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  • xiron
    FFR Player
    • Jan 2004
    • 189

    #1

    Poetry

    Any kind...

    Here's one of mine.


    To _____ Pt. 3

    Emotions, like chains
    Always binding, never letting go
    I can’t let go

    Feelings, like fire
    Burn within me, forever
    I can’t let go

    Tears roll down my face
    All the pain, never-ending
    I can’t let go

    Fear, afraid of losing you
    I couldn’t take it if I did
    I won’t let go
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  • Torlock
    FFR Player
    • Jun 2004
    • 475

    #2
    RE: Poetry

    Dude, Joey posted this awhile back.

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    • Specforces
      Yes
      • Jan 2004
      • 5028

      #3
      RE: Poetry

      Meh, sounds like everything I've heard ever. Try something complicated syntax or something, or use alliteration, that's always fun.
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      • talisman
        Resident Penguin
        FFR Simfile Author
        • May 2003
        • 4598

        #4
        RE: Poetry

        emo is not the answer.

        try to be less literal.

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        • Layla-Day
          FFR Player
          • Nov 2004
          • 124

          #5
          RE: Poetry

          I have one.

          Twinkle Twinkle little star.
          How I wonder what you are.
          Twinkle Twinkle little star.
          How I wonder what you are.

          Up above the world so high.
          Like a diamond in the sky.
          Twinkle Twinkle little star.
          How I wonder, What you are.

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          • jewpinthethird
            (The Fat's Sabobah)
            FFR Music Producer
            • Nov 2002
            • 11711

            #6
            Re: RE: Poetry

            Originally posted by Layla-Day
            I have one.

            Twinkle Twinkle little star.
            How I wonder what you are.
            Twinkle Twinkle little star.
            How I wonder what you are.

            Up above the world so high.
            Like a diamond in the sky.
            Twinkle Twinkle little star.
            How I wonder, What you are.
            I have one too.

            It's called "You Are Not Funny"

            Xiron, no offense, but your poem is kind of boring.

            You say emotions are like chains that never let go, but eventually chains weaken and break, fires get extinquished, pain becomes numb, etc.

            Honestly, when read your poem, I pictured a drunk, sweaty, fat guy with long hair reciting this poem to a lifesize cardboard cut out of Lora Croft in his parent's basement.

            I mean, it's great that you are into writing poetry and whatnot, but it wouldnt hurt to read some love sonnets and get some inspiriation.

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            • alainbryden
              Seen your member
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Dec 2003
              • 2873

              #7
              RE: Re: RE: Poetry

              I wrote this the year before last for an online friend who needed help on a chemistry assignment.

              Copper!

              Oh Copper oh copper,
              Element 29,
              Conducts electricity
              Better then water and wine.

              Discovered 5000 years ago,
              And ever since used,
              You purify water,
              When with a sulphate fused.

              Analytical chemists
              Detect sugar with thee,
              The ultimate conductor
              Of electricity and heat.

              Were it not
              For this copper today,
              The electrical industry
              Would wither away.

              So whenever using
              Your coins or twine,
              Remember the faithful
              Element 29.
              ~NEIGH

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              • alainbryden
                Seen your member
                FFR Simfile Author
                • Dec 2003
                • 2873

                #8
                RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                I also made this in grade 8 after reading MacBeth

                Macbeth: for people who hate books

                Macbeth was a man quite ambitious,
                Whose greed made him act very vicious.
                He took the real kings life
                With a very big knife,
                The result was a banquet delicious.

                King Macbeth soon felt less like a man.
                His wife went mad and kicked the can.
                Soon, Macbeth is convicted,
                And as the witches predicted,
                Macdough killed Macbeth as he’d planned.
                ~NEIGH

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                • alainbryden
                  Seen your member
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Dec 2003
                  • 2873

                  #9
                  RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                  and this is from my emo days. frown.

                  Evitcurtsed

                  Fear, Face, Drear, Place
                  Lost, Tired, Bossed, Wired
                  Give me pity; cause me depression
                  Give me love; cause an obsession
                  Give me one rule; cause felt oppression
                  Give me some space; commence regression
                  Gone, Near, Borne, Leer
                  Take, Need, Fake, Bleed
                  Give me a chance; my bad impression
                  Give me some time; need an extension
                  Give me a hand; ruin the intention
                  Give me a choice; fail in succession
                  From, Taken, For, Gotten
                  Test, Jailed, Death, Failed…
                  ~NEIGH

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                  • Moogy
                    嗚呼
                    FFR Simfile Author
                    • Aug 2003
                    • 10303

                    #10
                    RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                    emo
                    Plz visit my blog

                    ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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                    • whazzabie
                      FFR Player
                      • Mar 2005
                      • 1

                      #11
                      RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                      Los Dudes, real poetry is in rap. your little poems of ur fantasies are ok but rap keeps it real.

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                      • alainbryden
                        Seen your member
                        FFR Simfile Author
                        • Dec 2003
                        • 2873

                        #12
                        RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                        The N00b

                        Oh god.
                        The lack of grammar.
                        The lack of intelligence.
                        The substitution of "ur" for "your".
                        The post count.
                        The n00bness.
                        My eyes.
                        Burning.
                        GTFO
                        ~NEIGH

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                        • flypie743
                          FFR Player
                          • Jun 2004
                          • 3210

                          #13
                          RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                          I wrote this myself :>

                          A BEAR DARED A MOOSE TO WEAR
                          A BIG WHITE COAT WITH A TEAR
                          THE MARE DARED BEAR
                          TO SEARCH FOR A PIECE OF HORSES' HAIR
                          AN EARNEST SQUIRREL YEARNED TO DARE THE MARE
                          EVERYONE KNEW THE MARE WAS A SELFISH MARE
                          SO THE SQUIRREL DARED THE MARE
                          TO LEARN HOW TO SHARE

                          IF YOU ARE THE BOMB YOU WILL CLICK THIS and if you dont, you suck.

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                          • iPatcH
                            Swamp Lemons Rule
                            FFR Simfile Author
                            FFR Music Producer
                            • Dec 2004
                            • 3370

                            #14
                            RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                            BESTBESTBEST
                            TESTESTEST
                            CRESTCRESTCREST
                            put on a donk on it

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                            • Moogy
                              嗚呼
                              FFR Simfile Author
                              • Aug 2003
                              • 10303

                              #15
                              RE: Re: RE: Poetry

                              1234
                              4321
                              1234
                              4321
                              1234

                              i call it the numbers poem
                              Plz visit my blog

                              ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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