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  • retching oesophagus
    (^._.^) =^-ω-^= (^･o･^)ﾉ
    • Jan 2008
    • 805
    #1

    first simfile

    got round to making a sim finally. been meaning to do so for a while. nothing special about the song choice. just something i knew the bpm of. please download, thanks.

    *click below for new version*



    pretty much just messing around with ddreamstudio. although i did try to use PR, and some layering techniques during the middle of the song. lemme know what you think.

    EDIT: completely redid the whole thing. fixed the synch, varied the patterns in the beginning a bit and put a lot more thought into the structure and flow of the stream/jumpstream so it's not just random crap. i can safely say i'm done with. if you downloaded the older version make sure you delete it and dl the new one thanks!!!
    Last edited by retching oesophagus; 03-1-2009, 05:20 PM.
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    • ZC_Wolfy
      FFR Veteran
      • Dec 2008
      • 384
      #2
      Re: first simfile

      Ok, I'm not a decent simfile artist, but I'll give a review anyway:

      The hands/24th, 32nd, and 48th stream didn't fit with the song, and the stream didn't really go to anything, and there were a few syncing errors (the 12th near m52, the 12ths in m54-55, and the one in m56)
      Also your layering seemed inconsistent and weird

      but it's ok for your first file, much better than my first


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        • retching oesophagus
          (^._.^) =^-ω-^= (^･o･^)ﾉ
          • Jan 2008
          • 805
          #3
          Re: first simfile

          thanks for the review. well i tried putting down the same 32 34 34 34 jump pattern to layer the wierd synth in the chorus. i have a much better idea with what i want to do with the stream now so i'll redo. i'll try and patch up some of the synch although i'm sure the 12ths at the end were correct :/

          Edit; yeh im dum there aren't any 12ths are there. or 48th streams for that matter (still keeping those)
          Last edited by retching oesophagus; 03-1-2009, 12:39 PM.

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            • ZC_Wolfy
              FFR Veteran
              • Dec 2008
              • 384
              #4
              Re: first simfile

              try listening to the 12ths again at .5 rate with assist tick off if you haven't already and see if that helps


              "BURN IN HELL, MOTHER ****ER!!! I am not retarded, okay. Oh, and one more thing. Even if we do plant twice as many trees as we cut down, which we don't, let me remind you, that TREES TAKE YEARS TO GROW, NOT DAY              S!!!" -               SaguchiTheCat

              "*Twinklesky* makes me want to skip through a forest while playing a pan flute. And then all the little forest creatures will start dancing behind me." - Quigly

              "I would link you to these great video demonstrations of good vibrating but I think I would get banned for it. D=" - Quigly
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                • Patashu
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Apr 2006
                  • 8609
                  #5
                  Re: first simfile

                  .5 rate solves everything
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                    • who_cares973
                      FFR Player
                      • Aug 2006
                      • 15407
                      #6
                      Re: first simfile

                      i prefer .7



                      EDIT: downloaded

                      i'll review when i get home

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                        • robertsona
                          missa in h-moll
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Dec 2006
                          • 3997
                          #7
                          Re: first simfile

                          i use .5 and then if that's not slow enough .3


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                            • retching oesophagus
                              (^._.^) =^-ω-^= (^･o･^)ﾉ
                              • Jan 2008
                              • 805
                              #8
                              Re: first simfile

                              *bump* V2 is done. make sure you review that one, who_cares

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