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  • P3Prod1
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2014
    • 75

    #1

    P3Pack1 [Release]

    hi

    i made 10 dump files and put them into a low-effort minipack

    have fun and/or complain to me about my pattern usage

    click the banner to dl


  • Herkkupala
    FFR Player
    • Aug 2015
    • 37

    #2
    Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

    ebin

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    • mwes
      FFR Player
      • Jun 2008
      • 58

      #3
      Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

      get the party started ~~





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      • ilikecatsalotihatedo
        FFR Player
        • Jul 2016
        • 60

        #4
        Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

        you did it!!! grats on pack release


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        • -Tim-
          FFR Simfile Author
          FFR Simfile Author
          • Dec 2014
          • 425

          #5
          Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

          you charted in flames and the black dahlia murder


          im downloading

          your pack's quality rides on how much i enjoy these two files


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          • P3Prod1
            FFR Player
            • Dec 2014
            • 75

            #6
            Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

            thanks everyone, eager to hear your thoughts

            any and all criticism is welcome

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            • foxfire667
              The FFRchiver
              FFR Music Producer
              • Jun 2009
              • 2169

              #7
              Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

              SMO Mirror: P3Pack1

              SMO needs to be synced, early birds may need to wait a couple of hours to use this link.
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              • lofty rhino
                D7 Elite Keymasher
                • Dec 2014
                • 705

                #8
                Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                sweeet dling now!

                Long Expresso (I played on 1.3x rate)- Seems like the song choice and charting style is reminiscent of Xay or Tim; enjoyed vibin to this one a lot!

                Soramimi was hilariousss (in a good way) and also I havent seen a file utilizing mini trills in a long while.

                Get this party started (played on 1.3x) rate showed a lot of promise as far as where your dump-pattern foundation (if such a thing exists) is at. Found myself wanting more from certain sections at a couple of points, and a lil more pattern variation in the repeated choruses.

                Waiting for my Ruca (played this on gamma) I love running-men patterns almost as much as miner so I'm too biased to address this thing
                Last edited by lofty rhino; 10-8-2017, 05:17 PM.

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                • -Tim-
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Dec 2014
                  • 425

                  #9
                  Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                  Originally posted by P3Prod1
                  thanks everyone, eager to hear your thoughts

                  any and all criticism is welcome
                  i just looked at them (cute song choice throughout the minipack tho, hmu for valedumps)

                  liked both charts, just some minor gripes with how you layer things



                  34.610 - these sections are notably harder than the actual chorus of the track (unless 120BPM long jacks are hard to you), i don't have any immediate suggestions other than dropping the 8th jumps so these aren't the hardest part of the file

                  1.00.235 - 360 burst with a hand in between why B - think this part here could do without hands at the end of the 24th bursts, you even omit one of them at 1:02:360 for a similar reason (even if it's just for the longjack here, i'm sure you knew committing fully and placing a hand here would've been gay)




                  similar complaints like in 34.610 for take this life, overlayering the 32nds with jumps that make them a lot harder than they need to be

                  rest is cool tho and you stepped something from nocturnal which is the best fucking tbdm album of all time


                  will look at other stuff later but v nice!!

                  edit: long espresso is dope, loved the flowy nature of the bursts in this
                  Last edited by -Tim-; 10-8-2017, 05:11 PM.


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                  • P3Prod1
                    FFR Player
                    • Dec 2014
                    • 75

                    #10
                    Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                    thanks for the mirror, foxfire

                    Originally posted by -Tim-
                    liked both charts, just some minor gripes with how you layer things
                    yeah layering is definitely something i would like to work on. my obsession with consistency in some charts tends to hurt more than it helps sometimes. thanks for the comments.

                    Originally posted by lofty rhino
                    Get this party started (played on 1.3x) rate showed a lot of promise as far as where your dump-pattern foundation (if such a thing exists) is at. Found myself wanting more from certain sections at a couple of points, and a lil more pattern variation in the repeated choruses.
                    definitely agree with this; that and silhouette are a couple of my older charts from when i was first getting into dumps, i probably could've stood to brush these up a bit more before release. thanks for your feedback as well, glad you liked stuff.
                    Last edited by P3Prod1; 10-9-2017, 11:12 AM.

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                    • MinaciousGrace
                      FFR Player
                      • Dec 2007
                      • 4278

                      #11
                      Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                      here is my post

                      quote it

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                      • P3Prod1
                        FFR Player
                        • Dec 2014
                        • 75

                        #12
                        Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                        Originally posted by MinaciousGrace
                        here is my post

                        quote it
                        hello mina

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                        • DeadSignal
                          FFR Player
                          • Jan 2012
                          • 136

                          #13
                          Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                          hello stepmania

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                          • Moria
                            Sylphid
                            • Sep 2017
                            • 533

                            #14
                            Re: P3Pack1 [Release]


                            its good

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                            • User1942406

                              #15
                              Re: P3Pack1 [Release]

                              gud pack nice file i like it yes thank

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