So I've mentioned that my username Dossar originated from a game series called Exile and he was a Slitheraki leader. However, my middle brother created a story called "The Dark World" back when I was in my single digit years. He took races from Exile and names from the game. It was going great up until Chapter 7, and when I asked him last week what happened he said he didn't remember why he stopped.
If you want to see the book containing the original written text, here are the pictures.
Book Cover (I consider this page one because after you open it you have a picture of an armored knight)
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Some of the pictures are hard to look at due to some blurriness. However, I also typed the text onto a word document to make it easier to read and save for the future in case this story ever continues.
Introduction
There is a world far, far away, where there were three races: The Slitheraki, Nephilms, and Hrawkas.
The Slitheraki are the most sneakiest thieves. They always wanted war. They are lizards.
The Nephilms, however, wanted peace. They didn’t like fighting at all. They are cats.
The Hrawkas didn’t really care about if there is war or not. They love to fight. They are eagles.
There is a cup called “The Holy Chalice” that all races wanted. It gives you immortality. That is why they battle.
Chapter 1: Preparing for battle
The Slitheraki were getting prepared to battle. Dossar, the strongest Slitheraki soldier, gave a spear to Thissa, the youngest warrior. “You should practice, Thissa. We are having a big battle tomorrow,” said Dossar. Everything that night was quiet until a Slitheraki guard let out a yelp. “Who’s there?! Augh!” screamed another guard. Thissa got his spear and ran out of the castle. He saw something black. It was a Nephilm. He ran. “Come back here! Fight like an animal!” yelled Thissa. The Nephilm was just too fast, so Thissa couldn’t catch him. “The Nephilms will be sorry they even messed with us,” Thissa thought.
The next day, they attacked the Nephilm castle. Frrrr, the fastest Nephilm, was ready to shoot with his bow. “I’m gonna…” Frrrr started to say, but then his tiger-looking friend said “Frrrr, you shouldn’t be here. Go to the other castle. I’ll retreat if I need to.”
“But that’s not fair!” cried Frrrr.
“Go!!”
“Frrrr ran away in disappointment. “How come I never get to do anything fun! Do this! Do that!” Frrrr thought. The fighting began. “ATTACK!!!” commanded Dossar.
Hack! Slash! It was a gory battle. “Man, we are doing pretty bad. I gotta get out of here!” Crrrr thought. He ran toward the gate. “Oh no you don’t!” yelled Thissa. He threw his spear at Crrrr’s leg. “Aaaaaah!!!” screamed Crrrr in pain. He managed to run out of the gate and escape. The battle went on. The Slitheraki won, but all of their men were wounded. “Let’s go home,” said Dossar. Dossar had to arrow wounds on his chest, but he was alright. They were heading home, but half of the army died of blood loss.
Chapter 2: The Wounded Battle
“Dossar, my feet are getting tired,” whined Thissa.
“Oh, shut up! We will make it!” yelled Dossar.
Then, at the Hrawka castle, a scout flew to Juka, the evil Hrawka warlord. “Master, there are wounded Slitheraki headed home! Should we let them go?” said the scout.
“LET THEM GO?!!!! SILENCE!!!” thundered Juka. “SLAUGHTER THEM ALL!!!!” Juka commanded. The scout flew backwards and did four frontflips.
Later, there was a horde of Hrawkas. “There they are!” yelled Juka. “Attack!!!”
“Oh, no!” cried Thissa.
“Let’s hide behind that rock!” commanded Dossar. They both jumped behind the rock.
“Oh, no.” said a Slitheraki soldier. Then all the Hrawkas brutally killed all the Slitheraki. “Ha, ha, ha!” laughed Juka. “But that reminds me, where’s Thissa and Dossar? I saw them in the Nephilm castle.”
“Gulp!” said Thissa.
“Find them! NOW!” roared Juka. The Hrawka soldiers searched everywhere but the rock. “I guess they are not here,” Juka said. They flew away. Dossar and Thissa carefully crawled out of the rock and ran back to their castle.
Chapter 3: Slitheraki’s Problem
“I wanna kill those idiots now! Look at what they did to my leg!” yelled Crrrr. “We are going to attack the Slitheraki whether you like it or not!”
Then, at the Hrawka castle, Juka was thinking the same thing. “We must attack the Slitheraki castle. They don’t have much defense,” said Juka.
Then both of the races started marching towards the Slitheraki castle. “Everyone! Get ready for battle!” cried Thissa.
“Hey, what are you doing here?!” yelled Frrrr to Juka.
“Hey, what are YOU doing here?!” yelled Juka.
“Let’s team up on the Slitheraki!” yelled Frrrr.
“Alright, sounds good to me!” said Juka.
“This isn’t fair!” cried Thissa to Dossar. “We gotta get out of here!” Both of them tried to find an exit. They couldn’t go out of the gate or they would be killed. “We have to jump off the castle!” yelled Dossar. They jumped off the castle. “Waaaaaahh!!!” both Thissa and Dossar yelled. Splash! They fell into the moat. “We lucked out again,” said Thissa. They ran to their other castle. “Where are those two little brats?! They always manage to escape! COME BACK YOU MAGGOTS!!” yelled Juka.
It was not a fair battle. It was two against one, and the Slitheraki barely had any troops. They lost the battle by a mile. “Hey, we make a pretty good team,” said Frrrr.
“Yeah, BUT NOT FOR LONG!” yelled Juka. He darted at a Nephilm and stabbed the soldier in the stomach with his talon. “What do you think you’re doing?!” cried Frrrr.
“Attack!!” commanded Juka.
“You backstabber!” yelled Frrrr. Arrows went flying. Blood was everywhere. “I just love bloodshed,” Juka said to himself.
“You evil demon!” shouted Frrrr. The battle went on, and the Nephilms were forced to retreat.
Chapter 4: The New Races
“Juka is the most evil thing I’ve known! He…” Frrrr began to say. Then there was a loud sound in the ground. Then a rat-like creature popped out of the ground. “Aaaaaah!!!” screamed the Nephilm citizens.
“Guards! GUARDS!!” shrieked the citizens, but then the thing climbed back into the hole and disappeared.
Meanwhile, at the Slitheraki castle, Thissa and Dossar were planning their next attack. The guards saw armored tan things coming out of a portal.
The two guards looked at each other and called for Thissa and Dossar to have a look. “Well,” said Thissa, “We have rumors that armored things would protect us from our foes.”
Thissa sent a guard to greet them. The Slitheraki guard walked to them, but before the guard could say anything, the leader said “Who approaches me?! I shall kill thee!” and then the leader grabbed his sword and stabbed the guard. After, the armored soldiers kept walking. The Slitheraki were shocked.
Chapter 5: Allies
“I shall slaughter anything that comes in my way,” said the armored leader. Then, the rat-like creature popped out of the ground in front of the armored soldiers. “I shall kill thee!” shouted the leader.
“Wait, wait!” cried the rat-like creature. “My race is neutral, I’ve been commanded to find an ally if we battle.”
“Alright, but first tell thy who you are,” said the armored leader.
“My kind is called the Warfs,” said the Warf. “And my name is Shenk, the most skilled Warf warrior.”
“Well, thy race is called the humans, and my name is Sir Vivyn,” said Sir Vivyn. “Now take me to your leader.”
Then, Shenk dug up a hole. “Come down here,” said Shenk. “Our home is down here.”
So then Sir Vivyn and his soldiers went down the hole. But one soldier was stuck and said “Sir, I am stuck.”
But then, with lightning speed, Shenk climbed up the hole with his big claws, and dug up the soldier in 2 seconds.
“What a base!” cried Sir Vivyn.
“We have all this space but nothing to put inside. Most of the rooms are for sleeping. There are only 2 special rooms: the hatching room and the magic pool,” explained Shenk. “My leader is Durga. I’ll take you to him. He is the master of Magiks. He was born like that.”
Shenk took Sir Vivyn to Durga, and then they started talking about war. Then, the wise Durga had an idea. “Why don’t you build your brick base right over us so we can share supplies?”
“Then I shall have my men build a base,” said Sir Vivyn.
After the humans built their castle, they shared supplies with the Warfs. The humans even let Durga use their science materials, and he invented explosive potions. Then they both agreed to be allies.
Chapter 6: The Stupid Attack
“Hey, Thissa and Dossar!” cried a Siltheraki scout. “I found the brick castle!”
“Then we can attack at night. That will teach them to kill us!” said Dossar. “They will be sleeping, and we will strike!”
But little did he know that the humans had Warfs as allies, and Warfs were right next to the castle.
At nighttime, the Slitheraki approached the human castle. “Attack!” commanded Dossar. They attacked the brick castle, but the only thing it did was scratch the bricks and made a very loud noise that woke up the Warfs. The Warfs got ready to battle in seconds. “Throw the potions!” commanded Durga.
“Ahhhh!!!” cried the Slitheraki soldiers as they were getting scorched.
“Shouldn’t we retreat?” asked Thissa.
“No! We have done that too many times!” yelled Dossar. But then the explosions woke up the humans. “We are under attack! Get your armor on!” commanded Sir Vivyn. “We must also assist our allies!”
The humans ran out of the castle. “Attack thee!!!” commanded Sir Vivyn. The Slitheraki had already lost half of their army, so they had a big disadvantage. “Hey! That’s not fair! It’s two armies against one!” cried Thissa.
“Retreat!” shouted Dossar. But then, Shenk came out of the ground in front of Dossar. “Where do you think you’re going?” said Shenk.
“Get away from me!” shouted Dossar as they attacked each other. “I think I should help,” said Thissa.
“No! This is my battle!” yelled Dossar. It was a hard battle. Shenk was the first to draw blood. He hit Dossar’s arm, and then Dossar hit Shenk’s leg. They were both wounded.
They both couldn’t fight anymore, so they called it a draw. “Kill the black lizard! He wounded Shenk!” yelled Sir Vivyn.
“Retreat!” yelled Dossar. They barely managed to retreat.
Chapter 7: To be continued…
If you want to see the book containing the original written text, here are the pictures.
Book Cover (I consider this page one because after you open it you have a picture of an armored knight)
Page 2
Page 3
Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
Page 7
Page 8
Page 9
Page 10
Page 11
Page 12
Page 13
Page 14
Page 15
Page 16
Page 17
Page 18
Page 19
Page 20
Page 21
Page 22
Page 23
Page 24
Page 25
Page 26
Page 27
Page 28
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Page 31
Some of the pictures are hard to look at due to some blurriness. However, I also typed the text onto a word document to make it easier to read and save for the future in case this story ever continues.
The Dark World
Introduction
There is a world far, far away, where there were three races: The Slitheraki, Nephilms, and Hrawkas.
The Slitheraki are the most sneakiest thieves. They always wanted war. They are lizards.
The Nephilms, however, wanted peace. They didn’t like fighting at all. They are cats.
The Hrawkas didn’t really care about if there is war or not. They love to fight. They are eagles.
There is a cup called “The Holy Chalice” that all races wanted. It gives you immortality. That is why they battle.
Chapter 1: Preparing for battle
The Slitheraki were getting prepared to battle. Dossar, the strongest Slitheraki soldier, gave a spear to Thissa, the youngest warrior. “You should practice, Thissa. We are having a big battle tomorrow,” said Dossar. Everything that night was quiet until a Slitheraki guard let out a yelp. “Who’s there?! Augh!” screamed another guard. Thissa got his spear and ran out of the castle. He saw something black. It was a Nephilm. He ran. “Come back here! Fight like an animal!” yelled Thissa. The Nephilm was just too fast, so Thissa couldn’t catch him. “The Nephilms will be sorry they even messed with us,” Thissa thought.
The next day, they attacked the Nephilm castle. Frrrr, the fastest Nephilm, was ready to shoot with his bow. “I’m gonna…” Frrrr started to say, but then his tiger-looking friend said “Frrrr, you shouldn’t be here. Go to the other castle. I’ll retreat if I need to.”
“But that’s not fair!” cried Frrrr.
“Go!!”
“Frrrr ran away in disappointment. “How come I never get to do anything fun! Do this! Do that!” Frrrr thought. The fighting began. “ATTACK!!!” commanded Dossar.
Hack! Slash! It was a gory battle. “Man, we are doing pretty bad. I gotta get out of here!” Crrrr thought. He ran toward the gate. “Oh no you don’t!” yelled Thissa. He threw his spear at Crrrr’s leg. “Aaaaaah!!!” screamed Crrrr in pain. He managed to run out of the gate and escape. The battle went on. The Slitheraki won, but all of their men were wounded. “Let’s go home,” said Dossar. Dossar had to arrow wounds on his chest, but he was alright. They were heading home, but half of the army died of blood loss.
Chapter 2: The Wounded Battle
“Dossar, my feet are getting tired,” whined Thissa.
“Oh, shut up! We will make it!” yelled Dossar.
Then, at the Hrawka castle, a scout flew to Juka, the evil Hrawka warlord. “Master, there are wounded Slitheraki headed home! Should we let them go?” said the scout.
“LET THEM GO?!!!! SILENCE!!!” thundered Juka. “SLAUGHTER THEM ALL!!!!” Juka commanded. The scout flew backwards and did four frontflips.
Later, there was a horde of Hrawkas. “There they are!” yelled Juka. “Attack!!!”
“Oh, no!” cried Thissa.
“Let’s hide behind that rock!” commanded Dossar. They both jumped behind the rock.
“Oh, no.” said a Slitheraki soldier. Then all the Hrawkas brutally killed all the Slitheraki. “Ha, ha, ha!” laughed Juka. “But that reminds me, where’s Thissa and Dossar? I saw them in the Nephilm castle.”
“Gulp!” said Thissa.
“Find them! NOW!” roared Juka. The Hrawka soldiers searched everywhere but the rock. “I guess they are not here,” Juka said. They flew away. Dossar and Thissa carefully crawled out of the rock and ran back to their castle.
Chapter 3: Slitheraki’s Problem
“I wanna kill those idiots now! Look at what they did to my leg!” yelled Crrrr. “We are going to attack the Slitheraki whether you like it or not!”
Then, at the Hrawka castle, Juka was thinking the same thing. “We must attack the Slitheraki castle. They don’t have much defense,” said Juka.
Then both of the races started marching towards the Slitheraki castle. “Everyone! Get ready for battle!” cried Thissa.
“Hey, what are you doing here?!” yelled Frrrr to Juka.
“Hey, what are YOU doing here?!” yelled Juka.
“Let’s team up on the Slitheraki!” yelled Frrrr.
“Alright, sounds good to me!” said Juka.
“This isn’t fair!” cried Thissa to Dossar. “We gotta get out of here!” Both of them tried to find an exit. They couldn’t go out of the gate or they would be killed. “We have to jump off the castle!” yelled Dossar. They jumped off the castle. “Waaaaaahh!!!” both Thissa and Dossar yelled. Splash! They fell into the moat. “We lucked out again,” said Thissa. They ran to their other castle. “Where are those two little brats?! They always manage to escape! COME BACK YOU MAGGOTS!!” yelled Juka.
It was not a fair battle. It was two against one, and the Slitheraki barely had any troops. They lost the battle by a mile. “Hey, we make a pretty good team,” said Frrrr.
“Yeah, BUT NOT FOR LONG!” yelled Juka. He darted at a Nephilm and stabbed the soldier in the stomach with his talon. “What do you think you’re doing?!” cried Frrrr.
“Attack!!” commanded Juka.
“You backstabber!” yelled Frrrr. Arrows went flying. Blood was everywhere. “I just love bloodshed,” Juka said to himself.
“You evil demon!” shouted Frrrr. The battle went on, and the Nephilms were forced to retreat.
Chapter 4: The New Races
“Juka is the most evil thing I’ve known! He…” Frrrr began to say. Then there was a loud sound in the ground. Then a rat-like creature popped out of the ground. “Aaaaaah!!!” screamed the Nephilm citizens.
“Guards! GUARDS!!” shrieked the citizens, but then the thing climbed back into the hole and disappeared.
Meanwhile, at the Slitheraki castle, Thissa and Dossar were planning their next attack. The guards saw armored tan things coming out of a portal.
The two guards looked at each other and called for Thissa and Dossar to have a look. “Well,” said Thissa, “We have rumors that armored things would protect us from our foes.”
Thissa sent a guard to greet them. The Slitheraki guard walked to them, but before the guard could say anything, the leader said “Who approaches me?! I shall kill thee!” and then the leader grabbed his sword and stabbed the guard. After, the armored soldiers kept walking. The Slitheraki were shocked.
Chapter 5: Allies
“I shall slaughter anything that comes in my way,” said the armored leader. Then, the rat-like creature popped out of the ground in front of the armored soldiers. “I shall kill thee!” shouted the leader.
“Wait, wait!” cried the rat-like creature. “My race is neutral, I’ve been commanded to find an ally if we battle.”
“Alright, but first tell thy who you are,” said the armored leader.
“My kind is called the Warfs,” said the Warf. “And my name is Shenk, the most skilled Warf warrior.”
“Well, thy race is called the humans, and my name is Sir Vivyn,” said Sir Vivyn. “Now take me to your leader.”
Then, Shenk dug up a hole. “Come down here,” said Shenk. “Our home is down here.”
So then Sir Vivyn and his soldiers went down the hole. But one soldier was stuck and said “Sir, I am stuck.”
But then, with lightning speed, Shenk climbed up the hole with his big claws, and dug up the soldier in 2 seconds.
“What a base!” cried Sir Vivyn.
“We have all this space but nothing to put inside. Most of the rooms are for sleeping. There are only 2 special rooms: the hatching room and the magic pool,” explained Shenk. “My leader is Durga. I’ll take you to him. He is the master of Magiks. He was born like that.”
Shenk took Sir Vivyn to Durga, and then they started talking about war. Then, the wise Durga had an idea. “Why don’t you build your brick base right over us so we can share supplies?”
“Then I shall have my men build a base,” said Sir Vivyn.
After the humans built their castle, they shared supplies with the Warfs. The humans even let Durga use their science materials, and he invented explosive potions. Then they both agreed to be allies.
Chapter 6: The Stupid Attack
“Hey, Thissa and Dossar!” cried a Siltheraki scout. “I found the brick castle!”
“Then we can attack at night. That will teach them to kill us!” said Dossar. “They will be sleeping, and we will strike!”
But little did he know that the humans had Warfs as allies, and Warfs were right next to the castle.
At nighttime, the Slitheraki approached the human castle. “Attack!” commanded Dossar. They attacked the brick castle, but the only thing it did was scratch the bricks and made a very loud noise that woke up the Warfs. The Warfs got ready to battle in seconds. “Throw the potions!” commanded Durga.
“Ahhhh!!!” cried the Slitheraki soldiers as they were getting scorched.
“Shouldn’t we retreat?” asked Thissa.
“No! We have done that too many times!” yelled Dossar. But then the explosions woke up the humans. “We are under attack! Get your armor on!” commanded Sir Vivyn. “We must also assist our allies!”
The humans ran out of the castle. “Attack thee!!!” commanded Sir Vivyn. The Slitheraki had already lost half of their army, so they had a big disadvantage. “Hey! That’s not fair! It’s two armies against one!” cried Thissa.
“Retreat!” shouted Dossar. But then, Shenk came out of the ground in front of Dossar. “Where do you think you’re going?” said Shenk.
“Get away from me!” shouted Dossar as they attacked each other. “I think I should help,” said Thissa.
“No! This is my battle!” yelled Dossar. It was a hard battle. Shenk was the first to draw blood. He hit Dossar’s arm, and then Dossar hit Shenk’s leg. They were both wounded.
They both couldn’t fight anymore, so they called it a draw. “Kill the black lizard! He wounded Shenk!” yelled Sir Vivyn.
“Retreat!” yelled Dossar. They barely managed to retreat.
Chapter 7: To be continued…
- Tosh 2014
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