"Star Student" By Michael Gettings

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  • MalReynolds
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    • Sep 2003
    • 6571

    #1

    "Star Student" By Michael Gettings

    The reason the pages are numbered is because a friend of mine is doing pictures, and it will be in picture book format.

    Everyone I know found it amusing.

    Tell me what you think. Sugguestions/improvements.


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    "Star Student" by Michael Gettings


    Page 1-2

    This is Jane. Shes in the second grade! She loves school. This week, she is the "Star Student!".

    Page 3-4

    She gets cookies at lunch and she gets to tell her whole class about her family.
    It was the best week ever.

    Page 5-6

    Soon, too soon, the week was over. It was another childs turn to be the "Star Student".

    Page 7-8

    Jane didn't like this. It made her angry. Very angry.

    Page 9-10

    Jane did the math: with the number of students in her class, she wouldn't get to be "Star Student" again for the rest of the year! Unless... Unless something happens.

    Page 11-12

    Jane started small. 3-4 kids got "sick" at lunch one day and had to go home.

    Page 13-14

    They never came back.

    Page 15-16

    It looked like an illness... And thanks to the science kit that Jane had gotten for Christmas, it was virtually untraceable.

    Page 17-18

    On student "fell" off of the monkey bars.

    Page 19-20

    Another "fell" onto a pair of scissors.

    Page 21-22

    Soon, there were no more then ten classmates in her class! Jane was very happy...

    Page 23-24

    Until the men in blue started watching her class. They took Adam away. Adam was always a trouble maker.

    Page 25-26

    No one suspected her. Not little ole' Jane!

    Page 27-28

    It was time for her to be "Star Student!" again! And now, she knew just what she was going to do.

    Page 29-30

    She got cookies at lunch, but instead of talking about her family...

    Page 31-32

    She talked about how much fun it was "becoming" "Star Student!" again.

    Page 33-34

    When the men in white came to take her to the padded room, all she could do was smile.

    Page 35

    And it was the best week ever.

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    Thanks!

    Mal
    "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

    "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


    My new novel:

    Maledictions: The Offering.

    Now in Paperback!
  • bballplaya
    FFR Player
    • Jul 2003
    • 1007

    #2
    uh im seriously disturbed
    Originally posted by tnyhwk900
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    • eldiabo3005
      FFR Player
      • Mar 2003
      • 630

      #3
      ummmm ok.

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      • MalReynolds
        CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
        • Sep 2003
        • 6571

        #4
        Well, its more of a satire than anything else. Not to be taken too seriously.


        Mal
        "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

        "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


        My new novel:

        Maledictions: The Offering.

        Now in Paperback!

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        • Stereo
          FFR Player
          • Jul 2003
          • 24

          #5
          She in the second grade!
          But you're not!

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          • MalReynolds
            CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
            • Sep 2003
            • 6571

            #6
            Missed the point, but thanks for that. See, people? HES HELPING! Sugguestions, corrections... ect.

            Mal
            "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

            "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


            My new novel:

            Maledictions: The Offering.

            Now in Paperback!

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            • Moogy
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              • Aug 2003
              • 10303

              #7
              That would be hilarious in book form.
              Plz visit my blog

              ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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              • bballplaya
                FFR Player
                • Jul 2003
                • 1007

                #8
                ya call the people in white suits and u get a padded room 4 free
                Originally posted by tnyhwk900
                We need Arch0wl in his worst mood in here to say how much we hate AlternateOblivion .
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                My forums looking for mods

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                • MalReynolds
                  CHOCK FULL O' NUTRIENTS
                  • Sep 2003
                  • 6571

                  #9
                  Thank you!

                  My friend who might be working on it would be doing full color pages, and it would be formatted like a childrens book. It would be awesome.


                  Mal

                  ((Thanks Moogy!))
                  "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

                  "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


                  My new novel:

                  Maledictions: The Offering.

                  Now in Paperback!

                  Comment

                  • bballplaya
                    FFR Player
                    • Jul 2003
                    • 1007

                    #10
                    but i just told u how to save a lot of money
                    Originally posted by tnyhwk900
                    We need Arch0wl in his worst mood in here to say how much we hate AlternateOblivion .
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                    My forums looking for mods

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                    • Brainmaster07
                      FFR Player
                      • Jun 2003
                      • 2891

                      #11
                      Sounds like a great childs book .

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                      • IAMTHEEVILBEAN
                        FFR Player
                        • Jun 2003
                        • 3078

                        #12
                        yeah but you should add liek raping and sex crimes and other stuff....then have pictures

                        you could also add a molesting freind name Billy who does her up the hizaaaaa ebery day

                        In other words...needs more action

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                        • Moogy
                          嗚呼
                          FFR Simfile Author
                          • Aug 2003
                          • 10303

                          #13
                          In other words, you're a pedophile.
                          Plz visit my blog

                          ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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                          • MalReynolds
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                            • Sep 2003
                            • 6571

                            #14
                            IAMTHEEVILBEAN.... I hate you.

                            For serious.

                            Ra... Rape?

                            DO NOT RAPE. DO NOT STEAL. DO NOT KILL. THESE ARE THE BEILIEFS THAT EVERY MAN OF ANY FAITH CAN EMBRACE. (Except you, apparantley)


                            Mal
                            "A new take on the epic fantasy genre... Darkly comic, relatable characters... twisted storyline."

                            "Readers who prefer tension and romance, Maledictions: The Offering, delivers... As serious YA fiction, I’ll give it five stars out of five. As a novel? Four and a half." - Liz Ellor


                            My new novel:

                            Maledictions: The Offering.

                            Now in Paperback!

                            Comment

                            • IAMTHEEVILBEAN
                              FFR Player
                              • Jun 2003
                              • 3078

                              #15
                              Originally posted by MalReynolds
                              IAMTHEEVILBEAN.... I hate you.

                              For serious.

                              Ra... Rape?

                              DO NOT RAPE. DO NOT STEAL. DO NOT KILL. THESE ARE THE BEILIEFS THAT EVERY MAN OF ANY FAITH CAN EMBRACE. (Except you, apparantley)


                              Mal
                              iw as only kidding Mal LOL

                              i joke alot so get used to it....im a jokester kind of guy...the story was very good tell ur friend good job

                              and no moogy im not a pedaphile.....

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