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  • Kefit
    FFR Player
    • Apr 2003
    • 1517

    #16
    My review:

    Never have I been so touched by a piece of fiction. The immaculate, robust word choice; the tragically flawed, yet oh so human characters that etch theirselves upon the reader's soul; the mellifluous wordplay that lulls the reader's mind along with its sing-song voice; the ravishing plot, at once a reflection of the inner struggle for freedom we all endure and of the nature of individual communities seeking their place in the society of today; these elements all amalgamate into a body that is at once as innocuous as a cloud lazily wisping in the summer breeze and as treacherous as predator deftly stalking its ill-fated prey. Truly this is one of the greatest written works of any kind to ever exist.


    Originally posted by seinno
    and also thank you everone for clearing it up for me I will try to start using my two hands iv tried quit a bit i put my left hand index and middle finger middle finger is on the up arrow index on on left arrow and right hand i use my index for the down button and middle for the right button does that seem weird?

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    • ImEric12
      FFR Player
      • Jan 2004
      • 1952

      #17
      omgz i wuz touched LIKE A 5th GRADER AT A CATHOLIC CHURCHL OLOZLOLZ

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      • BluE_MeaniE
        FFR Player
        • Jan 2003
        • 796

        #18
        Hmm...well, you wrote it in such a way that nobody could really say it was all that bad because if they did...it's kind of meant to be bad, yet funny. But at the same time it's meant to be bad and only bad. And it could go as either.
        Originally posted by Henri Poincaré
        The scientist does not study nature because it is useful to do so. He studies it because he takes pleasure in it, and he takes pleasure in it because it is beautiful.

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        • jewpinthethird
          (The Fat's Sabobah)
          FFR Music Producer
          • Nov 2002
          • 11711

          #19
          If there was ever a time to use "lol" it would be now.

          But I wont. But I did truly laugh out loud.

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          • tnyhwk900
            FFR Player
            FFR Simfile Author
            • May 2003
            • 4106

            #20
            Originally posted by BluE_MeaniE
            Hmm...well, you wrote it in such a way that nobody could really say it was all that bad because if they did...it's kind of meant to be bad, yet funny. But at the same time it's meant to be bad and only bad. And it could go as either.
            Ok, you don't get to talk anymore.

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            • Moogy
              嗚呼
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Aug 2003
              • 10303

              #21
              Part 2 is tomorrow...

              Title : PART 2 - THE WRATH OF CTHULU (AND A RATHER LARGE KITTEN)

              Don't miss it, kids.
              Plz visit my blog

              ^^^ vintage signature from like 2006 preserved

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              • BluE_MeaniE
                FFR Player
                • Jan 2003
                • 796

                #22
                Originally posted by tnyhwk900
                Originally posted by BluE_MeaniE
                Hmm...well, you wrote it in such a way that nobody could really say it was all that bad because if they did...it's kind of meant to be bad, yet funny. But at the same time it's meant to be bad and only bad. And it could go as either.
                Ok, you don't get to talk anymore.
                What's your problem?
                It was just an observation.
                Originally posted by Henri Poincaré
                The scientist does not study nature because it is useful to do so. He studies it because he takes pleasure in it, and he takes pleasure in it because it is beautiful.

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                • ImEric12
                  FFR Player
                  • Jan 2004
                  • 1952

                  #23
                  Hey.

                  Blue.

                  Moogy is secksier than you.

                  Therefore, he commands more power in the <3's of our capitalist society.

                  So shut up.

                  and.

                  OMG MOOGY WILL U SIGN MY BUTT LOLZ AUTOGRAPHZ

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                  • BluE_MeaniE
                    FFR Player
                    • Jan 2003
                    • 796

                    #24
                    Jesus, it was just an observation. I liked the story, but after I read it for the second time I noticed that nobody had said it was bad, and I couldn't picture someone saying it was bad here.
                    So I was wondering if any of you noticed the same thing.
                    Originally posted by Henri Poincaré
                    The scientist does not study nature because it is useful to do so. He studies it because he takes pleasure in it, and he takes pleasure in it because it is beautiful.

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