My simfiles, need critical commentary

[Battousai_X]

Well it's my first venture into the world of simfile making and I would really like critical comments to improve my creations. The problem that I have is users don't usually comment on my uploads on the database (some of them doesn't really specify my mistakes).

Please, I need your comments and suggestions. Here are the two first simfiles I made

(Note: They are JPop songs)

1. Haruka Kanata from Naruto

2. Boys Be Free from El Hazard

Your input would gladly be appreciated. I would even tolerate flaming as long as you point out my mistake. ^^[/url]

[Squeek]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

Everybody's doing the Naruto songs nowadays... do the OST songs, not the intros. Sheesh.

There are a lot of arrows in Haruka Kanata that don't fit in with the music. Most of the jumps are onsync and onbeat, but there should be more for certain parts. Also, you shouldn't need 32nds in this song...

I didn't get Boys Be Free because I'm scared of the title.

Well, not too critical of you. HK was my first simfile too. I was the first to make it. It was horribly off at times and really simple, but it was fun.

~Squeek

[Battousai_X]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

^^ Well that was a good comment. Thanks for the input. I do know of the unsynced parts of my first simfile. And I'm still trying to fix it.

I just hoped you got Boys Be Free ^^; that one is a cute type of song from El Hazard. If I'm not wrong, is that the reason you're scared XD

[Tasselfoot]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

i think he is scared because of the possible inferences made in the phrase "boys be free"... refering to potential homosexual thoughts/deeds... or of ones referring to their testicles as their boys... and no one really wants to see some random dudes balls.

i feel your pain squeek.

[Squeek]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

Tass...a little off.

I was thinking it was one of those super-preppy girly songs where she obsesses over some jock she can't have. Yea... I got it, and it wasn't. El Hazard is an anime, so I found out. A really unpopular one, too...

http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/encyclopedia/anime.php?id=16

I'll comment on it later.

~Squeek

[Battousai_X]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

Now that's cleared. Boys Be Free is not about homosexual things or some girly girly song *shrug*

All of the simfiles I'm making right now are jpop or anime-based so there.

And I'll be waiting for that comment. Thanks in advance!

[macgravel]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

Yeah your HK was off at parts and the freezes went with the song I like that but it does kinda throw you off and as Mr. e squeek said there were arrows that werent going to any beatand you didnt need the 32nds...I havent downloaded your Boys be free...im not that good of a simfile maker but I see alot of potential coming from you and ill be waiting on your future simfiles...

[Battousai_X]

RE: My simfiles, need critical commentary

Thanks for those inputs. And I wonder why people doesn't download my Boys Be Free. It's a good song. ^^