All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

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  • Xiz
    TWG Chaos
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2012
    • 3399

    #1

    All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

    Take a listen! My 3rd ever Remix.

    I would LOVE it if you could tell me what you think. Your advice helps me alot. Thanks <3

    https://soundcloud.com/djv1/all-my-good-starships-went

  • YoshL
    Celestial Harbor
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Music Producer
    • Aug 2008
    • 6156

    #2
    Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

    basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.


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    • behanjc
      stargroup & me are <3'ers
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Jun 2006
      • 1546

      #3
      Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

      Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving

      http://www.facebook.com/BehanOfficial
      https://soundcloud.com/behanmusic/powerhouse-ep-preview-out-now

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      • Xiz
        TWG Chaos
        FFR Simfile Author
        • Feb 2012
        • 3399

        #4
        Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

        Originally posted by YoshL
        basses and percussion is veeeerryyy underwhelming.
        Originally posted by behanjc
        Yea bass and kick should come through more for sure. But overall really catchy, good synth work, keep improving
        Okay I remastered the track. You can click that same link to view it. How is it, is it a bit better?

        Also, thank you both so much for your input <3

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        • behanjc
          stargroup & me are <3'ers
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Jun 2006
          • 1546

          #5
          Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

          Bass definitely comes out more now I think

          Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting

          http://www.facebook.com/BehanOfficial
          https://soundcloud.com/behanmusic/powerhouse-ep-preview-out-now

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          • Xiz
            TWG Chaos
            FFR Simfile Author
            • Feb 2012
            • 3399

            #6
            Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

            Originally posted by KgZ
            I mean, it sounds good because you're using the straight samples from top-professional produced music. But through a creative standpoint, there's not much to say. It's more of a dj medley set than a remix.
            This is probz the best input ive got. Like legit. Why do you think this is not creative? I'm just curious.

            Thanks man

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            • Xiz
              TWG Chaos
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Feb 2012
              • 3399

              #7
              Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

              Originally posted by KgZ
              Well, I should apologize because I dislike calling something "uncreative." There were a few cool moments like 2:42 and it really felt like a moment where your personality as an artist came out.

              Mashups are tricky because it can end up where the final track relies heavily on the original track's production quality, rather than show off your own interpretation or twist on existing material. Maybe you should try different songs with varying genres or emotional styles and mash up/remix/etc. those. Give the listener something unexpected that'll emotionally connect in new ways.
              Yeah no worries, I know what you meant xD

              And yeah I've been trying to experiment with that works well and what dosent. I guess for this song in particular it was more of a stereotypical club / dance song? I dunno.

              But seriously, what are your thoughts on this track below then? This track I did a few months ago really I think kind of gave a surprise to the listeners I think... I think this is more what you are looking for?(At 2:00 about)

              EDIT: Lol the first second is cutoff and i just realized it now. Gonna do a reupload of this

              https://soundcloud.com/djv1/party-young-style


              Originally posted by behanjc
              Bass definitely comes out more now I think

              Also this may just be me being crazy.. but that chord thing at the very beginning seems just a tad off beat for me somehow..? Not noticeable when percussion and other instruments come and again it could be my brain farting
              Sweet thanks.
              Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz
              Last edited by Xiz; 03-3-2013, 12:46 PM.

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              • Coolboyrulez0
                VICES
                FFR Simfile Author
                FFR Music Producer
                • Aug 2006
                • 10042

                #8
                Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

                Originally posted by KgZ
                Or you can put quad city's come on and slam to every song ever.

                That works too.
                I have done this over Megaman and Katawa Shoujo music

                confirmed to work
                https://soundcloud.com/cbrbreakcore
                https://cbrrecords.bandcamp.com/

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                • behanjc
                  stargroup & me are <3'ers
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Jun 2006
                  • 1546

                  #9
                  Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

                  Originally posted by Xiz
                  Also, what section? I guess I cant tell from how long Ive listened to it lolz
                  I was referring from like 0-8s. (and it continues throughout but sounds fine with everything on top of it)

                  http://www.facebook.com/BehanOfficial
                  https://soundcloud.com/behanmusic/powerhouse-ep-preview-out-now

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                  • Choofers
                    FFR Player
                    FFR Music Producer
                    • Dec 2008
                    • 6205

                    #10
                    Re: All My Good Starships Went Down Numb

                    Originally posted by Coolboyrulez0
                    I have done this over Katawa Shoujo music
                    you would lmao

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