My suggestion is to break up the patterns a bit via stepping the lyrics for instance, especially during periods of 8th notes. The constant 8ths, along with not much pattern variation over repeated areas, add to the monotony a bit. It's not a bad file, but as you suspected, can certainly be refined.
Could work in FFR. Good trill chart, nice color theory, seems pretty solid. Lacks a little flair, as you said, but I don't see much more you could do with the song- it's quite nice as you have it already!
Don't care what anyone else says, i could def see this being used for FFR. I mean i'm not in charge of that shit, but this file looks fun as hell and it would def bring me back to play it :) awesome file dude. Please submit
Posted at 1:16am on September 12th, 2014
My suggestion is to break up the patterns a bit via stepping the lyrics for instance, especially during periods of 8th notes. The constant 8ths, along with not much pattern variation over repeated areas, add to the monotony a bit. It's not a bad file, but as you suspected, can certainly be refined.
Posted at 1:13pm on September 11th, 2014
Could work in FFR. Good trill chart, nice color theory, seems pretty solid. Lacks a little flair, as you said, but I don't see much more you could do with the song- it's quite nice as you have it already!
Posted at 5:49am on September 10th, 2014
I agree with Rb, this chart has nice color trills you don't see often. I would also play it more than once, which is a sign you must submit. lelel
Posted at 12:44am on September 10th, 2014
Don't care what anyone else says, i could def see this being used for FFR. I mean i'm not in charge of that shit, but this file looks fun as hell and it would def bring me back to play it :) awesome file dude. Please submit