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  • GuidoHunter
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    • Oct 2003
    • 7371

    #16
    Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

    gattsta: poems go in the Lit forum. Read the forum index.

    Also, read this announcement.

    --Guido


    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    She has an asshole, in other pics you can see a diaper taped to her dead twin's back.
    Sentences I thought I never would have to type.

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    • imockthepea
      FFR Player
      • Aug 2003
      • 235

      #17
      Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

      Wow Snowcrafta, whats with dissing on people? I mean it's a good poem and some people let out their emotions with it. No reason to call him a ****** or something for that. Hope you realize bashing on a 14 year old is pointless, and if you do the same to me for backing him up, it still is pointless.
      And the pea mocks me.

      AAA's to date- 2
      Newest- Excite Bike

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      • ShastaTwist
        FFR Veteran
        • Sep 2004
        • 599

        #18
        Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

        So, uh...

        Am I late for the bashing?


        I'm going to be honest, this poem was way blunt. Poetry is supposed to be flowing and nice and stuff, you were like...

        "Why my mom?"

        "But I had my dad."

        Why not throw in a, "So it was all good"?
        Last edited by ShastaTwist; 09-9-2007, 01:23 PM.

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        • Infinity^
          FFR Player
          • Aug 2007
          • 130

          #19
          Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

          Originally posted by ShastaTwist
          So, uh...

          Am I late for the bashing?
          tits.

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          • ShastaTwist
            FFR Veteran
            • Sep 2004
            • 599

            #20
            Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

            Originally posted by Infinity^
            tits.
            That's not me.

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            • gattsta
              FFR Veteran
              • Sep 2005
              • 320

              #21
              Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

              you know what everyone i dont care i quit, not entirely but putting stuff up here and such. and the people wondering what it was it was my mom died, Infinity^ was the closest so i give him creds.
              Originally posted by Reincarnate
              Sometimes when I am in a mad rush to shit and the toilet seat is up I do this motion where I am both putting the lid down and quickly sitting on said lid at the same time, but I have this nagging fear that at some point I am going to sit down wrong and somehow slam my nuts underneath the lid.


              /phobia

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              • shatteredgravity
                FFR Player
                • Apr 2007
                • 95

                #22
                Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                you did perfectly fine ^^ dont listen to these dorkwads.

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                • gattsta
                  FFR Veteran
                  • Sep 2005
                  • 320

                  #23
                  Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                  lol thanks
                  Originally posted by Reincarnate
                  Sometimes when I am in a mad rush to shit and the toilet seat is up I do this motion where I am both putting the lid down and quickly sitting on said lid at the same time, but I have this nagging fear that at some point I am going to sit down wrong and somehow slam my nuts underneath the lid.


                  /phobia

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                  • ShastaTwist
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Sep 2004
                    • 599

                    #24
                    Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                    People gave you advice on your poem and you got mad.

                    Strange.

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                    • Dimitri13
                      FFR Player
                      • Jun 2004
                      • 701

                      #25
                      Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                      He wants people to sympathize the filth that is his life lol.

                      He wants people to say "Oh you poor tortured soul, your poem deserves to be published."
                      Or maybe "Hey that's some deep **** buddy, let's go cut ourselves together."


                      Originally posted by Tibs
                      Originally posted by arsonistsgetallthegirls
                      changing Antarctica into a desert
                      good thing theres lots of sand under all the ice

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