My first short film :D

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  • TheDiamondCrafter
    Banned
    • Oct 2014
    • 29
    #1

    My first short film :D

    Hey, since I know most of you are really supportive and an awesome community, I would like you guys to constructively criticize my short film! <3
    Click here to watch! <3
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    • Mourningfall
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      • Jan 2011
      • 1627
      #2
      Re: My first short film

      okay, only criticism; get a storyboard together before you start recording. you've got great editing software and it was approached quite professionally but I have no idea what I just watched or why. GTA yeah cool, cool song, cool intro, yeah cool cool. but what was the point? blowing shit up? exciting stuff.

      You've got great potential, and have earned yourself a subscriber but I'd like to see a little more thought put into your videos.

      actually, looking at your other videos you've definitely got your shit together. looking forward to seeing more from you in the future
      Last edited by Mourningfall; 08-12-2016, 07:41 AM.

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        • TheDiamondCrafter
          Banned
          • Oct 2014
          • 29
          #3
          Re: My first short film

          Thanks Mourningfall! I really appreciate it. <3

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