P3Pack1 [Release]
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SMO Mirror: P3Pack1
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sweeet dling now!
Long Expresso (I played on 1.3x rate)- Seems like the song choice and charting style is reminiscent of Xay or Tim; enjoyed vibin to this one a lot!
Soramimi was hilariousss (in a good way) and also I havent seen a file utilizing mini trills in a long while.
Get this party started (played on 1.3x) rate showed a lot of promise as far as where your dump-pattern foundation (if such a thing exists) is at. Found myself wanting more from certain sections at a couple of points, and a lil more pattern variation in the repeated choruses.
Waiting for my Ruca (played this on gamma) I love running-men patterns almost as much as miner so I'm too biased to address this thingLast edited by lofty rhino; 10-8-2017, 05:17 PM.Comment
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i just looked at them (cute song choice throughout the minipack tho, hmu for valedumps)
liked both charts, just some minor gripes with how you layer things
34.610 - these sections are notably harder than the actual chorus of the track (unless 120BPM long jacks are hard to you), i don't have any immediate suggestions other than dropping the 8th jumps so these aren't the hardest part of the file
1.00.235 - 360 burst with a hand in between why B - think this part here could do without hands at the end of the 24th bursts, you even omit one of them at 1:02:360 for a similar reason (even if it's just for the longjack here, i'm sure you knew committing fully and placing a hand here would've been gay)
similar complaints like in 34.610 for take this life, overlayering the 32nds with jumps that make them a lot harder than they need to be
rest is cool tho and you stepped something from nocturnal which is the best fucking tbdm album of all time
will look at other stuff later but v nice!!
edit: long espresso is dope, loved the flowy nature of the bursts in thisLast edited by -Tim-; 10-8-2017, 05:11 PM.


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thanks for the mirror, foxfire
yeah layering is definitely something i would like to work on. my obsession with consistency in some charts tends to hurt more than it helps sometimes. thanks for the comments.
definitely agree with this; that and silhouette are a couple of my older charts from when i was first getting into dumps, i probably could've stood to brush these up a bit more before release. thanks for your feedback as well, glad you liked stuff.Get this party started (played on 1.3x) rate showed a lot of promise as far as where your dump-pattern foundation (if such a thing exists) is at. Found myself wanting more from certain sections at a couple of points, and a lil more pattern variation in the repeated choruses.Last edited by P3Prod1; 10-9-2017, 11:12 AM.Comment
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