48th bursts the difficulty doesn't deserve FMO

Are You Happy (smartdude1212) [? / 4]
196BPM 16ths = 130.66BPM 24ths (not 147) = 98BPM 32nds = 65.33BPM 48ths (not 73.5)... ok?
Difficulty inconsistency, need to follow more instruments for hard files, m216 should be 32nds

Battle Theme #37 (SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (high-11)
inconsistent 16th placement on m15, 19, 40, 60, 64, 85

big blue (JX) [own file] (high-11)

Blood and Black Chocolate (robertsona) [+? / 5.5]
a bit too easy for this batch, misrhythms on m7, also missing notes in many parts, fun but could be better/harder

Blue Zenith (Knoobish) [- / 0]
freezes/multi difficulty

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
misrhythm at the end of m16/m48 (they are 24ths), m26/m30 (one extra 32nd), m33 (missing one 32nd note), abuse/overuse of quads

Boo (customstuff) [- / 0]
offsync as hell, YNS/wrong coloring at parts, missing a lot of rhythms

Club (Rebirth) [+ / 6.5] (high 11)
technically correct except for some PR, kinda harder version of AIM Anthem

Core (customstuff) [? / 4]
difficulty is apparently under FMO, misrhythm on m18/98/114, many missing/extra notes with rhythm parts

DATA DRAIN (Ravia) [? / 3]
PR could be better, pattern changes at ending (especially roll parts) are weird

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent layering after m31, misrhythm on m45/127, after m47 16ths should go with drums they don't sync with guitars well. a few off parts around m70,
rhythms after m77? offsync in m85-106.

Digital Confession (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 5.5]
rhythms on m75/115/155/187/211, technically ok for other parts, but whole thing is way too repetitive/long

Disconnect the Dots (HighBuddha) [? / 4]
need more consistency for streams (I don't recommend putting streams on hihats on this song tho)/PR, color notes after m153 are weird

Disconnected EXODUS (eastsideman09) [? / 3.5]
file is ok until m34 but after that it's like a storm of misrhythm (I'm not even pointing out those).

Disregard ([TeRa]) [? / 3.5]
more like above FGO but felt stream pattern is quite awkward, and honestly I don't think those sequent 300BPM 16ths fit the music too well.

Disregard (ExtremeX) [? / 3.5]
set 300BPM, placement of jacks/jumps/hands is weird

Eclipse (Solar) (ElectricWerewolf) [+ / 7.5] (high-12)
multi difficulties but played oni cause it looks obvious. some 32nd stream patterns are awkward, otherwise rly cool file

Electro Rush X8 v2 (Rebirth0) [+ / 7] (mid-12)

Eradication (ElectricWerewolf & bluguerrilla) [+ / 7.5] (low-12)
still extra 24th on m34/38 but ok

FAREAST HARDSTYLERZ [Oni] (cyrx900) [? / 3]
misrhyrhm on m8/86/137-142, color notes on m23?, color notes aren't synced too well but ok, 64th rolls are pretty crappy

Feelings From The Air (Knoobish) [? / 4]
misrhythm at m5-6, m8, m40.. many parts, offset of beginning is early, also some jack placements don't make sense

Happy Rainbow (Cyanite) [+? / 4.5]
bpm/gap wrong, 24ths? and extra 32nds on m75, ending is just offsync/weird. JS attempt isn't bad but not better than current queue'd one overall

Hardkore Atomic (EnR) [+? / 5]
many misrhythms, there're no 32nds on this song, those are 48ths. 64ths are weird on m68. otherwise it's ok.

Higan Retour (Ravia) [? / 3]
most 32nds/48ths go with nothing, or are misrhythmed. Original might be HST's but layering is changed with an inconsistent way

Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
beginning of m11 should be 32nds (actual rhythm is 64th), 24ths on m15/33/70/71 are 32nds, misrhythm on m21/50, lags on 106-107?

Kimi Wa Nan Terabyte (omgitznpv) [+. / 6] (mid-11 due to the guitar)
some overdone parts/misrhythms on guitar part (plus contains 24th jacks and such that are just retarded), others are fine

LET'S NYANCING (omgitznpv) [+? / 5]
32nd spins could be rolls, hand/double placement on m53-88 is apparently wrong
felt missing some 16th rhythms but ok, other things are fine

Little God Ch@nnel (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+? / 6]
The way of stepping is technically good, but jack usage like this is bad when the song is pretty repetitive (190bpm longjacks aren't recommended in general).

Lucky Star OP (Little God Remix) (TK_pavonineukon) [? / 3.5]
misrhythms on m32/49/65/81.. etc, a lot. inconsistent layering.

Maikelru's OP (Maikelru) [+. / 6] (mid-12)
file is full of annoying/retarded patterns and song is lol, but most parts are technically correct surprisingly.
rhythms are well-done, PR is good but could be better at parts.

Model DDX (Sulferdragon and bmah) [+? / 5.5]
m38-39 - guitar is faster than steps, m41-42/m55/ steps are faster than the guitar, also misrhythm in m38/m57, use 192nds for syncing, a bit easy for this batch

Molto Vivace v2 (NetJet) [- / 0]
way too many misrhythms and sync/layering error

Nanairopanda (Rebirth) [+ / 7.5] (mid-11)
several things are correctly done/harder compared to V1, only some jack use is a bit annoying

Nauticus' Tragic Past Revealed (Ravia) [? / 1]
extra note on m4, misrhythm on m6/ending, m35-38 are 32nds(kinda fast though), 64ths on m18?, 48th at m63/67?, patterns aren't PR at all.

NECROPOTENCE (bmah) [+ / 6.5] (low-12)
missing a 32nd on some patterns, others are fine

Novo Mundo (Dj_Ossa) [+ / 7] (low-11)

OniGiri (ExtremeX) [- / 0.5]
a lot of misrhythms, also patterns are totally horrible

Operation Evolution (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4]
layering/rhythms could be a lot better, 24ths on m161, also patterns should be PR

Piano Etude Gymnastics (behanjc) [++ / 8] (high-11)
a bit off around m9/19/29-31 but acceptable level enough for FFR. also 16th doubles are a bit overdone, but great file overall

Radio Heads (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (low-11)

Rapture (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3]
quite inconsistent layering/PR, misrhythms on m36-38 (those are 32nds)

Reality (hi19hi19) [+ / 7] (mid-12)
rhythms are nice for this song

Rottel-da-STAR (_.Spitfire._) [- / 0]
auto rejection for permission issue

Saikyou OX Keikaku V2 (Rebirth) [+? / 5.5]
jack usage of m29, underlayer on m34-37(and all similar parts), misrhyrhms on m75/78/83

Secret Zombie Room V2 (sticklydude) [- / 0.5]
Those 32nds don't make sense at all plus awkward patterns.

Setsujou! Hyakka Ryouran! (Rebirth) [++ / 8] (mid-11)
simply pretty fun.

STRAWBERRY SWEETZ (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (high-11)
32nd trills on m68/m217 are a bit stupid, others are fine

Tell v2 [dore] [> - 6.5]
multi difficulty (played oni), jack version.
pitch relevancy has some room for improvement, missing notes on m71-72, are jacks with BDs needed?
I don't think queue'd one should be replaced with this one personally

the adventures of lolo (JX) [own file] (low-12)

The Games We Never Played (Ravia) [? / 1]
want more PR and correct rhythms (misrhythms and random color notes)

THE OTHERS (TK_pavonineukon) [? / 2.5]
want more correct rhythms on m4/8/.. all similar parts, too easy for this batch, rhythms/double placement aren't fun, ending

Variations2 (jx) [own file] (low-11)

Vertex+i [[[eastsideman09]]] [+? / 4.5]
extra note on m14/16, m67 is 16ths, incorrect layering (some doubles/hands aren't needed), offsync especially at second half

W@REZ(EnR) [+. / 6] (low-11)
a bit gap late, missing note on m8, otherwise not bad

Your Destination - Starfalcon176 [+? / 4.5]
m33/73/105 are 32nds, some jacks are abused(m20/22/24/125/etc), some notes go with nothing/inconsistent layering

**Tasselfoot** · 07-31-2008, 04:39 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]7/31/08[/size][/b]


Note: A lot of these files still have very minor tweaks that have been suggested by jx and blu.  Please feel free to make these minor tweaks and re-email me just the dwi file and I'll replace the current version.
[b][size=+2]The Queue[/size][/b]
Planet Karma - stargroup - would kinda like to see the 16th jack section toned down
Air.sul G iRock - behanjc
CRASH the BEAT - behanjc - definitely some weird patterns throughout
Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl - behanjc
Funktacular - dore
Here we go - jimerax
Integraation - blu & Sulfer - i know you are fixing this as per jx's comments.  also, the 48th rolls at the start seem kinda out of place with the rest of the file
Ome Minute Waltz v2 - jx
OSTER Project World Tour 04 - behanjc
Procrastination on a Paper - silvuh
Randomness Reactor III - Kommisar - this song is pretty crappy though
Speedcore Sunday - jx
Starlight - macgravel
Fei Longer - hi19


[b][size=+2]Tested by Tass, Not Queue'd[/size][/b]
A World of Piano - nice sync.  what both judges said.  also, last 30 or so seconds seem intentionally overstepped vs the music
Blue-Violet - fix the layering
Document 13b - what jx said
Einstein Rosen Bridge - what both said
Kanon-Kanon - definitely overdoubled
lightfoot - autorejected for hands in non-FMO
Lunatic Princess - hands in stream, overlayered, we don't really need another LP file that isn't THAT different from the one already in-game.
Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop - fix up jumps, overwise good.  32nds are fine for the rolls.
Big Blue v2 - fix PR.  It is pretty boring in the 1st half vs v1.  
The Crow's Eyes - this never ended...  please cut.  look into the other comments as well.



[b][size=+2]JX's Notes[/size][/b]

[Wild ARMs Town] (Redorigami) [? / 4]
song/steps are pretty repetitive for 4 minute.
need shorter song, more consistent steps.

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
m1-12 are overall offsync, all of mini 24ths should be 32nds
The song should fade out earlier.

{The Sewers} (Arrowhead Stadium) [- / 0]
no file

{Wildflower} (blazelust) [- / 0]
offsync + misrythms(all 12ths). couldn't even understand what arrows are going, quit out.

~Progress~ (three17s) [? / 3.5]
difficulty is ok, but pattern and jump placement are completely random. 

==Planet KARMA== (stargroup) [+ / 8.5] (11)
m50-51 should go with the harp. jacks in m102-109 don't match the music too well.
minor sync issue in m172-174, m186-188.
It still has high technical level, but it's basically a clone of SM dump.

13th,Friday (megamon88) [? / 4.5]
offsync at parts due to incorrect bpm changes, inconsistent layering at parts(understepped at parts).
It would be better if patterns are more PR (some parts are ok). 

260 (smartdude1212) [? / 4.5]
kinda boring due to the lack of layering, also some rhythms don't flow well for me.

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3.5]
misrhythm on m8, 16, etc (20ths), PR could be better. jumps could be used on proper place.
songcut is better.

A Nightmare Before Kefka - Copy [- / 0]
freeze.
PR, misrhythm, etc

A World of Piano [sc979] [+. / 7] (9)
Not perfect but syncing is good enough for FFR.
some issues with PR(unnecessary jacks could be changed)/jump placement/split placement.

Air.sul G iRock (behanjc) [+ / 7] (10)

Balloon Fever v2 (Crayzie) [- / 4.5]
basically similar to V1, just a bit understepped.

Battleman Zero Theme (-Barista-)

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
Layering between piano and drums is a bit inconsistent at parts.
The rest is ok.

Chariot (JenovaSephiroth) [+? / 6]
Color changing technique is interesting.
but in parts like m55-62, felt missing some rhythms (understepped at parts).
4 min full song is a bit too long for this song.

chemicalattraction (NestleKwik) [? / 3]
gay early by like 100ms, many misthyrhms there.
felt arrows are going with the vocal and drums randomly.

Chocolate Magic-(behanjc) [+? / 6]
gap early, felt steps are going with not very audible parts a bit too much.

Chrono Eternit (xxJakexx) [- / 0]
offsync, YNS

Cloud Control (batistabomb300) [? / 4]
gap late, misthyrhms in m45, m56, m72, etc. stream patterns are neither PR nor index.
inconsistent jump placement at parts.

Concrete Dandelions (TC_Halogen) [? / 5]
many misrhythms overall. the second half is pretty repetitive.

Corneria (Trance Remix) (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4.5]
a lot of misrhythms, felt patterns are random.

CRASH the BEAT! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (10)
in m55-66 felt some jumps in 24ths are overdone
m81/m85 are slightly misrhythmed(but ok), and weird patterns

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [? / 5]
m27 should go with drums, 16ths in m42? PR could be better.

Damage Control (Mahjix) [? / 3.5]
gap late, PR could be better, rhythms after m63?

Dance Off (dtpietrzak) [? / 2]
steps don't flow the music well overall.

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
some parts are PR and properly layered but burst patterns (m22, m32-, and more) are extremely awkward.
48ths should be 32nds.

Digital Confession (SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
Not too much issues except for some PR things, but felt long and repetitive overall.

Digital Skies (kpmuzik) [+? / 6]
It has good PR and some parts are creative, but layering is inconsistent at parts.
m5-12 - increasing jumps with PR 16ths is a better way.
m37-40, 57-60 - should be jumpstreams
m86-89, m98-105 - keep piano rhythms, double jacks in m89 are overdone
m110-113 - not sure what's going on there, weird patterns
etc. and songcut hopefully.

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
most parts are technically ok, felt some jacks are unnecessary and some bursts have bad patterns.
blank in m57?

Domhail - Bosa  (Netjet & EAGAMES) [- / 0.5]
offsync, wrong BPM

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 4]
patterns are not PR at all, 24ths are inconsistent (and some are misrhythmed).
m59- double placement could be better.

-trainstation dukeout- (b-a-e-r) [- / 0]
no file

Education(Beethovens_Mask) [? / 2.5]
some 16ths are 12ths, missing some notes. also PR could be a lot better.

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut [dore] [+. / 6.5] (11)
kinda interesting, double jacks/32nd trills are pretty gay though. tiny misrhythms on bursts. 

Essential Speed (championanwar) [? / 4.5]
jump placement (especially m23-25), 16ths are put inconsistently. a bit boring overall.

F (Knoobish) [? / 2.5]
BPM wrong, many misrhythms overall, m7 is 12th, m8 is 24ths, etc. many jacks there aren't needed.
PR could be a lot better.

Faint (Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
misrhythms on many 32nds/48ths. felt most hands/some jumps, jacks are unnecessary. enjoyable than I thought tho.

Fall Foliage (SulferDragon) [+? / 6]
some jumps are missed, and some aren't needed (should be put where the sounds overlap consistently).
120BPM parts should be 80BPM 24ths, notes are weird. PR could be better. others are fine

Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl(behanjc) [+? / 6]
m15-m22, m77-85 notes for the pitch changes of synth are wanted IMO. 24th in m49?
also, consistency in m25-34 could be better (jumps).

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 2]
offsync, so many misrhythms, lack of consistency. 64ths aren't needed. don't use Edit.

Footsteps (Crayzie) [? / 3]
overall, PR/consistency issue

Suikoden (Forgotten Daze?) (Theone_one?) [? / 3]
there're some misthythms, also rhythms are boring overall for a long song. gap early

Frozen_Bond(Beethovens_Mask) [- / 1]
There're some misrhythms (want detailed rhythms for piano), also PR/consistency issue, gap early

Funktacular [dore] [+. / 6] (6)
pattern error in m17/21, a bit inconsistent but acceptable level for an easy file

Geno's Forest F-Zero (MrPopadopalis25) [? / 5]
nothing special, but I want more layered harder file for V2.

Gig the Alternative (behanjc+stargroup) [? / 6.5]
unique file but misrhythms on m25, m83/106 is offsync, m110- just weird, etc.
and at least cut the song, otherwise I can't accept.

Gyermeteg (Dragoonhead) [? / 4.5]
Isn't this Hiszekeny? BPM off (MM isn't always correct), offsync ending. jacks are misplaced at parts.

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+? / 6]
sync on m31, 32nds on m39/71 aren't needed
not bad overall, but silent(or step voices)/repetitive parts should be cut

here we go (jimerax) [own file]
nothing special.

Here We Go (stargroup100) [no rating]
some parts are identical with my previous ver rofl
didn't like the way of stepping of beginning-middle much, just personal opinion.

HereWeGo(psychozerosk8er) [no rating]
felt some parts are misrhythmed.

Highway Star (Knoobish) [? / 5]
jack placement isn't PR or music relevant overall IMO. also handstream isn't a good idea for FFR.

Hyper Highspeed Star (Izzy) [- / 0]
freeze

I am Maid v2 (npv) [+? / 5.5]
I don't get some of those hand usage (also overused for ffr), and m68. also ending is offsync. JS is ok.

I Want Candy(-barista) [- / 0.5]
wtf are those 32nds?

Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (11)
rhythms in m14(should be 32nds), m21&m32(actual rhythm is 64th but 32nds are ok), m106. need to fix those

Its A Small World (Hairy Cabbage) [- / 1]
it has fatal misrhythm on the main rhythm, plus inconsistent overall

IVALTEK (three17s) [? / 3]
there're some misrhythms. also, some parts should have more rhythms other than 8ths.

Jingle Bells (Frigtionn) [- / 0]
freeze, also misrhythms and misplaced jacks

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (11)
some doubles on 8th part aren't needed (for the melody), missing 8ths on m110-111.

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [+? / 5.5]
rhythms are ok, layering is inconsistent IMO.

Last Boss Battle Theme #2 (SulferDragon) [? / 5]
gap early, jack placement at beginning is inconsistent, double placement. also missing notes at parts

Lawn Wake IV v2 (t-rogdor) [- / 0.5]
weird sync, a lot of misrhythms, jacks, worse than V1

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix)  (Silver_Brian) [? / 2.5]
I didn't get how it was stepped (vocal follow maybe), felt pretty inconsistent, and has many misrhythms.

lightfoot (stargroup) [+. / 6.5] (8)

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 5]
rhythms in m49-64 don't fit the music much, and felt repetitive.

Lolit Speed (xxJakexx) [? / 4.5]
yellow note on 4th, want more consistent jump placement. has a few misrhythms

Lunatic Princess (npv) [+. / 6.5] (10)
hands in the stream are overdone IMO but ok

Malicious Fingers (Cyanite) [? / 3.5]
notes aren't synced well overall, misrhythm in m128, m140-, etc

Marisa Stole The Precious Thing (Ravia)

MaXx AttaXx v2 (championanwar) [? / 4]
similar in difficulty for a v2. steps are nothing special

Mike French Hardcore Custom  (t-rogdor) [- / 0]
no thx

Mirror (nev670) [- / 0] 
offsync + YNS = immediate quit out

Music (Serialization) [- / 1.5]
a lot of misrhythms, inconsistency

Ninja Lad (megamon88) [+? / 6]
m23- putting minijacks is preferable for PR, also jump placement could be better on this part 
and 12th part. missing note on m48. others are fine

NthDegree (Cyanite) [? / 2.5]
you may have put effort on syncing this, but it's still bad.
would be better than planet karma if it's correctly done though.

One Minute Waltz v2 (JX) [own file]
omg

One Thousand Cranes v2 (Xiaounlimited) [? / 3]
pretty offsync, many errors in jump placement/32nd rhythms/PR

Operation_Evolution (flipsta_lombax) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, bad jack placement, also many misrhythms. songcut is preperable

Osakanajigoku (trumaestro) [? / 5]
m2-m8 putting jacks on the guitars isn't a good idea.
adding some more 24ths/32nds for drums would be better, also some 24ths are misrhythmed.
unnecessary jump in m48.

OSTER Project Presents World Tour 2004 (behanjc) [+? / 6.5]
decent but felt technical level still doesn't match the length (I mean it should be polished more).
at the beginning snares should be done correctly by using 48ths, m14 is 24ths, m109/111 is 48ths.
some syncing on color notes could be better(like m115), some harp parts should be stepped IMO.
bursts in m135 are 24ths, in m136 are 32nds. m143- 24ths could be better on some parts. m189-190 is offsync, etc

PacMania (customstuff) [? / 3]
32nds should be 24ths (not very audible), 11 sec song, the concept isn't very fun for me

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
use 32nd trills for m38/m42 consistently (and remove jumps on yellow notes).
IMO the song has more technical factors such as 16ths for drums, 24ths for synth, bursts for organs, etc.
PR is ok.

PAL,36 (trumaestro & flipsta_lombax) [? / 3.5]
the whole layering method is weird for me, especially quad placement.

Perfect Insanity  (Silver_Brian) [? / 3]
steps are inconsistent, need proper layering at sections.
PR in m114- could be better.

Procrastination on a Paper (dag12) [+? / 6]
decently technically accurate overall. 
after m37 PR gets a bit worse. m46/m50 should have JS. 
patterns after m65 aren't very good, ending could be 32nds (personal liking).
similar level to silvuh's, more erroneous but has better PR and more layering.

Procrastination on a Paper (Silvuh) [+? / 6]
decently technically accurate overall, patterns after m65.
PR could be better at parts.

Pure Hatred (t-rogdor) [- / 1]
lots of misrhythms, that's all

Rainspark  (Silver_Brian) [? / 3.5]
PR and consistency could be better. there're a few misrhythms

Randomness Reactor III (Kommisar[os]) [+ / 7.5] (10)
good PR/jump placement for emphasis. a few more extra 32nds could be added for fun but ok

Revolutions - Copy [? / 2.5]
weird rhythm changes in m8-, m17-, etc.
a lot of misrhythms, no 24ths in this song.

Roki (EnR) [+? / 6]
jacks after m22 don't fit the music well, m30- seems ok but some jack related patterns are bad
use jumptrills in m36/38/42/etc(imperfect layering), m57 is 48ths

Rolling Along (Sprite-) [? / 4]
funny concept, but some parts are quite understepped.
felt jump placement is mostly wrong, PR is sometimes incorrect (especially in jack section).

Saturday [eastsideman09] [? / 3]
misrhythms on m15/17/25/etc, both patterns and rhythms lack consistency IMO
m58-59 is offsync, all 24ths at the end are wrong

Scream of [roki](roundbox) [? / 4]
beginning minijacks aren't PR, PR on m48-49 could be better.
guitars and drums should stepped more consistently. ending 32nds should be 48ths.

Skyfire Ace(EnR) [? / 4.5]
simple parts could be layered consistently (steps for bass sometimes disappear) 
32nds in m43 are 48ths, 48ths in m83 are 32nds. hands aren't needed on this imo

Slashfic [eastsideman09] [? / 3.5]
parts like m21, m25 are understepped.
48th splits in m33, 32nds in m34- aren't needed. some 24ths are misrhythmed.

Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop!! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
in m17-24 want more jumps on some 8ths, m25- also a bit weird jump placement
others are fine

Speedcore Sunday (JX) [own file]

Square, Volume, and Amplitude [Resend] (robertsona)  [= / just replace old one]

Starlight (MacGravel) [+. / 7] (10)
climax is fun, PR could be better at parts tho.

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+? / 6]
32nds/jump combination around m60 is weird for playing(plus not very audible), 
end of m41/58/76 could be 32nds. in parts like m69-72 PR could be better

Strawberry Crisis (knuckles2224) [- / 0]
quit out because of the offsyncness

Swallowing an Avalanche (TC_Halogen) [? / 3]
a bit offsync, misrhythms/missing notes/double placement at parts

Tempest (ShirkDeio) [? / 4.5]
some parts are inconsistent/understepped. PR is ok on some parts but could be better.
song should be cut.

The Hero Fiend (Buizel8888) [? / 2.5]
in m12 16th is 24th, m13- want pattern change with 8th jacks, m79-80 should be 24ths
jump/hand placement isn't good, misrhythms in many parts. PR could be better

THE TERROR OF DEATH (cyrx900) [- / 1]
beginning is offsync and gap off after that. also many misrhythms, m102- are 24ths.
some quiet parts should be cut.

ThunderBolt (Frigtionn) [? / 3.5]
some rhythm parts that are missed could be stepped.
32nds on parts like m32 aren't needed, 24th on m53
also if you want to put long jacks, put them on all sequent snare parts.

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [? / 3]
missing notes/weird jump placement at parts, also long non-stepped parts are meh (could be cut)

Tokyo Banging [Resend] (robertsona) [= / just replace old one]

Tricky Concert - Ragev1 (Netjet!) [? / 2.5]
offsync, PR should be better

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 2]
those 24ths are just weird, also misrhythms in many parts. structure is quite inconsistent.

Versatile (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 2.5]
misrhythms on beginning/middle piano, PR could be better 
12th on m20, 24th on m24/32/etc 

Vida (Izzy) [? / 3.5]
felt some(many) bursts are out of place, some are misrhythms.
32nd trills are kinda gay, need to put 64ths on every hihat(or whatever)?

Virus (Zero054) [- / 0]
no file

William Tell Overture (nev670) [- / 1.5]
bad music seriously. misrythms, PR could be better at parts.

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [= / just replace old one]

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
very long and repetitive, songcut is preferable.
felt rhythms are fine technically, but some parts are quite overlayered for the music.

Xuxa (a_dumple) [? / 4]
overlayered overall, some long jacks are retarded and not technically correct. also 16th jumps.

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 2]
weird jump placement, 16ths don't flow well, overall boring.

Zero Zero Hero (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 3]
felt inconsistent, PR could be better

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
File's pretty boring without layering IMO, can disregard my opinion for this file though.
24th on m19?, PR is ok but not great.

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (hi19hi19) [- / 0]
offsync as hell, and 64ths are just retarded. quit out.

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [? / 4.5]
lack of consistency at the beginning (randomly switching the instrument), and difficulty 
overall. 32nds should be 24ths. jacks are interesting though.

Fei Longer (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (9)
gap early/minor bpm errors, but the way of stepping is kinda amusing.

Gradeus v2 (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
bad sound quality, get better mp3.
180bpm jumpstreams for 2min, that's all. some people would enjoy this for scoring probrally. 

Qu'est ce que c'est(psycho) [? / 4.5]
offsync at parts, decently vocal followed.
not a big fan of 4 minute vocal followed rock file, since there're already plenty of files like this.
at least need to cut, and PR could be better.

Shapeshifter (eastsideman09) [+? / 5.5]

need rhythm/pattern fix of burst on m5, m8-m9. m31-34 is underlayered.
PR could be better on the stream parts going with synth and piano melody.

Silly Symphony [sc979] [? / 5.5]
m77-78 should be all 24ths. misrhythm on m140, 144, 148, 154, 166, etc.
on some jumpstream part, jumps could go with snares.
m168-170 is offsync. cut the song.

Storm Raid Battle (Matrixdude) [? / 4.5]
quads/jacks aren't needed in most cases. parts like m27-28 are 32nds.
also, too many misrhythms/offsync parts overall. PR at the beginning could be better.


The Crow's Eyes (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5]
missing notes on m27, felt layering for drums is inconsistent. felt a bit long.
semi-accepting it.



[b][size=+2]Blu's Notes[/size][/b]
-trainstation dukeout- (b-a-e-r) [-] - no chart?

13th,Friday (megamon88) [+?] - Understepped in parts, could have better flow, synced ok but could use better bpm choice (3->1)

260 (smartdude1212) [?] - overdoubled and repetative in parts, rolls instead of spins, m42-56 or so needs better sync

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - needs better PR, many rhythms missed, trills need to change correctly, 16ths are wrong (they should be weird 64ths I think, slow it down to .3 and check), some rhtyhms wrong like in m47, sim needs lots of work

==Planet Karma== (stargroup) [+] - rock section seems overstepped but probably ok

Wild ARMs Town (Redorigami) [-] - some rhtyhms wrong (like m38), overstepped but missed rhythms in quiet part (with only drums, off sync after each slow down, inconsistent layering

A Nightmare before Kefka (?) [-] - hold, needs better PR, pay closer attention to sync (like oboe, or whatever that instrument is), many misrhythms, ending needs better sync

A World of Piano (sc979) [+?] - Good sync, some weird double placement, may have missed a few jacks, some BNS

Air.sul G iRock (behanjc) [+] - layering good, good PR

Balloon Fever v2 (Crayzie) [-] - Easier than original and not as good, bad layering, missed rhythms

Battleman Zero (-Barista-) [-] - missed rhythms, overstepped, long 32nd trill, needless minijacks, this file has potential but needs a lot of work

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19) [+] - missed a 32nd in m15, PR could be a little better

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+?] - some of the 24ths off sync but may be ok as is, because of the layering style some of the single notes that don't go to piano feel out of place

Chariot v2 (JenovaSephiroth) [-] - similar difficulty to one in FFR, weird bpm tricks

Chemical Attraction (AEROJET Mix) (NestleKwik) [+?] - changed gap to -.107, some vocals off sync but could be ok bc of diff

Chocolate Magic (behanjc) [+?] - some layering seems off and the 16th patterns could be better at parts, the one minijack felt out of place for the file

Chocolate Rain (DJS Mix) (hi19hi19) [-] - beginning is lol... overstepped, overlayered to compensate for lol beginning

Chrono Eternit (xxJakexx) [-] - YNS, fix PR and layering, fix patterns, uneven in difficulty, should be 32nd rolls not 24ths

Cloud Control (batistabomb300) [?] - PR could be much better, many rhythms ignored that could be fun, flow could be better, misrhythms m56-57

Concrete Dandelions (TC_Halogen) [?] - many misrhythms (64ths as 32nds is fine), layering needs work

Corneria (Trance Remix) (Coolboyrulez0) [+?] - missed rhythms, inconsistent PR (needs lots of work), 'triplet' section could be better

CRASH the BEAT! (behanjc) [+?] - some missed rhythms in m6, some ignored rhythms thoughout entire file

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [?] - weird cut but could be ok, missed rhythms throughout file, second half of file could be much better (got very boring)

Damage Control (Mahjix) [?] - fix up sync, missed rhythms, minijacks no good, PR needs work

Dance Off (dtpietrzak) [-] - many manual sync errors, many missed rhythms, song could use a cut for difficulty

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+?] - could do without 16th jacks, m76 would be better as a roll, m92-93 is a weird pattern

Digital Confession (SulferDragon) [+?] - sync on vocals could be better, missed notes in m116 and m124, weird choice of JS patterns (might be better if the two weren't so 'right handed')

Digital Skies (kpmuzik) [?] - PR needs work, jacks to the drums don't fit, maybe needs cut

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+] - perfect don't listen to jx

Domhail (Netjet & EAGAMES) [-] - terribly offsync, PR and double placement needs a ton of work

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - offsync (round up the bpm), some misrhythms and PR needs help

Education (Beethovens_Mask) [-] - missed rhythms, misrhythms, bad cut

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut (dore) [+?] - change 32nd rolls into 64th rolls (awkward next to 32nd rhythms), some jacks may be over the top, 32nd trill, uneven in difficulty

Electrical Parade (Hairy Cabbage???) [-] - very many misrhythms, minijacks

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [?] - i don't hear the 32nds in m9-10, misrhythms m11, jacks and 32n trills make difficulty way uneven

Essential Speed (championanwar) [?] - missed some doubles, missed (or left out would be fun) 16th rhythms, bpm increases at end might be better

F (Knoobish) [-] - many misrhythms and missed rhythms (in intro and in jacky part)

Faint (Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [?] - hands make it overstepped and are outside of the difficulty, some missed 64ths that could be fun at this bpm, some doubles to guitar need better PR, many missed rhtyhms, maybe consider cutting...somehow

Fall Foliage (SulferDragon) [+?] - some PR of doubles could be better like m25, some PR of stream could be better like m28, i think you got all of the double placement right but you might want to recheck to make sure

Falsie the Pseudo-Science Girl (behanjc) [+] - fun and simple

Fei Longer (hi19hi19) [+?] - fun, some PR issues in jumpjacks like in m5, missed rhythms in intro (on purpose?), missed rhythms in m9-13

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [-] - file needs a lot of work, some 16ths go to nothing, some missed rhythms

Footsteps (Crayzie) [?] - some missed rhythms, weird double placement

Forgotten Daze (Theone_one) [-] - many many missed and invented rhythms, minijacks, song needs to be cut by like 2/5

Frozen_Bond (Beethovens_Mask) [-] - many missed and misrhythms, weird double placement, bad PR

Funktacular (dore) [+] - lol funktacular

Geno's Forest F-Zero v2 (MrPopadopalis25) [-] - needs to be harder for a v2, many missed rhythms

Gig the Alternative (behanjc+stargroup) [+?] - good enough sync to guitar, not sure about 16th jacks m86 and hands, don't hear the 24th trill in m100, ending to keyboard is wrong

Gradeus v2 (hi19hi19) [-] - lol just a tad overstepped

Gyermeteg (Dragoonhead) [?] - missed rhythms and some PR jacks are wrong, ending synced wrong, bpm is wrong (should be flat 160 i think)

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [?] - song needs to be cut, overdoubled, inconsistent doubling

here we go (jimerax) [+] - 1st

Here We Go (stargroup100) [+?] - 2nd

HereWeGo(psychozerosk8er) [?] - 3rd

Highway Star (Knoobish) [-] - many unjustified 16th jacks, dumb handstream

Hyper Highspeed Star (Izzy) [?] - holds, 32nd roll instead of jumptrill would be better, weird double placement, could use cut

I am Maid (npv) [?] - 32nds to nothing m44, m68 lol, ending offsync, way overlayered

I Want Candy (-barista-) [-] - many many many rhythms to nothing

Integraation (bluguerrilla then SulferDragon) [+] best file ever

IVALTEK (three17s) [?] - ending stream waay too hard compared to the rest of the file, manual sync isn't right, rhythms (gallops) wrong, should be no 12th stream anywhere, bpm off

Jingle Bells (Frigtionn) [-] - jacks, misrhythms, overdoubled, hold

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+] - kinda overdoubled, this is more of a +. than a +

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - would be better without the minijacks and jacks caused by 32nd patterns, and that one yellow jump

Last Boss Battle Theme #2 (SulferDragon) [+?] - a handful of places where 32nds should be 48ths, some sections with strange doulbe placement, overall ok

Lawn Wake IV v2 (t-rogdor) [-] - wrong in many ways, misrhythms, missed rhythms, bad layering, similar difficulty to the one in game

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix) (Silver_Brian) [+?] - 16ths in m17 are really quiet, misrhythm m30, some strange double placement but it might work

lightfoot (stargroup) [+] - missed a purple m83 and maybe a couple measures after as well, interesting layering technique, more of a +. than a +

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - Not sure about the section with the rhythms that go to nothing, free form stream to the cymbal might be better, some weird double placement

Lolit Speed (xxJakexx) [-] many missed rhythms, bpm needs doubling, weird double placement, YNS

Lunatic Princess (npv) [?] - missed and misrhythms in section m53 on, overlayered

Malicious Fingers (Cyanite) [?] - sync in m23 needs to be much better, inconsistent jack placement, missed rhythm m31, needs 20 seconds cut from beginning, you can't just gap it out, sync wong m91, m129+ many misrhythms (i hear no 24ths), m140-144 are 16ths, end bpm changes wrong, inconsistent layering (hands out of nowhere)

Marisa Stole The Precious Thing (Ravia) [-] - m24-25 no 12ths, PR needs work, many missed and ignored rhythms and misrhythms, cut could be better

MaXx AttaXx v2 (championanwar) [-] - missed rhythms, very similar to original

Mike French Hardcore Custom (t-rogdor) [-] - bad PR, bad layering, bad rhythm usage, bad

Mirror (nev670) [-] - YNS, missed rhythms and misrhythms, quit out

Music (Serialization) [-] - wrong gallops (should be yellow-red not red-pink), many missed rhythms, needs better layering and PR

Ninja Lad (megamon88) [?] - missed rhythms (mainly in sections that go to keyboard, where you have tow yellows in a row), doubles need better PR,

NthDegree (Cyanite) [?] - once again 20 seconds of blank space at beginning is a lot, some sections need a lot of work in terms of sync and rhythm, file feels incomplete

One Minute Waltz v2 (JX) [+] - great sync, good PR for this layering technique

One Thousand Cranes v2 (Xiaounlimited) [?] - misrhythm m6, some PR mistakes, ending steps go on too long (roll would be better), sync seems shaky,

Operation_Evolution (flipsta_lombax) [?] - beginning stream PR (jacks for no reason for example), guitar needs better sync, more rhythms and better PR, lots of PR problems

Osakanajigoku (trumaestro) [-] - many missed rhythms and misrhythms, needs better sync on instruments, needs better layering

OSTER Project Presents World Tour 2004 (behanjc) [+] - awesome, it's like EPCOT: the videogame, good PR, good layering, nice choice in what rhythms to step etc

PacMania (customstuff) [-] - i highly doubt those bpm changes, even for a very short song it was boring, make it better

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+?] - should end on a red?, wasn't sure about all of the double placement m49-63, sounds like you missed a red note in sections like m66, m80 sounds more like a trill, go over your rhythms to drums

PAL,36 (trumaestro & flipsta_lombax) [?] - overlayered, minijacks to nothings, weird double/triple placement

Perfect Insanity (Silver_Brian) [?] - overall pretty good but the solo needs to be better PR (not like guitar hero but better!), the double placement seems really strange

Procrastination on a Paper (dag12) [+?] - similar to silvuh's but had some misrhythms

Procrastination on a Paper (Silvuh) [+] - liked this one better

Pure Hatred (t-rogdor) [-] - random jacks, ignored many rhythms in the drums, many misrhythms, this file could be a lot better, 24th jumpstream to a scream?

Qu'est ce que c'est(psycho) [+?] - sync on vocals needs a little work and you missed a handful of rhythms in the vocals

Rainspark (Silver_Brian) [+?] - more attention to PR in triplets (FFR sense) would be better, missed rhythms in the intro

Randomness Reactor III (Kommisar[os]) [+] - simfile good, song's high freq's hurt my ears :-(

Revolutions (Izzy) [?] - misrhythms in intro, patterns could be better (even if it is just an index file), misrhythms (no 24ths), some PR in the doubles would be good, superfluous slowdown and stop

Roki (EnR) [+?] - section m28-33 should never have more than minijacks (2 arrows in a row), sections to guitar would be better without double to snare, 32nd jack in ending lol

Rolling Along (Sprite-) [?] - lol, song sounds like a cat had a seizure on a midi keyboard, don't understand the double placement most of the time, honestly it could use more jacks, needs more PR in the stream because of the jacks, m53 doesn't make sense, needs either more or no hands

Saturday (eastsideman09) [+?] - m33 missed rhythm, all 24ths should be 32nds, i think you also missed some of the 32nd rhythms, m145 PR doubles

Scream of [roki] (roundbox) [?] - not as good as EnR's, some PR to guitar isn't right (minijacks next to long jacks), almost better guitar patterns than EnR's

Shapeshifter (eastsideman09) [?] - missed some 8th note rhythms, minijacks are hard compared to the rest of the file, 3 note stream doesn't fit the music,

Silly Symphony (sc979) [?] - 16ths in m77-78 (and m217-218) are wrong (should be 24ths), missing notes in rhythms like m94, m166 should be 32nds not 24ths, not sure about 24ths to guitar (very distorted, hard to tell), harp needs better sync (should be easy since you can hear it at .3x), song could use a cut (maybe after harp? or before it you're feeling lazy)

Skyfire Ace (EnR) [+?] - hands, m67 PR, m83 should be 32nds not 48ths

Slashfic (eastsideman09) [?] - m33 wrong manual sync (should be one 16th gallop and two doubles), m58 no 24ths, overall PR could be much better as well as double placement

Space! Wave! Akiba-Pop!! (behanjc) [+?] - m19 (and the other m like it) misrhythmed but 64ths probably are too much, m78 3 arrow pattern would fit better, some double placement in vocal section wrong (doubles to no vocals), ignored rhythms (might be overstepped not ignored though)

Speedcore Sunday (JX) [+] - this file is a lot of fun and i didn't find any mistakes

Square, Volume, and Amplitude (robertsona) [?] - some wrong 8th note rhythms, some missed 16th note rhythms, missed '32nd' rhythms in slowdown sections, missed rhythm m32, a little PR in the 8th rhythms would make this funner,

Starlight (MacGravel) [+] - very fun

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+?] - mostly good, don't understand some of the double placement, sections like m15 that have 16ths to drums feel out of place but probably ok, layering in JS section should match the layering in non-JS section like m24, not sure about m39 rhythms (can't really hear it, maybe ask KgZ?)

Storm Raid Battle (Matrixdude) [?] - m24 not 24ths (16ths?), hands and quads don't fit, many misrhythms in break section, jacks out of nowhere, jacky stream patterns, more misrhythms after break section and after it

Strawberry Crisis (knuckles2224) [-] - many many misrhythms, quit out, artist?

Swallowing an Avalanche (TC_Halogen) [?] - some misrhythms (slow it down to .5 and go over all of the 16th rhythms, not sure about, m40 could be JS, minijacks out of nowhere, bpm should be constant pretty sure, some missed doubles, some weird double placement

Tempest (ShirkDeio) [-] - you need to either step all of the 16th rhythms or none of them not just a little, 8th stream gets really boring, bad double placement

The Crow's Eyes (hi19hi19) [+?] - m10 m14 m30 etc missed or misplaced 48th rhythms, m45 and m107 no yellow note, missed 48th last measure

The Hero Fiend (Buizel8888) [-] - many ignored rhythms in drums, bad PR in doubles, unstepped guitar in stream, misrhytms in guitar (24th trill doesn't make sense), many more misrhythms quit out

THE TERROR OF DEATH (cyrx900) [?] - misrythms in sections where you put a 32nd, there should be zero bpm changes, 16th stream wrong (should be 24th stream), needs cut, lots of blank space

ThunderBolt (Frigtionn) [?] - m65 needs a lot of work, some weird double placement, some missed rhythms, needs a lot of cleaning up but isn't bad

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [?] - inconsistent doubling, after break is very understepped (it could be so much fun!)

Tokyo Banging (robertsona) [+?] - m60 24ths, m61 48th, cut is meh

Tricky Concert - Ragev1 (Netjet!) [+?] - PR could be much better for a classical song

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [-] - 24ths don't go to anything, many misrhythms, needs better layering, PR could be much better

Versatile (OperationStrawbarry) [?] - bpm is constant, misrhythms in intro, stream could be better, 24th rolls should be 32nds, many missed and misrhythms

Vida (Izzy) [-] - many many many rhythm mistakes, needs a ton of work

Virus (Zero054) [-] - blank

William Tell Overture (nev670) [-] - bpm wrong, horrible PR and layering, quit out

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - some PR would be nice, many misrhythms and weird layering

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [?] - misrhythms to synth in sections like m60-61, sooo long (and it basically repeats)..., rhythms in m148 go to nothing?, so overstepped...

Xuxa v2 (a_dumple) [?] - long jacks that don't fit, many missed rhythms, way overstepped

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [?] - 16th stream to nothing, talking will get cut off without an ending note

Zero Zero Hero (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - some rhythms in drums missed, some 8th note rhythms wrong, PR could be better

{Lazy Summer Days} (Xandertrax) [+?] - patterns to 24th bursts could be better, intro could be cut (before piano or something), some missed notes in 8th note JS section

{The Sewers} (Arrowhead Stadium) [-] - many many misrhythms, minijacks that go to nothing, halved bpm, quit out

{Wildflower} (blazelust) [?] - intro all wrong, 16th rhythms wrong m41+, long jacks that go to nothing, boring m49+, simfile needs lots of work but is salvageable

~Progress~ (three17s) [] - horrible patterns (needs better PR), missed some rhythms, inconsistent layering

**Tasselfoot** · 08-19-2008, 08:55 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]8/19/08[/size][/b]

[b][size=+2]THE QUEUE[/size][/b]
{Big Boss} by V4N
Across Rooftops by jx
Black Key Etude by behan
Blue-Violet by Silvuh
Brandish Headless by Shash
Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern by gnr
Destined Marionette by behan
Document 13b by blu
Empornium by dore - jumps on hihat, maybe.  song is pretty mello though...  extra jumps might ruin it.  ps - 2nd parental advisory song on FFR
Feldschlacht by behan
Kanon-Kanon by bmah
Lost in Mind by Silvuh - file is nothing special though
Momentary Life by Shash
moon child - go with the flow- by bmah - takes me back to Reach and 2003.
Phantom Ensemble by behan
Summer Time Perfume by bmah - i like the current layering.  then again, i am not a huge fan of overlayering files.  if you want to layer it more, likely would require a re-submit.


[b][size=+2]Files Played By Tass But Not Queue'd[/size][/b]
Fighting for Control - fix PR.  remove hands, file isn't FMO.
Game Boy Fiend - consistency in layering.  underlayered is OK, but be consistent.
Hero in a Dream - check sync. fix missing 16ths.  neat song, IMO...  bad vocals.
Moonlight River - fix up PR
Rose At Nightfall
Ska De Chocobo!! - jumps/layering


[b][size=+2]Shash[/size][/b]
3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [-]
-64ths are completely retarded sorry
-Rest of file is boring and generic, some parts are kind of ok but PR is missing and jumps could be used a lot better

Across Rooftops (jimerax) [+]
-Maybe some bits are a little overlayered, in the hardest parts it's kinda hard to tell what things are going to
-Overall very fun though, the slightly easier layered parts where I could really tell what was going on were excellent.

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+]
-Nice PR
-Fun little piano file

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+]
-Ok PR, fun file overall
-Personally I try to avoid using the 3241 type of 32nd burst pattern since it often feels really weird to hit, maybe make it 4321 or 1234 instead?
-I would suggest more minijacks for PR and consistency, since you only have one bit with them and they're fun there IMO.

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+]
-Own file. 4/5 + so far, holy **** this is probably a record

Calmness (Mr. Nothing) [?]
-If you're going to do this you need PR, period, and this has none. Fix it.

Chaoz Fantasy (Netjet!) [?]
-WTF layering and jacks. No, no, no, no, no. This file should have no jacks at all and about half the jumps.
-There is potential buried beneath the awful layering here, PR of non-stupid parts could be better but first things first get rid of the ridiculous overlayering.

Chaoz Japan (eastsideman09 and EnR) [+?]
-In places like m7-8 that pattern stinks, make it more fun like 1 (12) (34) or something
-For 12th jacks in m29-36 make the jacks switch hands please, switching from jacking on 2 to jacking on 1 is insanely awkward
-Fun aside from that.  64ths are kinda nasty but accurate and not too bad.

Chocolate Rain DJS Remix (Xandertrax) [-]
-Quit out after intro.
-No. Just...no.

Chocolate Raid DJS Remix (DarkZtar) [?]
-In contrast to Xander's, the intro is massively understepped. Do more than just put one jump please.
-Needs to be more layered and PR throughout. Ignoring the very prominent 'o o-o o-o' noise throughout until like the end is pretty damn bad.

Church Bells (-Barista-) [-]
-Jacks and 32nds used horribly throughout. Not even a little bit fun.
-Needs to be completely redone.

Church Bells (HighAndr0id and Classic_rocker) [+?]
-Some of the yellow jumps midstream didn't seem to go to anything audible, and file seemed overjumped in general.
-I dunno about the jumpjack + megatrill, it's accurate but pretty silly. Probably higher chance of getting file accepted if you just make it jumptrill + rolls

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+]
-Insanely hard file for FFR but seemed accurate and well-stepped overall
-May need toning down of super hard parts to actually get in, and I'm not 100% sure of super technical accuracy but it's fine for me.

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] [+.]
-Kind of generic but decent I guess.
-m6-9 should prolly have layered 8th jacks
-Minijack part doesn't seem very accurate

Data Drain [Xandertrax] [-]
-Just don't step this, seriously. Your file will either be inconsistent or stupid no matter what you do (in your case, inconsistent). It's a funny SM song but has no place in FFR.

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [+?]
-Patterns in general are fairly weak. Use more PR.
-Hands were not used well and were almost entirely unnecessary.
-Rhythms and sync were good.

Decisive Battle (DarkZtar) [-]
-WAY overstepped, sorry 8th jumps to the melody is terrible.
-The good thing about this file is the song is amazing, so I will step it for the next batch hehe

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+.]
-PR in various places seemed a tad off, like the beginning
-Very fun overall

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [?]
-Way overlayered, tone down the massive layered 32nd wall parts
-Parts that were not overlayered with 32nds were fun

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+]
-Jumps to the "echoes" in the quieter parts don't work that well and seem unnecessary, the echoes don't seem pronounced enough to me to warrant jumps
-Very fun overall, jacks are used quite well

Drop (Operationstrawbarry) [+?]
-16ths such as in m30 are actually 24ths
-PR needs work throughout
-Jumpspam doesn't seem like the optimal pattern for the beginning, try different combinations of jumps + taps
-Overall rhythms are quite fun, potential for a very good file here if it's fixed up.

Empornium (dore) [+.]
-LOL
-LOL
-oh man tass needs to play this hahahaha

Endless Dream v2 (s0ulst0n3) [-]
-Inconsistency with jumpstream and non-jumpstream
-Jumpstream patterns are meh
-m46 has no 24ths in the music
-auto-rejection for holds

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [-]
-wtf random stream with random jumps, quit out.
-steps don't match music, sorry.

Falling Phase (badman7772) [?]
-Needs a good bit of PR work throughout
-NEVER use a jack as part of a descending runningman pattern.  The repeated arrow should be preserved for only the repeating pitch, plus it's awkward as hell to play.
-File is incredibly generic as is now and really needs perfect/near perfect PR to get + from me, rhythms are correct though so good job there.

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [?]
-Lots of places where PR fix is needed
-m27 does not have 12ths
-Layering would help this file a lot since it's very very generic right now.

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+.]
-Layering seems inconsistent in many areas, even within measures/sections
-Overall extremely fun though.

Fighting for Control (kommisar[os]) [+?]
-Needs PR work in parts with just 8ths and jumps
-Other parts are pretty fun.

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [?]
-Nothing changes in the music in m13 to warrant jump use change
-Above is just one example of inconsistency throughout file, also needs much PR work.
-Some misrhythms in a few places.

Flames of the Sky II (b-a-e-r and fluuk) [-]
-HORRIBLE patterns throughout, like jacks in beginning and random trill and roll patterns
-Terrible song choice, file is incredibly boring and generic and pretty much not salvageable
-Eventually I quit out because this song is also WAY too long.  Almost 4000 arrows of this nonsense?  Please.

Freedom (Mr. Nothing) [+?]
-There are no 16th gallops in this song, those are all either 8ths or nonexistent
-Not bad overall for an easy file, PR is all right and rhythms are ok except for the above.

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
-Wtf MAMA stream near beginning lol, I know what you're doing but it feels way too weird and consistency with m33 jumpstream isn't that important IMO.
-Decent in general, could be much better if layering was added well and maybe slightly better PR.

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [+?]
-m27 is inconsistent with the rest of that section
-m38 jumpstream is completely BS, rhythm is actually ta ta-ta-ta ta-ta-ta ta-ta-ta etc
-Minijacks used very well, overall it's pretty decent but fix the above.

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+]
-Song is quite long, maybe use a cut?
-PR used very well, good file overall even if the song is kind of irritating.

Heaven Road 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?]
-PR throughout needs a lot of work
-First 16ths in m35 should be 24ths and there's another part like that later
-12121 as 32nds is a horrible pattern, make it 2-handed please
-I would suggest more layering throughout.

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+.]
-No real suggestions, idk...just an ok file, song isn't that interesting so it's pretty good given that.

Higan Retour ~idling mix~ (Knoobish) [-]
-Before m29, it was actually pretty damn good
-Then I quit out for retarded 64th wall and overlayered jumpstream after it.  Fixplz.  This actually has potential based on the first 28 measures but holy crap it gets bad after that.

I Don't Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [+?]
-Why no pitch change in m5/m9 jack?
-m12 trill probably starts too early
-m70 is an incredibly awkward pattern
-Throughout, (12) and (34) jumpjacks don't have 16th's, while (13) and (24) do.  I'd reverse these.
-Big 32nd roll pattern should probably be 1234 or 4321, other pattern types are meh

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [-]
-Auto-rejection for hands in file that is not hard

Inside the Fire (dore) [+]
-Great PR, great sync and rhythms, no problems for me.

K8107 v2 (t-rogdor) [-]
-This file is basically exagon's with some hands
-Completely unnecessary

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+.]
-Decent PR and rhythms
-Chains and parts with that jump-tap rhythm could probably be layered better.

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [+]
-Small PR error throughout, you have 32132123 (or the equivalent shifted to the right) in many places, and 32132132 is correct.  M1 is an example.
-Otherwise well-stepped and fun.

Loot Burn Rape Kill (Not Available) [+.]
-More layering and PR would help this a lot
-Pretty fun though.

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+]
-small PR errors: m38, and many of the 16ths in the section starting with m75, just two notes reversed a lot.
-Good file overall, but I would really love to see that flute or whatever the slow woodwind instrument is layered in, I think it would make the file really great if done well.

Lullaby (customstuff) [-]
-Waaaaaaaaaaay overstepped
-Song choice isn't good, this song doesn't seem like it could make a good stepfile really.

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [?]
-Copymirror on slow bit = bad
-Overall fairly boring--could really use more layering in the faster bits, and then PR on the slow part.

Meow! (customstuff) [?]
-Jump placement in the jack sections seems completely random
-Trills and runningmen in the stream need to go away, stream patterns aren't great in general
-1-hand trill is random and unnecessary.

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+]
Own file, although I plan to change a couple little things and then resubmit.

moon_child �Go with the Flow- (bmah) [+]
-Not 100% sure if minijack rhythms are right, see what other judges say.
-OK PR, nice file overall.

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+?]
-PR with jumpspam parts is overall not very good
-In the bits where you have an 8th runningman, you reverse the pitches of the red notes
-Good PR otherwise.

Nightfall (Azafreak) [?]
-Many misrhythms like gallops, remove minijacks, fix stream patterns
-File is extremely generic, not a very good song choice for stepping.

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+.]
-Small misrhythms in various places, like missing red notes in m66 which feel awkward
-Good file overall.

Phantom Ensemble (behanjc) [+]
-Jump use seemed a little erratic throughout
-Good file overall.

Psychopotamia (Ledwix) [+?]
-Some PR could be better, especially in streams
-Layering of jumps midstream is ok, but finish with a jump too.  For example, first blue note of m14 should be a (14) jump.
-Nice rhythms.

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [?]
-Needs more PR, for runningmen parts especially
-The part with yellow jumps stinks.  The yellow beat doesn't get any stronger there.  When the music seems to get 'stronger' then the previous section but with a similar beat, try actually analyzing what changes and having your steps reflect that.
-m73-81 doesn't have gallops.

Rose at Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+.]
-I don't really hear the 12ths that are layered in, other judges can confirm them or not
-Some small PR issues, like for example the 16ths in m1 would be better as (14)23 and 423.
-Otherwise pretty good file

Sidology Episode 3 (Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [?]
-24ths don't really seem correct in the part with zillions of them
-Needs a lot of PR and layering work in general for such a long file.  Also seemed like there were quite a few misrhythms.

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+?]
-I didn't really get the layering you were using if that was the idea, so the jump placement seemed kinda erratic throughout�I would just go with jumps to the melody honestly, except for 16ths which could be sandwiches.
-Why did you not step the last few notes of the song?  That seemed weird.

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [-]
-File is stepped incredibly inconsistently, entire thing is basically one huge misrhythm, and hands are used very poorly
-Auto-rejection for hands in non FMO

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+?]
-Layering around m10-20 and m40-50 is done poorly, fix those parts to make the main melody more prominent
-Otherwise well-stepped.

Strangeprogram [Long] (s0ulst0n3) [-]
-Auto-rejection for holds
-From what I did play this is too similar to the ingame one and not necessary.

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+.]
-Nothing really wrong with this file IMO, but I think it could be a lot more fun if more layering was done, especially in the beginning parts.
-Still fun without that though.

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [-]
-Auto-rejection for completely wrong snap (this song is 16ths based) and holds.

The Dream (Serverkiller) [-]
-Offsync and wrong BPM bye

Titan �The Superjail Mix- [+?]
-Syncing for part with words is COMPLETELY off
-It's�ok aside from that, although it seems like better layering/jump use is possible.

Velaciela (bmah and HammyMcSquirrel) [+?]
-Needs better PR and layering for me, too boring as it is now.
-Song cut is really bad, ends incredibly abruptly.

Vertex ALPHA (tj28) [!]
-Auto-rejection for multiple difficulties
-Tass already basically said he will never put this song into the game as it's almost the same as BETA.

Violent Storm (thechild) [?]
-Beginning seems to be misrhythmed
-File is pretty boring, needs more layering or something to make it more interesting, also some of the yellow 'jacks' aren't PR as jacks.

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [?]
-Needs massive PR fix.
-More layering might also help in parts
-16th stream seems completely wrong.

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?]
-Again, basically needs total PR overhaul.
-Seems ok aside from that.

{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?]
-Badly overlayered 12th jack part, inconsistencies throughout
-The other one is way better

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+]
-Much better than Silvuh's
-Very well-stepped, great file.
Note: Due to a pure bias based on the respective quality of files produced by Silvuh and V4N (and the stepping style of each of them as well), I kind of suspect that they were somehow reversed�no offense to either if this turns out to be false.

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [?]
-12th snap is wrong, it's 16ths for most of the file
-Some parts are fun, but for the most part layering is very bad and inconsistent.

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [-]
-Bad misrhythms, terrible use of jacks, no PR in easy bits.

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [-]
-Godawful stream patterns and minijacks in stream and random 16th pauses and stuff.  Learn how to make fun stream patterns.

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [-]
-Horrible stream patterns, also has misrhythms and such.  Similar in quality to iluswirl's.  Random 16th stream for years is not the way to step this song.

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [-]
-24ths wtf.  No, no, hell no.  Quit out after the third set because I could see where this was going.
-Overstepped like hell with 24ths and then understepped elsewhere.  Awful overall.


[b][size=+2]JX[/size][/b]
{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
missing jumps on m1/m5, 24th on m7 isn't needed. 
misrhythms on m10/14/42 (actually 48th + 64th, and need better pattern/modification)
some jumps on the yellow note/jack placement are weird.

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
felt some parts lack layering (beginning, m16, m24, etc).
misrhythms on m10/14/42 (actually 48th + 64th, and need better pattern/modification)
also missing notes on some parts.

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [- / 1]
BPM error (offsync, and make the main rhythm 8th or 16th) 
file's full of misrhythms, needs layering

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [- / 1.5]
many rhythm errors, 64ths are 48ths, some are 32nds, 64th trills are stupid. PR could be better, gap off

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [- / 1]
felt jump placement is random, quite inconsistent structure

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [? / 2]
PR could be better, some misrhythms, m18- stream doesn't fit the music well

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [- / 0]
offsync, 24ths/32nds/etc are completely out of place

3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 2.5]
misrhythm on m8/16/etc, a bit inconsistent layering. also felt repetitive

Across Rooftops (JX) [own file] (12)

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (11)
ok sync(a bit off esp in m23-32, ending), great PR, jumps could be put more on some parts for layering

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (9)
piano parts are improved a bit but felt layering for drums is still inconsistent at parts.

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+. / 7] (11)
unnecessary jumps in m10/14, unnecessary notes in m14, PR on m16/17, m64-67 could be better, 
hands aren't needed IMO, want 48ths in m61, last two 32nds are 24ths in m62

Calmness (Mr.Nothing) [- / 1.5]
too short, jumps in m8, PR could be better

Chaoz Fantasy - (Netjet!) [? / 2]
PR could be better, jump/jack placement isn't good

Chaoz Japan [eastsideman09 and EnR] [+? / 6]
downjacks/minor rhythm error at beginning, minijacks around m57 don't fit the music
m46-53 could be better in terms of consistency. IMO 16th note after the 64th burst could be removed.
otherwise, sync is fine.

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (Xandertrax) [0 / -]
withdrawal

Chocolate Rain DJS remix (DarkZtar) [? / 4]
beginning should be stepped more/offsync at parts.
after that, felt the layering styile is generic/inconsistentat parts

Church Bell (-Barista-) [- / 1]
a lot of errors in jack placement(PR)/rhythms in general
also PR in guitar part could be better

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & ClAsSiC_rOcKeR) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better overall, especially in solo part. hands should be placed more carefully
m47 is 24/16ths

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+. / 6.5] (12)
funny/weird song, hard file.
rhythms in m19/46, also some other minor rhythm errors but ok (lol @ bursts with all colors).
they all could be counter clockwise spins.

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix]  DarkZtar [? / 4.5]
BPM error (don't use stops for syncing)
layering for hihats at the beginning, inconsistent in parts like m31.
also minijacks don't fit the music well. some 24ths are 32nds.

Data Drain (Xandertrax) [? / 3.5]
rhythms in m17-25, m34, m47-52, layering is inconsistent, especialy in parts like m68-
felt inconsistent when steps switch from double based style to single
sync error, after m159 notes get earlier to the music.

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [? / 3.5]
need better layering sytle/more consistency between guitars/drums overall
also, PR (guitar) could be better

Deceisive Battle   DarkZtar [? / 4]
many misrhythms, m27-28, m33-34, m42, m54, etc are 12ths.
the style of jumps on melody + random 8ths isn't too fun for me

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
want 16ths for drums on parts m48, m54, m65, m67, m69, etc

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 5.5]
on m35-43, m53-, m80, most jumps aren't needed (or put more carefully), sone 32nd pattern could be more roll based, 
m95- many 32nds are out of place. got better than the last one though

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [+. / 7] (11)
burst rhythms/jump in m24? didn't get some jump placement but ok

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 3.5]
inconsistent layering(double placement), some 24ths could be used

Empornium [dore] [+? / 5.5]
adding jumps on handclap in hihat section would be better, layering method is a bit boring for me.

Endless Dream - s0ulst0n3 [? / 2.5]
pretty inconsistent layering, not good hand placement, 24ths?

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [- / 1]
streams don't fit the music, random pattern/jumps. quit out

Falling Phase (badman7772) [? / 2]
need some layering and berrer PR not to be boring

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 3.5]
many misrhythms(12ths, synth melody, etc), repetitive at parts

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (10)
some parts are cool but felt layering is inconsistent/weird at parts for me, technically not wrong though
32nd on m91/99? some 16ths for piano on m27/96/102/etc are 24ths (shift up-arrows by 48th)
triplet jack in m106 isn't needed

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 7] (10)
PR for jumps could be better maybe

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 2.5]
notes on silence/misrhythms, jump placement is quite inconsistent

flames of the sky II (b-a-e-r & fluuk) [? / 2.5]
quite random patterns, inconsistent, felt way too long (6+ minutes)

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [? / 3]
misrhythms (16ths?), PR could be better

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
a bit inconsistent/underlayered at parts, could add some 32nds notes for drums

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [? / 3.5]
bpm late, beginning should be stepped more, jump placement could be better overall, could use 32nds more

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+? / 5.5]
meh sync, songcut

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [? / 3.5]
PR/layering could be better. could add some 32nds on synths for fun (m39, etc).
especially blue note parts, they are ones of the ways to step but not fun.

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (10)
on parts like m18 snares could be layered maybe
missing 16th on m99, 109, missing jumps on m40, 98

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [- / 1]
64ths are crap (and not even technically correct)
PR could be better, and noticed a few errors in rhythm/jump placement

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
PR error in m5/m9, jumps are put BDs consistently but weren't too fun for me, burst pattern in m16
weird 16th placement on m19/25/etc for drums? or they are put on hardly audible things
other synth parts are fine I guess.

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [? / 5]
ending should be cut, hands are overused

Inside the Fire [dore] [+? / 6]
it has decent PR and the style is ok for this difficulty, but still long and it's getting boring for me.

k8107 - T-rogdor [? / 2]
sync errors, v1 is better

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (10)

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [? / 4.5]
didn't like the music, some jumps are inconsistent (around triplets), missing some 16ths (m18, 22, 25, 26, etc)

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [- / 1]
offsync overall, random jump placement/misrhythms

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
inconsistent layering (especially m26-), rhythms on m72

Lullaby (customstuff) [- / 1.5]
pretty awkward hand usage (especially quads)/patterns overall  

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [? / 3.5]
seems some rhythms are wrong/missing some 32nds, inconsistent double placement

Meow! (customstuff) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent jumps, 3 arrow jack would be better than 4 arrow jack 
want some climax

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+ / 7.5] (11)
m6/30/177- could have some more jumps, missing hand on m68/132, jumps for snare on m81-83?
tiny things, though.

moon_child -Go with the flow- (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (9)
decent PR, m33-49 could be layered more/better, missing 32nd on m106 

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+. / 6] (7)
PR is ok at parts but could be better (m13-, m54, etc)
layering is mostly correct, a bit boring imo but maybe ok for an easy file

Nigthfall (Azafreak) [? / 2]
complete error in m9? and random rhythms/many rhythm errors after that, need more layering

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
steps aren't erroneous but felt missing a lot of background drum/synth rhythms for fun factors

Phantom Ensemble (cut) (behanjc) [+ / 8] (10)
felt a few parts are underlayered but fun/technical file anyway

Psychopotamia (ledwix) [? / 5]
after m13 need 32nds for piano, missing note on m33
in parts like m48-, some base rhythms should be 16ths
PR could be better at parts

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
jumps for marinba could be more PR after m9, after m82 some jumps are missed
overall, quite inconsistent layering even though the song is repetitive trance

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
want a 16th note before blue 8th jump on patterns like m15
also, you layer strings as 12ths but the layering way is inconsistent IMO
after m45 felt 4th part is understepped

Sidology Episode 3 (Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [? / 4.5]
could follow the background drums more for better layering, need songcut, PR could be better

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+. / 6.5]
felt jump placement is inconsistent at parts, misrhythms on m80-82

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
didn't see any good reasons for hands on most parts
missing notes on m28, 36, 53, 65, etc

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+? / 5.5]
mostly ok but PR could be better at parts, could layer drums more on some parts

Strangeprogram[Long] {s0ulst0n3} [- / 1]
just similar to v1, no need for sull version, random patterns

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+. / 6.5] (9)
m9-15 is underlayered (on purpose?), felt a bit long/repetitive

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [- / 0]
freezes, BPM should be 165

The Dream (Serverkiller) [- / 0]
totally offsync, quit out. and this is matathon

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [? / 3.5]
voice part isn't done well, imo you should cut the song before that.
also jump placement is inconsistent overall

Velaciela (bmah & HammyMcSquirrel) [+? / 5.5]
missing notes on m63(32nds), m65(piano), m27/71/78
m42- example of bad layering change

Vertex Alpha (tj28) [- / 0]
multi difficulty, played one of them randomly and wasn't queueworthy at all

Violent Storm (thechild) [? / 3]
rhythms of beginning aren't correct(also not very audible), PR/layering could be better overall

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4]
multi difficulty, also felt melody, chords, drums are randomly layered (edit).

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4.5]
small misrhythms on beginning, PR with melody/pizzicato could be better
m35- could be layered.


[b][size=+2]Blu[/size][/b]
3020 (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - totally misunderstood what I meant about the 64ths, piano section needs better PR, trills should change first in red notes not blue notes

Across Rooftops (JX) [+] - m19 maybe missed a note, m35 missed another, m55+59 32nds should be a 2134 spin, m68 not sure what 3rd orange note goes to, m73 missed two hands?, m85 24ths not 32nds, m91 missed rhythm in second half of measure, ending jumps could have a couple hands in it and better PR (+ bc i'm being really nitpicky here)

Black Key Etude (behanjc) [+] - really fun piano, liked the layering choice at end

Blue-Violet (Silvuh) [+] - could have more jacks to piano in there but otherwise good

Brandish Headless (Shashakiro) [+] - ignored bass drum in intro on purpose?, m75 two 4321's should be 1212's,

Calmness (Mr.Nothing) [+?] - some PR issues in the doubles, is this a cut?

Chaoz Fantasy (Netjet!) [-] - PR in intro, jacks in JS, missed doubles in JS, weird double placement, inconsistent

Chaoz Japan (eastsideman09 and EnR) [+?] - PR issues in m46+ jump section, pretty good otherwise

Chocolate Rain DJS remix (DarkZtar) [+?] - some inconsistencies double PR,

Church Bell (-Barista-) [-] - major PR issues, many missed rhythms and misrhythms, ending bpm change

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & ClAsSiC_rOcKeR) [+?] - PR in guitar solo could be better, PR to piano could also be better, overall pretty good

Counter Clockwise Chant Pattern (gnr61) [+] - some jacks caused by layering or choice in jumps that could be avoided but it doesn't really matter at this bpm

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] (DarkZtar) [?] - missed rhythms, should be no stops to sync (bpm+gap error), better pattern choices for 32nds, vocals need better manual sync

Data Drain (Xandertrax) [?] - many missed and misrhythms, a cut would be nice, ending could be more fun

Death of a Dynasty (Vote4Nixon) [?] - sync needs to be much better, some missed rhythms in guitar and drums, m47+ stream goes to guitar?, m77 or so rhythms go to what?,

Decisive Battle (DarkZtar) [?] - overstepped, the high pitched guitar parts especially, m51 missed a yellow after the 24ths, go over every section that has 16ths and make sure they actually go to something, sections like m81 should be 12ths not 16ths,

Destined Marionette (behanjc) [+.] - some weird layering and possibly missed doubles

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+] - muchly improved

Document 13b (FFR Remix) (bluguerrilla) [#] even more awesome than before

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [+?] - the 16ths that you put to sticks are actually 24ths, if this is confusing I can show you what I mean

Empornium (dore) [+] - ell oh ell oh ell oh ell

Endless Dream (s0ulst0n3) [-] - holds, PR in doubles bad, ending stream goes to nothing, hand usage bad

Ezuora (DJAirWave) [?] - random yellow jumps?, m51-66 misrhythmed, free form stream lasts for too long, would be more fun if you stepped the secondary rhythmic synth

Falling Phase (badman7772) [?] - PR needs a lot of work (the doubles that go to drums are fine), some missed rhythms in the 8th notes

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0) [?] - misrhythms in intro synth, PR in patterns could be a lot better, sync to guitar could be better, random 12ths/24ths/etc go to nothing?,

Feldschlacht (behanjc) [+] - good balance in layering different instruments, good flow

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+.] - some of the stream in the first JS section could be better PR, other than that good

Fire Aura (kjwkjw) [?] - some of the triples go to nothing, random minijack, some PR issues in the jumps,

flames of the sky II (b-a-e-r & fluuk) [-] - bad stream patterns, bad PR in doubles section, overdoubled, OMG LONG

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [?] - jacks for no reason and misrhythms, needs better PR in 8th stream

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+] - interesting layering scheme, couple misrhythms like in m85 first red note,

Halloweenies (Flaming_Dingleberry) [?] - inconsistent double usage, inconsistent jack usage, ignored some 32nds that could be fun

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [-] - long boring breaks, inconsistent difficulty, bad sync, very very long

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?] - some 16ths go to nothing, missed rhythms throughout, weird double placement

Hero in a Dream (SulferDragon) [+?] - sync needs to be better, missed 16ths m34 to bass drum, other than that fine

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [-] - missed drum rhythms, lol 64ths dumb, permission?, weird cut, mixed hand jacks,

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [#] own file, kind of lol

I Wake Up Clueless (Ground_Breaker) [?] hands not FMO, 48ths wrong (actually 128ths but 64ths would work), manual sync needs to be better,

Inside the Fire (dore) [+?] - solo very hard compared to the rest of the file, 16th stream after solo could be harder (JS or just lots more jumps),

k8107 (T-rogdor) [-] - same as v1 but much worse

Kanon-Kanon (bmah) [+] - not overdoubled anymore

Kusharu Shrine (Skeleton-GotW) [?] - missed yellow notes throughout, weird double placement, inconsistent jack usage

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [?] - bpm way off, many missed rhythms, better layering choices

Lost in Mind (Silvuh) [+] - fun and easy, as usual atypical layering but it's good

Lullaby (customstuff) [-] - overlayered and incorrectly layered at parts, hands in non-FMO

Lunatic Moon OC Remix (Knoobish) [+?] - some rhythms feel wrong because they're not dominant, (13)(24) jumptrills aren't as fun as the others, some PR issues in slowdown part,

Meow! (customstuff) [?] - 12th jacks are a little much compared to the rest of the file, long trills in stream made no sense, end of trill to bass drum made no sense,

Momentary Life (Shashakiro) [+] - rly fun

moon_child -Go with the flow- (bmah) [+] - weird song with a fun file

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+] - fun and easy

Nigthfall (Azafreak) [?] - minijacks for no good reason, pattern choice for 32nds should be better, double placement mistakes, rhythm errors,

Pacsyndrome (bmah) [+] - much better

Phantom Ensemble (cut) (behanjc) [+] - lots of fun and very accurate, fun drums

Psychopotamia (ledwix) [+?] - doubles need better PR, could use a step after the last note to hold the piano

ReMotion Remixed (Xandertrax) [+.] - good layering, could use better PR in the gallops

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+] - not much to say

Sidology Episode 3 ( Apex Ultima) (Zap_Track) [?] - many misrhythms and missed rhythms, too much wrong to list it all, seems like you gave up halfway through, good effort though

Ska De Chocobo!! (behanjc) [+.] - layering scheme makes play awkward, sometimes seems incorrect with jumptrills,

Space Pirate (Vote4Nixon) [?] - overlayered with hands, non-FMO, rhythms to noise may be ok, jacks may be ok at this bpm but feel out of place

Spark's Theme (Skeleton-GotW) [+.] - minor PR errors throughout

Strangeprogram[Long] (s0ulst0n3) [-] - holds, loljacks, dump stream, a lot wrong with this file, like v1 but really bad, quit out

Summer Time Perfume (bmah) [+] - lots of fun but could be harder, lots of room to put jacks and more layering but really fun how it is

Tension Up System (r3v0lut10nm4st3r11) [-] - holds, expand 2->3, minijacks for no reason, layering could be better

The Dream (Serverkiller) [- -] - everything is wrong, quit out

Titan -The Superjail Mix- (Zap_Track) [?] - manual sync needs to be way better, many missed rhythms, weird double placement, maybe cut some of the middle boring stuff,

Velaciela (bmah & HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] - minijack at m20 no good, m43 missed rhythms, missed rhythms around m80 (drums),

Vertex Alpha (tj28) [-] - multiple difficulties, BNS, dumpstream, quit out

Violent Storm (thechild) [?] - intro off sync, PR needs to be much better in gallops etc, m42 on misrhythmed,

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.] - multiple charts, ok file but flow could be better

Yoshi's Castle (HammyMcSquirrel) [?] - weird double placement, intro offsync, missed rhythms, needs PR, very weird cut

{Big Boss} (Silvuh) [?] - many misrhythms, seemingly inconsistent jack usage, weird double placement, mixed 12ths and 16ths very awkward

{Big Boss} (Vote4Nixon) [+.] - m19-20 missed drum rhythms (like a total of 3 arrows), a couple PR errors in 12th section (two bass drum hits in a row stepped as gallop should be jack), very minor fixes

{Evolution} Out Stage (rushyrulz) [-] - wrong bpm, quit out

{Paranorma} v2 (CosmicRain) [-] - weird jack usage, missed rhythms, misrhythms, bad double placement, misrhythms, misrhythms, misrhythms

{Spacefall} (iluswirl) [-] - jacks for no reason, weird double placement, overdoubled, bad stream patterns, weird cut, lots wrong

{Spacefall} (Orange Dude) [?] - misrhythms, stream for no reason, could be a lot better, bad pattern choices for snare (123432),

{The Sewers} (CosmicRain) [-] - 24ths/32nds go to nothing (actually they go to the smearing sound but it really doesn't work), crazy 32nd jacks, misrhythms out the wazoo

**Tasselfoot** · 10-17-2008, 12:54 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]10/17/08[/size][/b]

[b][size=+3]The Queue[/size][/b]
A World of Piano - sc979
Church Bells - HighAndr0id & Classic_Rocker
Fake Jazz - behanjc
Fighting for Control - Kommisar[os]
Hellhounds On My Trail - behanjc
I hate the 80s - blu - such a dump...  but if jx is ok with it.
Lady's Cake - DarkbearX & Hammy
Leeroy Jenkins - Silver_Brian - i will likely hate myself tomorrow for queueing this
Memories - Sprite - going to queue this assuming the minor stuff still gets fixed; bit of sync, the 1 jack
Moonlight River - Silvuh
Ninja Lad - Silvuh - Same as Sprite's, queueing w/ the expectation of fixing the tiny stuff
3020 - blu and Cbr0
Piasolute - behanjc - 1 random note at the end?  placeholder?  can i remove?
Rain - Silvuh
Remember 15 Years Ago - behanjc - again...  1 note at the end?
Run through the stream of time - behanjc - cut maybe?
Silly Symphony - sc979 - cut?  green section?
Toxiferous Dystopia - TC_Halogen - cut some of the middle, please
Twilight Jewel - stargroup & Behan - maybe cut around 1500?
300 This is Sparta - hi19 - i really hate memes
A - hi19 - can fix PR if you want
Battle Squadron - hi19
Big Blue v2 - hi19 & Shash
Eye of the Tiger - hi19 - makes sense if you realize hi19 wants it to be a 3
PianoCore - hi19 - fix if you want.  fun file.
St Scarhand - hi19 - accepting under the assumption that you fix blu's stuff
FF3 Tower - hi19 - maybe fix jumps...  not a big deal.  Maybe not cut it though?  Or a longer cut?

[b][size=+2]Played by Tass but not Queue'd[/size][/b]
After Altair - too many jumps
Cynthia - was way offsync
Devour
Dreamin in the 80s - what jx said
Game boy fiend - MAMA vs Firestorm.  isn't fun for the song.
Gym Leader
Inside the fire - dore - i like the non layered vocals. definitely cut shortly after the solo...  assuming we're allowed to.  i forget.
Mega puzzle world - JS is definitely too intense for the song
Nomina Nuda Tenemus - i don't follow this at all.  i'm with jx.
Pullin Through - didn't play.  blu says it can be better still.
Rainspark - like the song
Super mario bros 2 overworld
Usatei - overstepped, especially after the vocal section.  + jx stuff
Versatile - opening JS overstepped
Wish reprise - lack of consistency makes it awkward, and really similar to v1.
World End's Yama Xanadu - overstepped
HI STUFF:
Big Boss - hands in non-FMO.  V4N's file
250bpm mega project - fix up issues, especially 32nds
300 v2
Bowser the shredder - great song.  fix up issues, especially JS
Caprice for Violin - long, sync, hands
Clash on the big bridge - didn't play.  permission issue with cut
CmR - what blu said.  boring as hell
Fierce Combat v2 - how is this different from v1?
Freedom dive - lol no
Kanto Gym leader - what blu said
Shash challenge - c'mon
Sly - way too similar to v1
Tell v3 - if we need a v3, dore already did a really nice one
Vi Sitter I Ventrilo v2 - what blu said.  then, w/o those, not that different from v1


[b][size=+2]Blu's Notes[/size][/b]
250bpm Mega Project (hi19hi19) [+.]
_
. More mashable pattern choice for rolls like 4312 instead of 4231
. Single 8th notes in m33+ not all on sync if they go to the sound I think they do
. m81+ maybe step crashes too


300 This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (hi19hi19) [+?]
_
. Parts where voice is ignored are less fun (could be layered with voice)
. m39-41 16th misrhythms
. m52, m54, don't hear the 16ths
. m59-60 PR

300 This is Sparta EXTENDED Mix (Silver_Brian) [+?]
-
. Inconsistent jack usage
. Inconsistent double placement m23-34 and m43-50 and m59-60 and m63+
. m57 missed a two notes (blue then yellow at the end of the measure)

300 v2 (hi19hi19) [+.]
_
. m43 trill changes late
. M43+ gallop PR
. better than v1 and harder

3020 (bluguerrilla & Coolboyrulez0) [#]
_
. Wow fun jacks

6 (SpammyMcSquirrel) [?]
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. Freeform stream not justified
. Some layering in the first half and outro would make the file much much better
. Many misrhythms in 16ths in the first half

A (hi19hi19) [+]
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. brb pad
. some minor PR issues, probably doesn't matter because of the difficulty

A World of Piano (sc979) [=]
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. Much better

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [-]
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. YNS
. PR
. Layering
. Missed rhythms
. brb KH cool song but could use a cut

After Altair (Silvuh) [+]
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. Easy, weird cut but I can understand it

Airport Infinitum - Robo-Andy's Theme (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. m13, m19, m21 2nd jump should be yellow
. jacks omg need ice brb
. But seriously the jacks don't fit the intensity of the song at all

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [+.]
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. PR needs a ton of work but could be ok because of the difficulty

Battle Squadron - Menu (Juno Reaktor Remix) (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. m24 feels wrong because of dominant synth
. PR issues in jumps like the end of m28
. Not great but relatively easy so...

Beloved Girl's Rondo (sc979) [+?]
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. The lack of layering makes the intro very boring
. Better pattern choices for 24ths as they're very hard compared to the rest of the file, 4321 or 4231 would be easier

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+.]
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. Overdoubled
. Other than that ok

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19 & Shashakiro) [+]
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. :p
. :d
. :b

Blue Betrayal (Coolboyrulez0) [?]
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. There are no 16ths anywhere in this song
. The stream before m77 should be all 3 note patterns
. Ignored many rhythms

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [>]
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. Not as good as Silvuh's

Bomb The Base v2 (Silver_Brian) [+.]
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. Some PR patterns might be nice (i.e. jacks to some of the synth)
. Meh double placement
.

Bonivital (Rednanaki) [?]
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.  So many misrhythms
.  Bad PR in intro and throughout
.  Weird double placement in intro (if not weird then you missed some if not many doubles)
.  Many missed sounds

Botu (akaFrOsTinG) [?]
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. Gets offsync midway through the simfile, bpm changes
. Weird double placement
. Ok PR but could use a going over

Bowser the Shredder (hi19hi19 & WTFBrandon) [+.]
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. bad ass-file
. minijack stream is awesome
. I didn't like the jumpjacks to the snare, trill that
. m51 missed a yellow note at the end
. PR not perfect but might be good enough

Canon in WHEE (RB_Quackies) [?]
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. Hands,not FMO
. 12th section overdone
. PR problems
. Misrhythms in second 32nd wall
. Pattern choice in first 32nd section

Canon in WHEE v2 (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Stream patterns (in the big stream part, not the snare part) bad PR
. 12th section overdone
. More could be done with this file

Caprice for Violin in B minor Theme and Variations (hi19hi19) [+]
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. lol
. sure
. whatever
. hands felt meh

Chaoz Fantasy (Silver_Brian) [+.]
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. Good enough PR
. Good enough double placement

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [+?]
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. Bad cutting place, might as well step the entire song (not too much longer past where you cut)
. m27+ some doubles in this section that don't belong
. PR ok

Chipscape (Gnr61) [?]
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. lol ok there has to be something else you can do with those bursts like make them only 4 notes long or something (I realize it's actually longer but jesus)
. m41 trill give me a break
. m71, m97 bad burst patter
. m91+ could be stream :p
.

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (flipsta_lombax & Silver_Brian) [?]
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. m39 and such 16ths go to nothing
. 8th note stream to piano had really bad PR
. Overall I feel more could be done with the song in terms of layering

Church Bell (-barista-) [-]
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. Still missing a ton of rhythms in the guitar solo
. Meh PR and jack usage
. Overall still needs a ton of work

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & Classic_Rocker) [+]
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. Don't think it's FMO but the hands would be easy enough to take out
. The polyrhythm looks awkward but is mashable enough, would be worse if you tried to layer it
. Overall I liked it

Clash on the Big Bridge (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Song is cut and part of the permissions were that you weren't allowed to cut their songs
. Missed rhythms in the intro (didn't step all of the guitar)
. Could have stepped more drums
. Overall meh even for an easy file

CmR (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Missed notes in the intro
. Could be half as long but meh, easy file
.

Crazy Batch (Loucst) [-]
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. Bad bad non-PR stream patterns
. Weird double placement
. Misrhythms and missed or left out rhythms that would be fun

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] (DarkZtar) [-]
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. Still missing rhythms in the intro JS section that would be fun like 24ths at the end of m11
. Could use more jacks in some parts
. Bad PR in doubles during JS sections
. Missed notes in minijackstream part
. Bad sync to vocals
. m42 pattern
. Don't use stops to sync the vocals, use colored notes
. JS/vocal doesn't work very well
. m45 isn't 24ths, listen closer
. PS I like this song, fix the simfile
. The 64ths stepped as 32nds might be ok but 64ths might also be ok, as long as you make them easy

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [+?]
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. Missed rhythms
. Weird double placement
. Ending pretty boring but it's the song's fault really
. Didn't like the pattern choice for freeform stream
. Does this simfile need a v2?

Cynthia (dood gone krazee) [+?]
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. PR in doubles not great overall
. Probably not FMO for hands
. Overall fairly overstepped
. Better than the one below

Cynthia (hi19hi19 & Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?]
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. Poor double placement during JS bursts (lacking consistency)
. Jacks feel way out of place compared to what this simfile is overall
. 2nd half overstreamed (meaning stream where there shouldn't be stream)
. Very end piano stream should be stepped

Damage Control (Mahjix) [-]
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. Can't have both jacks and zero PR
. Really bad sync, one BPM should do this song
. JS section way over the difficulty of the rest of the simfile

Death of Morality (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. My poor left hand
. Minor PR issues in piano section
. Layering and pattern choice boring but correct
. This is dumb

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. m102 jack, maybe change end of that measure from (34)213(24)142to (24)312(34)124
. Kind of a ridiculous song

Die Barney Die (Coolgamer) [-]
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. Horrible sync
. Bad double placement
. Missed rhythms
. Wow, just wow this song... wow.

Disconnected HaZaRD (Rednanaki) [?]
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. Misrhythms
. 105 might be a better choice for the bpm
. Jack inconsistency
. Poor stream patterns
. Missed rhythms
. Overall a meh file

Distorted Reality v2 (hi19hi19) [?]
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. Bad PR in intro (singles)
. Missed sounds in intro
. Trills don't fit, should be 23234 or variations
. Many steps go to nothing
. Why not do 64th rolls if you're doing 32nd trills?
. m68 and the like, 16th swung
. Overall overdoubled

dr. mario- fever gameboy rmx (blindreper1179) [-]
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. Incorrect bpm
. Horrible Patterns
. m10 really really bad

Dreamin' In The 80's (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. rly old file, thought it was in the queue but I never remembered to send it back in

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [?]
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. Only stepped about half of the 24ths
. Jacky-hand patterns, should sacrifice PR for non-jacky patterns
. Feels overdoubled in some sections
. m70 16ths to very soft sound may be ok
. ffs this is better than the one in game |D]:<

E-Rosion (akaFrOsTinG) [-]
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. Holds
. Overall terrible
. Quit out

Eclipse (azafreak) [?]
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. Loops don't make great stepfiles
. Misrhythms
. Poor double placement

Elf Pirate (Redsky139) [?]
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. In intro some single notes to nothing
. m32 misplaced rhythm in 32nds, should be 48ths
. m35 and m36 and later incorrect rhythms again, recheck all of them on .5x or so

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. m36 bad
. double placement m37-40 bad (overall double placement not great
. overall difficulty still uneven but meh

Fake Jazz (behanjc) [+]
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. Fun and correct

Falling Phase (i like it) [-]
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. Horrible PR
. Misrhythms in intro
. Boring
. Is this a cut? If so it's a bad cut.

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0 + _.Spitfire._) [+?]
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. The rhythms to the very quiet synth aren't justified, just step the main one
. m80 24ths fit better
. Some rhythms in the slowdown section very quiet but I guess it's ok

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+?]
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. m10 and the like 16ths should go 321 not 231
. m17 could go (34)21 instead of (24)31 for consistency
. m35 and the like missed 16ths to piano (it's quiet but not that quiet)
. m54 one too many 32nds
. m59-66 boring, could step more of the drums or something
. m67 48ths go to nothing and you missed 32nds that you stepped earlier in this section
. m90 should end with an 8th jack
. m95 should go (12)34 not (34)21
. Doubles possibly too much layering for the outro
. I like this song too, hence the nitpicking

Fierce Combat v2 (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Some missed notes to whatever woodwind that is
. lol 6 notes less than the one in game, coincidentally, you missed exactly 6 notes wtg
. Better PR than Sulfer's but that's about the only difference

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+]
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. Missed an inconsequential 32nd somewhere in there and the PR at the very end could be slightly better but meh, overall really fun

Fighting Of The Spirit (Rednanaki) [?]
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. m37-38 missed rhythms
. lots of background guitar that you half-stepped
. lots more drums could be stepped
. why half bpm for solo?
. m171-172 almost entirely wrong
. The whole ending after that is bad

Fish Hell (megamon88) [?]
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. m21-22 missed 32nd rhythms in guitar
. overall ignored lots of possibly fun drums
. m29 no 24ths
. m35 and throughout entire piano part missed rhythms
. Bad PR in many sections
. Weird layering overall

For FFR v2 (hi19hi19 & Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [?]
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. Messed up the intro rhythms
. First part of JS section overstreamed
. m43 many notes to nothing
. Much of m39-45 has very bad PR
. Chain section boring
. m70-85 most rhythms not completely correct, listen closer
. Ending stream PR or something, bad pattern choices

FREEDOM DiVE (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. m5 missed a 32nd
. m45 missed a jumptrill
. PR in slowdown section could be much better
. overall mostly correct, a few things to fix, i like to repeat myself, i like to repeat myself

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
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. Did you change anything or even read my notes? >:|
. Some 32nds would be nice, like jx said last time
. Overall not much to fix but some additions would make this file 10x better
. Maybe instead of MAMA like stream do it on 134 instead of 234, make the down arrow the BD note

Go!Go! Broadapeal (shadow 1800) [-]
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. Wrong bpm
. Stream for no reason
. Overdoubled
. Too many misrhythms to count
. Quit out

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. Needs a note after the last one as a 'hold'
. The understepped 4th note jump part seems out of place in the stepping style and doesn't lead to a more intense part, just step all the noises there that you had been stepping
. Switching PR schemes was a little annoying but I see why you did it
. Really liked the 16th rhythm pattern choices
. Some of the layering seemed like a bit much but it's ok

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+?]
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. -52.3 gap means a minute of no steps in FFR, you have to actually cut the song
. m57, m93 missed doubles
. still very, very boring and long
. I hate this song but it had no bearing on my judgement : P

Head Banger (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Missed rhythms in the double/triple sections
. Overlayered
. Boring

Hellhounds On My Trail (behanjc) [+.]
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. Section after solo a little meh but ok because the solo is so intense
. Some of the layering schemes were nonintuitive but also ok
. Loved the solo

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [?]
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. Wow overstepped but whatever
. Missed lots of doubles if you're going full throttle with this layering scheme
. Dumb js could be fun stream
. Missed rhythms and misrhythms in trumpet section

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. More powerful than ever, thanks npv :p

Identity (woker-X) [?]
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. BNS
. Jacks for no good reason
. Pretty sure some of those 16ths to snare are swung
. 24th trill should be a 32nd roll
. This song needs a much better simfile
. lol jumptrills

Inside The Fire (Silver_Brian) [+?]
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. Solo still terrible
. Some of the layering better than dore's but overall PR was distractingly bad

Inside the Fire (dore) [+.]
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. Overall better than silver_brian's
. The layering in the first half of the sim is pretty dull, specifically the singles to vocals with no other noises stepped
. Stepping some of the drums in the first half might be nice

Iron Echoes (U84) [-]
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. Offsync
. Misrhythms
. Many PR and layering mistakes
. Those are 32nds not 64ths
. Long and wrong quit out

Jethro And Vash At The Fair OC ReMix (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. bpm should be 69.6666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666666... (double that if you're a stickler but this is prettier)
. PR and layering could be way better
. Some misrhythms

Jetstream! (silvercomet1525) [-]
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. This song begs to be cut
. It also begs for JS with relevant stream patterns
. Chains are boring and not PR correct
. Lots of PR and pattern choice needs work
. Inconsistent jack usage
. Overall needs a lot of work

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+.]
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. Doubt this is FMO, not as hard as, say, The Lunatic Princess
. That said, it's overlayered, the doubles to the guitar in some sections is too much
. Other than that it's really fun

Kanto Gym Leader Remix (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Missed notes in the yellow note parts, should be a 16th rhythm, not solo yellow notes but could be ok how it is
. Overall fairly meh

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [+]
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. Silvuh?

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix) (Silver_Brian) [+]
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. Muchly improved choice of stream and rhythm placement
. Double placement still strange but I liked it, had good emphasis

leeroy jenkins fun times mix (Coolgamer) [?]
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. Lots of stuff wrong
. Not nearly as good as S_B's

LOLOMGWTFROFLBBQ (WTFBrandon) [-]
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. Dumb JS
. no thank you

Lonly Lonly (sc979) [+?]
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. Really really really really really boring, you're going to have to be at least a little inventive
. Other than the fact that I'd rather stab myself in the eye than play this again, it was ok

Mega Puzzle World (dag12) [?]
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. This would be 1000x better if there were very little JS in this sim, as it is it's overstepped
. Missed some cool background rhythms like the beginning of m28, they don't need to be stepped but they'd be cool
. Also, the JS is very awkward and doesn't fit the intensity of the song

Megamix'd (customstuff) [?]
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. Step the entire intro for coolness
. Terrible PR and layering
. 24th trills?
. I'm not supposed to judge on music quality
. I'm not supposed to judge on music quality
. I'm not supposed to judge on music quality

Memories (Sprite-) [+]
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. Ok so the PR is nonstandard but ok because otherwise it would be boring as hell
. The one jack is probably ok because it fits
. This is a nice and easy file, doesn't need to be oversynced

Mitsudomoe-motion-triangular fight (Frozen Beat & I love gabba) [?]
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. This song would be awesome if you cut it at 109 seconds because the next 100 measures makes me cry, especially the ending
. Ok, that said, this sim is almost good and has a lot of potential
. Some of the rhythms to guitar are wrong and the sync needs to be paid attention to
. Didn't like the hand usage, not FMO
. Some of the jack usage is ok, some is not, depends on how pronounced the sound is (to the snare is ok, otherwise it's no good)
. Step the beginning of the song
. Missed rhythms in the intro that aren't guitar
. The vocals need to be layered much better
. Many misrhythms during the vocal sections
. The reason I'm tearing it apart is because this song has a lot of potential that you aren't taking advantage of

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+.]
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. World of Dreams v2
. Ok so this is kinda boring but is a good easy file (also kind of long but this would be really hard to cut I think)

Mr. Nothing's OP (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?]
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. This is a weird simfile
. I didn't like the PR in the doubles (specifically the (12) that went to 3 different noises in a row)
. I also didn't like the choice of what to step in the intro, felt very awkward
. It's really hard to get away with stepping bass, added to the awkwardness of the file
. The whole thing is awkward, is Mr. Nothing awkward?
. Awkward doesn't really fit the song because it's so fluid *shrug*

NES-Style Eye of the Tiger (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Really really boring layering choice, needs a more fun stepfile
. PR ok

Ninja Lad (Silvuh) [+?]
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. Parts like m59 missing a red note to synth
. Also the stream that you do to synth and other sounds at the same time like m62 feels awkward because it's a continuous pattern to a different noises, isolated patterns would be better (the stream just feels forced)
. JS patterns like m67 are awkward with the (13) in it, (12) or (34) depending on what you chose to do to the PR would be better
. Overall I really liked this file just a bunch of small things

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. O.o.0 (that's right, 3)

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [+?]
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. m21-22 PR and layering to Piano needs to be better
. m24 and m44 should be 64ths
. Instead of gallops you could have done all stream if you wanted but it might be fun as it is, or you could just do it as stream in the second half or something, something to ramp up the layering style and pattern choices so it's not boring

Onyx(SpammymcSquirrel) [?]
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. 8th note stream section really boring, could be much better
. Overall strange double placement
. Also, overall poor choice in what sounds to step, almost entirely all the same type of pattern to drums -> boring

Perfect Insanity (Silver_Brian) [?]
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. The solo still makes me cry with how bad the PR is
. The double placement overall seems very self-inconsistent
. Jumptrills to snare is really meh
. Ending 3 jumps should all be in a row
. Overall I feel this sim has a lot of room for improvement

PianoCore (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. m34 should be a 24th note jumptrill not a 16th (it's wrong, deal with it :p)
. m10 2 24th bursts should be constant stream in this pattern or a variation 432321
. Ending notes should alternate left right because the crash comes out of alternating speakers

Piasolute (behanjc) [+]
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. Great sync job
. Some of the PR and double placement is weird but ok because it felt really good

Please Wake Up (foilman8805) [+?]
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. m9 and m17 first note should be a double
. Check PR overall, many small mistakes
. Sync goes off around m17
. m33-34 misses notes
. Overall the PR needs a little work but the sync is the big thing

Plunging_Hornets (lxDestinyxl) [-]
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. Missed a billion rhythms throughout
. Double the bpm
. Bad layering style
. Misrhythms all over the place
. For the love of God cut this song

Power v2 (DJAirWave) [--]
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. Terrible
. Ignored all of the drums
. PR and layering out the window
. Really really bad

Pulling Through (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. Hindsight I think I could make this better

Raiden II Level 5 (badman7772) [-]
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. Many misrhythms and patterns that go to nothing
. Many missed rhythms
. Many PR mistakes
. Good effort but this needs a ton of work

Rain (Silvuh) [+]
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. Great sync
. Good PR
. Good layering
. What did I hear about this just being one part of a series?

Rainspark (Silver_Brian) [?]
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. PR overall is really distracting because of how linear the progression is
. The intro is completely incorrect rhythmically
. Overall the file is very meh, pretty boring and the bad PR made it unpleasent to play

Rave7 (hi19hi19) [?]
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. 32nd stream is actually 48th stream...so 24th stream would fit better but I'd want to kill myself but that's ok
. I think your bpm is off
. Ok so yeah the 'JS' section you actually missed a lot of sounds and invented rhythms to noises which just isn't cool at this bpm
. lol um cut lol
. Overall major steaming pile

Remember 15 Years Ago...(behanjc) [+]
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. Really cool file

RIP (GG_Guru) [-]
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. Holds
. BPM wrong

Robot Funk - Epoch's Theme (hi19hi19) [-]
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. So many misrhythms and missed rhythms
. Overdoubled
. This is a great song with a horrible stepfile, try again

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+?]
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. m59 don't like the (13)(24) jumptrill because it's to such a background sound at 1.0x
. Wow ok this song need a cut bigtime like maybe at 175 seconds and even that seems long
. This sim could use more mirroring of your copypasta otherwise my left hand is going to kill you after it passes out from exhaustion

Rocket Punch! (cal607) [?]
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. Hands have no place in this file
. Rhythmically this file is mostly correct but the PR is terrible
. You missed a ton of rhythms in the drums that would be really fun to play
. Woah 16ths that go to nothing and don't fit the difficulty of the file at all
. This sim could use a lot of work but I think if you change a ton of stuff it could be a decent file

Run Forever (customstuff) [?]
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. m33 missed drums and it's not 24ths it's 32nds (slow it down and play closer attention) also don't do a trill that's too hard compared to the rest of the file
. Overall this is a bad song for a stepfile
. Horrible PR and boring layering
. Trill section is really meh

Run Through The Stream of Time (behanjc) [+.]
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. Looong but meh
. Missed some double bass 16ths in the second half but it's ok
. Other than that ok

Shash Challenge (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. 32nd jack is lol but then again...
. lol ending
. hi19 legacy

Silly Symphony (sc979) [+]
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. Much better, fun stream, overall good

Sly (Remastered) (hi19hi19) [+]
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. m39 bass drum alternates speaker if you want to use that trick here too

St. Scarhand (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Jumptrill to snare is dumb, regular trill would be better
. m38 I hear no jack and later jacks to the bass drum don't really make sense as double bass is much more like a trill and also it's weird to be musically technical to drums when the rest of the file is basically not very technical
. m44 misplaced jack
. m58 it's really jarring to have JS here because you're in the middle of a solo, so it just feels wrong to play
. Other than that it's a cool file, just has some annoying things in it

Starwolf (blindreper1179) [-]
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. Holds

Super Mario Bros 2 Overworld (megamon88) [+?]
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. The ending bass/drum part is so omg boring and it looks like you put little to no effort in it
. Tell me this song is a joke
. The manual sync seems good
. Overall very meh because the song is basically a cover but that didn't affect my judging as much as the ending did

Tamara When I Close My Eyes ONI (XDark_PrinceX) [-]
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. HA HA HA HA

Tell v3 (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Stepping those squee noises is really dumb
. Overall this file is quite superfluous

The Final Hour (silvercomet1525) [+?]
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. The transition in m38 (and a similar transition later) is very sharp, there has to be a better way to do it
. Overall even though it's all freeform there are some PR mistakes that I didn't like, in one section you used (13) for the same noise like 5 times in a row
.  I didn't like the big blank space out of nowhere, step something there

The Flashbulb (hi19hi19) [-]
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. ha ha funny ok next

This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (Coolgamer) [?]
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. Uh noteskin
. Not as good as the other two

Tower (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Wierd double placement, will take 5 minutes to fix

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [+.]
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. You and Xandertrax should trade sims for it is lol
. Missed some doubles to snare and I can't tell if you did it on purpose all of the time
. Long but overall nice and inventive pattern choices

Twilight Jewel (stargroup100 + behanjc) [+]
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. Nice sync, very fun

Twin Chevron Action Flash Remix (GG_Guru) [-]
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. Holds

Usatei (dag12) [+]
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. lol

Versatile (U84) [?]
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. Missed tons of rhythms
. Inconsistent jack usage
. Bad PR
. Last note after end of song
. Not as good as Xandertrax's

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. JS section a little much compared to the rest of the file but ok
. Other than that ok
.

Vi Sitter I Ventrilo Och Spelar DotA v2 (hi19hi19) [?]
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. mp3 quality ouch ouch
. Some vocals offsync
. m46-47 horrible trill into jack doesn't go at all
. Rolls and 24th trill harder than the rest of the file by far

WG-Naruto Theme-Sea. 4 (cyrx900) [-]
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. You have to actually cut the song or you get 45 seconds of silence in FFR :p
. Really bad PR and double placement
. Missed tons of rhythms in the guitar and piano

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.]
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. Freeform patterns pretty fun
. Better PR than before
. Still a lot like the v1 *shrug*

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [+.]
_
. Much nicer now that it's half as long
. Still overstepped imo but that's what people seem to want out of this song *shrug*

X Distant (Clipso) [?]
_
. Needs to be more even in difficulty with more layering, lots of long boring sections
. Needs more freeform stream to snare instead of trills
. PR needs to be more consistent if you're going to use it

{Big Boss} (hi19hi19) [+?]
_
. Not as good as v4n's
. Hands, not FMO
. Boring stepping style

{Magnetize} (championanwar) [?]
_
. BPM off
. Bad Cut
. Tass easy lol


[b][size=+2]JX's Notes[/size][/b]
A World of Piano [sc979] [+. / 7] (9)
good sync, PR could be better, not sure what was changed from the previous one though

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [- / 1.5]
offsync, YNS

After Altair (Silvuh) [+? / 5]
not too bad but it fails to be a truly easy file due to melody 8th jumps

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, should have some 16ths/rhythms for drums

Bass Kick (DJAirWave) [? / 2]
meh, extremely boring

Beloved Girl's Rondo [sc979] [+? / 5.5]
I liked the no jump concept, but PR is could be better and some 24th could have easier patterns considering the difficulty of other parts

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [? / 4.5]
the style is inconsistent overall, also repetitive at parts.

Blue Betrayal (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 2]
16ths don't exist, need songcut

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
32nd sprit in m1 should be before red note, 48ths should be 32nds on m33
rhythms in m37- are just meh. layering/PR could be better

Bomb The Base v2 (Silver_Brian) [? / 2.5]
PR could be a lot better, jacks/jumps are kind of random

Bonivital - Rednanaki [? / 2]
beginning should be layered properly, also a lot of misrhythms in the file

Botu (akaFrOsTinG) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, random jumps, ending is a bit off

Canon in WHEE (RB_Quackies) [? / 3]
32nds are quite useless, need more rhythms for bass drums.
putting jumps all melody notes isn't cool

Chaoz Fantasy (Silver_Brian) [? / 3]
some parts are quite inconsistent (for example between m8 and m9), need to layer

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [? / 4.5]
Climax part is decently layered, but other parts are quite inconsistent/missing some fun rhythms

Chipscape (Gnr61) [+? / 5.5]
interesting concept. but I don't think you need to overdouble just to make it harder, 96ths are meh

Chocolate Rain (DJS Remix) (flipsta_lombax & Silver_Brian) [? / 3]
inconsistent, most of short 16ths should start earlier

Church Bell (-barista-) [? / 2]
another one is better, offsync

Church Bells (HighAndr0id & Classic_Rocker) [+. / 7] (11)
good sync and fun, has some PR issue though

Crazy Batch (Loucst) [? / 3]
some rhythms are incorrect, PR could be better

Crowdpleaser [Drop the Mic Mix] (DarkZtar) [? / 4]
BPM off a bit, m6/35/45/etc should be 32nd, m11- some 32nds could be added
minijacks are weird

Crying Soul v2 (Breakdown16) [? / 4.5]
I don't remember how v1 is too well, but is v2 really needed for this?
technically this isn't too bad but m44- pretty boring, could follow with hihats or something.

Cynthia (dood gone krazee) [+. / 6.5] (11)
felt some jumps/hands aren't needed in both technical/player's point of view tho
overall, a bit better than another one

Damage Control (Mahjix) [? / 3.5]
pretty inconsistent layering overall (steps get vacant suddenly on some parts), PR could be better.

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
rhythms on m19, missing some jumps for snares
m35-42, m53-74, m95- have pretty inconsistent layering and some awkward patterns for playing
better 32nd pattern switch on m93 (could be 6284 instead of 6482)

Die Barney Die (Coolgamer) [- / 0.5]
totally offsync

Disconnected HaZaRD (Rednanaki) [? / 3.5]
there're some misrhythms, and missing some fun rhythms.
ending 12ths aren't needed.

dr. mario- fever gameboy rmx(blindreper1179) [? / 3]
PR could be better, rhythms on m10?

Dreamin' In The 80's (bluguerrilla) [+? / 6]
missing hihats on m2/4/6, PR for piano could be better, on m50 32nd could be used for piano

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [+? / 5.5]
some 16ths (m5, 9, etc) should be 24ths, also those sounds (taiko rim or wood block) are added inconsistently
PR on m33- could be better, jumps/jacks after m41 are pretty awkward
better than v1 overall though

Eclipse (azafreak) [? / 2]
misrhythms, inconsistent

Elf Pirate (Redsky139) [? / 2]
misrhythms, arrows on silence, layering inconsistency

E-Rosion (akaFrOsTinG) [- / 0]
multi diff/hold

Fake Jazz (behanjc) [+. / 6.5]
interesting song/file
inconsistent on some parts, missing notes for piano on m24-25 though

Falling Phase (i like it) [- / 1]
YNS/misrhythms

Far East Allnight (Coolboyrulez0 + _.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
tiny misrhythms for melody synth
overall layering could be better (especially m23-)

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better, some rhythms for drums are missed

Fighting for Control (Kommisar[os]) [+ / 7] (10)
good

Fighting Of The Spirit - Rednanaki [? / 3.5]
many misrhythms, inconsistent overall

Fish Hell (megamon88) [+? / 5.5]
want more 16ths/24ths/32nd or whatever rhythms for guitar/snare for fun
missing notes on m60/71
some parts lack consistency (m51, m65, m78-, etc)
BPM change is pointless, songcut is preferable if possible, overall decent

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [? / 5]
PR could be better(esp beginning), patterns on m9-15..
what arrows are going with isn't too fun for me overall

Go!Go! Broadapeal (shadow 1800) [- / 1.5]
offsync, 4th on blue(BNS), many rhythms are incorrect

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
m59-, 64-, 71- missing drums, m89-92 is underdone for climax

Hardcore Bass (cyrx900) [+? / 5.5]
overdouble on m28/30, technically almost ok but pretty long/repetitive.
songcut is preferable

Hellhounds On My Trail (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (11)
parts like m11- want some 16ths of kick drums, rhythms on m114-115?

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [? / 5]
PR could be better, missing a few jumps for melody, 16ths for drums are inconsistent.
It's also pretty similar to HST's sm chart.

I Hate the 80's (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6.5] (12)
not liking 32nds on m16 but ok

Identity (woker-X) [? / 2.5]
blue note on 4th, weird rhythms/jump placement

Inside The Fire (Silver_Brian) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent jump placement at parts, misrhythms in a few parts
want a songcut

Inside the Fire (dore) [+? / 6]
technically better than another one. 
m54 is off, want more layering for some vocal part. 
want a songcut as well

Iron Echoes (U84) [? / 3]
jumpstreams don't fit the music very well, also similar parts are stepped inconsistently
has many misrhythms

Jetstream! (silvercomet1525) [? / 4.5]
stream patterns could be more PR, 8th jumps in the stream are just weird/inconsistent
want a songcut

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [? / 4]
beginning color notes should be 24ths, hands aren't needed

Lady's Cake (DarkbearX & HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 5]
rhythms for hihats are added inconsistently. others are fine

Leeroy Jenkins (fun times mix) (Silver_Brian) [? / 4.5]
some voice? parts could be layered more, PR could be better

leeroy jenkins fun times mix (Coolgamer) [? / 2.5]
rhythms are incorrect in many parts

LOLOMGWTFROFLBBQ (WTFBrandon) [- / 1]
lol k

Lonly Lonly (sc979) [+? / 5.5]
rhythms on m17, 33, 49, 65, etc?
layering on some parts you use 48th/color notes could be better.

Mega Puzzle World (dag12) [+. / 6.5] (9)
PR could be better but ok

Megamix'd (customstuff) [? / 3.5]
m93- 24ths don't exist
sync on m110-120 could be better

Memories (Sprite-) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better, a few sync/rhythm errors, good concept for an easy file tho

Mitsudomoe-motion-triangular fight (Frozen Beat & I love gabba) [? / 3]
quite inconsistent, hand placement, some 16ths are used where they shouldn't be
song cut is preferable

Moonlight River (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (7)
technical piano stuff

Mr. Nothing's OP (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 5.5]
missing jumps for some kick drums?, m65-72 is understepped compared to previous part, m80 is overdone
a bit repetitive, song cut is better

Ninja Lad (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
last 2 8ths should be up arrows, need to cut the last 16th on m17/67

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [? / 3]
o **** putting jumps on all BD & snare? jacks are lol
I understand the way of stepping but sry it's not endurable

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [? / 5]
m44 is 64th, felt rhythms are incorrect at some parts
also a bit repetitive

Onyx(SpammymcSquirrel) [? / 3.5]
some rhythms are incorrect, jump placement could be better

{Magnetize} (championanwar) [- / 0.5]
extremely boring

6(SpammyMcSquirrel) [? / 2.5]
rhythms are boring(especially streams)/incorrect overall

300 This is Sparta EXTENDED Mix (Silver_Brian) [? / 5]
a bit repetitive, inconsistent jump placement at parts, another one is better

3020 (bluguerrilla & Coolboyrulez0) [+. / 6.5] (10)
PR could be better on some parts tho

Perfect Insanity (Silver_Brian) [? / 5]
felt layering for drums isn't consistent, aka random jump placement
simple vocal following would be a boring method

Piasolute (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (8)
good sync/PR

Please Wake Up (foilman8805) [+? / 5.5]
not bad for an easy piano file but missing some jumps, PR could be better at parts

Plunging_Hornets_(lxDestinyxl) [? / 5]
enjoyable but a lot of misrhythms (esp in bursts), jumps are a bit inconsistent

Power v2 (DJAirWave) [? / 2.5]
missing 16ths, need more layering

Pullin Through (bluguerrilla) [+? / 6]
triplet jack after m41 could be one note + minijack
32nds in m77 are 48ths, also weird ending burst (in both rhythm/pattern)

Raiden II Level 5 (badman7772) [? / 3]
some 16ths are going with nothing, and missing notes at parts
PR (8th jacks placement) could be better

Rain (Silvuh) [+ / 7.5] (7)
good sync, ok PR, nice easy file

Rainspark (Silver_Brian) [+. / 6] (6)
PR/consistency could be better tho

Remember 15 Years Ago...(behanjc) [+ / 7] (8)
good

RIP (GG_Guru) [- / 0]
freeze

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 6.5]
repetitive semi-long left jacks are definitely unacceptable for the playability.
otherwise technically good.

Rocket Punch! (cal607) [? / 2.5]
BPM should be halved, rhythms could be better, hands aren't needed

Run Forever (customstuff) [? / 2.5]
24ths are wrong, poor 16th patterns, could be less boring

Run Through The Stream of Time (behanjc) [+ / 7] (10)
m147-m149 could be layered but ok

Silly Symphony [sc979] [+. / 6.5] (10)
PR could be better (ex. parts like m32/40, 24ths on m77-), rhythms on color note(m106-)?
hopefully songcut

Starwolf (blindreper1179) [- / 0]
freeze

Super Mario Bros 2 Overworld (megamon88) [+. / 6] (7)
sync issue, gap late, all 12th rhythms are a bit off, color notes are a bit better but still. 
semi-accepting since most FFR people won't care. also I won't say about PR on this file

Tamara When I Close My Eyes ONI (XDark_PrinceX) [-- / 0]
holy **** what kind of art is it

The Final Hour (silvercomet1525) [? / 4.5]
PR could be better, some parts are inconsistent

This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (Coolgamer) [? / 2.5]
inconsistent rhythms/weird note colors, other ones are better

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [+ / 7] (11)
song is a bit long/repetitive but technically file is accurate

Twilight Jewel (stargroup100 + behanjc) [+. / 7] (10)
beginning is cool but song is a bit repetitive, some patterns on m110 are weird

Twin Chevron Action Flash Remix (GG_Guru) [- / 0]
freeze

Usatei (dag12) [+. / 6.5] (11)
felt minijack/32nd placement is a bit inconsistent, this is interesting anyway.

Versatile (U84) [? / 3]
overall bad patterns, another one is better

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
8th parts could be layered better (boring or inconsistent), the rest is fine.

WG-Naruto Theme-Sea. 4 (cyrx900) [- / 0]
multi difficulty

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 5]
how about putting some minijacks for melody part? also want more consistency.

World End's Yama Xanadu (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 5.5]
most steps make sense technically but some parts are overlayered to be fun, also repetitive.

X Distant (Clipso) [? / 2]
PR could be better, there're some parts that should be layered 

{Big Boss} (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (11)
issues in rhythms in m20/m48, layering on some orchestra hit parts but I liked the concept of this file.

250bpm Mega Project (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
consistent layering for bassdrum is needed on this song IMO
you can use 64th rolls instead of 32nd pattern change on the bursts

300 This is Sparta EXTENDED mix (hi19hi19) [+ / 6.5] (6)
it's surprisingly kind for every style, best one

300 v2 (hi19hi19) [? / 6]
notable difference: beginning/ending, ending 300bpm streams
I don't think you need to use 24ths/48ths in the beginning part(could sync better by using 192nds though)
a bit more consistent than v1 but not too different overall

A (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
not bad but a bit repetitive, and PR could be better at parts

Airport Infinitum - Robo-Andy's Theme (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
steps are basically simple melody following. 
but it's kinda joke file, long jacks are annoying rather than fun.

Battle Squadron - Menu (Juno Reaktor Remix) (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
felt a bit inconsistent

Big Blue v2 (hi19hi19 & Shashakiro) [+? / 5.5]
not saying too much layering on this difficulty but notes for snares are inconsistent 
otherwise ok, it seems people want a v2 for this

Bowser the Shredder (hi19hi19 & WTFBrandon) [+. / 6.5] (10)
sync in accelerating/slowdown parts could be better, jacks at the end of m16/43 are weird
semi-accepting because it's still fun

Canon in WHEE v2 (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
bass drums on m33/74 could be stepped, also didn't like the way of stepping in m50-57

Caprice for Violin in B minor Theme and Variations (hi19hi19) [? / 4]
totally need to fix up syncing, BPM error in m48-66, m78-94(maybe offset), etc
PR is okay, but some parts (like runningmen section) don't fit well.

Clash on the Big Bridge (hi19hi19) [+. / 6] (5)
ok easy file

CmR (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
weird song termination, gap off, some minijacks aren't needed IMO(technically ok)

Cynthia (hi19hi19 & Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [> / 6.5]
some jump placement and jacks
pretty close, but another one is a bit better

Death of Morality (hi19hi19) [? / 2]
gayest patterns ever

Distorted Reality v2 (hi19hi19) [? / 4.5]
repetitiveness of 32nds trills made me sick

Endless Maze (hi19hi19) [? / 4.5]
m17- you could put jumps on bass drums, in m45-48 32nds should be 24ths

Fierce Combat v2 (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (5)
fine

For FFR v2 (hi19hi19 & Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 6] 
some 16th rhythms are weird/similar to v1 (m1- missing notes, m30, m70- inconsistent)

FREEDOM DiVE (hi19hi19) [+? / 5]
If people want dumpstream files like TOML on FFR it's ok
I doubt 32nds are needed though

Head Banger (hi19hi19) [- / 2]
FFR won't allow dumpy hand usage like this so not bothering

Jethro And Vash At The Fair OC ReMix (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]


Kanto Gym Leader Remix (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better overall, especially m73-74

NES-Style Eye of the Tiger (hi19hi19) [+. / 5.5] (3)
PR could be better

PianoCore (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (10)
missing 24ths on m16/64 (maybe intentionally)

Rave7 (hi19hi19) [? / 4.5]
meh 200bpm 32nd streams for kinda stupid sounds and inconsistent. 
also some rhythms are incorrect

Robot Funk - Epoch's Theme (hi19hi19) [? / 4]
32nds in m4/28/36/44 are offsync, extra notes on m6/10/45

Shash Challenge (hi19hi19) [+. / 6] (12)
on parts like m7 (in between streams), jumps aren't needed
maybe needs a few pattern fixes, otherwise technically ok

Sly (Remastered) (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
no issue for steps but basically similar to ingame Sly

St. Scarhand (hi19hi19) [+ / 7.5] (12)
it's almost what I've expected for this song

Tell v3 (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
jacks for bass drums and synths should be separated (I mean 5 note jacks are gay)
32nds are just random

The Flashbulb (hi19hi19) [- / 1]
lol

Tower (hi19hi19) [+. / 6] (2)
ok

Vi Sitter I Ventrilo Och Spelar DotA v2 (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (9)
some parts could be layered to avoid inconsistency but ok
better than widget ones

**Tasselfoot** · 12-1-2008, 12:53 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[size=+3][b]12/01/08[/b][/size]

[size=+3][b]The Queue[/b][/size]
After Altair - Silvuh - seems fine
Bloodmeat - dore - approving, but want to see the 2 weird hand sections changed to match opening/closing
bmv.578 - dag12 - approving on condition of jx/blu tweaks
Card House Dreamer - Silvuh
Dead and Direct - Patashu
Einstein Rosen Bridge - dore - accepting under condition of fixes
Etude in E Major - Xandertrax - i hear what blu is saying, but FBOs are needed
Felys - Vote4Nixon
Forgotten Planet - Patashu
Gym Leader - Xandertrax - approved on condition of tweaks
He's a Radical Rat - behanjc 
Hey, Ladies - dore - PA much?
Illumination of the Sky - Patashu - agree w/ jx
Kanon Medley - classic_rocker - accepted, but fix up blu stuff
Keep in Mind - behanjc - behan poops great simfiles
Lilium - Spitfire - accepted, fix bpm up
Master Maid - Kommisar
Nebula - Patashu
Night and Day - ElectricWerewolf - not a huge fan of the layering, especially early in the file.  2 runningmen do feel out of place w/ the file.  Also, pretty darn long.
Nomina Nuda Tenemus - bluguerrilla - this file sucks balls
RATO - dood gone krazee - seems just a wee bit overdone, but if we're going ot have one like this, this "song" is as good as any.
Shining Swird - behanjc - does feel overlayered.  the 32nd triplets in the stream are rough
Sirius - bejanjc 
Snake riddim - jokim - going to approve this.  if you want, fix up the jumps between ~400-550c.  those seem to be the biggest issue of the file.
Starwolf - Silvuh - I feel like this is overlayered throughout, but if jx/blu are ok w/ it, then so be it.
Tears of Remorse - Xandertrax - noooo...  I got 1 perf on this.
Techno Green Greens - ElectricWerewolf - accepting, but I think ending mini-jacks should be changed.  ps - yay Kirby!
The Lion's Dance - Silvuh - approved, but make blu's fixes
Thrash - Patashu - fun 8bit
We wish you a merry xmas - behanjc - it's good.  but for an xmas file, would have rather seen it shorter and not as layered.  oh well.


[size=+2][b]Played by Tass, Not Queue'd[/b][/size]
BF2014 - maybe cut last 200 or so notes?
Chaoz Factory - fix up per notes
Choppastyle - felt most of it overstepped.  could be a fun easier song w/ cut.
DeVour - fix up, says you talked to blu already?
didj z - fix pr
eclipse luna - what judges said
freedom - what judges said
get out mah driveway - didn't test as per +. from blu and 4 from jx
inside the fire - the solo.  doesn't fit w/ rest of file.  tone it down a bit, at least off of left hand bias
largiloquent ... - some jacks are retarded
machine rhythm - didn't test as per +. from blu and 4.5 from jx
Naruto whatever - what judges said
Night bird - needs a cut.  also, what jx said.  beginning is fun.
omnishred - what judges said
push - agree w/ judges
quasar - agree w/ judges.  also, not a fan of how file is stepped at all.  especially everything from jumptrill to end.
{flying Away} - didn't test as per blah blah blah
RedPill - i can't believe i played this whole file.  i hate you.  whorli does not approve either.
Refraction - repetitive and long
rock rock rock (both spitfile and bmah) - do a collab!
r-type game over - no.  die.
sepia v2 - holy crap batman!  it's v1 all over again!
slow down - need some kind of cut.  also, blu, while i do hate a file like this...  had a AAA until ~150 notes from the end.
sly remastered - silvuh - 1. this is still sly, just better audio...  so v2.  2. not nearly different enough for a v2.
game boy fiend - i'm still convinced this file sucks.  maybe just bad song choice?


[b][size=+2]JX's notes[/size][/b]
260 (trumaestro) [? / 5]
overall repetitive, songcut would be fine. also hands are overused (I can understand though).

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [- / 1]
offsync at parts, many rhythms are wrong, random patterns

After Altair (Silvuh) [? / 4.5]
easy sim, but a bit inconsistent/weird for me

ahhhohhh (WTFBrandon) [? / 3.5]
missing some swing rhythms, PR could be better

Aqueous Transgression (XxHaseoDragonxX) [- / 1]
YNS, need to follow drums on some parts

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [? / 2]
missing detailed rhythms for drums, PR could be better

Beaker Sunset v2 (hi19hi19) [+? / 6]
BPM off (faster than the music)
awkward pattern on m15 and some right-handed biased 64ths, misrhythm on m40/56
the rest is fine

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [? / 4.5]
didn't get some 16th rhythms (sorta inaudible), 8th + jumps parts are overall boring for me

Blood and Black Chocolate (cedolad) [- / 0]
full of bs notes, quit out

Bloodmeat [dore] [+. / 6.5] (11)
overall ok file, some hands are annoying tho
G-solo rhythms are poor but who cares

Blue Sky(GG_Guru) [- / 0]
blank

Blue-Violet (Orange Dude) [- / 0]
wrong bpm, no need for v2

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
v1 is better, no need for v2

bmv.578 (dag12) [+. / 6.5] (11)
jacks are pitch relevant, some 32nds/hands could be add on the climax though

Broken AirRow (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
end of m12/16 could be more consistent, m74- a bit overdoubled

Bu Xing (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
long 32nd rolls for timpani aren't needed IMO, hands are overused
cut repetitive parts maybe

Card House Dreamer (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
ok I guess

CastleCrashers - Creature at the Mill (hi19hi19) [+? / 6.5]
hands on an easy file, not a bad usage and fun though.

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
interesting file. some PR for piano could be improved.
some parts are empty (m48, 72, etc), m81-86 16th notes for bass drums could be added

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [? / 5]
ok, but it could be more consistent overall

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [? / 5]
48ths are put of place and have bad patterns.
in m30-37 putting jumps for only bass drum is better.

Choppastyle (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (11)
ok overall, in some parts I felt there're better sounds to step/layering could be better

Cloud Control - Bynary Fission [? / 3]
at least needs a song cut if you step this as an easy file, pretty boring.
32nds grace notes, and some 24ths should be 16ths.

Confined(EnR&Gibson63) [? / 5]
overjumped/inconsistent jump placement. could be enjoyable if fixed

Congrats you pass (-KIDTHONG-) [? / 2.5]
yellow note on 4th, gap off, hands, rhythms on last arrows, etc

crescent_moon (stavie33) [? / 3.5]
many misrhythms, also felt there're better sounds to pick in many parts

Dead and Direct (Patashu) [+ / 8] (11)
seems rhythms are accurate, unique and fun

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
maybe need to remove some jumps and make the patterns rolly in 32nd sections

Didj Z (robertsona) [+. / 6.5] (10)
rhythms are complicated and seem mostly correct.. that's all about this.

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent layering, there're a few misrhythms

Eclipse (Luna) (Puppet) [+. / 6.5] (12)
technically ok, but felt some long jacks/32nd trills are a bit too much for the song or other parts

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut [dore] [+? / 6.5]
semi-long 64th rolls could be watered down (and actual rhythms are faster than 64th)
jack patterns in m75/79/86/88/89/91
32nd trill on m65 has extra note
otherwise, cool file

Etude for a dragon (championanwar) [? / 5]
felt minijacks are placed randomly, misrhythm in m36, missing some 32nds at the middle

Etude in E Major (Xandertrax) [+. / 6.5] (2)
could be improved a bit technically, but wanted easy files like this

Euphorium(akaFrOsTinG) [? / 2]
offsync, inconsistent/ some rhythms don't fit the song

Experiment (championanwar) [? / 4.5]
rhythms are unique and fine, need better layering

explode (Shadow 1800) [? / 2.5]
there're many misrhythms (most of 16ths, actually)

Extreme Dishwasher Race (SpammyMcSquirrel) [? / 3.5]
jack placement, need to follow drum part more accurately

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+. / 6] (9)
gap late (also there's still room for color note syncing), weird layering on m25-33 just for me?

Forgotten Planet (Patashu) [+. / 6] (6)
PR could be better at parts, silence at the middle is lol

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [? / 5]
PR is ok at parts but could be better, this song has so many repetitive parts imo

Funky Disco Typhoon (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
inconsistency on m17/21, felt a bit boring to play for me overall

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [? / 5]
there're some misrhythms (esp 48ths / 64ths), some hands/jacks are quite unnecessary
enjoyable at parts for a VS file though

Get Out Mah Driveway (psychozerosk8er) [? / 4]
a bit inconsistent overall, also felt a bit boring (maybe because of the song).

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+. / 6] (9)
felt it lacks the layer for bass drum inconsistently (mainly 4ths)
maybe an ok file

Hand Throw [dore] [? / 4.5]
well ok this is a thing I can't pass. 
technically ok in most parts, but still patterns are beyond retarded 
(especially hand-jacks and super long jacks)

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+? / 5.5]
24ths are 32nds on m1-2, some minijack placements are annoying, or inconsistent

Hayden's OP (t-rogdor) [? / 3]
some misrhythms, patterns(32nds, PR), inconsistent layering

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, some 24ths are out of place, songcut maybe

He's a Radical Rat (behanjc) [+ / 8.5] (12)
this is great.
tiny things for perfection, missing notes on m37/49, rhythms of some grace notes/m80-84 could be more accurate

Hey, Ladies [dore] [+. / 6] (7)
kinda weird vocal following, but ok

Highway Star (i love you) [? / 4]
rhythms are ok but instruments for notes are picked inconsistently, especially parts like m25-

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [? / 5]
ok sync(gap late tho) and vocal follow, felt notes for drum parts are a bit inconsistent

Illumination of the Sky (Patashu) [+. / 7] (11)
overall fun, except it's a bit repetitive and has a few annoying patterns

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+? / 6]
in m5-6 32nds could be added for drums, some vocal/guitar parts w/o layering are boring compared to other parts
patterns are nice imo

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
I felt 16th placement is weird overall (should go with drum part I guess).

Jenovad Trance (Benny6p12) [- / 1.5]
gap early, rhythms aren't correct, weird one-hand trill, boring/long overall

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (Classic_Rocker) [+ / 7] (10)
this is decent

Keep in Mind (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
rhythms are accurate, patterns in m69?

komorebi(#Number) [? / 3.5]
PR could be better, jump placement

La Campanella(who_cares973) [+? / 7]
nice sync, ok pitch relevancy, some parts could be fixed though
some jumps should be singles with grace notes, misrhythm on m49
m22-24, m32-36 should have 16ths, missing notes on m37, m46
jack pattern on m44/45, jumps are misplaced on m50, some jumps should be there on m52-
pattern could be better on m60-, etc

Lament of Mechanical Heart (hi19hi19) [? / 5]
kinda unique, but felt some parts are inconsistent/weird for me

Largiloquent Dithyramb [dore] [+? / 6]
funny concept, but offsync at parts/some jacks are retarded

Last Battle (Shadow 1800) [? / 2]
bad pattern choice/inconsistent layering  

Lilium (Strings & Piano Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+. / 6] (2)
a bit boring but technically good for a beginner file

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [? / 3.5]
has misrhythms at parts, consistency/patterns could be better,

Machine Rhythm (Starfalcon176) [? / 4.5]
hand placement(basically not needed), rhythms for bursts

Master Maid (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 6.5] (10)
nothing special but decent sharpnel file

Naruto - Iron Dance and the White-Eyed Maiden (hi19hi19) [+? / 5.5]
PR could be better (ex. m21-28 16th patterns like 28028 should be 28082. also 24th rolls)
others are fine I guess

Nebula (Patashu) [+. / 6.5] (8)
song is repetitive/a bit inconsistent due to that, but ok overall

Night And Day (ElectricWerewolf) [+ / 7.5] (11)
on m50 32nd runningman is weird, overall enjoyable file

Night Bird (behanjc) [+. / 6.5] (9)
felt empty at parts but ok

Nightfall (cedolad) [? / 2.5]
some rhythms are wrong, patterns should be improved a lot overall

Now you're gone (XDark_PrinceX) [- / 0]
offsync

Nu-Island (FreezinIce) [- / 1]
patterns (esp minijacks for no reason), ONS/etc, many misrhythms

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [? / 5]
m24/44 should be 64ths, m57- needs climax theory, others are ok

Omnishred (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (10)
m6- missing some jacks, m10- some jack patterns are overdone
missing some rhythms for drums that would add some fun factors
overall enjoyable due to song choice though

Onyx(SpammymcSquirrel) [? / 4.5]
rhythms on m20, m46-48, etc
jump placement is weird at parts for me

Out There (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4]
m12/31/49 - grace notes should be ahead of 4th
PR could be better, underlayered/inconsistent overall

Out There stepped by LJRoX [? / 2]
a lot of bs color notes/misrhythms, PR could be better

Push (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
the way of stepping might be ok but both song and steps are boring/repetitive

Quasar (Angelic Blue Mix) (bmah) [? / 5]
felt long, some parts are boring, song cut is preferable somehow
some 32nd bursts could be added

{Flying Away} (hi19hi19) [? / 4]
could see what 8th trills are going with but they make little sense
the concept of 8th stream is ok  but song could be shorter

Raging Terror (samurai7694) [+? / 5.5]
enjoyable jumpstream file, most hands aren't needed, jumps/16th rhythms could be more accurate

Rainy Day - Starfalcon176 [? / 5]
inconsistent layering at parts, rhythms on m35-36, etc (missing 24ths for drums)
song has potential though

RedPill (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (10)
annoying but funny concept. songcut is preferable though

Refraction (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 5]
technically acceptable but felt song is way too repetitive

Reluctantly Accepting Temporary Overexhaustion (dood gone krazee) [+. / 7] (12)
m17-19 16ths missed, 24ths on m25-27 aren't exact rhythms, etc
overall accurate anyway, I'd accept this concept just for once

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+? / 5.5]
Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (bmah) [+? / 5.5]

both files are similar, just spit's has more jacks and shorter. 
both files has some retarded patterns.. yea jacks/minijacks are technically correct 
but getting pretty annoying due to the overall patterns and repetitiveness.

R-Type Game Over (hi19hi19) [- / 1]

Sepia v2 (hi19hi19) [+. / 6.5] (8)
need to check the difference from v1 (i don't remember)

Shining Sword (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
sick file

Sirius-(behanjc) [+ / 8] (10)
good sync/rhythm/patterns

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
could be layered better imo, also felt a bit long

Sly (Remastered) (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (9)
Sly (Remastered) (Vote4Nixon) [> / 6]
Silvuh's - has a bit better consistency so yea
difficulty is close to ingame version of sly though

Snake riddim (jokim) [+? / 5.5]
not bad, layering/jump placement could be better tho

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [? / 3]
imo steps should go with drums mainly (so inconsistent)

Starwolf (rushyrulz) [? / 2.5]
Starwolf (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (10)
rush's - has many misrhythms, wrong bpm, not queueworthy
silvuh's - 24ths on m13/41/76?

Symphonic Shredding(Azafreak) [? / 3]
need better PR, more accurate rhythms

Taketori (Mr.Nothing) [? / 2]
misrhythms/bad sync, random jump placement and patterns

Tears of Remorse (Xandertrax) [+. / 6] (2)
syncing could be better at parts but ok

Techno Green Greens (ElectricWerewolf) [+. / 6.5] (8)
missing notes on m43. technically almost ok

Temple (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
sync isn't bad but both song and steps are pretty obscure (due to echo and stuff) and felt weird

Ten Minutes With Tass (customstuff) [- / 0]
had to quit out sry

Teraholic (Zap_Track) [? / 3.5]
m9 should be 24ths, also some color notes are inaccurate
some burst patterns/jump placement could be better

The Lion's Dance (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (7)
good PR, could be a bit more consistent but ok considering the dificulty

The Nintendo Concerto Part 1 (darph fluffy) [? / 4.5]
there're some misrhythms. PR/patterns could be better at parts

The Stupid Piano (i love you) [? / 3.5]
eh the title says everything. technically, layering/PR could be better

Thrash (Patashu) [+ / 8] (11)
pretty fun file

To luv me I for u (t-rogdor and samurai7694) [? / 3]
use bpm changes and red/blue/yellow notes at the beginning (plus offsync)
quad placement is kinda bad, misrhythms at parts

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [= / 7] (11)
just an updated ver

Tribe Attacker (Zap_Track) [? / 4]
rhythms could be more accurate overall, want better layering (steps should go with bass drums more)

Trip Machine FAITH [eastsidenan09] [? / 4.5]
PR could be better, could use some jacks for melody and drums, kinda dull without those 
rhythms (for drums) are ok at parts, some are inconsistent

Trisection V2 (DarkZtar) [- / 0]
no file

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) - Bynary Fission [? / 4]
inconsistent layering/jump placement could be better
some minijacks could be used

Twin Chevron Action Flash(remix)(GG_Guru) [- / 0]
offsync

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom (stavie33) [? / 2]
didn't review seriously because the music is pretty inaudible.. better sound please
plus, offsync

Usatei (dag12) [- / 0]
DQ

Versatile (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
32nds parts are basically well done
really don't like the transition between m16 and m17 (felt it's against the musical intensity).
layering on m33- could be better, 8th parts are overall boring, jacks could be used

We wish you a merry Christmas (Jazzy Groove) (behanjc) [+ / 7.5] (10)
xmas file oh well

White Skies (Club Mix) (Professor Raine) [? / 2.5]
rhythms should be more accurate overall (16ths, 32nds)
most hands are out of place, some pattern choices are bad

Windmill Jazz (robertsona) [+? / 5.5]
decent easy file but PR/rhythms could be better at parts

WOWWOW 220 (dag12) [+? / 5.5]
misrhythms, especially 24ths for fast organ could be 48ths

X (akaFrOsTinG) [? / 2.5]
a lot of fun rhythms are missed, patterns should be better

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon & bluguerrilla) [? / 5]
PR could be better (parts like m9-, not sufficient yet)
need a first note on m29/77, m49-56 is boring, m29-32, m77-80 should go with hihat
also, there're are some underlayered parts

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6.5] (12)
some bursts are evil as always, but it got decently fun as a hard file


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260 (trumaestro) [+?]
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. For the short rhythms and rolls 1324 is fine but the first long one should be either 1234 or 4321 or a spin if you'd really like
. You missed rhythms in the intro (more 32nds)
. The manually synced notes could be better, 64ths probably
. Don't think this is FMO, it might be more fun if it were stepped a little more sparingly (less overlayered)
. The JS repeating pattern is probably good enough, would be more fun with (12)/(34) jumps

Above The Rising Falls (XxHaseoDragonxX) [?]
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. Ok this file is loads better than the last time you submitted it but it still has some things that need fixing
. Even the the sound might crest in volume near a yellow note you should still step it at a red note (like in the intro)
. The piano part needs much better PR
. The 16th pattern near the end is a more complicated set of colored notes but 16ths might be ok for this difficulty
. After this you missed 16th rhythms that could be fun
. Very long but love the song
. The consistency in jump usage could be much better too, keep working!

After Altair (Silvuh) [+]
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. MISRHYTHMS AND LAYERED WRONG j/k easy file, pretty fun and short

ahhhohhh (WTFBrandon) [???]
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. I hate you.  Isn't one WoW meme song (or whatever this is) enough? D:<
. Misrhythms (16ths that should be 24ths)
. Manual sync ok
. Blank ending?
. Layering very weird

Aqueous Transgression (XxHaseoDragonxX) [?]
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. Yellow Note Syndrome, fix the gap, copy and paste the notes
. Again you missed rhythms (sounded like 32nds, just listen carefully)
. Work on the layering and PR more.

Arrival to Earth (Orange Dude) [?]
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. Wow the PR was really terrible, fix it
. The layering was good enough for an easy file

Beaker Sunset v2 (hi19hi19) [?]
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. m40 colored notes wrong, should be 134.3.2 all 32nds (or some variation of that pattern, whatever) if that makes sense
. m48 why not step the stuff after the fast stuff?
. PR so terrible
. m56 should be 32nds into 48ths
. m68 should be 16ths not 12ths >|
. Offsync at the end

BF2014 (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+]
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. Don't know if you actually took out some doubles but it seems like you did, overall I think I like it better than before

Blood and Black Chocolate (cedolad) [-]
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. It's all misrhythms
 
Bloodmeat (dore) [+]
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. 15/16 messes me up jesus
. You kids and your crazy RB

Blue Sky (GG_Guru) [!]
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. Blank

Blue-Violet (Orange Dude) [-]
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. Wrong BPM

Blue-Violet (Vote4Nixon) [>]
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. Still not as good as Silvuh's

bmv.578 (dag12) [+.]
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. Would be cool to push some of those BDs in there like Kit did in Dazzling Destiny
. Really fun jacks, overall good job on a complex song (btw it's OSTER Project)

Broken AirRow (hi19hi19) [?]
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. Boring/Repetative and overstepped...

Bu Xing (hi19hi19) [?]
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. ****ing arrow ****storm make an easier file this is wack so says i

Card House Dreamer (Silvuh) [+.]
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. Check some of the double placement to vocals (lack of in some of the chorus really) but overall good choice of patterns to keep it easy

CastleCrashers - Creature at the Mill (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Missed some of the repetative 16ths and put in some that I can't hear no matter how hard I try
. Also hands in non-FMO  

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
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. This style of stepping feels choppy for the song but is overall good
. People might not like this file but whatever

Chaoz Impact (DarkZtar) [?]
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. Step the entire song, that was a terrible point to stop stepping
. Overall you messed up the layering, missed some doubles, put in doubles where there shouldn't be any
. 16th patterns (JS) were way over the top in terms of difficulty compared to the rest of the file

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [?]
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. 48ths should be 32nds (64ths really but pls no)
. Too many unjustified jacks in the 12th section
. Many misrhythms in the section after
. I believe you can turn this into a good file
. m58 bad bad bad generally don't put steps to wooshing noises, it just doesn't work

Choppastyle (ElectricWerewolf) [+.]
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. Woo fun
. Missed some rhythms in the intro but it's ok
. Overlayered in one section near the end, like m107-wherever
. Overall well placed jacks
. Didn't like the rhythmic feeling of m91-99 or so, understepping this section a bit would be better (leaving out the bass drum or something), this is more of a 'if you want to' comment, long comment is long

Cloud Control - Bynary Fission [?]
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. 32nds were wrong
. PR was dong and needs to be much better
. Overall this song needs a more fun and more challenging file (even for an easierish file this wasn't good enough)
. Missed many rhythms in the strings, too

Confined(EnR&Gibson63) [?]
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. No minijacks if you're doing freeform or trills to BD already, it makes no sense
. Also, no permission
. Intro JS made me lol, so much harder than the rest of the sim
. Overall PR in doubles not very good

Congrats you pass (-KIDTHONG-) [-]
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. YNS
. Misrhythms rampant
. Quad at end lol no
. Ending 4 notes should be 3 notes and no they're not 48ths

crescent_moon (stavie33) [-]
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. So many misrhythms in this I'm not even going to try, which is a shame because this song is cool
. Seriously this simfile needs so much work it's not even funny

Dead and Direct (Patashu) [+]
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. m63 is messed up rhythmically (misplaced 64ths), might want to check other rhythms if it actually matters to you
. Missed some bass in the quiet part
. Ending drags on a bit
. Most of this is non-issue, this file is super fun 

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. Talked to you about it, it's still a ****storm of arrows in terms of layering so you're going to try something different
 
Didj PVC (robertsona) [+?]
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. Ok so the PR is atrocious, just need to pay more attention to the sounds, not telling you to do jacks or anything but match the patterns to the kinds of noises, etc
. Overall, you got most of the rhythms right, missed one m36 and possibly in other places, go through it again at .4x
. m44 don't like that 16th minijack but I guess it's ok

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [+?]
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. m43 that last yellow note goes to nothing
. m72 should not be 48ths, it should be a jump then a step 1 16th later on each one except the last, which should be 2 16ths later
. m76 should be 24ths not 48ths
. m78 no 48ths
. m79 no 64ths
. m82 missed a 16th note after the JS
. m88 and m101 32nds or 64ths (4 of them) would be better than 48ths
. m102 roll starts too early
. m108-109 no 64ths
. m120-121 no 48ths
. Fade out too long

Eclipse (Luna) (Puppet aka gnr61 it's too late now ha ha ha) [+?]
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. m30 trill is right but weird with the layering, maybe the melody should take precidence here
. m38 and m52 why a trill when all the other patterns are rolls?
. Fade out the stepping better
. m41-43 boring as hell

Einstein Rosen Bridge Cut (dore) [+]
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. I like the 64ths in there, they're not too hard

Etude for a dragon (championanwar) [-]
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. Not different enough and also missed rhythms (32nds) and v2 would have to have PR
. overall it's not a terrible file but not different enough (and the v1 isn't bad either so...)

Etude in E Major (Xandertrax) [+]
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. Good for an easy file (I'd prefer both 'hands' stepped but I think it's ok how it is)
 
Euphorium (akaFrOsTinG) [?]
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. Ok this simfile is a good start but it needs a ton of work
. The layering (jump placement mostly) is almost all inconsistent or wrong
. Some of the rhythms in the intro were forced
. Jack placement has to be consistent in the layering

Experiment (championanwar) [+?]
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. m49+ you missed some 32nds and 16ths, m49 should go 1...(24)...3...(12)...1...(24).123..1..4, if that doesn't make sense AIM me
. the lack of PR is fine i think as it plays pretty well

explode (Shadow 1800) [-]
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. Too many misrhythms to list
. Needs way better PR and layering

Extreme Dishwasher Race (SpammyMcSquirrel) [?]
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. Tons of misrhythms, too many to list again
. Some PR choices are awkward (too many jumps)
. Overall I believe if you got some help with this sim or worked on it a ton more it could be a really cool file
. Errors in the manual sync at the end, slow it down more and check

Felys (Vote4Nixon) [+]
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. Some people might not like that you didn't step the BD in some parts but I thought it played well
. Overall this is really really fun

Forgotten Planet (Patashu) [+]
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. The only thing I'd suggest is make the 12th minitrills two-handed for a-little-easier-ness but overall really fun easier file

Freedom (Mr.Nothing) [+.]
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. The layering could have been more interesting like, first single notes, then 8th note trills, then 8th note JS, etc, more of a gradient but overall I think it's ok
. Is this is a cut or does it just end like that?

Funky Disco Typhoon (bmah) [+?]
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. m9 (14)2341 should be (14).341 and the similar patterns later should be adjusted as well
. m35 JS (even though it's right) feels wrong to play, I'd suggest taking out the single 8th notes and just stepping the jumps and single yellows
. The jacks feel out of place compared to the difficulty and layering style
. Overall I feel like this file could be much better even though there are few 'mistakes'

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon & bluguerrilla) [+]
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. Overall I find the stream and JS much nicer now that it's more spread out visually
. I'm convinced that stepping the 32nds would ruin the strict layering of this file

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [?]
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. Overall overstepped, plays terrible
. Lots of the 64ths that you stepped should go unstepped
. The jacks felt out of place compared to the rest of the file
. omg cut it, it's painfully long
. Also, overall this sim feels half-finished, like parts are good and other parts are crap, needs much more polishing

Get Out Mah Driveway (psychozerosk8er drunk mode) [+.]
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. lol have you played this file sober?
. The 'hard' part plays well but the rest of the file isn't as good as that part meaning the rest of the file needs better layering
. Then again, it's pretty easy so it might be ok, plays well at least
. wut up bitch you in mah driveway around these parts we do things my way

Gym Leader (RBY) (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. m42 missed BD yellow note at the end of the measure
. bb in 2 months pokemans
. missed some synth 8th notes in some parts, listen carefully

Hand Throw (dore) [???]
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. I bet one person can pass this in sm and no one would ever FC this in FFR
. I don't think I could pass it in FFR
. This file is kinda hard
. But the layering and PR were ok so I should + it right? ... ... ...

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+?]
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. 48ths rolls feel like too much and don't play well
. Why did you do manual sync at the end when you are using ddreamstudio? sync them with bpm changes, it's easy right?
. Feels overstepped, without jacks it would be better
. Overall really fun just a bit much for the song maybe

Hayden's OP (t-rogdor) [--]
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. Not only did you do a terrible job stepping this but you didn't step the wall
. I claim this song will never be in FFR, ever

Heaven Rd. 2 (Ng mix) (kjwkjw) [?]
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. m35 not 24ths, 32nds, same mistake near the end too
. m36 echo patterns should be 16ths
. m37+ missed tons of 32nds like the ones you stepped, listen to the synth closely
. Ending offsync
. Ending also boring before the blue notes at the end
. PR generally shoddy, make it not shoddy, make it good

He's a Radical Rat (behanjc) [++] <-- seriously
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. Yeah, this is one of the funnest files I've ever played
. Awesome song too

Hey, Ladies (dore) [+]
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. Skill Token: Be rude to every woman you meet to unlock this token!
. lol McFlurry
. Some of the not-manual sync to vocals isn't perfect but it's not that noticeable so whatever
. Damn, this song is so amazing

Highway Star (i love you) [?]
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. Most of the 16th patterns need both PR and rhythms fixed as there are many many mistakes
. Missed many jumps throughout the file
. Get some help with this file, it's a cool song

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [?]
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. Sync needs to be 10x better (it's off in many places), get someone to help you use ddreamstudio to sync this
. Take out that last jump
. Overall the file plays pretty well but a lot of the rhythms feel off because of the sync, can't really judge it well till the sync is fixed

Illumination of the Sky (Patashu) [+]
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. Fun and simple file, nothing fancy

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+]
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. I like the vocal-jumped ending, great progression in layering now

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [?]
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. The rhythmic choices didn't play well in the intro and right after the intro
. Felt overstepped in many parts
. Some misrhythms in the 16ths, hard to explain here
. This sim could be a lot better

Jenovad Trance (Benny6p12) [?]
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. Some boring pattern choices in the 8th note stream (like the really long 123432 pattern)
. That long right-handed trill should be a two-handed trill
. In the end of m59 and all of m60 lots of the red and blue notes should be yellow, slow down the song and listen, this happens a few times throughout the file
. You should cut this song at like... 175 seconds in
. This seem needs a lot of improvement but it could be a really fun file if you get it right

Kanon Medley ~Metal Wings~ (Classic_Rocker) [+.]
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. The PR could use improvement overall (esp.in the JS, just thinking of the jumps here, the patterns were fun)
. Last 3 notes [23(14)] would be cooler as (14)(23)(14)
. Overall this is 'acceptable' but the PR needs some polishing (shouldn't take too long, PR wasn't _really_ bad, just lots of little mistakes), really fun simfile

Keep in Mind (behanjc) [+]
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. Jesus... Overall great.

komorebi(#Number) [?]
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. BPM should be 200 the entire time (would be better as 100, select all, compress x2)
. Overall this file would be much more enjoyable with really good PR and no jumps
. Should step the ending guitar
. I kind of like it as an easier file but if you want you could layer the two guitars somehow but you don't have to
. Get someone to help you with this file

La Campanella(who_cares973) [+?]
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. Ok so this file is pretty good but it needs some work
. You left a lot unstepped, some solo jumps that should be JS, some 3-note patterns (jump-step-step) that should be JS as well
. Sometimes you seemed to get lazy with the double placement and PR, fix it
. I'm not being specific because this stuff is all over the file
. lol that trill
. Check the sync, there was YNS in there, maybe check the sheet music to make sure you've got the tempo right for the time
. Don't be afraid to use hands

Lament of Mechanical Heart (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. m12 missed a yellow note near the end (to that airy sound...)
. Ok overall this file has tons of missed and misrhythms, recheck it all

Largiloquent Dithyramb (dore) [+]
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. Some of the sync felt late in parts but I think it was because of the band not being able to play as tightly because this song is nuts... So, the sync may be ok
. Damn 200 bpm jacks are hard...
. Kawaii desu desu desu~~~~~~~~~~~

Last Battle (Shadow 1800) [--]
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. Terrible file, you'd have to do it over completely
. Like, seriously, it offended me >: |

Lilium (Strings & Piano Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+]
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. Make bpm either 1/2 or 1/4 that (1/4 will introduce some BNS but you could fix it)
. P.S. easy file, good enough PR

Loot Burn Rape Kill Repeat (Not Available) [+?]
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. m27 no 24ths, just a 343(12) all 12ths
. Once the intense part starts you _need_ to step that guitar (the 24ths)
. Other than that it's pretty tight, just do some double checks overall on the PR and jump placement and it'll be awesome : )

Machine Rhythm (Starfalcon176) [+.]
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. m30 the doubles should start on a blue note
. Ok the hands and quads are neat but I'm not sure it's FMO
. Overall this is a really cool file in that it's a meld of technicalness and pad file stuff, if you know what I mean

Master Maid (Kommisar[os]) [+]
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. m40 should be an orange then green note (but a later green note than you had) (also later when that happens again)
. Overall a different but good way to step a sharpnel song, I think

Naruto - Iron Dance and the White-Eyed Maiden (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Some of those 24ths are wrong but it doesn't _really_ matter
. lolnaruto, easy but whatever not a 3 ha ha ha

Nebula (Patashu) [+]
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. Weird, it's just like Monstrous Turtles but slightly easier
. Overall really fun and a good reflection of the song
. PR seemed a bit shoddy in places but it doesn't matter (probably just seemed so because of the layering style, felt right so whatever)

Night And Day (ElectricWerewolf) [+]
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. m94 missed some 32nds to BD
. Thank you for not stepping all of the 32nds, the ones you did step were super-fun
. Probably your funnest (heh) file

Night Bird (behanjc) [+.]
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. m116 red note at beginning of stream doesn't feel right (better to not step drums at all in this section)
. Overall I think it might be more fun if you step some more of the double bass with some index patterns (at least in the climax part before the slower part)
. Also, rly fun file guy

Nightfall (cedolad) [-]
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. Bad PR, Bad rhythms, overall needs a ton of improvement

Nomina Nuda Tenemus (bluguerrilla) [#]
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. Wow so much easier now! I may even be able to FC this in FFR now x100!

Now you're gone (XDark_PrinceX) [-]
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. ha ha ha 480 BPM, this is all so wrong sorry ctrl+r

Nu-Island (FreezinIce) [-]
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. Multiple charts but one is blank but still >: |
. Gap wrong, hence tons of orange notes, fix the sync, then we'll talk

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [?]
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. Slowdown section needs better jump placement (missed some piano) and better PR
. 48ths should be 64ths
. Might be good to incorporate more piano in the broken JS parts

Omnishred (hi19hi19) [?]
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. m6 and m8 missed guitar jacks
. left out some drums that could be fun 24th rolls
. Missed some jumps in m46+
. Didn't step differently at the climax of the song so it felt really empty there
. Overall I feel this could a better simfile
. Parts felt offsync, maybe slight bpm change when it goes to 4/4?

Onyx (SpammymcSquirrel) [+?]
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. BNS >: |
. Overall I think this is better than it was last time but still needs work in the section where you have mostly 8th notes, a few jumps there to that heavy synth

Out There (Coolboyrulez0) [?]
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. The PR is wack.  That's right, wack.  Fix it, mensch.
. Some of the rhythms need to be fixed, recheck them.
. You missed some grace notes that you were stepping in the beginning and then stopped.
. Might be cool if you stepped more of the 24ths not as just 3-note rolls but as fun index-stream or something.  Just something more interesting.
. Might also want to consider doing a little more layering as well

Out There (LJRoX) [-]
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. Not 32nds, 24ths, so many misrhythms D:
. Too many jumps wow
. Not as good as CBR0's

Push (Vote4Nixon) [+]
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. Cool concept, intro felt long
. Would it be possible to make the outro exactly the same steps as the intro just reversed?

Quasar (Angelic Blue Mix) (bmah) [+.]
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. Would be good if you cut it at 178.6 seconds
. Overall I liked the progression in layering, the jumptrill might be a bit much but I know you like to use that kind, maybe (12)(34) instead?
. Overall the broken stream is fine even though it's really constant stream but broken is more fun
. Lol homage

R-Type Game Over (hi19hi19) [+]
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. lol short FMO

Raging Terror (samurai7694) [?]
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. Way too layered, especially during the guitar solo, should just step guitar with PR patterns
. Dynamic BPM needs better sync
. Last note way too long off, gets boring

Rainy Day (Starfalcon176) [+?]
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. The cut seemed a bit strange but it might be ok, haven't heard the whole song
. Missed some rhythms (24ths) to drums in the middle
. The one-handed minitrills might be a bit much, make them 13, 23, or 24 minitrills
. Other than that this is a neat file but needs a bit of work

RedPill (hi19hi19) [-]
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. 22 seconds of note-silence. really?
. hahahahahahahahahahah no
. ilyhi19 but really boringest file ever

Refraction (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+.]
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. Pretty good I guess, kinda droning but that's more the song's fault
. Not sure about some of those rhythms check them
. More fun at 2x :p

Reluctantly Accepting Temporary Overexhaustion (dood gone krazee) [+]
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. I don't even care about the few rhythms you missed there shouldn't be any more notes in this simfile
. Some of those 48th walls don't really feel necessary even though they're right
. lol this file

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (_.Spitfire._) [+.]
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. Those 5 note jacks are harddd
. I'd like this file 10x more with zero jacks
. I'd comment on how I like this cut better but I won't because I made this cut. :p

Rock Rock Rock (t+pazolite Remix) (bmah) [+.]
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. I'd like this file 10x more with zero jacks
. The length of this one is a bit much
. Wow that trill pls no
. Don't like the jack into the quad at the end
. Both of these files are queue-able but a combined forces file would be sah-weet

Sepia v2 (hi19hi19) [+?]
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. Overall the pattern choice felt repetative and boring
. Not different enough from the v1 to warrant a v2 (not good enough either)

Shining Sword (behanjc) [+.]
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. Cool file, felt overlayered at parts but good enough really

Sirius-(behanjc) [+]
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. Some of the jacks felt unneeded (when caused by layering) but low bpm makes that fine because it's really fun

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [+]
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. wow that's a lot of 8th jacks haha tass is gonna <3 this file
. Ok so we don't get many in this difficulty range but it's neat because it's technical and rather easy, a bit long but there's no way to cut it really
. Interesting file

Sly (Remastered) (Silvuh) [+.]
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. Jacks to wayyy too subtle of a sound
. Some choppy rhythmic choices, seems like the bass isn't always 5 notes long, if it is it's really subtle some of the time

Sly (Remastered) (Vote4Nixon) [>]
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. Some rhythmic errors I think, there's a lot going on in this song
. Ok, both of these files are good but I liked v4n's style better because of the flow but I'm fairly certain v4n's has some mistakes
. And I definitely like both of these files better than the one currently in-game
. Some parts identical to in-game file

Snake riddim (jokim) [+.]
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. what I don't know who you are and you submitted a pretty good file what! : )
. Some of the patterns are a bit repetative but that's ok because it mirrors the song
. The PR isn't the best but that keeps it interesting, honestly (also not too hard to a sim so it's cool)

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [?]
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. Many many PR and layering and rhythmic mistakes all over this chart
. Has potential though, seems unfinished, work on it more

Starwolf (rushyrulz) [-]
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. BPM incorrect 

Starwolf (Silvuh) [+]
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. I really liked the JS
. Mostly consistent without being annoying

Symphonic Shredding(Azafreak) [+?]
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. um, did you make this cut or is this what the song does?  If so, terrible place to cut it.
. Layering in the doubled BPM part is terrible
. Overall I think a different cut for this is warranted, maybe drop the bpm halved part or something, it's pretty boring

Taketori (Mr.Nothing) [?]
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. Jacks, no
. Gap wrong, get rid of that stop
. Needs 100x more layering and better PR, needs to be better and more interesting (less boring) overall

Tears of Remorse (Xandertrax) [+.]
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. m31 missed a note
. Sync good enough I think, gap seemed a little off but overall good enough

Techno Green Greens (ElectricWerewolf) [+.]
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. m28 last two jumps should go (14)(14)
. lol this song is terrible
. meh those jacks at the end

Temple (Xandertrax) [+?]
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. BNS
. missed some notes, should step more of the echoes, would make it more flowy, like the song

Ten Minutes With Tass (customstuff) [-]
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. lol needs to be something more than just synced notes to tass, needs like, what hi19 wrote

Teraholic (Zap_Track) [?]
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. 24ths, not 32nds
. Missed tons of steps
. Please don't step those 48ths, too hard compared to the rest of the file, maybe the short ones but no walls

The Lion's Dance (Silvuh) [+.]
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. Missed violin that you were stepping throughout
. Why not step that triangle or whatever it is, cymbal, m41 or so :p
. Good otherwise and easy fixes so, yeah

The Nintendo Concerto Part 1 (darph fluffy) [?]
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. Parts need wayyyy better PR and missed tons of rhythms and needs better layering overall
. Cool song though, makes me want to mario
. Recording hurt my ears though D:
. Work on it more, maybe get some help and it'll be a cool file

The Stupid Piano (i love you) [?]
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. Needs PR and layering fo realz
. Terrible song D:

Thrash (Patashu) [+]
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. Wow rly cool, no need to make this a colored note mess either, like it lots

To luv me I for u (t-rogdor and samurai7694) [-]
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. lol sync the beginning correctly wow...
. Missed tons of sounds sacrificed due to layering, making it little fun
. Slowdown part has more swung notes than you stepped
. wow cut this jesus

Toxiferous Dystopia (TC_Halogen) [+]
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. Missed some jumps to snare before the quiet part in the middle
. Maybe halve the bpm during the hip-hop beat section? then double again near like m100
. Missed more jumps in the last section
. Still good enough for queue, imo

Tribe Attacker (Zap_Track) [+?]
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. Sync to vocals wrong
. Check some of those 32nds and the rest of your rhythms, double check them
. Don't like the notes at the end to the noises

Trip Machine FAITH (eastsidenan09) [+?]
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. No 32nds later in the file (the ones like m70)
. Left out some 16ths to BD that could be fun, if you want
. Some of the drums sound swung but it might not matter for the playability
. Missed some cool stuff near the end of the song

Trisection V2 (DarkZtar) [!]
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. No Chart

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) (Bynary Fission) [?]
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. Uh too like the original and not as cool

Twin Chevron Action Flash (remix) (GG_Guru) [-]
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. BPM sooooo wrong

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom (stavie33) [?]
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. Too quiet denied! j/k
. Some of the hands and jacks make no sense at all
. Some of the PR wasn't right

Usatei (dag12) [-]
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. Not yours D]:<

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+?]
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. Layering jumps to synth would be cooler
. Left out some piano later in the sim
. Overall nothing really wrong but this could be much better ...

We wish you a merry Christmas (Jazzy Groove) (behanjc) [+]
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. Hello Christmas file

White Skies (Club Mix) (Professor Raine) [+?]
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. 32nds, although they fit, were retarded as trills
. Overstepped
. Not FMO material song, -hands

Windmill Jazz (robertsona) [+?]
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. Missed some piano and PR could be better
 
WOWWOW 220 (dag12) [+?]
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. Missed tons of drums that would be fun (that you stepped sometimes, but not all)
. Double the BPM maybe so that the tempo fits lol 220 ffs

X (akaFrOsTinG) [?]
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. BNS
. Forced stream, meh patterns overall
. Trills boring

{Flying Away} (hi19hi19) [+.]
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. Cool as an easy file, maybe someone will make a hard v2
. Some parts boring but not boring enough to reject

**Tasselfoot** · 01-9-2009, 11:12 AM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[b][size=+3]1/9/09[/size][/b]

[b][size=+3]The Queue[/size][/b]
Chaoz Fantasy - V4N - accepting under condition of fixes
Chaoz Japan - megamon88
Cryosleep - Patashu - 32nd triplets might be overdone for difficulty of the file, but they are consistent throughout
Dying Flame - SulferDragon
Ievan Polkka - jx - some of the 16th jack sections seem overdone
Inside the Fire - dore 
J'ai Envie de Plaisir - Patashu - technical, sure...  nobody else feels this is a dump?
Jeanie and Caroline - kommisar - definitely needs a final note or two
Kyrie - jx
Largiloquent Dithyramb - dore - one of the worst songs and song names of all time.  maybe cut ending?  it's longer than my schlong.
Marisa Stole the Precious Thing - classic rocker - on condition of minor tweaks
Nebula - kommisar - agree.  maybe missing some notes.
Nitrx - V4N - meh
October - Xandertrax - conditional on fixing some burst patterns
On Conquest and Capture - dore - on condition you drop the 48th and 64th notes that make hands.  not needed for this file.
Perfect Cherry Storm - Spitfire - seems overlayered to me.  Is the 24th jumpjack needed?
Pulling Through - blu
Schmollbluk - Spitfire
Streets - Xandertrax - pretty repetitive.  some jacks annoying as hell.
Tricky Concert - Xandertrax - SDP.  Teh Tricky Techno vEasy.  Check sync.


[b][size=+2]Files Played By Tass But Not Queue'd[/size][/b]
Blue Betrayal
Boss Battle 1 - what they said
Bouff - will be a fun file
Bus rides with people - too much climax theory on ending
cloud control - cut and fix
devour - what judges said.  file is almost fun.
down but not out - cut.  look into layering/rhythms.
elements of a party - song cut and YNS
happy dreams - seems overlayered
impulse - fix up judges stuff...  cut?
midnight shooter - fix up missing notes
off the wall - layering at end of piano.  layering near end overdone?  around 1000 combo
pulling through gamma - wetodid
push - i waited about 30 seconds for notes.  none came.  quit out.
rain - this song really sucks.  jacks, few spots w/ 12th jump bursts, ending spins.
rose at nightfall - really boring.  some weird patterns w/ 32nds.
skeletor - long song is repetitive.  hell hell long rolls.  combo'd 1st megaroll!
slow down - i hate you and this ****ty file.  fix ending down jack.
thinking different v2 - really fun...  still a bit of work though.
twelve - fix up.  will be fun.
up in the air - fix up a bit.  only major right hand bias i noticed was in the 24th gallop section near the end.
yorukumoryuu - 48th bursts.  16th jump-glut-spin-bursts.  cut?


[b][size=+2]jx's notes[/size][/b]
{The Traveller} (silvercomet1525) [? / 2]
offsync, PR could be better

Adrenaline FX (DJAirWave) [? / 3]
rhythms/jump placement are inconsisent/weird at parts

All I Ever Wanted (DJAirWave) [? / 2]
offsync at parts, many misrhythms, awkward patterns overall

Black and White (Silvuh) [+? / 5.5]
inconsistency in layering (snares)
weirdness on color notes

Blasted By Bubbles (MooMoo_Cowfreak) [? / 3.5]
missing notes, misrhythms(esp 24ths are out of place), PR could be better

BLUE BETRAYAL [Oni] (Patashu) [+. / 7] (12)
no comment, go for a file w/ highest notes

Boss Battle #1 (SulferDragon) [+? / 5.5]
patterns on m31, missing notes at the end of m47
PR is partially ok but could be better on other parts

Bouff (Patashu) [+. / 6.5] (9)
16ths with are a bit odd but fit the music I guess
rhythms on m64?

Bus Rides With People (kommisar[os] & bluguerrilla) [+. / 7] (11)
fun, felt some parts are a bit overdoubled though

Buzzards (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 6]
it has some misrhythms, and patterns on 64th long bursts should be fixed
minijack placement is a bit random

Chaoz Fantasy (CyclopsDragon) [? / 4]
missing some rhythms, PR could be better

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 6]
some patterns/rhythms(missing some 16ths, ending 4th) could be improved

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [+. / 6.5] (9)
not bad actually, 8th jump section is a bit boring for me tho

Cloak Steppin (HighAndr0id) [+? / 6.5]
ONS could be avoided, misrhythms on m16, m40-, m55m etc.
the concept is fun though

Cloud Control (Vote4Nixon & championanwar) [? / 5]
somewhat PR but could be better, misrhythms on 24ths
song is kind of.. repetitive.

Colossus (Silvuh) [- / NA]
multi difficulty

Cryosleep (Patashu) [+. / 7] (7)
decent, rhythm's accurate

Cutthroat (TC_Halogen) [+? / 6.5]
enjoyable, but rhythms could be more accurate/consistent. 
is the last burst needed?

Dad (danny53x) [- / NA]
no file

Decipher(x3Fallen) [? / 3.5]
kinda inperfect rhythm/layering

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 5.5]
getting accurate but still gay, needs more jump removement/pattern fix

Dizzy Division (unkdavar) [? / 2.5]
way too inconsistent overall

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [? / 4.5]
inconsistent in layering, a few misrhythms

Drift (Silvuh) [? / 3]
wrong bpm (it should be 8th/16th based), misrhythms due to that

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 4]
PR could be better, 16th jumps at the middle are kinda bad.

Dying Flame (SulferDragon) [? / 5]
rhythms on m22-26 don't make sense imo. others are fine but a bit boring.

Elements of a Party (dore) [? / 5]
funny but music is way to repetitive (need songcut), also a bit inconsistent

Elfin Pirate (Redsky139) [? / 4]
misrhythms/offsync at parts, some burst patterns, layering could be better

Fantasty Impromptu (Quasar889) [-- / 0]
quit out after I saw legendary patterns on beginning (aka NoVa PuLsEr).
plus in most of the time arrows don't go with the music

Forgotten Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 3.5]
rhythms for drums aren't done correctly, and inconsistent

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [- / NA]
withdrawal

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
jacks could be more instrument/pitch relevant

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+? / 6]
good sync, PR and layering could be better on some parts

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [? / 3.5]
could be layered more correctly overall, most hands aren't needed, PR

HoH (Heaven or Hell) (trumaestro) [? / 3]
fairly offsync at parts, didn't like the layering style much

HOT PEPPERZ (NSane) [- / 0]
wrong bpm

Ievan Polkka (Rin&Len ver.) (JX) [# / NA] (10)

I'm A Maid (NSane) [- / 0.5]
BNS, misrhythms, random patterns/jump placement

Impulse (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+? / 6]
overall decent, jump placement at parts, misrhythms on m38/42, notes for guitar on m103-104?
4 minute rock is long in general

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+. / 6.5] (7)
ok PR, felt a bit underlayered at parts tho

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
has some incorrect/inconsistent 16th rhythms, notes not very audible things
also needs better layering in some parts (voice part was interesting tho)

J'ai Envie de Plaisir X2 (Patashu) [+. / 7] (12)
in m38- putting jumps on all BD looks ridiculous even though they are technically correct (also patterns)
ver accurate file tho

Jeanie and Caroline (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 6.5] (11)
fun file, a bit repetitive/some bursts are weird tho

Kyrie (JX) [# / NA] (11)

Land of Eternity (SulferDragon) [? / 4.5]
PR could be better, misrhythms on m19, 35, 51, etc

Largiloquent Dithyramb [dore] [+? / 6]
almost no change from previous one other than gap

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4]
song is repetitive, better layering on 8th/16th stream sections

Lunar Dial (Vote4Nixon) [? / 3.5]
misrhythms/missing notes on many parts, PR/layering could be better

Marisa Stole the Precious Thing (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+. / 6.5] (10)
minor PR/layering fix could be done, but overall decent. ps this needs awesome bg flash

Midnight Shooter (TC_Halogen) [+. / 6.5] (11)
some long 8th jacks are annoying, missing notes/PR could be better at parts but ok

Mitsudomoe Motion - Triangular Fight (i love gabba vs. Frozen Beat) [? / 3.5]
pretty inconsistent, misrhythms,  some jacks/16ths are going for nothing

Mr. Heat Miser (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 3.5]
unique rhythms but offsync and misrhythms at parts, layering could be better

My Holiday Dinosaur (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [? / 4]
felt every section is way too repetitive

Nebula (Kommisar[os]) [+. / 7] (10)
there're some misrhythms(48ths) and missing notes, but enjoyable file

Nitrx (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
felt first half is underlayered, and missing notes even with this layering

October (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
rhythms are followed well, jump placement could be better, some burst patterns are awkward

Off the Wall (bluguerrilla & Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
first stream pattern could be 6842 instead of 4268, some minijacks don't fit the pitch
m41- is too simple without layering piano

On Conquest and Capture (dore) [+. / 6] (8)
short song, some rhythms of grace notes don't feel right though

Peacemaker(Darkstalker_X) [? / 3]
p.inconsistent, misthyrhms, PR could be better

Perfect Cherry Storm (_.Spitfire._) [+. / 7] (11)
technically ok

Pulling Through (bluguerrilla) [+? / 6]
Pulling Through Gamma [dore] [+? / 6]
basically the same except for bpm, m25- understepped, also missing some bursts that could be fun

Push (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5]
I think this is technically ok, but boring due to the song

RAIN (_.Spitfire._ & bluguerrilla) [+. / 6.5] (9)
really hate ending 24th spins (should be better stream patterns), but overall ok

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+. / 6.5] (9)
maybe ok file except for some PR issue

Schmollbluk (_.Spitfire._) [+. / 6.5] (12)
kinda long and seems some parts are overdone, technically acceptable for a hard file

Science Party (Coolgamer) [? / 2.5]
pretty inconsistent in rhythms/layering, PR could be better

Secret Zombie Room V2 (unkdavar) [? / 4.5]
not too bad for the consistency, but it still could be layered better/harder

Skeletor (psycho & bluguerrilla) [+? / 6]
rhythms on m42, some roll streams could have better patterns imo, want song cut

Slashfic (OperationStrawbarry) [?]

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
those jacks are ok except for the ending down ones, and apparently layering could be better

SM 64 - The Alternate Route Remix (megamon88) [? / 4]
green notes on m21? felt really long, also some parts don't flow too well

Starfox Speed Mix (CosmicRain) [? / 5]
a few PR errors/misrhythms, didn't like jump placement much(melody, jumpstreams)

Streets (Xandertrax) [+? / 5.5]
seems technically ok, just not the best layering choice/jack placement

Sunset Dept. (CyclopsDragon) [+? / 5.5]
song is cool, but there're many misrhythms so they could be fixed for accuracy

Swallowing an Avalanche  (New Mix) - Bynary Fission

The Final Hour (silvercomet1525) [? / 4.5]
not wrong, but PR could be better, weird layering

the Mooned Incects [sc979] [? / 5]
PR could be better, 24th+48th bursts are weird, want some layering

The Swarm (MooMoo_Cowfreak) [? / 4]
overall inconsistent, jump placement. PR somewhat

Thinking Different V2 (Silvuh) [+? / 6]
interesting at parts, but some 48ths/64ths aren't really needed

TizAshura (Vote4Nixon) [? / 3]
felt it's missing a lot of rhythms

Tribe Attacker (alexdestructions) [? / 2]
misrhythms, bad hand/jack placement

Tricky Concert (Xandertrax) [? / 3.5]
offsync, tweak the bpm, PR could be better

Tricky Concert_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 2.5]
offsync as well, worse layering/PR

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) - Bynary Fission [? / 3.5]
layering for drums is quite inconsistent, PR issue/could have more minijacks technically

Turn Soonest to the Sea [Oni] (MeaCulpa) [? / 4]
offsync at parts, some bs rhythms, missing 32nds on m16-

Twelve (TC_Halogen) [+. / 6.5] (9)
missing some rhythms, barely ok file

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 3.5]
kinda funny but felt missing a lot of sounds, PR could be better

Up In The Air (HighAndr0id) [+? / 6]
interesting file, but there're some misrhythms/missing notes, inconsistency

V.L.S.I. (woker-X) [? / 2]
pretty inaccurate rhythms, jack placement

Versatile (CosmicRain) [? / 2.5]
layering could be better, bad jack placement

Voyage 1969 (Zybanthia) [? / 5]
PR is decent at parts, could be better at parts
layering for drums (esp. m49-) could be more consistent

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [? / 4.5]
maybe getting better slowly but still inconsistently layered 

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [? / 3]
I don't get some 16ths and jumps, overall weird

yorukumoryuu yamikaze [sc979] [+? / 5.5]
32nds like m24- aren't needed, also similar 48th bursts are weird. PR could be better overall

Mouch (robertsona) [? / 3]
pretty boring even for an easy file

Science Party (Coolgamer) [? / 2.5]
rhythms don't feel right, inconsistent

ska ska and again ska (ahr2nd's Omegka Prologue Mix) [robertsona] [? / 3]
repetitive as hell

Swallowing an Avalanche  (New Mix) - Bynary Fission [+? / 5.5]
most rhythms seem fine, some jack placement is weird


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Adrenaline FX (DJAirWave) [?] {2/10}
_
. You could step so much more in this song if you wanted to...
. The layering choices were weird, first snare, then BD, then it fell apart, no feeling of good progression
. PR was not there

All I Ever Wanted (DJAirWave) [?] {3/10}
_
. Stop creates BNS = a no-no, copy and paste to fix
. Then YNS in the slowdown lol
. You need to step more of those 24ths in the drums
. Overall it's pretty ok how you stepped it but you missed some stuff in the ending that you had been stepping throughout
. Ending might be more fun if you put jumps to all the vocals

Black and White (Silvuh) [?] {4/10}
_
. Overall, this file is pretty meh
. The fast rhythms and jacks were much harder than the rest of the song, felt choppy and uneven in difficulty
. M30-40 or so I couldn't even tell what some of the steps were going to
. m58-59 those colored notes make zero sense
. I don't even know how you'd fix this file

Blasted By Bubbles (MooMoo_Cowfreak) [+?] {5/10}
_
. m18, m42, m58, m91 should be no 24ths (should be 16ths)
. m21 needs some 48ths
. m29 make that trill a roll
. m40 should be 24ths into that 48th burst
. m83 should be 32nds not 24ths i think
. last green note should be a down step
. Overall missed 16ths to hihat and some BD, go through IT ALL at .5x and just watch the steps go by to catch what you missed

BLUE BETRAYAL [Oni] (Patashu) [+] {jx/10}
_
. Missed sounds and it's overdoubled
. Ok let's [heavy] please
. hell yea


Boss Battle #1 (SulferDragon) [+.] {6/10}
_
. Overall ok, didn't like the jacks to snare but did like the jacks in the stream
. ending might be more fun with the 'guitar' or whatever put to jumps
. Not a lot technically wrong, just was kinda meh to me

Bouff (Patashu) [+?] {6/10}
_
. The 16ths to weird keyboard noises were okay I guess, played kinda weird, can't hear it really well at 1.0x, 
..also they should sometimes end in a yellow note
. Could have stepped some of the drum bursts like m17
. Some sections felt overdoubled, like during solo, singles would play better
. hihat could be stepped, felt weird to hit have a step on those quarter notes
. m62 guitar noise at the beginning a 16th
. m64 missed sounds in guitar

Bus Rides With People (kommisar[os] & bluguerrilla) [#] {fun/10}
_

Buzzards (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?] {5/10}
_
. m5 64th unnecessary
. 32nd jacks please n
. Probably no 12ths or 24ths or 48ths in this song anywhere, probably all 64ths like DaD
. m30 64th burst ends too early
. This would be more fun with fewer jacks

Chaoz Fantasy (CyclopsDragon) [>] {4/10}
_
. Not as good as v4n's, though fun

Chaoz Fantasy (Vote4Nixon) [+.] {6/10}
_
. m48 would play better as (24)3.3(14) instead of (24)323(14)
. m56 (24)312(34) fits the PR better than what you have
. Some of the stream could have better PR but meh

Chaoz Japan (megamon88) [+.] {7/10}
_
. m59 should go (34).123.31(24) not (34).12323.(34)
. m61 should step the crashes, so it goes 4213.243.2.3 instead of 42.3.2.3.2.3 <- if you want
. And the ending crash echo too <- if you want
. fun file

Cloak Steppin (HighAndr0id) [?] {4/10}
_
. m16 make that trill at 4231 roll
. m29 don't like that first 2121 or those other rhythms there, should go to that echo-y sound
. m33 don't like that 32nd jack
. m74 should have some jumps on yellow notes
. PR at the very end could be better
. Overall overdoubled, imo
. Also, some of the rhythms, especially 32nd trills sounded like they weren't exactly that rhythm

Cloud Control (Vote4Nixon & championanwar) [+.] {6/10}
_
. Parts like m37 not sure what that yellow jump is going to
. m65 missed violin 16ths
. Ending needs better layering, in fact, you either need to cut it at 86.05 or continue to step the song because
..as it is now, the cut sucks, +. assumes you cut the ending

Colossus (Silvuh) [+?] {2/10}
_
. bpm is off by like .1-.2 or something
. overall boring because of the song choice, I know it's an easy sim but still

Cryosleep (Patashu) [+.] {6/10}
_
. Don't like the 32nd triples because of PR (BD-BD-BD+snare just doesn't play right as a triple/minitrill/whatever you call it)

Cutthroat (TC_Halogen) [+?] {4/10}
_
. long blank ending waaay boring, cut it before those 3 jumps please
. Overall, needs more grace notes and much better PR

Dad (danny53x) [?] {3/10}
_
. Sent old dwi???
. This file would be much more fun without jacks
. Jump placement weird at parts
. Some grace notes felt like too much

Decipher(x3Fallen) [-] {1/10}
_
. Too much stream and misrhythms all over the place
. Cool song though...
 
DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+.] {6/10}
_
. m23 on should be single notes per layering scheme so far
. m92 4312 roll would be better than 4231
. Some parts still cluttered lol this file is probably never going to make it in D:

Dizzy Division (unkdavar) [-] {1/10}
_
. Needs better PR, layering and rhythm choice

Down But Not Out (_.Spitfire._) [+] {8/10}
_
. cut at 171.3 for awesome 

Drift (Silvuh) [+.] {5/10}
_
. Expand 2->3, Compress 2x, BPM = 95
. Overall pretty good but some of the PR felt off

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [+?] {5/10}
_
. Still missing some of the stick sounds
. Jacks may be too hard compared to the rest of the file
. Needs to be better to v2 the in-game one

Dying Flame (SulferDragon) [+.] {4/10}
_
. lol sounds like raustdragonblack
. Overall stepped ok but PR could be more interesting

Elements of a Party (dore) [+] {7/10}
_
. YNS & voice BPMs
. fun

Elfin Pirate (Redsky139) [+?] {6/10}
_
. m27 that pattern is too hard, do, 21432 instead of 434321
. m32 again pattern too hard, do 4321 or something instead
. Overall good transitions in the layering but you have to choose patterns for the faster rhythms better

Fantasty Impromptu (Quasar889) [-] {1/10}
_
. More misrhythms than I'd shake a stick at
. PR needs major work
. D:

Forgotten Aura (kjwkjw) [-] {1/10}
_
. Jesus this song goes on for freakin ever
. Ok tons of misrhythms and very boring

Game Boy Fiend (Vote4Nixon) [4] {m/e}
_
. no me da la gana

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+?] {5/10}
_
. m23 missed snare
. Some of those jacks aren't needed, especially in the intro
. Does this song really need a v2? :\

Happy Dreams (HighAndr0id) [+.] {7/10}
_
. m50, m55 that first blue jump doesn't belong (might be in other places too)
. m82 jack
. Might want to check over the double placement because this is a complicated layering job

Higan Retour -idling mix- (Knoobish) [?] {3/10}
_
. PR sucks almonds
. Overstepped but that doesn't really matter
. Layering not great

HoH (Heaven or Hell) (trumaestro) [-] {2/10}
_
. Wow sync is no good
. The difficulty jumps waaaaay too much
. Overall meh

HOT PEPPERZ (NSane) [-] {0/10}
_
. lol no


I'm A Maid (NSane) [-] {0/10}
_
. terrible

Ievan Polkka (Rin&Len ver.) (JX) [+] {8/10}
_
. lol this song will be stuck in my head for 3 days now

Impulse (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+.] {7/10}
_
. step the intro
. double the bpm sooner
. m34 don't hear those 32nds
. That ending is kinda long
. Overall, really fun

Inside the Fire cut (dore) [+] {8/10}
_
. Solo easier, good enough

Introsphere (Extended) (Vote4Nixon) [?] {4/10}
_
. Part before talking feels choppy
. Some notes seem to go to nothing
. Vocals layered in play terrible

J'ai Envie de Plaisir X2 (Patashu) [+] {9/10}
_
. Awesomely hard
. Maybe 2x BPM in the hard part so it's easier to read?

Jeanie and Caroline (Kommisar[os]) [+] {8/10}
_
. Maybe one note at the end so the guy finishes talking at 135.07 

Kyrie (JX) [+] {9.5/10}
_
. lol this file is awesome

Land of Eternity (SulferDragon) [+.] {7/10}
_
. The 24th runs would be much more fun with no 12th jacks in them
. Feels a little overstepped but I think it's fun this way

Largiloquent Dithyramb (dore) [+] {can'tspellthis/10}
_
. Much easier without 200 bpm jacks >_<

lolhappy (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.] {7/10}
_
. m45 missed a 16th to bass drum
. I liked the stream technique you used but some of the PR could be brushed up, might be ok as it is

Lunar Dial (Vote4Nixon) [?] {4/10}
_
. m35 needs some 12th notes to the harpsichord
. Honestly I don't hear MANY of these 32nds, 
. m61 needs more steps
. Overall missed a ton of drums that really need to be stepped and other stuff too, especially near the end (m100 or so)

Marisa Stole the Precious Thing (ClAsSiC_RoCkEr) [+] {8/10}
_
. m72 overstepped
. Other than that good
. >:3

Midnight Shooter (TC_Halogen) [+?] {6/10}
_
. m16 missed some drums and throughout the sim
. m53 missed a double
. m61 missed some 16ths to guitar
. Needs more filler notes to keep the flow going overall
. m160 missed two doubles, m164 missed more
. m167, m176 missed guitar
. Overall missed a ton lol, this kind of song you need to step all the rhythms and then it'll be super fun

Mitsudomoe Motion - Triangular Fight (i love gabba vs. Frozen Beat) [?] {2/10}
_
. Some of the guitar needs manual sync
. Didn't like the jacks, take them out
. long 8th jumpjack made no sense
. Some 16ths go to nothing

Mouch (robertsona) [+.] {boring/10}
_
. Ok, technical easy files are really boring
. Like, really really boring
. Like, seriously, .63 notes per second

Mr. Heat Miser (HammyMcSquirrel) [+?] {5/10}
_
. Why BNS at the end?
. Needs jumps, like jumps to that skidding sound, and more
. layer please!
. fun otherwise

My Holiday Dinosaur (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+?] {2/10}
_
. Wow, this song, just, wow
. The sync is off later in the song
. Some of the jacks later in the song seem superfluous

Nebula (Kommisar[os]) [+] {8/10}
_
. rly fun
. may have missed a few 16ths but it doesn't really matter

Nitrx (Vote4Nixon) [+] {8/10}
_
. Very fun, maybe mix up the jumps at the end a bit?

October (Xandertrax) [+] {8/10}
_
. another really fun file this is a streak!
. ok some parts are kind of handed making it really hard to PA but it may be ok how it is

Off the Wall (bluguerrilla & Vote4Nixon) [#] {win/10}
_

On Conquest and Capture (dore) [+] {8/10}
_
. cool song, cool file

Peacemaker(Darkstalker_X) [+?] {6/10}
_
. freeform stream could be more fun
. bursts should be 32nds
. m68-74 missed some 16ths (one per measure)
. m84 missed a burst
. really fun file! make the fixes, I don't think it needs PR fixes, it's nice how you stepped it

Perfect Cherry Storm (_.Spitfire._) [+] {8/10}
_
. Perfect Cherry Blossom Storm

Pulling Through (bluguerrilla) [#] {nubbin/10}
_

Pulling Through Gamma (dore) [+] {9/10}
_
. Why didn't I step this version? D:

Push (Vote4Nixon) [+] {8/10}
_
. Cut it at 164.72 the ending feels too long now without the intro, + assuming you cut it

RAIN (_.Spitfire._ & bluguerrilla) [#] {lolanotherfilenamedrain/10}
_

Rose At Nightfall (SulferDragon) [+] {8/10}
_
. Finally a whole simfile of Kingdom Hearts music haha

Schmollbluk (_.Spitfire._) [+] {9/10}
_
. hard!

Science Party (Coolgamer) [?] {2/10}
_
. Misrhythms and terrrrrrible layering, felt like ctrl+r

Secret Zombie Room V2 (unkdavar) [+?] {4/10}
_
. I feel like the intro and outro could be stepped better
. Mostly right but there are definitely a few misrhythms and few jump issues to the snare, you missed one or two
..and had one or two extra in other part

ska ska and again ska (ahr2nd's Omegka Prologue Mix) [robertsona] [+.] {boring/9}
_
. Wow, boring, maybe mirror some of these sections, or turn them
..or step more of the noises so it's not so damn boring 


Skeletor (psycho & bluguerrilla) [#] {SKELETOR/10}
_
. I BOW TO NO ONE!!!

Slashfic (OperationStrawbarry) [-] {wrongbpm/10}
_
. BPM = 180
 

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [+] {7/10}
_
. Nice n short now, longest 8th jack ever

SM 64 - The Alternate Route Remix (megamon88) [+?] {4/10}
_
. Didn't like the stream in m48 on, very quiet noise being stepped there
. Maybe cut at 146 seconds in
. The intro is also painfully long, cut the first 35 seconds or so please
. Missed some drums in some parts

Starfox Speed Mix (CosmicRain) [?] {3/10}
_
. Hated the jacks caused by layering
. Many many misrhythms

Streets (Xandertrax) [+] {8/10}
_
. Fun gallops and minijacks woo! 

Sunset Dept. (CyclopsDragon) [?] {3/10}
_
. Half this bpm would be better
. Tons of misrhythms and the layering needs to be better

Swallowing an Avalanche  (New Mix) (Bynary Fission) [+?] {6/10}
_
. m31 wth bpm changes?
. m66 on some of the jumps seem wrong
. this song is pretty badass :O
. Jacks would be better as trills

The Final Hour (silvercomet1525) [+?] {6/10}
_
. m47-56 layering messed up (some jumps missed, some jumps to nothing)
. m101-104 needs better PR in the single notes
. The slowdown parts could be better

The Mooned Insects (sc979) [+?] {6/10}
_
. Lots of misrhythms in 48ths and 32nds

The Swarm (MooMoo_Cowfreak) [+?] {5/10}
_
. Didn't like the runningmen
. Didn't like the ending 3 jacks
. Didn't like that you didn't step more of the noises in m45 on

Thinking Different V2 (Silvuh) [+.] {6/10}
_
. These polyrhythms or whatever you want to call them suck to play
. Missed some synth in the intro

TizAshura (Vote4Nixon) [+.] {7/10}
_
. Flow would be better if you stepped all of that one synth, you know the one I mean

Tribe Attacker (alexdestructions) [+?] {6/10}
_
. Parts like m52 are missing one yellow note
. 16th jacks aren't as fun as the 12th jacks, they don't fit as well
. Probably not FMO, the hands _are_ fun though :\

Tricky Concert (Xandertrax) [+] {7/10}
_
. Easy and fun, see robertsna! 

Tricky Concert_(dandandamdandan1111) [>] {4/10}
_
. Not as good as xandertrax's

Turbulence (AG Hi'per Mix) - Bynary Fission [?] {5/10}
_
. Some 16ths to nothing
. I think people might prefer a v2 of this song that's JACKY
. BPM slightly off, it's late by the end of the song

Turn Soonest to the Sea [Oni] (MeaCulpa) [+?] {6/10}
_
. A ton of the drum rhythms are off
. Weird cut, is this song cut in the heavy version?
. Some PR a bit weird but overall pretty darn fun
. Some BPMs off by 2x or .5x

Twelve (TC_Halogen) [+?] {6/10}
_
. Missed rhythms and misrhythms throughout
. BPM seems slightly off
. Gap too

uNdEr YoUr BeD_(dandandamdandan1111) [?] {3/10}
_
. BPM way off
. Needs a climax part
. None of these 24ths belong
. PR needs to be 100000x better

Up In The Air (HighAndr0id) [+] {8/10}
_
. Some parts are _very_ hard on your right hand
. Other than that very fun

V.L.S.I. (woker-X) [?] {4/10}
_
. Jacks too hard for the file
. Too streamy (stream to nothing)
. Tons of misrhythms

Versatile (CosmicRain) [?] {4/10}
_
. Bad PR
. Boring Layering
. Jacks are a bit lol

Voyage 1969 (Zybanthia) [+?] {7/10}
_
. m41-56 needs better PR
. m81 on needs CLIMAX!
. Fadeout with no steps is waaaaay too long
. Seriously now, who are you?

Wish (Reprise) (HammyMcSquirrel) [+.] {6/10}
_
. m38 seems like there are too many 16th notes, possibly true in other parts of the sim as well
. Much better than before

Xxxperiment_(dandandamdandan1111) [?] {4/10}
_
. Most of those 16ths should be swung
. Boring overall

yorukumoryuu yamikaze (sc979) [+.] {7/10}
_
. m64 missing some notes
. Don't like the 48ths but they go I guess
. Damn this sim is fun and hard, could use a bit of climax near the end there

{The Traveller} (silvercomet1525) [+?] {6/10}
_
. BPM off at parts, needs just a bit more work, maybe get the BPM changes from CnB?
. too many jumps! Seriously!

**Tasselfoot** · 02-28-2009, 04:03 PM

Re: Batch Review Thread

Code:

[size=+3][b]2/28/09[/b][/size]

[b][size=+3]The Queue[/size][/b]
ABCDEarth - dore
Bus Rides WIth People - kommi and blu - song name makes no sense
Counter Strike Gun Sounds - blu
Didj Z - robertsona
grind2 - blu
Ivaltek - Patashu - maybe cut @ break near end, 700ish
Kidney Stone - DossarLX ODI - is the bpm doubling needed?
La Campanella - who_cares973 - so much fun. instafailed at 32nd jumptrills.
SaddestRMX - dore
Session - Patashu
Solar Force - Zybanthia
Turn Soonest to the Sea - MeaCulpa - a bit long / repetitive
Until You Leave - blu
Witches Hat - Patashu
Yeah Yeah Beats - Patashu - bit long
yorukumoryuu yamikaze - sc979

[b]CONDITIONAL QUEUE[/b]
Betrayal of Fate - Patashu - check PR, cut.
Caiza D'Aqua - bmah - fix up judges rhythm issues
Infiltration - megamon88 - take a look at patashu's notes, fix some up.  real fun.
Story of the Constellations - Patashu - chenge 48ths to jumps
Temple - Xandertrax - tweak up
The Past - Spitfire - tweak up PR and it's good
Twelve - BDN - tweak the bursts, especially the green one
You're My Number One - bmah - m49 and ending

[size=+2][b]Played by Tass, Not Queue'd[/b][/size]
666mph - fix up
beloved girl's rondo - what judges said. also, 24ths bump difficulty by 1 or 2, so if you want EASY, remove them.
blindfolds aside - really dislike just about all jacks.  some hand useage good, but w/o jacks may not be FMO. quit out.
christine - see judges notes
disconnected hazard - what judges said
eclipse luna - tone down layering
fantasie impromptu - not a fan of this song version. why not use ashura's or original? also, stream breaks.
gentleman - don't we have enough vsnares fgo cockdumps? plus what judges said
groovin' plains - fix judges comments. sync, ending.
half symphony - already in game. doesn't need v2.
hot soup - did not test. fix sync first. why is an offsync file even getting to me?
hurrikane x - cut, 24ths.
mourning heart - definitely too hard for the song. cut down on the slides.
oceans of time - see notes. not really fun. generic.
off the wall - again, not much fun. very repetitive.
omnishred - fix the 12th jumpspam sections.
push - why are there no notes in the 1st 30+ seconds. this file stinks worse than my nuts after going to the gym.
rain - fix up
slow down - boring x10
swallowing an avalanche - fix up
the great storm - fix
try to star - agree w/ judges. jumps to drums take away from song. long 8th jumpjacks not fun. trill to rolls awkward. a bit long/repetitive.
ultimate drum set solo of crap - no to the song. file is ok, not amazing.
versatile - overstepped.
voyage 1969 - not bad. 3 weird longer jack sections very awkward and harder than rest of the file.


[size=+2][b]Patashu's Notes[/b][/size]
when I say m# where # is a number, I'm referring to something within that particular measure according to the way stepmania numbers them
if I say m# on I mean until the rhythmic pattern changes
pr is pitch relevance, the idea of using specific patterns, pattern types/changes and column usage to emphasize the different pitches involved in a changing melody

666 MPH (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
m17 on understeps the amen break but in a consistent way. maybe 16ths in m19 and 20 leading into the jumps though?
32nds in m20 start on the red note, not the blue
...and the same every time it repeats
m25: the lone blue note should be a jump too, right? same in m33, 45
m38: thinking make the second lone blue note the end of a 16th three note run, 32nd roll should start on the red note before again
m77: I don't like how it goes straight from stepping the amen break at the full intensity of the rest of the song to the sparse 8th melody. make it a toned down version (i.e. take out either the jumps or the 16ths) until you hit m81
m82, m84, m86 miss a blue note just after the second beat. it should go high low high, except in m86 where it's interrupted so it goes high low higher
m88: should end D,L,D or D,L,DU
m93: move the last note back three 16ths so it lines up with the second syllable of 'deserve'
overall not the most astonishing file (amen breaaakkk) but it has a decent technical aspect so I'll +. it anyway

A Battle for the Sky (Silvuh) [+.]
the first time you play it, it feels like a bit of a letdown, it takes 14 seconds to reach the first note and then starts with what is initially the quietest instrument. I don't know how you'd alleviate this, just commenting
m19 and every time this kind of pattern repeats: how about making the notes that are on their own jumps to accentuate the stronger melody here?
half way through m20, at the end of the 12ths: jump?
m21-26: I know it's an easy file but back and forth 8th trills at 100 bpm are boooring. after the blue cymbol crash step that funky synthline in the background that we've been hearing since the start of the song, it's cool (and poss. continue it through m27 until it stops at the beginning of m28)
m31: second 4th should be a left note
m36: the first blue note shouldn't be there, same for m39. I get that you're throwing in the clap but it's not time for the clap yet...
m46: the last blue note shouldn't be there
m48: move three 16ths down and place a down note, since it echoes a bit
m50: the 8th minijack at the end of this measure should have a 16th on the left arrow before each note
m56: starting on the third beat of this measure it should go something like DLUR on 16ths, the red note on the fourth beat of this measure needs to be moved forward one 16th
m57 on: stepping the clap here is fine, imo, since it gets expressed more, it's a segment that's been done straight before and it's closer to the end of the song (gotta take out that one minijack on the left again btw, and step the yellow echo again)
m65: again have the clap in this time, since you just had the clap, it's a segment that's been done straight before and it's closer to the end. :stepmania theory:
m71: make the blue note on the right either a minijack or a gallop, then add one more blue note just before it ends
I would like to note however that this is a fucen cool song and I'd accept it like hell with the changes

ABCDEath (Dore) [+]
haha this is awesome
the end of m19 is a bit early, first jump of m24 a tiny bit early
probably take out the random hand at m29 though, make it pure orange or pure red jump
m30 feels late
m34-m35 sync should be more like this... [url]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v216/Mechadragon/screen00494.jpgmove[/url] the very last note back about a 16th so it lines up with the end of the scream

Alone Again At 4AM (foilman8805) [+]
PR can be tightened up a bit. for instance m4 should start (DR),U,R,L or something
loving the song, a bit worried the middle climax with the jumps in 8ths is too hard relative to the rest of the song but that's a judgement call

Angel Island Remix (Silvuh) [+?]
m1: first blue note should be R
m2: after the two 16th jumps I'd fill in the next two 8ths to carry out the echoing feel
m8: the middle 4th goes to nothing
m9 on: the gallops that go blue-yellow yellow-blue should start and end on the same note because of the instruments they follow
m18, etc layering is a bit weird; you suddenly jump from layering in only the snare to layering in only the bass drum? and then in m24 it's a bit different again
in m21 the melody is slightly different here: the second blue jump should actually go on the 16th before it
end of m24: lead in to m25 should go...LDURDLU
m27 and m31 step the same pattern but has less notes the same time, like you layered in one of the melodies the first time but not the second
and in m28 and m31 you miss the yellow note to the bass drum before the minijack part of it
m33-34: hmm...you miss a 16th after the middle beat of each one, but on the other hand adding it would make it pretty consistent stream. I'd try and find another way to layer this part properly, it feels weird as hell
m37: second minijack is erroneous, same for the second and third minijacks in m39
m40: after the four jumps in the row, I'd cut out the rest except for the one hit to that bass drum on the yellow note until next measure
however...I'd keep the minijacks in m44. minijack theory :ssh: ask kil about it
m45 on: I'd cap each of these streams with a jump on the blue note. call it layering of the melody and the snare thing
the layering you're using for m53, etc bugs me because it just makes a bunch of triplets. is there another way to do it?
m61: what exactly are the jumps going to? the synth melody is playing minijacks
m62: 64/3ths are awesome yessssss
m63-64: probably shouldn't have jumps in the trillrush since you don't have them in the next one
m74: misses a 16th to the bass drum
overall, I'm a bit conflicted on this one. lots to fix but it's cool anyway...

Band Dynamics (Dore) [+]
m15 misses a 12th leading into the third jump
middle 4th of m44 shouldn't be there
m67: first purple jump should be just a single note I think, same for m111
end of m71 should be straight 12ths, same for the end of m115
m117 on: listen more carefully. not every 4th is hit this time ;) there should be a 4th 'hole' in m120 and m124
beginning of m139 misses one of the swung 12ths, same for m143, 145 and 147
I'm really loving the overal feel of the file, tho. swung, upbeat and energetic. possibly also change the 24th sections to drop the hi-hat for the clap when it comes in? idk

Beautiful Synergy (boondocks77 + _.Spitfire._) [+.]
Just so you know...Beautiful Synergy is NOT a dj sharpnel song. It's a guest song on one of his albums, I forget who actually made it
the first and last pink jumps in m13, 14, 15 and 16 are erroneous
what's the pink jump in m20 to?
m21-m25: step da 16ths
m29: step da vocals and/or trill
fake sharpnel/10, it's nothing amazing but it's playable

Before Dawn (Yoshiisland) [-]
auugh, sync. the very -first- jump of the song is a 24th early, or about 0.09 of a second
um, yeah...sync. the sync is bad. it's a piano song so it'll have wavering bpm. you need to place steps a lot more accurately then you are now. also, pitch relevance would be good in this kind of file; if you don't know, it's where patterns ascending in pitch go to the right, patterns descending go to the left, repeated pitches repeat columns and repeated patterns repeat the steps. That kind of thing. also later on you're missing notes. this is too offsync to accept though, rework it from the ground up or try something easier to step if you're starting out

Beloved Girl's Rondo (sc979) [+.]
I wouldn't have gaps where the strong 'cha!' kinda noise comes in, I'd put jumps
also, since it's repeating itself so much melody-wise, why not re-arrange the notes from time to time, to keep a semblance of pr while keeping it fresh? just keep a pr 'rule' or two in mind and flip around the notes to adhere to the rule, like these notes must share a column or this part of the pattern must always descend
also, more jumps? how bout to the crash
probably shouldn't have 24ths in m20 or anywhere else in such an easy file, how about 16 triplets instead? that's basically what they sound like anyway
you have minijacks m26 on, so you should include them earlier on in the file too when they occured there
nice job on the slowdown :) but I think it should go (starting from the first red note) UDLURUDRL
I hear a gallop going onto the second 4th of m56
I guess I'll +. this, though, since it could be seen as being a bit on the bland side but the technical aspect is very good

Betrayal of Fate (Patashu) [#]
this file sucks, I only stepped it because scgmd2/3 players and newgrounds frequenters have the hots for goukisan
see if you can guess the rule that decides whether I'm layering the snare or not

Black and White (Silvuh) [+?]
the 16th gallops onto blue notes you put in the beginning measures are erroneous; should be the previous red onto blue
the 64th gallop off of the blue jump in m9 should actually be a 32nd gallop -into- the blue jump (or into a single note if you prefer) same every time it repeats
m17 on: you miss some of the synth hits of the new instrument coming in
the m24 layering bothers me. if it's piano + percussion the first two red beats should be jumps and there shouldn't be a yellow jump
m25 on: no instrument is playing a four note long 8th jack. the bass isn't, the left hand piano isn't. you'll have to change that part around. also, in m26 starting on the third beat the piano goes goes x..x.xx.x
m33 on: step the new synth instrument that comes in to match what you did from m17 on?
m57 on: there's one percussive instrument you can step here, it makes hits on the third and fifth beat of every two measure interval
m64: missed da orchestral hits
m65: the section is repeating with more added into the song, plz layer more to signify this. the synthhit and snare drum or something
m72: orchestral hits again
m73: ugh, kinda boring. maybe jumps to the snare hit too, repeat the 64th swung triplet as echoes, etc
m89: suggestion, since it's close to the end of the song now step the drumline, the fast chattering instrument playing 16ths with the snare over it. or something akin to that
hmmm. I love the song but the chart feels very understepped and vanilla, and has consistent technical errors and arbitrary patterns. follow everything closer

Black Apple (SacredInsanity vs Buizel) [!]
XI STREAMS LIVE
m14: you missed some doubles, same for m16, 22
m24: you swap from stepping the snare drum as a single note to a jump without pausing to breathe. so which is it?
m25: freezes in my ffr files :<
m41: haha, lots of freezes. ! and read the rules next time ;)
btw, you put jumps to the bass drum itself, don't do that haha
m62: the second last blue jump shouldn't be there
m134 on: there are triplets you can put to the hi-hat here
it's alright, but it needs tweaks since it has spots with long freezes. take them out and rework the file in their absence and try again.
some parts are really hard btw, like the 24th minitrills

Blindfolds Aside (Dore) [+]
the beginning felt weird, and now I know why; the first yellow note after each yellow jump should be right not left, since it's not part of the guitar that follows
I can see the patterns in m11-15 giving a lot of left-handed boos for me, haha, I'll live though
yellow jump at the end of m17?
m26: the last blue note should be pushed forward a 16th
12th after second beat of m32 should be a jump? to accentuate the cymbal
12th just before fourth beat of m35 should lead into the jump with a pink note, I think
m37: one note of the purple jump just before the third beat needs to be moved back, I think I hear the vocal come in a bit earlier then that
m38: the blue note to the vocals after the third beat should be moved back a 24th
m54: stream needs to be extended one note further, same for the one at the end of m58
end of m69 should be a triplet
the blue note at the end of m72 needs to be moved back an 8th and made...a 16th gallop, going to the left
the jacks in m74 should alternate hands for maximum comboability, ouch, judgement call tho. p.s. jumps in this section to the cymbal would be nice :)
m78: should go LxLLL on 8ths
m79-80: uhh, the last note vanished? XD
m81: first 4th needs to move a 32nd down
m84: stream should start on the 16th note before when you start it
m91-92: 8th sets of 3 should be descending not ascending now, and in m93 it shouldn't be minijacks
m121 on: 16th minijacks/triplets to the guitar?
these are all isolated errors, though. the overall file is cool, protest the hero is very steppable, and I loved the use of hands to accent power levels, and...woah, this song is almost 6 minutes long? haha, the slow part at the end takes up almost 2 minutes by itself. oh well, I'm +ing it anyway

Bogey at your Six (HighAndr0id&EAG) [?]
the jump on the second beat of measure 5 still needs to go
just so you know, the rising parts the high pitched melody plays (as in from the first yellow note of measure 6) are a 24th gallop, starting on the yellow note so it goes yellow-cyan
meh, screw this. I already pre-reviewed this file and a lot of what I suggested was ignored or misinterpreted to make it worse, so I'd basically be typing it all out again. ? and listen to kommisar's batch notes I guess :P
Bus Rides With People (kommisar[os] & bluguerrilla) [+]
cock rock disco
I only found one error: the last 4th of m70 should be a single note
uh, think this is about as good as it'll get. all my +s

Caixa D'Aqua (bmah) [+]
beginning of m7 is a 24th triplet, not a 64th gallop, the thing you stepped as 24ths is actually like this, starting on the blue note and progressing at 16ths: R,R,L 48th gallop to R, 192nd before D
beginning of m8 is a slide up
m10: possibly put jumps where the shaking percussive instrument and vocals overlap, making yellow jumps? this is a judgement call tho since I think it could work either way
sync to the acoustic guitar needs to be a lot tighter. in m26 the green left note is too early, and the 12th ascent (including the orange note) is early. in m27 the 32nd triplets are respectively a 32nd 5 note pattern starting on a yellow note and a 64/3th 3 note pattern starting on an orange note and ending on red. I'm not checking the rest :P
m34 on felt a bit underlayered, missing some of the shaking percussive instrument I think
before the minijack in m43 there should be a 16th note leading in on the left and in m44 I'm totally not hearing the minijacks
cool drum fill at the end of m53
end of m59 feels like there should be another note snuck in
other then that I love the file, I love the way it feels, sync it up more but you get my + anyway

Christine (bluguerrilla) [+.]
m2: third beat should be a jump? (same for m4 and m6 btw) also I'd like to see the little percussive bursts throughout the song stepped
m3: second blue note needs to be a jump
m6: why is it constant jumps this time?
end of measure 4 and 6: one more 8th to the guitar? since you do it in measure 8
m11 on: every 4th note that commenses a measure should be -absent-. listen to the guitar, it leaves them out
m17: what's the second triplet to?
m24: jump on the first blue note
m25: in the second half of this measure I'd put jumps to both cymbal crashes and downgrade the red jump in between them to a single note
m26, first red note shouldn't be there
m31, should be a blue note before the first jump, like what you did the first time. same drill tho, leave out the first note of each measure
not sure about m39 on (to 47). constant 8ths? to what? and what are the gaps to then?
m71 on: one last time, remove the first 4th of each measure
m81: step the snare as minijacks?
also wow, when I looked over this a second time the number of errors/oddities I found just ballooned out. curse you blu

Cloud Control (Vote4Nixon & championanwar) [-]
oh boooy a dimrain song
okay, when the stream kicks in you have the pattern going with the minitrill off each first beat. however, each seventh beat out of a set of eight has a triplet instead of four notes and you only pick this up part of the time, make it consistent
also, each second beat should be a pattern of the 1232 variety, but I don't know if that intereferes with your Artistic Vision or not
m22: last blue note should be a single, m24: third beat should be singles and likewise when it repeats
m37 on: I know it's a slow part but you should still layer it
m54: uh, the song's over already? haha. um, I don't think I can accept this, it doesn't have anything special going for it

Core (customstuff) [-]
mmmmmh. don't like this file. to begin with, in the opening there's no reason why the start of each measure should have a jump, there's no extra instrument to it or anything. layer the thing you step with a green arrow instead. once the bass kick comes in you can layer the bass kick, bass guitar and the koncking percussive instrument
m19 on it just feels like a cluster**** of bs exaggerated 16ths with lots of jumps to beats or offbeats with nothing special about them. if you layered the bass kick, open hi-hat hits and synth hit it -might- make a reasonable chart but as it is it's just so formless, so exaggerated compared to the song. mm, this is one of those songs that sounds cool as hell but doesn't make for a good stepchart
btw, the 32nds in m30 should just have jumps on whatever other instrument co-incide with it; since nothing else would hit the orange beat at that point, for instance, it would remain a single note.
m50: the first 48th gallop should be a 32nd triplet, the other two should just be one 16th
m51 on: should be a layering of the bass drum and the snare hit, or whatever the other percussive instrument here is, and it should keep doing that until m59
m60, 62, 64: the second blue jump you throw in here doesn't go to anything, and the red jump on each measure around here doesn't go to anything likewise
m65-66 steps the background tapping noise very poorly. it's evident you have an idea for the feel of the song but aren't paying enough attention to what's going on in it
m67 it shouldn't go right back to 8ths to the bass and nothing else. layer in something, anything
end of m78 is definitely not 24th jumpgallops; it's just 16th notes
after that it's just really boring for a while, then sort of okay. okay I'm going to move on now also you missed more 32nd triplets

Counter Strike Gun Sounds (bluguerrilla) [+.]IM EXCITED :D edit: okay that wasn't as epic as I hoped
the last 8th of measure 11 should have a 16th leading into the first 4th of measure 12, same for 12, 13, 14
missing 16ths and blue jump leading into beats 4 of measures 15, 16, 17, 18
m20: step 'unstoppable' properly you ***
+. because I guess it's good :?: better then aim anthem

Defection (megamon88) [?]
m10: totally step the 24ths leading into measure 11, do it
m11 on: the gallops should be of the type 23x31 because of the instruments involved in their formation
m11 on: there seem to be phantom notes leading in and out of each measure. I can't figure out if they go to anything. I'd like to see more layering or variation of some form
m14: just so you know, the 32nds start on the yellow note. I dunno if I'd step them though, they're not that audiable
m19 on: every fourth measure ends with a little drum trill, step it as a minitrill (and maybe put a jump after it to the orchestral hit)
m27 on: imho, I'd find a sound less frequent then the snare hit to put jumps to. then maybe put jumps to it through the whole thing, like all the orchestral and distinctive non-snare percussive hits or something
m34: step the orchestral hits damnit
m36: first note shouldn't be there, second note should come earlier
m39 on: is the echoed melody hit to be stepped or not? be consistent about it
end of m46: there are 24ths [b]step them[/b]
m57 on is kinda boring, add 16ths back please
m66: oh god, too many 16ths with jumps in them, I take that back don't hurt me ;_;
end of m72: step the last drumtrill
p.s. have you played zaghurim's defection? I remember he commented that if he had restepped it today he'd have done it pretty much the same way as back then, so it's probably good to steal ideas from. specifically for the 'main' fast parts of the song which I wasn't too thrilled with

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+.]
laff
it has bs 32nds though :( at least in measures 56-58, also you missed a 16th just before the third beat of m57
m53, 16th before beat four is bs btw
also the whole layering of the two drumlines feels whack as hell (possibly because of technical inaccuracies)
+. for erroneous or missing 16ths/32nds in places. it should really be +? but I want Tass to play this >[b][/b]:)

Didj Z (robertsona) [+]
the song is called DiDJ PVC, btw
freaking awesome 32nds/everything. I wish there were more jumps, you could possibly get away with putting jumps when the two acoustic lines superimpose? only if it feels right though. and I think you could get away with snare jumps or something once it speeds up?
m28: second yellow note should be absent
the green note in the outro should be a jump imo

Disconnected HaZaRD (DarkZtar) [+.]
first blue note in m12 shouldn't be there. the rest are fine since they're an echo of something or somesuch
m33/m35: should use minijacks to the bass drum imho, as a semi-layering technique
m36: the second minijack, I'd put an orange down arrow after of those so it emulates the stuttering of the vocals here
m65 on: minijacks when the vocal is repeated on consecutive 8ths?
ending 6th jack: I'd make it 12 notes long at most, and maybe a spin instead of a jack?
overall tho I think it's a decent file to a song without too much potential.
Dizzay (customstuff) [-]
it's, um. very messy. it's a good, uh, approximation...[size=0]**** now I need to finish mine :oops:[/size]
p.s. dizzay is constant bpm
you follow the feel of the song but not very well and with lots of misrhythms and offsyncness and yeah. probably would have helped if you had it at the right bpm

Drift (Silvuh) [?]
awesome song with really bad steps. it's ultra-minimalist and very repetitive and at the same time not very balanced, with sudden 32nds out of jumps in an otherwise mellow chart. should have more layering and forced variety by changing patterns around.
also, what did the end jumpstream go to? the minijacks in it?

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [<]
drop/10
I don't care for the beginning. it feels like it misses or hits fast bursts at its own discression (16ths/24ths missing here 'n there), also half the time it steps a 24th burst as 16ths
what's with the long jumpchains from m7 and m11 and later? they're not a layering of the two melodies
shouldn't m33-41 have layering?
m67-m74: it's the same thing over and over, do you want to step it as stepjumps or straight jumps?
m59-m66: not putting jumps to bass drum/plucking instrument properly
m75: minijack off the third beat?
hehe I get an excuse to use < :twisted:

Eclipse (Luna) (gnr61~) [+]
think some of the 32nd bursts in the opening start too early
since you're semilayering the melody...in m17, why not put a down arrow on the 16th after the fourth beat?
if you followed the trend, you'd put single arrows within the two yellow jumps in m20 and m21 then a yellow note just before the fourth beat of m21, and similarly in m22 and etc etc
m29, where you have the 24ths overlaping with the 16ths, you should mix it around so it's easier to figure out. as in, first two yellow arrows on the column as one of the notes of the middle jump
I get the 32nd trill in m30, but the triplet at the end of it shouldn't be part of it, make it like UDR or something instead
layer the piano and- melody riff thing from m39 on plz
is the very ending note needed?
seems like a good scoring file, though, so + why not

Eternal Chiptune Brawl (Xandertrax) [-]
****ing boring
don't step kommisar's music (this statement kommisar approved)

Eternal Struggle (championanwar) [<]
snare on its own does not warrant a jump
if you're going to have straight 16ths later on the file before that ought to be harder
what were the gaps in m25 on to?
kinda boring

Eternal Struggle (Vote4Nixon) [+]
more consistent difficulty and better pr than the other eternal struggle

Etude For a Dragon v2 (championanwar) [+?]
Standard is not a chart so I'm judging heavy only
missed a snare hit in m17
m18 stream needs to start with a jump to the crash
the 32nd thing is pretty cool
step the wavering melody at the start of m34 instead of the straight 8ths (well 16ths since you halved the bpm but u know)
not sure if the jump into 32nds should be there since it would be a bunch harder then the rest of the file that way
m36 on is boring, layer more, like I hear a new instrument coming in and playing groups of 5 16ths for example, see what you find
oh okay, you start stepping it in m44, but it's still really underlayered. find something else to compliment it and add jumps or break up 8ths
the 16ths around m48 aren't there (there is a snare on the 16th before m48, that's it)
you missed the 32nd triplet going into m50
m52: again, step the wavering melody in preference to the 8ths (16ths at half bpm) whenever possible
missed a 16th (32nds at half bpm) triplet going into m54
fix that stuff and I'd be willing to accept it

Experiment (championanwar) [+.]
opening is ****ing boring, I don't care straight slow 4ths are the most boring thing. step that crazy synthline
the 32/3thy stuff after that looks awesome, but every second blue jump should be a 16th gallop out or minijack or something (also take out the red note half way through m12, it goes to nothing)
end of m16, I wouldn't make it turn into jumps. use minijacks with a jump to the 4ths there only
m22 on you start adding blue jumps, how come?
don't suddenly stop in m31, you should be stopping in m32
m33 on it's the same thing repeated with the drumline included back in, so you should find a way to layer it up a bit more
again: don't end a pattern abruptly with a jump. in m47 just make it step out a trilly pattern instead if you need to change it up a bit
m49 on sometimes has a third blue jump and sometimes doesn't. be consistent plz
very unique rhythms btw

Fall Apart (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [-]
patterns dull, uninspiring, huge disparity between hard and easy sections
also it uses the f-bomb constantly for 8 measures straight two times then intersperses it throught the rest of the song, pretty sure tass wouldn't accept a homo song like this

Fantasie Impromptu (power surge + dood gone krazee) [+.]
I think the first and second streams have more 16ths then are actually there in places, take another look
the 12th+32nd thing is kinda ?_?
it's not high art or anything but it's good given the song, break up the streams tho

Farewell to Axiom (EnR) [+.]
opening should have jumps to the main melody or something
holy crap m31 and m33. ffr files have to fcable by normal people, thanks
seems good other then that? woo breakcore

Forgotten Aura (kjwkjw) [-]m3: change the columns used, since it changed pitch
sometimes misses piano? like in m20 and m22
the 16ths in m32 should be a 23123 kind of pattern
m33 randomly steps the melody or not again
btw, you missed the 16th drumline triplet leading into each new measure
generic, inconsistent and just goes ooooon and on. maybe pick a song with more variety or something unusual?

Freedom Dive (Knoobish) [--]
OH BOY FREEDOM DIVE
beginning sucks, should layer the bass drum with something, the background melody is always playing constant 16ths anyhow, it doesn't make sense to do it like this
m13 steps the cymbal crashes wrong, they're hitting every third 16th
yeah okay this is terrible, screw you too knoobish :v and don't step this song
I'm going to give you a -- to spite you

Generic Techno (kjwkjw) [+]
hehe
I don't think the 32nds should be in this file, they aren't really consistent with the difficulty of the file apart from them
m16: layer the bass here
I want this in just so we have a file called Generic Techno

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [+.]
the opening is offsync in places: m3 and m5 are late, when the drumline first comes in that's late too
m15: third beat, drop that note and the 16th before it. and given the song just started, maybe the huge ass jumptrill should be LD-UR jumps?
m32, second beat should have a 16th going out of it
you missed a 16th going into m34
seems interestingly jumped so far; you apparantly step any instance of certain percussive instruments as jumps regardless of anything else around them? it kinda reminds me of the way I stepped Eight ages ago, haha. jumps to anything that sounds strong
a constant row of one percussive instrument is sometimes a jack and sometimes a jumptrill, how do you decide?
voicesync in m68-70 can be tightened
m85 on: longest 8th jack ever????? the hi-hat has two pitches here, make use of the other columns
m107: you miss a bass hit on the blue note between the two jumps at the start of this measure
m111: missed a 16th triplet at the start of this measure
m112: can you step the way it echoes?
end of m130/through m131: missed some 16ths here I think
jumpjack in m162 ends a 16th early
put a LR jump at the start of 169 so in FFR it ends at a nice spot
+.ing this because it has a nice feel

grind2 (bluguerrilla) [+]
lol

Groovin' Plains (samurai7694) [+]
Beat 0 offset is 2.58, should be 2.625
m10 on: I disagree with putting jumps to the snare accompanied by nothing else (elsewhere it's fine since it's accompanied by other instruments more prominently), I'd do it melody + bass/snare myself
m21 beat 3 misses a bass minijack
also the ending shouldn't randomly get harder
other then that tite file

Halcyon v2 (EnR) [+]
Beat 0 offset is 0, should be -0.040
step the 8ths in m3 and m4
m5: the first triplet should be LUR to conform with the last two columns those instruments were on. basically in each measure (or half measure) you should keep instruments to the same column you started them on except to avoid jacks, stuff like this makes a simple file cooler
+ing I guess since it's hard to screw up a song like this anyway

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
the jump triplets in the beginning shouldn't use the same column as the column used for the higher pitch (it's OK to change around the jumps to the heavy drum, it's the only thing it could go to anyway)
m6: 64th gallop should be 32nd gallop
(imo) m16 shouldn't start with a jump, also you miss a 16th triplet
similarly imo, m23 shouldn't start with a jump (hard compared to surrounding song)
m23 and m24 jumpjacks shouldn't be there, the heavy drum is just playing 8ths there
end of m26: 16th triplet?
m31 and m32: heavy drum playing 8ths again
a bit simplistic, I'll let tass make the call

Happiness (BluearrowII and Cry4eternity) [+.]
hand in m4 should be a single jump, same for the one in m14 -I think-
m18 fourth beat, hand?
m22 on, guitar is underlayered and such
m132 had an erroneous blue jump, same in m143
ending is awesome, notes to the bass missing in late m150/early m151, the green jump in m152 should be on the red note it precedes and the very last note is about 100ms early tho
I guess as a jumpstream file it works?
Healing Vision (akaFrOsTinG) [!]
Beat 0 offset is 0, should be 0.05
there's no way in hell we'll ever get de-sire permission though. as for errors, you underlayer the piano in the opening, and later on m41 on you mess up the drumline horribly.
before and after that though it's repetitive as hell. not a very good song to step anyway

Hello Mr. Tree (Vote4Nixon) [+?]
btw if you're supposed to be putting jumps to the snare, you're doing it poorly. for instance, m3: the snare at the end goes pink red purple but you put it on red and blue, and you miss the pink snare in m5
what do the straight 24ths in the end of m6 go to? the 48th roll in m7?
think the end of m9 should be 32nds not 24ths, also you missed a 24th gallop just before that
m10: should be a gallop into the next blue note after the first red jump
what's the last purple note of m12 going to?
end of m11 needs more 24ths
eh, constant technical errors and misrhythms/misplaced notes. be more careful if you're not sure what's going on in a song, run through it on a lower rate with assist tick both on and off and just check everything yaself
it's a cool song btw

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+.]
sync is late in the first two measures, and the random purple note?
sync continues to be awry, need to fix the sync! it's constant bpm, isn't it? why do you keep changing it around?
m51 jumpslides are a bit out of context for this relatively easy file
don't let into the game until the sync is fixed obviously

HurriKane X (robertsona) [+]
m4 should go RDU or RLD or something
m49: jump into 16ths in an easy file?
m103: wouldn't step the 24ths, just make it 12ths
I guess this is the only way you can step this file tho

Infiltration (megamon88) [+.]
understeps the acid synth in a predictable manner in the opening (missing notes at the end of every second measure)
m12, 14, etc: the first minijack is a note late (and again when it repeats later on)
m20, 22, etc: missing notes at the end of each measure
m27, 29, etc: missing a 16th at the beginning of each measure
m35: hoooolly random jumpstream. bit overly hard?
m90: I'd step the blue note before the first yellow jump

Ivaltek (Patashu) [#]
first blue note of m12 should be lead into as a gallop...wait, ****, this is my song isn't it
THERS AN EROR IN MY FILE D:
blue jump in m23 and m24 should be on the red note before it (damnit I -swore- I caught all of those)
blue jump in m27 should be on the red note before it too
the yellow jump thing in m39 feels queer as hell but so did shoehorning it onto the 8th before or after it so :< kommisar how do I solve dilemma
m55: again, shift the blue jump back one
m56: same
m59: same
are the chains in the end ok?

Kidney Stone (DossarLX ODI) [+]
m18: the 4 long 16th burst in this measure is actually 5 notes long this time, same for m22, m26, m148
end of m20: second last blue note shouldn't be there
end of m24 is missing a note, same for m28
what happened to the first triplet in m43?
m111: there should probably be another blue note between the first and second LR jumps so it's five notes long
same for m143
liking this, solid scoring file

La Campanella (who_cares973) [+.]
Beat 0 offset is 0, should be -0.045 (thanks, who_cares973)
disagreeing with the 32nds in m16 on being minitrills. should be patterns of the form 3212 like they are when played on the piano
yellow notes in m22-28 should 'wander' the same way the piano player is wandering, right now they're sticking to one column at a time
m35 should start with a jump?
m37: when the 24th jack begins, the blue jump before it isn't a part of it so shift it
m46: the 16ths between 32nd/24th spurts should be straight jumps by the sounds of it except possibly for the first 1-2 notes each time
the last blue note of the 24th jack in m49 should be part of the trill after it
jump at end of m62?
for the hugeass 32nd jumptrill: maybe make every 'hard' chord hit (i.e. the first 8th then every four 8ths after) a LR jump? so that the breaking up of the trill feels consistent in some way
after m79 ya got yellow note syndrome and you keep it until you shoehorn in a fix at m104
m79 on: straight jumpjacks should perhaps have one column 'fixed' and the other one wandering? the same way the piano is
m82: the four notes ending this part need to be jumps, you forgot
middle of m83 on: layering the piano would produce patterns like 21222221222221222221 etc (where 2/1 is the number of notes in the chord)
end of m88 on: missing jumps??? there aren't gaps in the piano where you're putting them. also at the end of m100
m109 on: are the single hits between 16th runs meant to be quads or jumps or hands?

Metropolis [8-bit] (OperationStrawbarry) [!]
it turned into drop

Mourning Heart (BluearrowII) [+.]
colouring is utterly random, might confuse those who don't understand where the colouring is derived from
fast slides into a jump probably too much for such a slow song/easy chart? imo just take out every jump that's connected to a slide
these notes should probably be a jump: yellow note in m10, first note of m21, second red note in m26, note in m46, notes in m49,
the second blue note in m25 should be a minijack, listen closer
jump half way through m53 should be a gallop

Nightrain (trumaestro) [+?]
opening hand doesn't make sense: jump into a triplet might
opening: maybe layer in the open hi-hat hits? when it goes hish instead of tink
m4: step the trilly-thing the guitar does at the beginning of this measure?
end of m17 should be straight 24ths
second 24th run in m19 should be a 32nd triplet instead
m22 incorrectly layers the piano and harpsicord/string thing/whatever you call it
the two yellow DR jumps in m27 shouldn't be there
32nds in m35/m37 are misrhythmed
half way through m47 there's a guitar gallop you only layer the first note of
overall feels kinda inconsistent and a bit sloppy; the PR for the guitar could probably be tightened all over, layering tightened and more consistent, etc.

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [+]
second blue note in m47 & m55 should be a jump
third note in m56 should be a jump
m60 should end with a minijack
not much else to say, really, not that interesting a song melodically so this is about all you can do
Off the Wall (bluguerrilla & Vote4Nixon) [+]
first blue note in m19, jump
should be a blue note before the lone yellow in m33
end of m84 feels wrong
everyone's gonna complain that you stepped the sissy piano in the beginning instead of the breakcore percussion, but that isn't neccesarily _wrong_ :)

Omnishred (MeaCulpa) [+]
m82: second jump should be lead out of with a three note jack, ending on the next red note on a different column. same for m86
m102-m103 isn't right
shouldn't be a gap in m135

Pain Redefined (stavie33) [?]
m17-m18 are too hard imho
m35 on: 8th jacks to the guitar?
m70 jumptrill makes no sense.
m72 on: jumps to the snare drum or something.
m75: why the blue jump in the trill?
m80 on is -way- underlayered
blue note in m91 should be a jump
constant stream in m90 to nothing? I understand you're trying to change it up every time it repeats, but it doesn't work if you have to make crap up

Piano Concerto No. 1 'ANTI-ARES' (For Kirby) (Bmah) [+?]
need to step the ultra-deep piano in the opening, for shame
then what are you doing? putting jumps to single instruments? for shaaame
miss some 16ths at the end of m9
m10, m14: misses the 16th minijacks into the third beats
m13: missing 16th triplets to the bass drum
m39: do you have something against the 24th-12th hihat DO YOU D:<
m53: just so u know the flute isn't playing on the first note of most measures here
m60: 16ths are misarranged: should be a triplet, then starting on the next red note lead into what you've got for the rest
m80: missed cool 16ths to the bass
m81: jump to the second blue note?
m92: first triplet is erroneous. however, I hear two of my own: off the first blue note, to the piano, and off the second red note, to the percussion
m93 on: why not step the hi-hat triplets here? and the bass
m109 isn't -nearly- intense enough given what we just went through, layer some more
m125 on: seriously? layer moreeeee
this is mother****ing climax theory 101

Push (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
no clue what to think about this file. it's wrong but sort of right?
could benefit from more proper layering of the 2-3 melodies for the first 30 measures, maybe?
misses 16th gallops to the percussion in m26 on

PWRPFF RAVES (-Barista-) [-]
what a mess. all these constant streams? I don't hear anything streaming in this song, there's something playing triplets, there's the obligatory amen break and later on a synth playing groups of 5 notes but no constant stream.
also I don't get the yellow jumps in the beginning
wow, the 32nd minijacks, lol
it has some technical aspects down but the huge bs streams ruin it for now, this could be good
Radiant Moonlight (cry4eternity) [+?]
should start with a jump
missing 16ths in m10-m17 to the echoing instrument? I can understand why you'd ignore it tho
m44 on isn't fully layered in places
what you do in m52 on doesn't make sense. it should relate to the synth instrument that just came in
second blue note in m65 is erroneous, and I don't like the layering in this part. it reminds me of palindrome which was similarly boring
not a fan of the big jumpstream that comes after, given how easy the rest of the file was
not a fan of this file
RAIN (_.Spitfire._ & bluguerrilla) [+]
pr could be tighter? the repetitions of columns on a local level is fine but the overall left/right flow of it feels off
end of m37 has the purple jump in the wrong place (should be before the red jump before it)
missed a jump before the fourth beat of m53
wouldn't have the jump in m61
simple file but seems tight other then that. not much to screw up anyway heh

Revival Day Impoetus OC Remix (DarkbearX) [+?]
for instance in the beginning and end, why do the jacks start with jumps and why do the heavy bass hits sometimes come up as a single note and sometimes as a jump?
m19 is missing 8ths to the 'click' instrument
what's up with the 24th slide in m31? it's the same sound as it is every other time
when the hi-hat 16th runs come in (m34 on) you seem to have random breaks and random jumps
m45: you missed a jack, since you stepped it as one last time
random yellow jump in m55?
m66: the first lone red note shouldn't be there
m77: around the first blue note, you missed a short organ burst
m93: jack should start on a red and end on a yellow, like how you did it the other times
m100 on: blue jump when the two organs layer?
this is a cool song btw, see if you can make it more consistent and intuitive

River of Ever Changing Forms (bluguerrilla) [+.]
m9 on: I'm pretty sure the triplets starting on a red note are erroneous
m24: second jump should be a bit earlier
m26 on: 32nds into jump strike me as a bit out of place for such a mellow song
m33 on: the trills should be more ABCBC kinds of patterns, imho (same for m69/70 when they reappear) (oh damn you you do it the way I suggested it later you ****er you)
m49: again, not hearing the triplets that start on red notes
m66: first beat should have an R note
m68: last blue beat should have an L note
m71: should be 12ths, -then- 16ths (some of the following ones might be closer to 12ths too)
m80: should start with 12ths
m82: again, second jump a bit earlier
watch out for 12ths in m95 on again

Round (Coolboyrulez0) [+]
m49 on should step the 16ths in the synth
other than that good

Saddest RMX (customstuff) [<]
what the hell was that 32nd/24th thing in the beginning
the sets of four 16th jumps should only have jumps on the 8ths
what the hell is that thing at the end of m40
cool I love 250 bpm streams with jumps in them thanks
what the hell is that thing at the end of m52
why does m53 on have no gaps aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
cool I love 250 bpm 32nd jumptrills thanks
missed the drum triplets in the end

Saddest RMX (Dore) [+]
about as good a file you're going to get for ****ing saddest rmx
step all those other good drumcorps songs, like incarnate & forgive and forget
ps you missed the drum triplets in the end

Session (Patashu) [#]
awww **** babababa
m27, second beat, make it a jump
m33 on: now that I'm listening with headphones I can hear the main and back melody properly. maybe layer those and unlayer the hi-hat every blue beat
m49-m50 has more 32nds if you want more 32nds

Sjon (-Barista-) [-]
bpm is probably 140 not 140.01 <.<
this isn't on the list of songs we can use that are by zaghurim (unless I'm mistaken?) so I can't accept this
the file itself: weird, wrong/inconsistent feeling jump usage and random hands, also inconsistent/wrong minijack usage, also any part with four 32nd notes is wrong; it's actually a 32nd triplet starting the 16th after the jump before it
Ska de Chocobo (Redorigami) [-]
step the triplet in m3/m19/m35
jumptriplet at the beginning of m9 is erroneous (only one instrument playing; imo I wouldn't put jumps to straight snare drum at all)
m41/m42 should have 8th minijacks to the bass before the 12ths
m55 should have 5 16ths in the beginning
m69 shouldn't have single notes  half way through it where there's silence
m78/m79 is triplets on the bass drum, not straight stream
ending is -completely- wrong, except for the straight 16ths (those are correct)


Skeletor (cut) (psycho & bluguerrilla) [-]
I BOW TO NO ONE!
NOT EVEN YOU, BLUGUERRILLA!
HEHEHEHEH

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [+.]
very well stepped, but the opening is seriously boring as hell

Solar Force (Zybanthia) [+]
maybe layer the bell when it starts in m49? you'd only get one more jump every other measure
me love this file long time

Sonata in F- Presto (akaFrOsTinG) [+?]
none of this jumpstream crap in an easy piano file
in fact, too many of the files in this batch cram jumpstream into otherwise easy files, stop iiiit :<
jump usage felt kinda weak or inconsistent in places, and more pitch relevancy should be used (it is classical after all)
make sure you're only using a jump when two pianos collide and always doing so when you are (unless it rams awkwardly into 16ths or creates long runs of nothing but jumps, in which case find a way to semi-layer it i.e. only put jumps to piano chords)
missed a slide halfway through m61

Sonic 3 - Bossbattle (RMX) (Coolboyrulez0) [-]
minijacks in the pitch aren't stepped correctly (for instance, the jumprun at the end of m7 and going into m8 should be something like ABBBCCDE etc)
m13 needs to have another jump, first blue note at the beginning
half way through m13 on: constant jumps are boring, why not step the melody as 12312312etc patterns and put jumps to the snare/cymbal?
really really short...it's intended as a loop, so pop it into audacity and have it repeat itself

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [-]
beginning is meh, why do the minijacks suddenly start wandering and why did you only half-step the synth?
vocals have more 16ths put to them then there should be, and jump usage feels random
you need to pay more attention to the music you're stepping and what you're putting down, you change the way you steps thing at random
I kinda like the song btw

Story of the Constellations (Patashu) [#]
easy

Sunset Dept. (Cyclops Dragon) [?]
opening puts jumps to one instrument and a single step to nothing
feels inconsistent in a vsnares-put-jumps-to-any-drum-that-sounds-important kinda way
why don't you practice putting single notes every time a percussive instrument plays (bass drum, snare or hi-hat/cymbal) and create jumps that way? that kinda thing
make sure the rhythms are spot on while you're at it btw

Super Spy Hunter (who_cares973) [+?]
has random minijacks and pitch relevancy errors: first one in m2 and the one in m3 for instance, and the slide at the end of m5 should be a 2123 kinda pattern, fix your pr yo
lol short song, that means make it perfect

Swallowing an Avalanche (New Mix) (Bynary Fission) [+?]
stream position/length is erratic and seems to change from measure to measure in ways the song isn't changing (compare, for instance, the end of m16 to the beginning of m25)
minijacks are almost certainly inconsistent too
the last beat of m35/m37 should be absent
minijacks in m39 and m40 are too long
I get what the 64th gallops at the beginning of m42 are going to, but since it's basically just a sample cutting error and barely audiable I wouldn't do it. also, the minijacks should be going 221 221
first yellow note of m50 is bs
in m65 where you're syncing the vocals, the last yellow and orange notes need to be taken out and a green note placed exactly between them both
jump placement seems to suddenly be wrong in m84-m86?

cool song and looks like it could be an awesome chart, but needs more attention; stick to a rule of if the music in the song isn't changing, neither should your steps, and if the song changes to add in something new your steps should reflect that. if you step something as stream keep stepping it as stream unless a new instrument takes precedence over it, if you step something as a minijack step it as a minijack everywhere
polish this plz

Szamar Madar (nvwls300) [+]easy vsnares supremacy
m39-40 should have gallops off the triplets to bring it in line with the other time it occurs
this is probably inconsistent as hell but I don't care

Temple (Xandertrax) [+]
mmmmmm slow files
just one thing: if the gallop in m26 gets a note to the echo, they all should, otherwise none of them should
finally step the echo at the end to keep it going a bit longer

The Great Storm (foilman8805) [+.]
missing a blue note at the end of m7; maybe make the yellow jump a single?
this is kinda meh but technically correct otherwise sooooo...

The Past (_.Spitfire._) [+]
pitch relevancy of the gallops can be improved
m14 on should be arranges to feel like it's 'falling'
other than that good

TizAshura (Vote4Nixon) [+.]
cool song but steps seem to randomly miss 16ths and add jumps in. I can't really follow it. idk. you can't just add a jump because you think a beat feels stronger though unless it actually is due to the juxtaposition of two instruments
slowdown in m9 is wronggg
gallop in m23 should be 32nd not 64th

Try to Star (DarkZtar) [+?]
IMHO the snare should not get instant priority for any and all jumps. layer in the bass drums or crashes or whatever else whenever possible. bass drums rule, crashes more so. but don't do something if it just feels chunky or awkward, ok? use personal discression, I am fallible and able to suggest something that will suck hard
in m17 I'd layer in the bass drum so it goes something like (LD)(R)(LD)(UR) in the end, that would be cool
long 8th jacks hq (NOTE: not neccesarily a bad thing just not something you see in a file often)
m24: missed a 16th triplet at the beginning of this measure
m28/48 is definitely not 16ths
m29 on: there are cymbal crashes when the guitar plays a string of blue notes, so put jumps on those and not on the snares in between them, same for when this repeats, this makes it cooler because it's accenting the guitar -and- the cymbal crashes so it's not just bsing jumps to put priority to the guitar or anything, yaknow?
missed a 16th triplet in m33
missed a note in m44 to the secondary melody and 16ths to the guitar at the end of this measure 
m59/m60: [b]WAUUUGGGHHHHH[/b] lol
8ths in m75? maybe
end of m90 should be 12ths not 16ths
missed a 16th triplet in m105
missed a 16th bass triplet in m117
end of m134 is 12ths not a 16th triplet

Turn Soonest to the Sea [Oni] (MeaCulpa) [+]
end of m2 and m4 are 32nd triplets, not whatever you're putting
32nd/48th roll in m14 is partially erroneous (for instance, the 32nd leadin is not there, and half way through the wall it slows down)
seems alright over all, big offender of the 'I am the lord snare, thou shalt have no other drums before me' variety but w/e

Twelve (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+]
do we really need a jump in the beginning? it's whispered
m6: you put a three note jack to the bass drum but not a two note jack only a bit later?
m45: the jumps should be around the third beat, not including it, imo
I'm just going to + this since it seems awwwright
our twelves are too different to compare properly

Twelve (Patashu) [#]
I put a lifetime of work into these patterns, and I don't indiscriminantly put jumps to the snare [b]UNLIKE SOME PEOPLE :[[/b] looking at you, ever single person who's ever stepped venetian snares who's name isn't Patashu
One Hundred Year Opus, Evening of Forbidden Step: Twelve
whoops, end of m91/92 is early as hell
(and yes, the 64/3th trill is accurate)
I wonder if I could tighten it up any more...

Twilight Desert (Xandertrax) [+?]
32nds shouldn't come out of jumps in easy files
jumps in m54,m56,m58,m60 to the flute
not as boring as eternal chiptune brawl; I'd cut it so it begins at second 75 (after the first chorus) so the length is tolerable then maybe put notes to the snare hit during the first half of the chorus, idk

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom (stavie33) [+.]
m12: mirror the second roll and jack
the cymbal hits on their own in m29/m31 shouldn't be hands
yellow jumps in m40 should be purple
good I guess? too lazy to look for more errors

Until You Leave (bluguerrilla) [+]
you step 16ths to the hi hat in m6 but not in m10, why?
last 4th of m39 should be a jump
the two jumps halfway through m41 are erroneous. after the first jump of m41 it should go R, R, 8th pause, five sixteenth notes
16th triplet near the end of m63?
other than that I like it so gj

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+.]
in the opening...if you're stepping it as a layer of both hands, it should go jump, jump, gallop single single jump, jump etc.
if you're stepping it with jumps to the chord-playing right hand regardless it should go jump, jump, gallop into jump jump single jump, jump etc
as it is and in light of the fact that you throw in jumpstream and jumptrills later it's wrong either way
m17 on: step the occasional 16th note that crops up here, imo, also at the end of the first two 'runs' (and also when those ones repeat) the melody plays three notes in a row of the same pitch
the yellow jump in m31/m79 probably isn't neccesary
m57 on confuses me. there has to be some kind of stepmania code of ethic you break when you make patterns like this. in any case I don't think you put jumps to the 'strong' notes of the synth melody anyway
accept w/ changes
Voyage 1969 (Zybanthia) [+?]
that right handed pattern around the beginning of m7 is augh
missed a cymbal crash at the beginning of m40
pr in m41 on feels a bit whack. why are two notes sharing the down column when it's going 12321232 if they have different pitches? you do it right with the URDLURDL etc pattern once but other times don't. why is the gallop at the end of m43 DU when it's the same pitch as an earlier UR gallop?
m49 on feels really...generic? 16ths don't follow the hi-hat completely, and there's nothing else they could be following. if you listen closely there's an open hi-hat noise in the background, as well as the snare drum echoing sometimes, so you could echo the way the hi-hat is playing (which is predominantly the yellow notes in the middle of each measure and sometimes straight 16ths at the beginning or end) with that
m113 on: it's the same section of music as has occured earlier, but with the 	drumline layered in, so it should feel harder to reflect the way the music is more complex now (layer in anything basically)
m117-m118 is wrong, you copy+pasted in the wrong section of piano
ends a bit abruptly, I'd add three more 8ths on the down arrow to the bass drum then continue on stepping a watered down version of the drumline for a bit

Wave Rip -Final- (Silvuh) [-]
feels wrong in usual brokenly layered silvuh style
actually stepping each instrument correctly when layering them will go a long way towards making good files
Witches Hat (Patashu) [#]
ninja layering technique employed
if you're not sure why a jump is in the beginning, I'm layering the hi hat and other percussion as separate instruments for that part
later on, where the spooky organ guy plays (m33 on), I employed a rule to prevent it from getting overcrowded; if the main melody (right hand) is not playing, the percussion and left hand cannot add together to form a jump.
hope dis file has bought you an unconventional stepmania experience
hmm... measure 46, second blue note should possibly have a 24th leading out of it?

Yeah Yeah Beats (Patashu) [#]
easy

yorukumoryuu yamakazi (Sc979) [+]
2123 12th patterns should ascend in pitch as the instrument does
m32: how about a minijack? LLDUR
end of m98/m99 is definitely erroneous, I can't hear any combination of instruments playing that, make something that fits
how about making m100 on harder? (layer snare?)

You're My Number One (bmah) [+]
m49: put something here, like step the vocal or something
m70 on should step less and less until the final note, instead of being sudden silence
other then that it feels intuitive so gj

Zymgoria's 8-Bit Adventure (EnR) [-]
hmm yes huge fast jacks in an ffr file
this will surely get by the judges
they're all longer then they should be btw and oh yes let's put them all on the left hand :D
and when the melody overlays with the jacks you can't break them up like that
anyway tass has said he won't accept zagh songs    I   s�e


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666 MPH (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
some parts are enjoyable but a bit repetitive, missing some rhythms

A Battle for the Sky (Silvuh) [+? / 5]
I know this is meant to be an easy file but it could be more fun

ABCDEath [dore] [+. / 6] (10)
felt m34 is weird but ok. short

Alone Again At 4AM (foilman8805) [? / 4.5]
ok rhytrhms, PR is ok at parts but could be better, overall could be improved

Angel Island Remix (Silvuh) [+ / 7] (10)
rhythms are correct, decent jack placement

Band Dynamics (dore) [+? / 5.5]
swing is fun but some bass drums could be layered, also felt a bit long

Beautiful Synergy (boondocks77 + _.Spitfire._) [? / 4]
felt missing a lot of rhythms, patterns could be better

Before Dawn (Yoshiisland) [- / 0.5]
pretty offsync

Beloved Girl's Rondo [sc979] [+. / 6] (6)
simple and accurate, repetitive for a short song tho

Betrayal of Fate (Patashu) [+. / 7] (8)
tight file, a bit long though

Black and White (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
maybe on a bit understepped side, but ok

Black Apple (SacredInsanity vs Buizel) [- / NA]
freezes

Blindfolds Aside (dore) [+. / 6] (11)
this sounds epic but I hate jacks usage overall and inaccurate at parts. semi-acceptance

Bogey at your Six (HighAndr0id&EAG) [? / 5]
many misrhythms, also didn't like pattern choices on some parts much

Bus Rides With People (kommisar[os] & bluguerrilla) [+ / 7.5] (11)
fun DnB

Caixa D'Aqua (bmah) [+? / 5.5]
many misrhythms (most are minor ones tho), patterns are ok, felt empty at parts

Christine (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6] (7)
nothing wrong but nothing special at the same time. maybe ok

Cloud Control (Vote4Nixon & championanwar) [? / 3.5]
24ths are meh, song is way too repetitive imo

Core (customstuff) [? / 5]
need songcut, beginning was ok but getting boring. some misrhythms

Counter Strike Gun Sounds (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6.5] (10)
funny concept, didn't like some jack patterns tho

Defection (megamon88) [? / 5]
didn't find it fun in the stream, rhythms could be better overall. ending wasn't too bad

DeVouR (Xandertrax) [+? / 6]
looks better w/ jump reduction, still felt some 32nd related patterns are awkward.
also some 32nds in m53-59 are wrong, etc

Didj Z (robertsona) [+. / 6.5] (10)
accurate rhythms

Disconnected HaZaRD (DarkZtar) [? / 4.5]
not too different from A0 steps in R2, minijacks could be added, ending 12ths aren't needed
stream patterns could be better

Dizzay (customstuff) [? / 3.5]
felt like a lot of rhythms are bs (some are ok), song is too abstract to step.
jacks are annoying (and don't fit the music well)

Drift (Silvuh) [+. / 6] (6)
progressing with a repetition, ok concept since it's short

Drop (OperationStrawbarry) [? / 4.5]
v2, felt 16th jumps are kinda out of place

Eclipse (Luna) (gnr61~) [+. / 6.5] (12)
kinda accurate file, although getting sick of those kind of rhythms

Eternal Chiptune Brawl (Xandertrax) [? / 5]
not wrong but not a big fan of those constant trills/jumps honestly, also felt missing some rhythms

Eternal Struggle (championanwar) [? / 5]
m17-21 is too much compared to others (and not climax), awkward patterns at parts

Eternal Struggle (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
a bit more consistent but lack of change, boring

Etude for a dragon v2 (ChampionAnwar) [+. / 6.5] (8)
didn't find especially new things for a v2 but accurate rhythms/better sync anyway

Experiment (championanwar) [+? / 5.5]
unique rhythms and not bad, a bit repetitive, felt patterns are a bit random

Fall Apart (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+? / 6]
ok style but it should be cut imo

Fantasie Impromptu (power surge + dood gone krazee) [+? / 5.5]
some rhythms are wrong, want some break for melody in streams

Farewell to Axiom (EnR) [? / 4.5]
didn't like jack/jump usage much overall (not technically wrong maybe)

Forgotten Aura (kjwkjw) [? / 4]
some parts are fun but missing 16ths for drums, underlayered at parts, songcut

Freedom Dive (Knoobish) [- / 1.5]
apparently overstepped, pretty gay overall

Generic Techno (kjwkjw) [+? / 5.5]
some parts are accurate, felt m16-24 is weird

GENTLEMAN (samurai7694) [? / 3.5]
I don't think green notes are needed, jumps/triples are overused

grind2 (bluguerrilla) [+. / 7] (12)
sync in m58, has some gay patterns in bursts as always but this is interesting

Groovin' Plains (samurai7694) [+. / 6] (6)
hmm ok

Halcyon V2 (EnR) [? / 5]
better than V1 but PR(flutes could be trills)/layering could be more accurate imo

Half Symphony (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4.5]
jumpjacks on m23-? using some jacks for the same instruments would make it more fun

Happiness (Bluearrowll and Cry4eternity) [? / 4]
unnecessary hands, inconsistent layering

Healing Vision (akaFrOsTinG) [! / NA]
permission

Hello Mr. Tree (Vote4Nixon) [? / 5]
felt rhythms aren't correct in many parts, cool song though

Hot Soup (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [? / 3]
sync could be better (late/unstable overall), file could be more interesting imo

HurriKane X (robertsona) [+? / 5.5]
concept is ok for an easier file, just song is too long

Infiltration (megamon88) [+ / 7] (10)
nice structure, accuracy and jack usage

Ivaltek (Patashu) [+ / 7] (9)
a bit repetitive cause of sharpnel but nice patterns/16ths

Kidney Stone (DossarLX ODI) [+. / 6.5] (11)
seems accurate rhythms/layering, patterns are ok maybe

La Campanella(who_cares973) [+. / 7] (12)
sync could be tweaked overall but others are ok. some parts are p. crazy and high FGO material

Metropolis [8-bit] (OperationStrawbarry)

Mourning Heart (Bluearrowll) [+. / 6.5] (5)
acceptable sync

Nightrain (trumaestro) [? / 5]
a few misrhythms(24ths/32nds), some awkward polyrhythm patterns/jack and hand placement, has potential though

Oceans of Time (DarkZtar) [+? / 5.5]
on m24/44 rolls are gay, layered rhythms are better, m60- needs climax

Off the Wall (bluguerrilla & Vote4Nixon) [+. / 6.5] (9)
ok PR

Omnishred (MeaCulpa) [? / 5]
misrhythm/inconsistent at parts, felt some jump parts are too intense compared to others

Pain Redefined (stavie33) [? / 4.5]
some parts are quite understepped, left jacks are a bit gay, jump parts are ok. song could be cut

Piano Concerto No. 1 'ANTI-ARES' (For Kirby) [bmah] [+? / 5,5]
felt some jumpstreams are overdone compared to others, minijacks aren't needed
m12/16/etc need a note for 4th, m101-/etc don't need to be double jacks, m108 is 32nds

Push (Vote4Nixon) [? / 4]
hmm kind of boring and repetitive, minijacks could be used

PWRPFF RAVES (-Barista-) [? / 2.5]
beginning trills, many inaccurate rhythms, etc

Radiant Moonlight (cry4eternity) [? / 3.5]
the parts where minijacks are put are a bit wrong, felt missing other background 16ths
last jumpstream is inconsistent at parts

RAIN (_.Spitfire._ & bluguerrilla) [+. / 6] (7)
ending rolls are kind of meh but ok

Revival Day Impoetus OC Remix (DarkbearX) [+ / 7.5] (9)
this is quite fun, jack placement still could be polished maybe

River of Ever Changing Forms (bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
not bad but felt a bit weird/boring

Round (Coolboyrulez0) [? / 5]
felt a bit repetitive, missing a few rhythms (mostly ok)

Saddest (customstuff) [- / 1.5]
no thx

Saddest RMX [dore] [+? / 5.5]
not bad but felt ending is a bit off, and some parts are overdone.

Session (Patashu) [+ / 7] (8)
mm okay file

Ska de Chocobo (Redorigami) [? / 5]
blue on 4th, felt missing some notes for melody, sync on the last part isn't very good

Skeletor (cut) (psycho & bluguerrilla) [+? / 5.5]
eh file was enjoyable but 32nd walls are too retarded sry, and getting sick of rolls

Slow Down (Xandertrax) [+. / 6] (6)
didn't get some jump placement but ok

Solar Force (Zybanthia) [? / 5]
felt steps are getting monotonous (maybe 50% due to the song, especially 8th parts)

Sonata in F- Presto(akaFrOsTinG) [+ / 7] (8)
this is pretty decent piano file

Sonic 3 - Bossbattle (RMX)(Coolboyrulez0) [? / 4]
35sec, a bit too jumpy/simple overall

Stai With Me (-Barista-) [? / 3.5]
felt missing rhythms, too long, and I think vocal isn't very interesting to follow

Story of the Constellations (Patashu) [+. / 6.5] (5)
cyan notes on only beginning? not a big deal though

Sunset Dept. (CyclopsDragon) [+? / 6]
hands on non-FMO, still some rhythms could be fixed, concept is p.cool tho

Super Spy Hunter(who_cares973) [? / 4.5]
26sec song, PR could be better imo (some are ok)

Swallowing an Avalanche (New Mix) (Bynary Fission) [+. / 7] (11)
fun DnB, felt some jacks are too much though

Szamar Madar (nvwls300) [- / NA]
multi-difficulty, no need for v2

Temple (Xandertrax) [? / 3.5]
felt so abstract and I didn't get what's going on well

The Great Storm (foilman8805) [+? / 6]
jacks might be fun, might be annoying. not innovative style anymore though

The Past (_.Spitfire._) [+. / 6.5] (8)
some jacks could be added but it's ok overall

TizAshura (Vote4Nixon) [+? / 5.5]
not wrong but felt unappealing and a bit repetitive.

Try to Star (DarkZtar) [+. / 6.5] (10)
it's decent, some 16th rhythms are questionable though

Turn Soonest to the Sea [Oni] (MeaCulpa) [+? / 5.5]
a few misrhythms, fast sections could be more fun imo

Twelve (Brilliant Dynamite Neon) [+. / 6.5] (10)
Twelve (Patashu) [> / 6.5]
close. BDN's more fun (and better mp3) for me, some bursts are gay though

Twilight Desert (Xandertrax) [? / 4.5]
felt a bit repetitive and inconsistent

Ultimate Drum Set Solo of Doom 2.0 (stavie33) [+. / 6.5] (11)
audible, besides hand placement and sync at parts it's ok

Until You Leave (bluguerrilla) [+. / 6] (6)
ok easy file, the length bored me though

Versatile (Xandertrax) [+? / 5.5]
got a bit better and 32nds are ok, still could be more fun and some jacks could be used tho

Voyage 1969 (Zybanthia) [+. / 7] (10)
felt this got better. right handed patterns around jacks are a bit hardh though

Wave Rip -Final- (Silvuh) [+. / 6.5] (8)
sounds ok

Witches Hat (Patashu) [+. / 7] (9)
kinda a bit weird but interesting file

Yeah Yeah Beats (Patashu) [+? / 5.5]
maybe okay stepping method, bit a bit weird/repetitive for me

yorukumoryuu yamikaze [sc979] [+. / 6.5] (11)
this could have more jacks/minijacks, overall fun though. hands, barely FMO?

You're My Number One (bmah) [+ / 7] (8)
this felt nice

Zymgoria's 8-Bit Adventure (EnR) [! / NA]
not approvable


[size=+2][b]Kommi's Notes[/b][/size]
FFR Batch Notes December 5th - January 15th

Bong-Ra - 666mph (+.) 6/10
-Beginning Pitch Relevancy is questionnable
-Missed a few beats in the beginning (percussions beginning of measure 20 for example)
-should put a few more jumps in that same sequence so it doesn't feel understepped (this is optional)
-m29 you seem to ignore the beats you were following in the start since it's the same thing
-Song a little repetitive and some parts could of followed vocals to give diversity

Ikodo Moonstrife - A Battle for the Sky (+?) 5.5/10
-Nice pitch relevancy throughout the song
-the 8th beat patterns are kind of boring and generic
-Song is very repetitive even if the chart is meant to be easy

PSychostick - ABCDEath (+) 7/10
-Nice sync/song choice lmao
-Only thing that irked me was the beginning with 8th patterns and no jumps, feels kinda empty

nubbin149 - Alone Again At 4AM (?) 4.5/10
-m13 pitch relevancy starts getting wrong, m28 as well (there are no same two notes so no jack)
-Missed a few jumps for multiple piano notes
-Cute piano tune but needs fixes

darphfluffy - Angel Island Remix (-) 4/10
-just a little detail i noticed, the jumps you added in measure 2 there should be one on the first
16th note you put if you're following that little melody that comes in.
-some parts are overlayered, some underlayered (ex:m45), not too consistent
-Some jacks felt like too much; however, most are correct
-starting at m62 i'm sure it would've been easier to use 24ths rather than trying to sync that, I could be wrong though
-some parts with the jump jacks just doesn't flow all that well

About - Band Dynamics (+?) 5/10
-m25 feels like some 12ths are left out and the ones you did put in are kinda random if you don't put the rest
-PR on jumps could be better if you're following guitar
-slowdown was random? 
-m91 i don't hear any 12ths there, if you're following vocals it's offsync
-following vocals ruins the chart 90% of the time ~necros
-Chart has some potential but needs fixes especially during main chorus parts

DJ Sharpnel - Beautiful Synergy (-) 3/10
-m3 you stop following 24ths? same with a few other parts
-Inconsistent use of jumps, underlayered parts
-Song has been done way too many times and a decent chart simply can't be done out of it

Issac Shepard - BeforeDawn (--) (0/10)
-first notes are very, very offsync 
-As a matter of fact this entire file is offsync

IOSYS - Beloved Girl's Rondo (?) 4.5/10
-PR is off at parts, this is important especially in easy files
-Song is short and repetitive

Goukisan - Betrayal of Fate (+.) 6.5/10
-I would have liked to see more jumps but i guess that's optional
-Some pr parts are excusable but others aren't since the guitar is easy to follow
-Chart is very repetitive

KgZ - Black and White (-) 4/10
-so much more can be done with this chart, it seems you follow percussions when you feel like it
-some pr parts are off
-m65 this entire part is underlayered

XI - Black Apple (-) 7.5/10
-Sean you missed all freezes. gj bro
-submit this without freezes and i would have accepted it no doubt. would make a good fmo/fgo

Protest the Hero - Blindfolds Aside (+.) 5.5/10
-sync could be better, some parts are pretty late
-not sure if you should include hands in this, i mean personally i like them but :ffr rules fgo: etc.
-chart was actually pretty fun, the speedups and bpm changes are confusing as hell lmao

virt - Bogey at your Six (+) 7.5/10
-you missed a 4th note on m10
-m37 they're 24ths not 32nds
-amazing song, great chart, fun and challenging
-last two notes weren't really necessary

wisp - Bus Rides With People (#)
-CRD approves

naotyu - Caixa D'Aqua (+) 8.5/10
-Cool song, excellent chart
-sync on guitar/piano feels good minus a few parts 
-Possibly a few little notes missing (as i've told you) but nothing huge

Permanent ME - Christine (-) 4/10
-m3 missed a percussion hit
-pr is off completely for guitar
-jumps on vocals is meh
-things could've been added to make the chart more interesting since the song is repetitive. 

Dimrain47 - Cloud Control (+?) 5/10
-stream files are very 2004. the patterns could flow a little better
-all the 24ths you put are 32nds
-m47 should of kept following the stream since this makes the chart inconsistent, same with the rest
of this part of the song

AEROjet - Core (?) 4/10
-jack theory could've been used here to accentuate the bass drum hits
-streams seem all over the place and have a hard time seeing what it's following
-m78 they're not 24ths, 16ths would've been fine
-the middle part is rather boring and repetitive

Envy - Counter-Strike Gun Sounds (+) 7/10
-being a cs player for 7 years, this is heartwarming <3
-Only concern was one part where you should have layered jumps (m25 and so on)
-really makes you feel like you're playing the song....or guns i guess

ParagonX9 - Defection (+?) 5/10
-if you're going to layer jumps in the stream, do it in the first stream as well or simply don't use them
-m57 you should layer the percussion beats as well, since you follow this at the end. just a matter
of consistency

DJ Cristo - DeVouR (?) 4.5/10 
-hard dump. needs more jumps because right now it feels like an empty dump. (talking about the beginning)
-this is pretty much a scoring file but don't see much fun in it

The Flashbulb - Didj Z (+) 7/10
-in the start sequence you could've put a few jumps for the small hits
-cool technical chart, patterns aren't too difficult
-Blue man group anyone?

DM Ashura Feat. Inspector K - Disconnected Hazard (+.) 6/10
-stream patterns in the fast part were eh
-nothing much to say about this file since it's well made for the most part

Doormouse - Dizzay (+.) 6/10
-the sync needs some work at parts
-the file itself, being a good challenge, is good

SGX - Drift (?) 4.5/10
-some background percussion is ignored
-file feels a little short
-beginning feels very underlayered, much more could be done with it

Dr.1010 - Drop (?) 4.5/10
-m5 they're 24ths not 16ths, same with m9 etc.
-jump patterns could be improved for better pr
-melody pr needs work also
-jump jacks were a little much imo and ruin the flow

Glome - Eclipse (Luna) (+) 7/10
-Those 32nd patterns could be friendlier =/
-some parts overlayered as hell, but expected from puppet
-technically perfect despite it being a hard dump 

Kommisar - Eternal Chiptune Brawl (-) 3/10
-offset is a little late
-you chose the bad quality of my song =/
-all the jumps aren't really needed. single notes for the guitar would have sufficed
-invisible 16th trills 
-being the one who made this song, i can tell you that it would take a lot of work to make it accepted.

Championanwar - Eternal Struggle (+.) 5.5/10 [championanwar]
-pr needs work in some parts
-easy chart don't see much wrong with the way you layered.
-some parts could've followed percussion a little more 

Championanwar - Eternal Struggle oni (<) [vote4nixon]
-other chart was better

Draigun - Etude for a Dragon (-) 4/10
-stream patterns are all over the place and unfun
-m36 feels too empty. just jumps doesn't really feel like you're playing the song. besides there should
be 8ths on every beat since you're following the melody

Silentoath - Experiment (-) 4/10
-m33 needs more jumps on the beats
-pr is way off since you put jacks in parts and none in others when it's the same note being played
-m47 should keep using those jacks

Craq Rooster - Fall Apart (+) 6.5/10
-Parental Discretion =x
-Cool chart, simple yet fun
-could've maybe used some jacks at parts for a little more diversity

44teru-k - Fantasie Impromptu (+) 7/10
-cool stream patterns (wow this is a first)
-nice layering/sync, your chart is actually consistent

Farewell to Axiom (?) 5/10
-Drum layering feels empty, as if there should be more jumps on accents
-this goes on for the entire song so there isn't much else to say

ZeRo-BaSs - Forgotten Aura (+?) 5.5/10
-Misplaced/forgotten rythyms when the beats start
-no accents on important beats (snare hits), only melody
-with some work this could be really fun

XI - Freedom Dive (--) 1/10
-I know just by looking at this chart that it's knoobish/Midare
-I was right. Overlayered dump lmao. I could go into details since there are in fact lots of mistakes
but i don't think there's much point for this song. Would be the hardest file in ffr

Envy - Generic Techno (?) 5/10
-pr is wrong right off the bat
-starting at m17 it feels very empty and should have 4th beats
-file didn't thrill me that much but with some fixes might be acceptable

Venetian Snares - GENTLEMAN (+.) 6/10
-beginning notes are offsync
-offset is a little late
-fun file, good challenge and use of jacks
-m85 you missed a few 16ths on the hi-hats
-could put one last jump on m169 for ending purposes

DEV/NULL - grind2 (+.) 6/10
-looking at this file in the editor is eye candy
-it's a good thing i'm not epileptic, because god this is trippy
-Add jumps. Having single notes the entire file is sorta boring even though it's rly rly hard

MazeMaster - Groovin' Plains (?) 4.5/10
-File is very offsync (late)
-missed some bass drum hits, noticable since it's an important part of the file

SGX - Halcyon V2 (-) 3/10
-Would rather see jumps on the bass drum hits rather than just the hi-hats
-Song is short and repetitive, not much replay value

Saxxonpike - Half Symphony (+) 6.5/10
-missed a 16th right before m27
-didn't notice much wrong, potential pr issues at the beginning 	

403 - Happyness (+?) 5/10
-starting at m22 the guitar is stepped inconsistently with the vocals
-jumpstreams. not much else to this file.

De-Sire - Healing Vision (!)
-you mad bro

The Flashbulb - Hello Mr. Tree (+.) 6/10
-more jumps on cymbal crash accents
-few percussion notes missed at parts, mostly on syncopations
-Few fixes this could get in easily. cool chart

Doko Benjo - Hot Soup (+.) 5.5/10
-offsync. very late
-just the sync itself makes it hard to judge. The file itself is alright.
-jumps are questionably placed in most parts

DJ Airwave - HurriKane X (+.) 5.5/10
-as an easy file, fun with a few pr mistakes
-24ths. fix them. they're straight 16ths.

ParagonX9 - Infiltration (+) 7.5/10
-I absolutely loved this for some reason, awesome song and the chart has lots of replay value
-the long jacks might be a little much though. 
-Great use of jack theory 

DJ Sharpnel - Ivaltek (+) 6.5/10
-pretty straight forward chart, layering is consistent
-song is kinda repetitive but that can't be helped. 
-patashu would probably be more picky on judging this oh wait its his 8)

Draigun - Kidney Stone (+) 6.5/10
-cool song, chart is repetitive at parts but again can't be helped.
-nothing too amazing but acceptable.

Franz Liszt - La Campanella (+) 6.5/10
-you may want to re-check the gallops on the piano in the beginning, it may be 48ths
-m20 you missed a 16th note after the 2nd 4th note
-32nd layering is ;_;
-hard piano file but well made, sync in some parts were a little iffy however.

Ensiferum - Mourning Heart Interlude (+) 7/10
-pretty song, sync well done
-few parts may have missed jumps (parts where you have added them previously) for consistency

S.S.H - Nightain (+) 7/10
-some 24ths parts rather than trills could be a little more pitch relevant (m25)
-good jack theory use
-really fun chart, offers a good challenge with tricky parts 

Synthworlf - Oceans of Time (+.) 5.5/10
-m45 shouldn't be all stream aka invisible 16ths, there's still only the melody playing with piano
-repetitive chart, weak replay value but technically correct for the most part

Bexarametric - Off the Wall (+.) 5.5/10
-10 bpm...waiting...
-seems like a waste of a chart if you're only stepping the piano that plays the same thing over and over
-some beat accents missed once the dnb starts (mostly on starting 4ths)
-m83 you stop following the percussion for some reason, makes the chart inconsistent
-last part is fine without the percussion layering however

Powerglove - Omnishred (+.) 5/10
-the gallops aren't neccesary 90% of the time you used them throughout the whole song
-some guitar pitch relevancy would be nice in the beginning
-m75 you missed a 32nd after the 2nd 16th note, the sequence is missing a few notes if you listen closely
this happens for the next few measures
-m102 the bass isn't stepped correctly at all, notes missing and they're still 12ths not 16ths unless you
want to sync it more closely which woudln't be necessary

Disturbed - Pain Redefined (!)
-check permissions next time

Fether - Piano Concerto No.1 "Anti-Ares" (+) 7/10
-not sure hands would be accepted since it doesn't feel like an fmo, but that's subjective
-Pitch relevancy overall is lacking
-Song is really cool and flows well for the most part

Tom Haid - Push (+.) 5.5/10
-you tend to add a few notes that don't exist while following the melody in the beginning
-chart is alright but isn't anything special. 

Cranky - PWRPFF RAVES (-) 3/10
-first off, 32nd trills at 160 bpm are a big no.
-pitch relevancy for the beginning synth is wrong, the melody goes down and you climb up
-m9 you randomly stop following the synth?
-m10 the jump jacks could be single jacks, also you missed 16th notes
-starting at m11 the steps make no sense whatsoever. I don't hear 16th streams, the jumps don't accurately
go with the melody if that's what you're doing.
-after the 3rd 4th note at m18 there's no 16th note
-m19 you could've done something so much more interesting than jumpstream honestly.
-m26 24ths? they don't exist. the vocals go to 8th notes already.
-m27 this sequence again your jumps make no sense.
-quit out once the jacks came in. wrong use of jack theory sorry.

MSXOmega - Radiant Moonlight (-) 3/10
-if you're going to use jacks, pitch relevancy wise they would be 3 note jacks in the beginning. also
after the 3rd 4th note you missed a 16th, same with the following measure.
-layering becomes inconsistant at m14 where you don't follow the same melodies and remove jumps for no reason
-you somehow place different steps after each 4/8 measures when it's the exact same thing playing.
-jump stream patterns are a little unfun and broken.
-when the piano starts, jumps are missed when you layer the high piano notes with the bass melody
-m52 you could've stepped the background synth to make it more interesting
-m77 you stop the jumpstream. why. this makes the chart very inconsistent.

t+pazolite - Rain (+) 6.5/10
-the starting melody, as hard as it is to hear, shouldn't lead to a jump jack since the melody is descending
-a few pr issues with the 12th notes
-jumps are well used through the song
-could've used one final note at the end on a 4th beat

DJ Pretzel - Revival Day Impoetus (?) 4.5/10
-in the start, you put jumps on the bass hit yet you miss it in other parts, which makes no sense.
-the jacks shouldn't be started with a jump since there's nothing to accentuate it
-the colored notes really weren't necessary
-once the beats start picking up at m20, you have the same jump issue. however jack use is well done
-m31 24ths shouldn't be there.
-m59 a 16th would fit more accurately than a 12th
-m61 you missed a 16th note right after the first 4th
-m66 is too understepped compared to the rest of the song
-colored notes again aren't necessary in m70 and whatever measure after
-most of the colored notes you use to follow the synth aren't onsync

Dust Galaxy - River of Ever Changing Forms (?) 4.5/10
-m7 pitch relevancy is blatantly off, and you even had it right the first time this melody played
-m9 the 16ths aren't placed properly. listen to the background percussion closely.
-m41 again pitch relevancy is off when the same melody plays.
-m49 16ths are off again. same issue
-m57 jumps could've been layered in here. seems too empty.
-in this same sequence you also add invisible 16ths
-same issues for the rest of the song, i'd just be repeating myself.

Bit Upper - Round (-) 4/10
-starting at m9 you put jumps to barely audible sounds when they could be easily placed for more present
accents.
-last 8th of m18 should be followed by a 16th note rolling into the jump of m19, same with m21 etc.
-m49 the synth plays a 16th note after the first 4th. this can be heard in the following measures also
-song isn't cut properly

Drumcorps - Saddest RMX battle customstuff vs. dore
Dore:
-the three notes before m12 don't need to be there imo
-you put jumps to the screaming, honestly it could've been used for percussion a lot better
-m31 32nd note?
-m66 missing jumps
-m68 the song's done stop putting arrows ;_;

Customstuff:
-hands weren't really necessary. jumps would've sufficed for the start
-m8 the 16ths aren't placed right, added too many
-m12 32nd wall COME ON.
-m13 this is ridiculous...
-m40 is retarded...
-m52 LOL.
-M53 you step it this way and the next measure you step it completely different. the second time you 
step it is actually more accurate since you don't add invisible 16ths.
-m61 you add too many 4th notes when there aren't any at all.
-m62 wow....
-m70 etc ok quads are way too much for this.
-nice colors at the end. random slowdown what.


Dore - (+.) 5.5/10
Customstuff (-) 2/10

SHE - Session (+) 7/10
-m3 obvious PR issue, but i figure this was intentional
-cool use of jacks
-m16 you missed the first 8th note. pretty sure there's something there
-not much else to say about this. layering is interesting. bursts you stepped as 32nds i guess that's ok.
	
Zaghurim - Sjon (!)
-unfortunately i'm forced to auto-reject this

Glome - Ska de Chocobo (+.) 5.5/10
-the whole song is on 8th notes. why.
-m19 you missed a 16th after the first 8th, same for when this plays again
-the song is pretty straight forward and basically steps itself.
-m54 you missed a 16th with the melody that's pretty obvious
-m67 you left a hole with no 8th note. put something here.
-m78 the 16ths aren't jumpstreams. they have a specific pattern that you didn't follow properly
-fix 8th note syndrome and i'd probably accept with a few fixes

Bong-Ra - Skeletor (+) 7/10
-fun as hell. nice vocal steps
-stream at the end is a little repetitive though. could use some diversity
-32nds wut.

A-OK - Slow Down (-) 2/10
-wow one note jacks totally aren't boring at all =/
-you completely ignore the background percussion that would make this interesting
-pitch relevancy off for the 8bit lead
-inconsistent chart. quit out.

DJ AirWave - Solar Force (+) 6.5/10
-beginning PR is wrong since it's the same note, should be jacks
-Simple chart, nice pr. Not much else to add

Ludwig Van Beethoven - Sonata in F - Presto (-) 3/10
-pitch relevancy is off. jumps layered to multiple piano notes missed.
-very very inconsistent chart. jumps are all over the place and follow one thing then stop the next
-it's a piano song, pitch relevancy shouldn't be an issue.

ParagonX9 - Sonic 3 Boss Battle (--) 1/10
-pitch relevancy off right from the start.
-8th jumps is all the song delivers. nothing much.
-waaaaaaaaay too short./
-why didn't you step the whole thing?

Nuq&Skip ProductionZ ft.Lovely Checkmate - StaI With Me (-) 2/10
-you don't follow the background synth but sometimes you do, inconsistent start
-Pitch relevancy is off also.
-when you do follow the background synth, you miss 16th notes
-singing starts, jumps are all over the place. not really following anything specific.
-bad use of jack theory, some are good however
-lots of things missed, too numerous to list. very inconsistent.

Rushjet1 - Story of the Constellations (+) 7/10
-if it were me i would've kept stepping the background melody when the lead starts in the beginning. but
that's just me.
-pitch relevancy good. nothing really to add about this chart since it's pretty simple.

The Flashbulb - Sunset Dept. (+?) 5.5/10
-m8 you missed some 32nds with the snare, same with the next measure
-jumps are questionnable through the whole song. seems you're placing them wherever
assuming that the chart'll be fine. rhythms seemed ok.

Saskrotch - Super Spy Hunter (?) 4/10
-jumps in this would've been so much cooler.
-considering the length of the song this makes the chart quite boring.
-m2 melody doesn't present a jack. different notes
-m3 pitch relevancy issue again. there's a jack when the melody actually changes note.

Nosrac - Swallowing an Avalanche (+.) 6/10
-beginning seems fine. jack theory is fine at parts but others don't fit
-m43 jacks aren't pitch relevant. 48ths are questionnable.
-some parts you miss some jacks  
-listen to the tone of the drums to see where jacks would fit. you seem to have the beats down correctly

Venetian Snares - Szamar Madar (+?) 5/10
-this chart seems so naked without all the background percussions.
-easy chart but follows the main idea of the beats somewhat.
-jumps are inconsistent where you use them.
-16ths sometimes are understepped and you miss most of the essencial beats

Karco - Temple (+) 6.5/10
-I won't bitch about PR here since it would be boring to repeat itself
-follows the melody nicely. very zen song
-some parts could use better pitch relevancy still. especially when there are hardly any notes

Championanwar - The Great Storm (+.) 5.5/10
-16th jump at m7 is inconsistent with the rest of the start
-16th patterns are fine starting at m9
-jacks seem kind of unfun and differ from the difficulty of the chart
-jumps at m32 don't seem to fit

Da Tweekaz - The Past (+) 7/10
-beginning pitch relevancy ok but iffy at parts
-beginning of the song is cool haha
-beats are well placed, jumps are good. not much to complain about this file.
-even the bursts are well sync'd i think. that would be a first

Jon Brownell - TizAshura (+?) 5/10
-m4 second 4th note should be followed by a 16th according to the melody
-jumps are questionnably placed. they are used inconsistently at parts and don't follow any sort of layering
-i'd say to go over the chart again and make sure everything's layered correctly

Seishuu Saitama Heiki - Try to Star (+) 7/10
-awesome guitar pr in the start
-m28 shouldn't be all 16th streams, only the last 4 notes should be a 16th pattern, same at m48
-m59 you could've placed the trill in a better pattern to have an easier transition to the 32nds
-m66 missed the first note
-m68 follow the percussion for 16ths rather than inserting invisible 16th streams
-end of m74 missed 16th notes to guitar
-song + chart are awesome. fix the things i mentionned preferably.

Protest the Hero - Turn Soonest to the Sea (+) 7/10
-m16 this sequence seems too understepped without jumps
-well sync'd file, very fun to play. don't have much to say about it. beats well placed.

Venetian Snares - Twelve (+) 7.5/10
-good use of jack theory
-wow this is fun lmao
-starting at m70 the sync seems to have gotten late.
-later on this sync is fine (m86)
-Send a fix for this sync since it's so awesome to play

Venetian Snares - Twelve (<)
-imo other one beats this by a long shot. different styles entirely but this would be very hard to
compare. would reccomend tass to play both anyways but my vote is neon's. sry patasher.	

Kommijet1 - Twilight Desert (+?) 5/10
-sigh...why this song.
-jacks are right, song is horrible to step though
-when the cymbal crashes come in, chart is way too understepped.
-so repetitive...cut it shorter so that the last cymbal chorus comes in earlier or else the desert is
bound to engulph you in boredom.

OrangeInferno - Ultimate Drum Solo of Doom (+) 6.5/10
-jacks leading to the 2nd roll in m12 are a little much. should probably put the jacks on the other side
-duno about the hands if they're tolerated for the difficulty but they're fine i guess.
-m25 is an odd transition feels empty but fine i guess

Permanent ME - Until You Leave (+) 6.5/10
-m10 missing 16th notes
-some vocals jumps could technically be more precise than 4ths/8ths but that would suck
-m41 jumps go to..?? i think you meant to put them earlier since you missed the snare hit on the first 8th
-could add the little bass drum accent before the last 4th in m63
-when the guitar solo starts around m70-71 would feel more complete with jumps but i guess this is
what they call solo theory

KgZ - Versatile (+) 6.5/10
-32nd patterns aren't too friendly
-jumps are layered weirdly starting at m57 since it's the same as the melody before basically
-jump jack at 79 is =/
-chart is pretty cool. fun to play

dBu - voyage 1969 (+.) 6/10
-m8 you start layering percussions yet right after in m9 you don't. question mark
-streams. jacks.
-12th part is cool
-nothing really much to add since it's a pretty straight forward chart.
-if you did something about the 16th streams i'd accept this. either change the patterns or add something to it

KgZ - Wave Rip (?) 4.5/10
-end of m4 you seem to have added 16ths when there aren't any? listen to the melody again
-m9 jumps used inconsistently in some parts
-I often have a hard time understanding what you're following since it seems all over the place ;_;
-not a terrible chart but needs revising.

Orange Dust - Witches Hat (+) 7.5/10
-this song sounds awesome in assist tick haha
-really cool chart fun to play.

SHE - Yeah Yeah Beats (+) 7/10
-For an easy chart, i found myself enjoying this quite a bit
-i'm questionning how you placed jumps though since they don't seem to pop up when they should idk

You're my Number One (+) 7.5/10
-i can't believe you stepped this lmao. Sonic R wowwwww
-chart is actually really awesome, flows really well
-m49 is completely empty. flow broken. gah. fix this file was so awesome ;_; there are percussions you can
follow here

Zaghurim - Zymgoria's 8-Bit Adventure (!)
-fury of zymgoria the battle laser dragon

403 - Wapanese Title that my stepmania is too retarded to read aka yorukmoryuu yamikaze (+) 6.5/10
-I actually have nothing to add about this chart. idk why my mind is drawing a blank. 
-File's fun and well made. It's not amazing but thank god you didn't put 16th jumpstreams for no reason

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