Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

[kommisar]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

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[kommisar]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Yeah send Visitor to the pack email rather than just depending on Kommi to forward it to the rest of us (because he's gonna forget again).

And yeah, Kil knows about the pack. He agreed with Kommi to merge DCP2 with X5 which I found pretty surprising.

he was tired of seeing nothing being done with a dead pack and half a batch of files so

[Ghakimx]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

My english is weak - -"

Improve your Grammar Attack.


Edit: Location: Bangkok,Thailand
Explains everything.

[moches]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

slasher blue- ugh don't like these patterns very much. don't like long freezes either but that's just personal preference really. light accep

apocalypse- i dunno about this one. i mean it's pretty well made and all but this wasn't very memorable imo. also dumb parts with random quads leading to random jacks.

EDIT: after looking it over, I also think some more freezes would give this file a bit more life.

magical voices shower- i didn't think i was going to quit out of this but i did sorry. steps don't feel very expressive of the song; basically feels like vocal notes with some of the percussion layered in.

pad files- no

bad maniacs- xmod is nice. good scoring file. light accep (maybe replace Chaosmaid with this?)

sketch switch- tbh I found this kinda boring and it has mahoro de mambo syndrome (which is AAAA fodder followed by a crapload of handsmashing.) i'll leave this to the other judges

EDIT: after looking this over it was actually pretty good and I'll accept. sorry but I felt kind of crappy at the time. my notes on the handsmashing still apply to some degree though. but I digress

888- pretty accurate file but sort of annoying actually. 32nds in the beginning were patterned pretty badly and once I got to the triple jacks going to synth I just quit out because sorry it didn't feel too good

blood for justice- mines are tacky decorations in this file: they serve little to no purpose. rest was fine but meh it just seems like you took v1 and replaced some notes with mines. nothing much to note here.

jumper v2- what a difference a song cut makes. I enjoyed this now (there's a weird thing with Capsule's songs where I hate them the first time and then the second time is so much better) and I'll accept this. there's never really been a file like this and this pack needs something really unique.

love magic- and TWO new dimentio files in the same Xoon pack? looks like it just may happen this time. I was surprised at how much fun this was; awesome old-school style, innovative mine usage, etc. also that first part with the 16ths was absolutely fantastic. if you haven't figured it out by now accepted like fuc

princess mononokebutou- this started off sort of crappy with the jumps which I couldn't figure out at all but the 8th part after that was kind of cool (I noticed a semi-pitch relevant pattern in there somewhere, so kudos.) the rest of the file was just boring faux breakbeats crossed with jap music. although this wasn't too good I still see you're getting better at layering sounds to express the music so keep stepping.

tender kiss- why was I hitting greats by trying to MA this. also hi Sharpnel alias (not really but wow I seriously thought this sounded like Sharpnel and played like Sharpnel too)

volcano- this song reminds me of something LED would make. file's the better of the two this time around mostly because I can tell what all the jumps go to. song could have potential as a jack theory-ish type of file. needs fixes though; you're missing notes here and there, a few dumb random parts and misrhythms and a lot of the patterns were pulled out of thin air (meaning learn to PR or otherwise.)

don't say lazy- imo I'd keep the freezes limited to a few longer ones; the freeze syndrome makes this file feel sort of amateurish. not too bad otherwise but I doubt this is packworthy

that scar symmetry file- what I did play was damn offsync and why is this 12ths

[kommisar]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

new dimentio file?



gettin

[Ghakimx]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

i hope my file got through the male.

Edit: MAIL, NOT MALE, DAMIT.

[moches]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Improve your MA.

[Gundam-Dude]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

(alexdestructions vs Bynary Fission) 888
32nd patterns and jacks were god awful. Quit out. Rejected

(Diokatsu) Tender Kiss
Decent attempt for you but still not quite there yet. Rejected

(CBR) Don't Say Lazy - DJ Hirojack Mix - V2
Pretty generic due to song choice. Freezes are abused and overused. Not pack worthy. Rejected.

(Huzure) Heart of Witch
Kommisar already made a good file for this. Decent attempt at keyboard stepping though. Rejected

(Dimentio) Jumper V2
Good Vibrajack file (already accepted the previous version over there) but I honestly don't see myself accepting this here. There was really nothing too notable or replayable to me aside from the jacks and layering. I'd say send this update to Vibrajack. Rejected

(Moches) Programmed Sun
Yeah, I'm going to have to agree that Programmed World was definitely a lot better. Well composed and cool BPM gimmicks though so I'll say Maybe for now. I'll have to think about this.

(Ghakimx) Final Step
There's freeze abuse (a lot of unnecessary freezes that just clutter up the file). Some parts are better than Iamme's file while others weren't. Trill at Measure 70 was aids. File kinda surprised me though. You're a lot better at stepping than I was initially expecting so I see potential coming from you. Good for any other pack, but for this pack, you're gonna have to work on this more. Rejected.

[cedolad]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

sent in file.

[Ghakimx]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

:O
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Never have I been so happy from a review of a rejected file.

[cedolad]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Damn it Ghakimx. You got me excited. I thought I got a review for one of my files >:/

[Ghakimx]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

HAHAHAHAH. Suxor.

[jimerax]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Final Step is one of songs that definitely needs an awesome restep.

[Ghakimx]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

yeah, behanjc's version was balls, to be honest.

[Huzure]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

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