Well
Posted on: October 2, 2008, at 06:46:46pm

I Hope This World Makes Me Cry...
So People Know Why I Die..
Wishing I Could Disappear..
Even Though No One's Here..

Falling Farther And Farther Down..
Into This Hole With No Sound..
Out Of The Depths I May Come..
Only To Be Kicked Back With No One..

I Reach Out For The Help Of a Doll..
Hoping Someone Will Catch Me Before I Fall..
In These Depths I Will Cry..
Hoping For Someone To Notice Me Before I Die..

1. 1: blackdragon233
   Posted at 7:14pm on October 2nd, 2008

   i love you dont die mikka (crys)
2. 2: Master Hakuoh9872
   Posted at 7:56pm on November 12th, 2008

   Perfect rhyme scheme ya got here. First to second line rhymes are hard to get, especially when you're trying to make a point about something serious or heartfelt. I give you a 10/10 for your work! Fantastic!