Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

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  • Renevatia
    FFR Veteran
    • Feb 2006
    • 555

    #1

    Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?


    suppose that there should be a good number of miku fans here? :3

    so ya..just through whatever you have in mind at me
    anything that should be changed, or fixed before i color

    I will not change pose, just maybe add stuff to it
    or ..add backgrounds..for once =.='
    Reminder for self to make new sig.
  • Xx{Midday}xX
    FFR Player
    • Sep 2007
    • 3518

    #2
    Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

    face looks too masculine. she's not a yandere, or a cool.

    she should have a tsundere look. (blushing tsurime)

    breast size fine. bust size fine. waist size fine.

    miniskirt size fine.

    hairlength fine. finger shape fine.

    change her face to tsundere and you're clear.
    Last edited by Xx{Midday}xX; 08-11-2008, 06:40 AM.
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    つまんないシグでスマソ(´・ω・`)

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    • Renevatia
      FFR Veteran
      • Feb 2006
      • 555

      #3
      Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

      hmm the eyes..eh..
      ya ..i wanted that expression (dono how to describe it) but keep it ミクらし
      ...rounder edges?
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      • Xx{Midday}xX
        FFR Player
        • Sep 2007
        • 3518

        #4
        Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

        Use Kagami Hiiragi and Tohsaka Rin as your example. Tsurime is the proper term for tsundere girl eyes. It's contrapositive to tareme. Notice, all 3 characters have twin tails, tsurime, and tsundere moe. Oh, you can add i love you's rebound avatar in this group. Oh btw, yes, tsundere is the only moe I have ever felt as moe.

        Kagamin


        Rinrin
        Last edited by Xx{Midday}xX; 08-12-2008, 07:00 AM.
        Any FFR song title discrepancies? List them here.
        Willing to accurately translate Japanese for free
        Accumulating all playstyles here!


        つまんないシグでスマソ(´・ω・`)

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        • Renevatia
          FFR Veteran
          • Feb 2006
          • 555

          #5
          Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

          OOO THX, i think something similar to tohsaka's eyes should work fine lol I love the kagami illust. xD
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          • Renevatia
            FFR Veteran
            • Feb 2006
            • 555

            #6
            Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?


            初音ミク
            meh..still learning how to color @.@

            目を変わりました、
            その目の方が少しミクらし見たいそうです。
            (lol so lazy, copy and pasted comments >.> )
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            • who_cares973
              FFR Player
              • Aug 2006
              • 15407

              #7
              Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

              the nose and mouth dont look right O.o

              probably just me though >.>

              nice coloring btw

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              • chidori!
                FFR Player
                • Jun 2007
                • 1603

                #8
                Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                i think her face needs more of an innocent look. eh.

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                • [TeRa]
                  FFR Player
                  • May 2007
                  • 9922

                  #9
                  Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                  In the colored one her arm coming out of her sleeve looks weird, still amazing though, great work O_O

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                  • Zageron
                    Zageron E. Tazaterra
                    FFR Administrator
                    • Apr 2007
                    • 6592

                    #10
                    Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                    If you ask me, that's totally ******* amazing. I would pay good money for something like that.

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                    • Renevatia
                      FFR Veteran
                      • Feb 2006
                      • 555

                      #11
                      Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                      ya..the jesture on that hand is ..kinda weird to draw + the perspective of the wrist, but I swear its a natural pose (no need to break bones to achieve) xD
                      ..shading on it is kinda off ^^:
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                      • i love you
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                        FFR Simfile Author
                        • Oct 2006
                        • 7313

                        #12
                        Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                        Wow, i think thats an insane drawing regardless. O_O

                        lol @ midday
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                        • dayum
                          FFR Player
                          • Mar 2007
                          • 25

                          #13
                          Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                          drawing looks good

                          the fingers look a bit wierd but i mean theyre fingers so who cares xD

                          shading on the skin isnt very good =/

                          and the face doesnt look quite right......


                          overall GJ ;D


                          edit: lol first post

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                          • Xx{Midnight}xX
                            FFR Player
                            • Aug 2007
                            • 8548

                            #14
                            Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                            Agreeing with the innocent look that should be there it looks great just add the innocent trait to the face.

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                            • Renevatia
                              FFR Veteran
                              • Feb 2006
                              • 555

                              #15
                              Re: Hatsune Miku, Suggestions?

                              lol hmm innocent look, shall try to merge that with srs face next time xD ,
                              easy to do innocent/cute
                              kinda hard to do innocent/pretty
                              ..maybe thats just me ^^;
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