You know what it IS!
Please tell me what you think. It took an hour, but it sounds like I spent a week making it!
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You know what it IS!
Please tell me what you think. It took an hour, but it sounds like I spent a week making it!8It's good0%0It's bad0%8No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars. -
Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
To be honest, it really does sound like you took an hour to make it..
Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
"If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted by MrRubix[link]:
"Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"
Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
"My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually." -
Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
It's better than your "happy hardcore" song, but still it's too repetetive. Vary your music a little! If you did that it would be better. Length is not always the key to making music.Comment
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No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Making a simple beat with a stale melody and repeating it until it's the length of an average song doesn't make it sound like it took you a week to make; it sounds like it'd take any musician about 20-30 minutes.
Although, it was pretty cool for 30 seconds. After that, it just got repetitious...Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Clearly he didn't listen to the whole song
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
it's all right. a little bit catchy, but repetitive. what'd you use to make it?
and uh, flyleef, he probably opened it and skimmed through it, skipping to like four different parts of the song. and they all sounded roughly the same, so he judged it off of that, i bet.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
you take the same beat and copy and paste it through the entire song it seems like.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
First off. Belongs in Musician's Jungle Gym.
Secondly. As for the beat itself. I'm glad you like it, but ir really DOES sound like it took an hour to lay it down.
Even for a simple beat, it is excessivley repetitive and sounds like absolutely no mastering, compression, EQing, anything of the sort was done, as well as the drums sounding like they are presets straight outa FLS.
I definately think you can go somewhere with this beat and collab with someone to lay a vocal track over it... But please next time put it in the Musician's Jungle Gym and don't try to advertise the song as being awesome and only having took an hour to produce, because people will see that and automatically have a bad first impression of the song without even having listened to it yet... Y'know what I mean?
ANYWAYS! Good hour well spent! But needs a lot more work! Can't wait to hear a much more worked on version if you choose to do so!
Originally posted by Spec & ApersonComment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
I'll post what I said in Flyleef's profile:
Actually, I've listened to the song on repeat since you posted it out of curiosity.
For the first listen, I listened through more than half of it, and then scrubbed through the rest. Your song is overly repetitive, thus I don't need to listen to every second of it to grade it..
Originally Posted by jewpinthethird[link]:
"If you get stung by enough bees you turn into a bee,
because the venom gets into the blood stream which
spreads bee DNA throughout your entire body...
changing your genetic structure into a bee's.
Every year roughly 125 people in America are turned into bees this way."
Originally Posted by MrRubix[link]:
"Do you basically bukkake-paint your walls every time you jack it?"
Originally Posted by All_That_Chaz[link]:
"My pity-sex depreciates at a rate of 5% annually."Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Basically Flyleef, switch it up a bit, add some different melodies to the song, change the drums around, add some fills get creative. You have a good beat, and some good synths but spruce it up a little, then it will be a lot better. Trust me.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Loses status of cool at 46. Just too repetitive. Others have already said everything there is to be said. Just take it in to consideration when you edit/make a new track.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
I understand. I'm stuck in repetition. I hope I get better.No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Add a completely different overlaying melody to make it cool.Comment
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Re: Amazing beat by Flyleef. This time, everyone will like it
Thanks everyone!No matter how many times the colors of the seasons change,
these feelings will never wither, swaying like a flower
If this is just a dream, then let it be a dream. I don't care.
My heart, filled with loving radiance
Is forever thinking of you.
These words that we play are a pleasant melody
All I want is to have you by my side,
so that I won't lose my smiling eyes
even on a night when we can't see the twinkling of the stars.Comment
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