icy with the hard hitting truth right there

ou don't have to say it, it's a terrible file

the patterns look fun

i'm not trying to be mean, but a collab at this point would be deleting 100% of the file and trying again basically. It looks like you tried, but there needs to be more defined layering so people kind of know what you're trying to bring out in the music. This is really all over the place, i can't tell what any of the jumps or hands are going to and you ignored layering up the bursty parts of the song. The jacks didn't really emphasize anything either it almost seemed like if they were supposed to, they missed the actual part of the song by a lot. Is this by any chance your first file, because I'm really not trying to be mean.