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  • Freak83
    FFR Simfile Author
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Feb 2003
    • 3281

    #1

    Pokémon Story

    Remember those days when Pokémon was still cool?

    That was when there was 150.
    At 250 it was ok....
    Any more added and it turned gay.

    Back when I was 7 or somewhere around that, two of my friends and myself started writing Pokémon stories. We would sit there for hours and write it... it was a lot of fun, but we don't do that anymore... no childhood memories have to stay put I suppose.

    They both lost their stories, started new ones, lost them, etc. I don't know if they know where any of theirs are. I managed to keep mine, currently 94 pages all handwritten double sided.

    Now I haven't written in it in about two years but last night I decided to write a few more pages... when I thought of something. I've been writing this over the course of 8 or 9 years, other than being just an interesting hobby, it shows how my creativity and literally skills have improved over the years, as well as neatness in writing.

    For example, this was the first "chapter" written at about age 7.(spelling mistakes, grammer mistakes and all)

    Code:
    Scott, Heather and I ran down to the couch in my family room, and I turned on the T.V. "I hope it's a new Pokemon!"I exlamed.  The title came on, "[b]POKEMON[/b]! I choose you! "No it's a rerun again!" I shouted I started jumping up and down mad, then I banged my headinto the sliding glass door. "Well that covers the door,"I said. Then I fainted. All a sudden the T.V. set exploded. "Uh oh, I hope that was insurred" Heather said. "Why?" Scotty asked. "Never mind!" Heather anwsered. Then a porthole appeared where the T.V. set was and sucked us all up without hesitation.
    Notice how everything happens so quickly, just 3 random people appear out of nowhere, how you're expected to know the humour behind everything but you would really need to know what was going on in our lives to understand it?

    Just a quick exerpt (sp?) from something I wrote last night on page 91. Eight or nine years later....

    Code:
    "And if that's not enough he figures that I would make a good back up player."  Said a male voice.
    "But you're meant for so much more than that."  Now said a female one.
    "Of course I am!  These criminal mastermindds all think the same.  They want initiative.  So a few men down makes better for us."
    I peered through the door window and saw two teens talking.  Slouched over next to them were some high ranked looking Team Rocket members, clearly dead.  It didn't look as if Pokémon had killed them either.
    "Isn't that Rob and Emma?"  James asked.
    "Yes and it looks like they really are in charge of things now..." said Jessie with a shiver.
    "Let's stop them!"  I said turning the door knob.
    The last comment by me is a bit childish but when I wrote the story at first I wrote it as I was the same age as myself in the book as in real life. So now coming back I wasn't sure how to make myself go from 8 to 16 in a matter of days in the story. In other words, I'm writing it as if I'm still about 8... *sigh* that's one thing I want to find a way to change logically...


    Anyway, some people write journals to show how they improve but this is what I've done, at first it was just something to do to pass the time for fun but it has turned into much more than that.
  • Moogy
    嗚呼
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Aug 2003
    • 10303

    #2
    what the hell
    Plz visit my blog

    ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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    • Cenright
      You thought I was a GUY?!
      • Sep 2003
      • 3139

      #3
      Who knows.
      http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...Cube_in_55.mpg

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      • 1-4-4
        FFR Player
        • Nov 2003
        • 205

        #4
        ohh, Where did this come from ? I mean the codes.

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        • Lupin_the_3rd
          FFR Player
          • Oct 2003
          • 2665

          #5
          so the point was....you have better writing skills at 16 than 7?

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          • fusi0n
            FFR Player
            • Nov 2003
            • 2158

            #6
            the point is japanese people will have control of your children

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            • prodigallink
              FFR Player
              • Nov 2003
              • 130

              #7
              dude, was this thread really nessesary at all?

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              • Lupin_the_3rd
                FFR Player
                • Oct 2003
                • 2665

                #8
                i think he's just having a wave of nostalgia.

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                • BluE_MeaniE
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2003
                  • 796

                  #9
                  Wait....8 or 9 years ago?
                  I didn't realize pokémon was around then.
                  I got into pokémon when I was in third grade after reading about it in Nintendo Power. It was either a review, a walkthrough, or a preview....so it can't have come out so much earlier. I'm in 9th grade now, so 8 or 9 years ago was way before 3rd grade.

                  Am I way off?
                  Originally posted by Henri Poincaré
                  The scientist does not study nature because it is useful to do so. He studies it because he takes pleasure in it, and he takes pleasure in it because it is beautiful.

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                  • fusi0n
                    FFR Player
                    • Nov 2003
                    • 2158

                    #10
                    Originally posted by prodigallink
                    dude, was this thread really nessesary at all?

                    its chit chat...it doesn't have to be necessary to anything

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                    • Yami_no_Kouichi
                      FFR Player
                      • Feb 2004
                      • 22

                      #11
                      Much improvement, indeed. I write fanfics also and I know how this sort of thing feels.

                      Type it up and I'll read it!
                      Insanity is just a state of mind. Leave me be.

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                      • Lupin_the_3rd
                        FFR Player
                        • Oct 2003
                        • 2665

                        #12
                        Originally posted by fusi0n
                        Originally posted by prodigallink
                        dude, was this thread really nessesary at all?

                        its chit chat...it doesn't have to be necessary to anything
                        I would watch what you're saying. Arch0wl believes that you can only write about important things in chit chat. You see all the locks everywhere. "potential flame bait"=Arch0wl doesn't like the thread

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                        • Moogy
                          嗚呼
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Aug 2003
                          • 10303

                          #13
                          Actually, I feel Arch was justified in locking that thread; it was nothing but flame bait, in my opinion.
                          Plz visit my blog

                          ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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                          • fusi0n
                            FFR Player
                            • Nov 2003
                            • 2158

                            #14
                            wow thats pretty dumb...i mean you don't only talk about important things to your friends. chit-chat is important things now?

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                            • Cenright
                              You thought I was a GUY?!
                              • Sep 2003
                              • 3139

                              #15
                              fusion, wait till you actually say something important before you complain
                              http://www.flashflashrevolution.com/...Cube_in_55.mpg

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