My First Time by:deidra (me)

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  • deederr
    FFR Player
    • Dec 2005
    • 7
    #1

    My First Time by:deidra (me)

    The stars were bright and the moon was high
    we were alone just she and i

    She had brown eyes and her hair was too
    and i knew exactly what she wanted to do

    With my hand i felt her heart
    then she started to move her legs apart

    I knew she was ready but i didn't know how
    and that was the first time that i ever milked the cow.
    Hello my name is DJ and i live in Virginia.
    I like to watch t.v. and listen to music,
    i like to draw and write poetry. And i am a wonderful person to talk to me just try and you\'ll love me too.
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    • deederr
      FFR Player
      • Dec 2005
      • 7
      #2
      RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

      People please tell me what you thought of my Poem. Email me at: [email protected] my name is DJ. And i am Female people :P !
      Hello my name is DJ and i live in Virginia.
      I like to watch t.v. and listen to music,
      i like to draw and write poetry. And i am a wonderful person to talk to me just try and you\'ll love me too.

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        • JurseyRider734
          lil j the bad b-word
          • Aug 2003
          • 7506
          #3
          RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

          Way to steal a poem that someone else wrote.

          Anyway.

          Just skip the poetry part and kill yourself.
          Originally posted by Arch0wl
          I'd better be considering I own roughly six textbooks on logic and have taken courses involving its extensive use

          Originally posted by Afrobean
          Originally Posted by JurseyRider734
          the fact that you're resorting to threatening physical violence says a lot anyway.
          Just that you're a piece of shit who can't see reason and instead deserves a fucking beating.

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            • deederr
              FFR Player
              • Dec 2005
              • 7
              #4
              RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

              I did not steal this poem my father and i wrote it yesterday in my room with my girlfriend! So :P Anyways i donno we just made it up it thought it was funny
              Hello my name is DJ and i live in Virginia.
              I like to watch t.v. and listen to music,
              i like to draw and write poetry. And i am a wonderful person to talk to me just try and you\'ll love me too.

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                • jamuko
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2004
                  • 1083
                  #5
                  RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                  o rly?

                  Trying to get praise for someone else's work isn't going to get you anywhere. :/
                  ♪~
                  Always Happy! Smile! Hello!
                  I like delicious things
                  I shoot eye beams at the things I hate and make them explode! (Yay!)
                  So Happy! Smile! Hello! It's a picnic every day
                  There's lots of happiness in my pocket
                  So let's play forever~

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                    • mead1
                      Cerebellumberjack
                      FFR Simfile Author
                      • Aug 2003
                      • 3960
                      #6
                      RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                      Owned by jamuko

                      Otherwise, welcome to the forums, and don't steal other people's stuff.

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                        • linus
                          FFR Player
                          • Jul 2003
                          • 2417
                          #7
                          RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                          hahaha, busted. I doubt if he will come back...
                          gone.

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                            • deederr
                              FFR Player
                              • Dec 2005
                              • 7
                              #8
                              RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                              I will come back and i am not a he! please forgive me i idn't know my father and i made it up yesterday. So i donno. Any ways thatnks for talking to me anyways.
                              Hello my name is DJ and i live in Virginia.
                              I like to watch t.v. and listen to music,
                              i like to draw and write poetry. And i am a wonderful person to talk to me just try and you\'ll love me too.

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                                • Tokzic
                                  FFR Player
                                  • May 2005
                                  • 6878
                                  #9
                                  RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                                  Seriously, would you give it up? I've gotten three forwards with that joke over the last year and a half, you didn't make it up.

                                  Also, am I the only one that caught that she's a female and she has a girlfriend? Hmm.

                                  Last edited by Tokzic: Today at 11:59 PM. Reason: wait what

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                                    • MrGiggles
                                      Senior Member
                                      • Aug 2005
                                      • 2846
                                      #10
                                      Re: RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                                      Originally posted by Tokzic
                                      Also, am I the only one that caught that she's a female and she has a girlfriend? Hmm.
                                      =O

                                      Seriously, no more poetry threads. If you really make your own poetry, post it in Criticaal Thinking.

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                                        • FishFishRevolution
                                          GotR Creator
                                          • Nov 2003
                                          • 7251
                                          #11
                                          RE: Re: RE: My First Time by:deidra (me)

                                          STOLED. WE STOLED THE INTERNET.

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