Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

[Patashu]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

how do you tone down the 32nds without making that part seem understepped lol

step it as 24ths

[Dr Tran]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

but..................................................................................................thats not right

[kommisar[os]]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

ur not right

[Dr Tran]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Righter than u

[N.T.M.]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

wet sheets, guilty eyes- cool song. I don't much like the patterns but it has replay value, won't deny that. maybe.

Really? I couldn't make them too technical because then there'd be a lotta jacks and extremely weird patterns. I tried to find a balance. Or maybe it's just the song. When there are lots of bursts you've gotta be kinda creative.

[moches]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

I dunno I just didn't find them very interesting (there's a limit to what you can do with kkrusty.) it's still pretty fun though. I accept

one review for a DJ Krazee coming up...

goblin- very enjoyable. a few minifreezes that are pretty hard to make out but I trust you know what you're doing. accep

[moches]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

oh yeah I just sent my first file in a while

[Gundam-Dude]

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(who_cares973) Cette Anne
Pretty chill MA file. Accepted.

(Tsuka) Fire to the Eurobeat
Enjoyed the complex layering. Typical Tsuka file. Accepted.

(Moches) Flash Back 90's
Loved the xmod gimmicks and mines. Pretty fun file. Accepted.

(Scylaax) Samurai Beat (Blast)
Good song but file was pretty generic. Hands seem a bit overlayered. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

(Scylaax) Sorairo Days
rofl can't believe you stepped this. Solo was pretty alright though wasn't the best choice to step almost the full song. Should've cut it to the second half rather than stepping the beginning if you only wanted to do the solo. Because you didn't cut it, the file drags on and I lost interest quickly. Rejected.

(Scylaax) Untouchable Pariah
Didn't like your 24th+32nd bursts. File is pretty generic overall and lacks replay value IMO. Maybe/Pending until I hear from other judges.

[moches]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

samurai beat- although I like this song, I don't know if it would make a great file. past that, your layering gets a bit excessive at times (not every one of the background guitar minifreezes has to be layered as a note in itself ya know) and I didn't like the way you layered in the pan flute or whatever that was in that one part with the longer freezes. song choice reject

sora iro- like this file the best out of all three you sent. awesome song; stepped quite cleanly (love those hands you put which nail the song's pauses perfectly) and great solo. it's a bit overlong, but that actually works in your favor here as it climaxes well. you missed a few notes here and there but I'll look over that on my own and add those in later. also the beginning of the first verse is inconsistent.. accept with a few minor fixes

untouchable mariah carey- quit out. ugh. if I need to play any more BASS BASS BASS songs I think I'm going to start hating t+pazolite a lot reject

[Rin-Dude]

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pack revival (woah a week inactivity hehu)


100 sec kitchen battle: good file, but moches' still has ya beat. doesn't deliver much else. rejec


this year: well structured, fun parts, but feels a little naked with the lack of freezes. some parts get a little repetitive and tedious but some nice flow makes up for that later on. light accep


flashback 90's: xmodded. wow this is hard haha. probably cuz orbular doesnt do well with mines. oh well. accep


bakemonogatari: tbh i liked this. easy file but well composed and good flow. accep


road to you: gonna have to say no to this. not very fun nor does it have much flow. some parts are underlayered some overlayered. song choice =/


samurai blast: mostly 8th runs with intermittent 16ths. nothing that caught my eye. rejec


scream aim fire: ugh quit out of the first few measures. one handed trills with 32nds, then 16th trills with mini jacks in the middle. noooooooooo.


sorairo: wow this song again lmao. i like this version though. read review for cette annee since i feel the same about both. also if you could cut one of the choruses out to make it shorter and less repetitive it would probably be better.


untouchable perish: this is like one of tpz's worst songs. after tsugihagi i have high expectactions for a t+pazolite file from you haha. this just doesn't cut it. boring file =/ rejec

[Patashu]

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[Rin-Dude]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

seen em before, dont feel like changing em

[Patashu]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

ya lazy

you literally have to replace one image

[Rin-Dude]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

lemme be french a bit longer

[t-rogdor]

Re: Xoon 5: The Transition Submissions Open

Them mines be ugly.

Avoiding the regular ones in Orbular is easy what are you talking about