Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

**linus** · 10-13-2009, 09:11 PM

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Originally posted by Gundam-Dude

(Linus) Dengeki Tube
Most of the file is underlayered and indexable. Didn't really like the Mine usage. 32nd bursts are gay as ****. Rejected

damn 32nd bursts are the only reason I step this. Didn't layer the normal part because there are many climax in the song already, and I'm tired of seeing dumpstream in hard sims. I'm even very lenient with the patterns in the fast part so that you guys won't say "linus stop with your ****ing gay patterns it's impossible >=(" and now you say "indexable" as a reason to reject this?
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**Dr Tran** · 10-13-2009, 09:12 PM

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index is a bannable offense

**kommisar[os]** · 10-13-2009, 09:21 PM

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linus' file was awesome what are you all on

**Gundam-Dude** · 10-13-2009, 09:23 PM

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Well the entire first part being indexable I find kinda strange, though it's not the reason why I rejected your file, don't get the wrong idea. The file as a whole didn't appeal to me and I personally thought that it could've been a bit better.

**GG_Guro** · 10-13-2009, 09:25 PM

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Originally posted by Gundam-Dude

(GG Guro) Liquid Requiem
Quads don't quite fit with what you're layering.

elaborate my nig

**pokelda** · 10-13-2009, 09:25 PM

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I would like to stress the fact that I am GG_Guro and whatever good files I submit were genuinely created 100 % by me. All the **** files were made by wc and i felt bad so i submitted it for him im dat cool

**dood gone krazee** · 10-13-2009, 09:32 PM

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Originally posted by pokelda

I would like to stress the fact that I am GG_Guro and whatever good files I submit were genuinely created 100 % by me. All the **** files were made by wc and i felt bad so i submitted it for him im dat cool

Whyyyyy did I find this so funny I'm dyin' right now

**GG_Guro** · 10-13-2009, 09:43 PM

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my person is flabbergasted right now my nig

**moches** · 10-14-2009, 12:06 AM

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Linus file- sorry dude I didn't really enjoy this (especially those mines aaah). has replay value though. leave it to Rebirth

Crimson whatever- you stepped Serenade <3 I wouldn't like to see freezes in piano since they drag on a bit. the 24th stream part was fun though but after that it was a bit offsync and I quit out. work on this although it's going to be hard to sync.

sing sing sing (with a swing)- cool song haha. I'm not sure all of those color notes should be there but it seems onsync mostly so I'll let it slide. jumpjacks are annoying tbh, find a better way to layer in everything (I think minijacks with layering to percussion would be awesome.) you're a lot better at stepping than I remember... work on this

**Bynary Fission** · 10-14-2009, 04:13 AM

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Originally posted by moches

sing sing sing (with a swing)- cool song haha. I'm not sure all of those color notes should be there but it seems onsync mostly so I'll let it slide.

The color notes are a result of two things: the band can't keep a damn beat, and some parts have heavy layering with multiple instruments stepped to simultaneously. If you aren't sure, slow it down. None of the color notes are used "artistically" - they all go to something.

Originally posted by moches

(I think minijacks with layering to percussion would be awesome.)

I don't think any parts in the drums warrant the use of minijacks. I could be mistaken, but can you please be more specific?

It's disappointing you didn't like the jumpjacks. It's a large part of the file and changing it would ruin the way the music is expressed, IMO.

**linus** · 10-14-2009, 07:33 AM

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Originally posted by Gundam-Dude

Well the entire first part being indexable I find kinda strange, though it's not the reason why I rejected your file, don't get the wrong idea. The file as a whole didn't appeal to me and I personally thought that it could've been a bit better.

Originally posted by moches

Linus file- sorry dude I didn't really enjoy this (especially those mines aaah). has replay value though. leave it to Rebirth

Ok.
The mines are added as a challenge so you are not supposed to "enjoy" it lol.

**moches** · 10-14-2009, 08:10 AM

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There are ways to make a file hard AND enjoyable

I get what you were trying to do with it though so fine although now you need to make a file like I'm so drunk. That file was fun as balls.

**kommisar[os]** · 10-14-2009, 08:56 AM

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crimson flood: beginning is aids and long freezes arent necessary. dumpstream files aren't fun sry. reject.

end time: pitch relevancy off in the start. a few 16ths missed during slower parts. dumpstream comes in. quit out

sing sing sing: being a jazz musician, you're getting a dumpload of brownie points from me already. fix the long jump jacks since they don't really fit with the difficulty of the file. after that, auto-accept.

mad of fire: step the full version and i'll accept this lmao

*****blu: freezes in the slow part seem kinda chaotic and random to me. rest of the file was really fun. accep.

**icontrolyourworld** · 10-14-2009, 09:27 AM

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Patashu you should submit your unknown sector file to this

**Bluearrowll** · 10-14-2009, 10:10 AM

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Originally posted by kommisar[os]

mad of fire: step the full version and i'll accept this lmao.

Rofl ok but I'm probably gonna change a few things to it while I get the new mp3.