Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

[SKG_Scintill]

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Yay, I got good notes even though they got rejected xD

[kommisar]

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the path to a tru stepman is a long one



one day everything you step will be good



















maybe.

[alexdestructions]

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The Legend of Kommisar: The Stepman Adventures

[kommisar]

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see: how to make a midare file


look it up on google it's super informative.

[moches]

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xrosspost from Bluexoon

minus 3- really no life to the file. doesn't feel very expressive at all; almost like an FFR file. dumb mine usage.

heroic mayonnaise- yesh

chaosmaid- I guess you could cut back on the freezes on every single anime vocal but it's not a bad file otherwise. kind of reminds me of infinity haha. maybe

castle of the guy- I was wondering why this song sounded so familiar then I remembered Monty on the Run rofl. not too bad technically but wow what are those 32nds that part is straight 8th. all of the minijacks get a bit grating after a while. not terrible but seriously this song doesn't have too much potential.

hurry somebody up- I find this song itself has tons of potential but a lot of parts are done inaccurately. pretty good grasp of freeze usage there as I didn't find anything that was obnoxiously long so good job. I'd say go to Gundam or Kommisar for a list of technical errors. with fixes I'd accept this.

green forest- some parts of this are very nice (liked that pattern for the drums at the beginning) but other parts are either offsync (not all of those are straight 24th/32nds and sometimes you even got the note interval wrong) and those 32nds imo should be moved to 24ths even though I didn't check which one it actually was, it feels closer to 24ths (or just straight 16ths maybe). patternwise I'm seeing a little improvement from you and your layering methods are getting better (none of that Keelhauled syndrome here) so keep it up. you have potential.

dont say lazy- NOT STEPPING THE CHORUS IS LAZY. haha. serious review: technically not bad at all. 32nd rolls patterns at the beginning are a bit stupid to hit, vocal freezes can be cut out at some parts (just have them to longer notes because having to keep holds while hitting 16th stream is sort of weird-feeling) and put jumps to bass instead of melody at that part because those jacks don't flow too well. also triple jacks are kind of weird and break the flow of that part. geez I really don't like this song and I don't think this is packworthy but with a better song you might have a shot

[icontrolyourworld]

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hurry somebody up- I find this song itself has tons of potential but a lot of parts are done inaccurately. pretty good grasp of freeze usage there as I didn't find anything that was obnoxiously long so good job. I'd say go to Gundam or Kommisar for a list of technical errors. with fixes I'd accept this.

Gundam and/or Kommisar, can you help me with my technical errors please?

[ninzaburo]

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(Rin-Dude) Chaosmaid
Way better than Ninzaburo's dump. Reminds me a lot of Infinity, haha. Straightforward and fun. Accepted

Whoa, I was editing my Chaosmaid... duh.

Oh well, at least Chaosmaid it's in the pack now. Rind-Dude, Iku Acme salutes you: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VXu8vtu5TwQ

Anyway, I sent my last two files, Judge them.

*Crossing fingers*

[buizel8888]

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Oh yeah im stepping something for this. I need to finish the other half tomorrow

[Patashu]

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it's not called 'castle of the guy' it's called 'monty on the run'

****ers

[kommisar]

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hey i made an awesome pad file for monty on the run



if it sucks i'm banning you from submitting



ninzaburo wtfffffffff was that hahaha



ps im rin-dude

[Gundam-Dude]

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hahahahahahahahaha


that vid is gold

[jimerax]

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it seems judges prefer wap anime music to a solid classical song, I see

[Dr Tran]

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id prefet classical music over wap anime any day

[TC_Cyrenics]

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...Assuming they're stepped at the same quality, classical music reigns far supreme over wap/loli music any day. (PS Kommi should let Synexi review more often)

[Patashu]

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what classical might that be jx