Ok i've updated it a bit. Not that much though.
Thanks for the corrections.
--UnitedStates@America
Gave proof through the night, That our flag was still there. Oh say does that star spangled banner yet wave, O'er the land of the free, and the home of the brave.
Also, you should attempt to reformat it using less color and bold formatting (use bold and/or underline for headers only, no random important words. Italics is used for these if anything.) Avoid using font size formatting.
Use less spaces and line breaks, reduce paragraphs to point form format wherever possible.
Use more, but smaller pictures. Your pictures are overcrowded, you should make more pictures that are smaller and have less going on in them.
When you start listing a whole bunch of level details, put the whole thing between [code] blocks. It's absolutely too long, a page stretcher, and takes up a majority of the post when the content is mostly useless.
Hey, cool. ^_^ I've been here for awhile, but there were some things in here I hadn't figured out yet (like, I didn't know you could change the quality). That person who was really mean for no good reason, and said they could do the same thing in 20 minutes, I think doesn't really understand how short a time 20 minutes is.
Also, sleep is for healthy people, who want to use their lives properly.
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