German dump mini pack final submissions!

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  • MetzgerSM
    FFR Player
    • Feb 2009
    • 241

    #16
    Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

    both are accepted

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    • Xayphon
      sausage
      FFR Simfile Author
      • Nov 2008
      • 1630

      #17
      Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

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      • zolaric
        FFR Veteran
        • Jul 2009
        • 250

        #18
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        • zolaric
          FFR Veteran
          • Jul 2009
          • 250

          #19
          Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

          Submitted another 3 files haha

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          • MetzgerSM
            FFR Player
            • Feb 2009
            • 241

            #20
            Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

            REVISED REVIEWS

            (zolaric)Jack Sparrow: I'll be a lot harsher now. The 16th hand/ Jumpstream stuff outside of the chorus is repetetive and could have gotten way more variation. The same thing goes for the 24th Handstream, plus it is very gay on some parts (especially when the hands follow on 2 4th notes in one spot). Conclusion: put more effort and variation into the file and it will be accepted, otherwise REJECTED

            (zolaric)Mirrors: Cool color streams with good patterns in the chorus, not too repetetive because of the lack of jumps and hands, which are indicators for copypaste.ACCEPTED

            (zolaric)One: I like the pattern variation a lot, from jacks to polyrhythms, a 32nd stream and one easier spot to regain stamina. The polyrhythms are a bit repetetive though, so if you wanna change this to make the file better go for it, otherwise it is accepted, though. ACCEPTED

            (zolaric)Shots: It is as repetetive as Jack Sparrow, but the JS is way more fun. The jacks are ok, too. Overall, bring more variaton into the file instead of copypaste stuff, take your time and it will be fine. But first:
            REJECTED

            (zolaric)Tonight: Same complaint as on the other files, too repetetive and too much copypaste, especially in the chorus, as mentioned before. Now I will copypaste from above: Overall, bring more variaton into the file instead of copypaste stuff, take your time and it will be fine. But first:
            REJECTED

            (HawkE)Besserwisser: Interesting song choice (a capella), people should step more of this! The streams are a lot of fun, so is the rest of the file because of its pattern variation. ACCEPTED

            (HawkE)Freaky Like Me: Holy crap, the Jumpstream was so much fun and in the perfect speed for me to be a challenge, but still FCable The 32nd stream is a big increase of difficulty, but it is in good patterns and it will be a lot of fun for top tier players. Overall again nice pattern variation. ACCEPTED

            (HawkE)Hymn: This file could be in every regular pack, well done! The only thing I don't like on your files is that you put your jumps just on the 4th notes instead of the melody, this would be even more fun imho
            Maybe we should collab on this one? If you don't want it, it would be accepted, though. ACCEPTED

            (HawkE)Mitten ins Herz: I miss something on this file, but it is hard to explain. Perhaps it is because of the dominant beat and melody, which I would step with hands or jumps in the stream instead of generic 24th / 32nd stream. Although I don't like thrills, they fit perfectly in these spots and they are in the right speed for wrist jacking. As I said before, you can change the things I mentioned or we could collab on it, so I could put in my imaginations. If you don't want it, it would be accepted, too. ACCEPTED

            (HawkE)Popular: A true dumpy pop song. I like it especially for that light NVLM_ZK flair which come from those small jacks which differ in their patterns. Otherwise, catchy and fun chorus JS. ACCEPTED

            (HawkE)Roboter: One word will be often mentioned in the following review: EPIC! The chorus is done epicly. So is the climax theory with the long stream. And OMG, the intro of the chorus is also epic as ****, when there is a hand/quad, a small pause of like 1 4th note, and then the stream begins. Hard to explain, but I think it is truly epic
            Now a few small things I don't like: The patterns of the 24th JS part are gay because it has a lot of wierd one handed stuff. Those 16th jumpjacks/thrills in the one spot are also kinda wierd, but ok I think. And a very minor thing at the end: The second chorus should be introduced exactly as the first one with the small pause of 1 4th to make it more epic
            Fix these little things, and this accepted file will be... guess what... even more epic
            ACCEPTED

            (SocoNhydro420)Rape: Nice file in flashbulb-style, which could be in other regular packs, too. Nothing to complain here, nice! ACCEPTED

            (Kaiten123)Labyrinth: I have to wait for Staiain's opinion on that one because the file is way too hard for me so I couldn't judge the gayness of the patterns. Edit: Staiain said it's very hard and its gayness is still acceptable.ACCEPTED

            (IcyWorld)Love U More: PERFECT. JUST PERFECT.
            MOST ACCEPTED FILE EVER

            more reviews later
            Last edited by MetzgerSM; 07-10-2011, 03:11 PM.

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            • zolaric
              FFR Veteran
              • Jul 2009
              • 250

              #21
              Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

              I had actually meant Tonight to practice trills, but I guess I'll change it up a bit.

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              • SocoNhydro420
                FFR Veteran
                • Oct 2008
                • 915

                #22
                Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                Sent in "Rape" by Renard. ^^

                MUST... AAA...

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                • MetzgerSM
                  FFR Player
                  • Feb 2009
                  • 241

                  #23
                  Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                  hey guys, check this out
                  Top 10 score of 2011 right here!



                  This awesome file will be German Dump Mini Pack Final!

                  Edit: Oh my god, this file is awesome
                  When I think about dumps then not about this kind of file, but the song itself is dump worthy
                  I haven't played any of your files yet, but you should really go on and step something more! you have talent!
                  Last edited by MetzgerSM; 05-22-2011, 01:58 PM.

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                  • kaiten123
                    FFR Player
                    • May 2008
                    • 1117

                    #24
                    Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                    Originally posted by MetzgerSM
                    2. The file mustn't be too gay
                    umm... how gay is too gay?

                    i started stepping a song but i'm pretty sure i'm going to have a good amount of streams that alternate between 284 bpm handstream and 426 bpm streams in there (its also like 4 minutes long).

                    should i even bother sending it when i'm done if i'm strongly opposed to anything that might make the file easier (except maybe some pattern reorganizing). or is this still below the gayness threshold?

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                    • Secks69
                      Banned
                      • May 2011
                      • 445

                      #25
                      Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                      penis

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                      • MetzgerSM
                        FFR Player
                        • Feb 2009
                        • 241

                        #26
                        Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                        example: 400 BPM runningmen = gay
                        400 BPM stream with good patterns = acceptable
                        so send me your file

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                        • Staiain
                          Can't handle my ÆØÅ
                          • Aug 2009
                          • 4544

                          #27
                          Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                          I like how 400 bpm streams isn't considered overkill anymore, people got way too good at the game -___-






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                          • MetzgerSM
                            FFR Player
                            • Feb 2009
                            • 241

                            #28
                            Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                            lol for example you

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                            • kaiten123
                              FFR Player
                              • May 2008
                              • 1117

                              #29
                              Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                              file sent

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                              • MetzgerSM
                                FFR Player
                                • Feb 2009
                                • 241

                                #30
                                Re: German dump mini pack final submissions!

                                NEW PACK NAME: GERMAN DUMP MONSTER DRAGON CTS PACK

                                Current amount of files: 54
                                Last edited by MetzgerSM; 06-2-2011, 03:16 PM.

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