The Tanka Thread ~

[CarrotCake94]

5 - This is the tanka
7 - thread you must only make words
5 - in the tanka way
7 - using five then seven then
7 - 5 then seven and seven

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A Tanka for British Columbia
by CarrotCake94

Beautiful B.C.
Lovely Glacier-Capped Mountains
A Breathtaking Scene
Your Rivers are Cold and Clean
A Province that feels like Home

[Zageron]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

bc is real cold
why is it so god damn cold
what the **** weather
just kidding i love it here
i roll around in this shit

[rushyrulz]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Dis a B.C. thread
What the hell is a Tanka?
Looks like a haiku
Except there's even more lines
What is this I don't even

[GuidoHunter]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

The mora concept
Curiously Japanese
"Tanka" has three
We don't have it in English
But the OP is still wrong

--Guido

[choof]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

a game to play
very frustrating to play
solo or singles
you know the name of the game
yes stepmania

[MixMasterLar]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Just holy shit man
I just came to realize that
Choofer is Torrent
I didn't know that before
I should read sigs more often

[soramimi]

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The tanka is weird
It has way too many lines
And then, in the end
I just fill them with nonsense
Creamy butternut squash soup

[CarrotCake94]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

After a long day
I finally close my screen
And yet I still hear
The rhythmic tapping of keys
To the wee hours of dawn

[CarrotCake94]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Open Flash Player
Wait for the game to load up
Log in to account
Hours and hours on end
Smashing keys and drinking pop

[omega_grunt666]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Photoshop all day
my throat is very sore, ow
is this a tanka
I guess it is, ok then
thanks for sharing this with us

[CarrotCake94]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

As I watch the clock,
Every second that goes by,
Is a second lost.
A missed opportunity,
Didn't even say goodbye...

[CarrotCake94]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Sleep Tight

When I read arrows
on isolation and rates,
I understand them.
They're sending me a message.
I probably should go sleep...

[Funnygurl555]

Re: The Tanka Thread ~

Oh hey, this is cool,
But I don’t know what to write.
So um, hello there.
I’m Funnygurl555.
I should probably go now…