Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

[i love you]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

I'm currently working on a file for this pack. Hopefully my file will quality for this pack. Let's see how bad my file will be! x)

[jimerax]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

well, I might finish one of WIPs for this too.

[revolutionomega]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Moar tonedeff plz xD

[kommisar[os]]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

this pack does need mr.bob though




i mean more mr.bob

[Ntc2415]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

this pack does need mr.bob though




i mean more mr.bob

ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

[dragoonhead]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

You failed really hard

[Rin-Dude]

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lmaooooo

[Gundam-Dude]

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jimerax submitting **** yes

[alexdestructions]

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ill do it...Where can i find that?...lol

..

No.

[Ntc2415]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

LAwls it was a joke people...scheez

[Mr. Bob]

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i mean more mr.bob

i haven't started a file since August or something rofl





btw can any of you guys post Icicles reviews for me

i've only seen two people say anything specific about it and i'm curious :O

[kommisar[os]]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

it's already accepted lmao



it was chill as fuc


















































































GET IT

[Patashu]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

you saw what I said about it way back when it was for dcp2 right bob

[Mr. Bob]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

you saw what I said about it way back when it was for dcp2 right bob

I remember seeing that it was accepted, but I never saw any reviews or thoughts on it

GET IT

INCREDIBLEE

[Patashu]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

okay I found it. if you've revised it since you sent it to dcp2 though this might be out of date

Re: (Mrbob) Icicles

Pos tby Patashu on Mon Jul 06, 2009 9:20 pm
good song choice, nice and jazzy. I wouldn't be surprised if this could make it in. lemme go into the editor and snoop around

measure by measure breakdown: (these are all tentatives suggestions obv)
m1/m2: single note for the first beat of these two measures? your call
m2: yellow note just before beat 2 could be a jump (bass + hiss)
m6: first beat single note, for same reason as m2
m10: first note should be a jump. also in this 'chorus' part you could think about making snare count as two notes like you have in the intro. anyway the chorus comes a lot so make sure changes are applied globally
m16: if you're going to make snare a jump, yellow note after beat 2 needs to be a jump. also the last two blue notes could be given a minifreeze (to the hiss)
m18: I heard some extra 16ths at the beginning of this measure. beat 4 needs to be a jump
m19: has extra 16ths in similar fashion to m18. following earlier layering scheme, the last 8th jump should be a single note but beat 4 should be a jump
m20: should start with a jump. (if you follow the minifreeze suggestion in m16 do the same here)
m28: that gap in the stream should be a minijack with the note after it and also a jump (piano). also minifreezes to hiss again?
m29: last blue jump is wrong, but the first beat of m30 could be a jump. also just so you know, there's a yellow note just after beat 3 in every measure here
m30: the piano/guitar thing in the end sounds like it should be 48th gallops or something <.< idk I can't make it out
m32: why is the snare not a jump this time?
m33: second yellow note could be a jump, yellow note after beat 3 but NOT offbeat between beats 3 and 4 this time (it's just not there!)
m35: the 32nd triplet actually goes from the yellow note to the blue note, not the blue to the yellow after it
m36: if it's convenient, the two snare drums on beats 2 and 2.5 are each followed by a yellow bass hit. could do like 13 4 13 4. beat 4 should be a minijack with the yellow note after it
m37: imho take out one note of the blue and put in a yellow jump just before it (crash + drum)
m39: beat 3.5 should be followed by a 16th, on D say
m45: should start with a single note also imho yellow jump to the pianos when it comes up?
m46: should start with a jump.
m47: should start with a single note. the piano/guitar is playing 12ths here not 16ths
m48: start with a jump
m49: start with a single note. also, what's up with the layering in the second half of this measure?
m60: beat 3.5 should be a jump