random poem, tell me if its good?

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  • GuidoHunter
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    • Oct 2003
    • 7371
    #16
    Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

    gattsta: poems go in the Lit forum. Read the forum index.

    Also, read this announcement.

    --Guido

    http://andy.mikee385.com

    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    Originally posted by Grandiagod
    She has an asshole, in other pics you can see a diaper taped to her dead twin's back.
    Sentences I thought I never would have to type.

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      • imockthepea
        FFR Player
        • Aug 2003
        • 235
        #17
        Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

        Wow Snowcrafta, whats with dissing on people? I mean it's a good poem and some people let out their emotions with it. No reason to call him a ****** or something for that. Hope you realize bashing on a 14 year old is pointless, and if you do the same to me for backing him up, it still is pointless.
        And the pea mocks me.

        AAA's to date- 2
        Newest- Excite Bike

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          • ShastaTwist
            FFR Veteran
            • Sep 2004
            • 599
            #18
            Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

            So, uh...

            Am I late for the bashing?


            I'm going to be honest, this poem was way blunt. Poetry is supposed to be flowing and nice and stuff, you were like...

            "Why my mom?"

            "But I had my dad."

            Why not throw in a, "So it was all good"?
            Last edited by ShastaTwist; 09-9-2007, 01:23 PM.

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              • Infinity^
                FFR Player
                • Aug 2007
                • 130
                #19
                Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                Originally posted by ShastaTwist
                So, uh...

                Am I late for the bashing?
                tits.

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                  • ShastaTwist
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Sep 2004
                    • 599
                    #20
                    Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                    Originally posted by Infinity^
                    tits.
                    That's not me.

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                      • gattsta
                        FFR Veteran
                        • Sep 2005
                        • 320
                        #21
                        Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                        you know what everyone i dont care i quit, not entirely but putting stuff up here and such. and the people wondering what it was it was my mom died, Infinity^ was the closest so i give him creds.
                        Originally posted by Reincarnate
                        Sometimes when I am in a mad rush to shit and the toilet seat is up I do this motion where I am both putting the lid down and quickly sitting on said lid at the same time, but I have this nagging fear that at some point I am going to sit down wrong and somehow slam my nuts underneath the lid.


                        /phobia

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                          • shatteredgravity
                            FFR Player
                            • Apr 2007
                            • 95
                            #22
                            Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                            you did perfectly fine ^^ dont listen to these dorkwads.

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                              • gattsta
                                FFR Veteran
                                • Sep 2005
                                • 320
                                #23
                                Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                                lol thanks
                                Originally posted by Reincarnate
                                Sometimes when I am in a mad rush to shit and the toilet seat is up I do this motion where I am both putting the lid down and quickly sitting on said lid at the same time, but I have this nagging fear that at some point I am going to sit down wrong and somehow slam my nuts underneath the lid.


                                /phobia

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                                  • ShastaTwist
                                    FFR Veteran
                                    • Sep 2004
                                    • 599
                                    #24
                                    Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                                    People gave you advice on your poem and you got mad.

                                    Strange.

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                                      • Dimitri13
                                        FFR Player
                                        • Jun 2004
                                        • 701
                                        #25
                                        Re: random poem, tell me if its good?

                                        He wants people to sympathize the filth that is his life lol.

                                        He wants people to say "Oh you poor tortured soul, your poem deserves to be published."
                                        Or maybe "Hey that's some deep **** buddy, let's go cut ourselves together."


                                        Originally posted by Tibs
                                        Originally posted by arsonistsgetallthegirls
                                        changing Antarctica into a desert
                                        good thing theres lots of sand under all the ice

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