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  • Rebirth0
    FFR Originalbro
    FFR Simfile Author
    • Jun 2003
    • 8751

    #106
    Re: Red Fraction Pack

    Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple

    the minijacks don't fit at all. if they are correctly synced, then there should be more of them throughout the whole file, since whatever it's synced to is constant in the background for a lot of the song. 16th patterns could have been a little better in general. the 32nd patterns were annoying to hit and the trills could ruin an otherwise good score; 32nds like this should either be rolls or an easy-to-hit repeating pattern. don't use 16th freezes - i couldn't even tell if they were going to anything.

    overall the big problems were inconsistent syncing and the 32nds. this song really isn't great either.

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    • leadafro
      Tykeem Ultimatum
      • Dec 2004
      • 975

      #107
      Re: Red Fraction Pack

      Originally posted by Rebirth0
      Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple
      He missed a major part of the song that was off.The 24ths he used at one part are not on sync.They are not 24ths at all.They are single 64th notes along with some single 32nd notes and 16th singles.

      hmmm anyone play tribe attacker here?
      Last edited by leadafro; 10-26-2007, 08:54 AM.
      I'm black yall I'm black yall I'm blickity black black and I'm back.

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      • SoulSk8er69
        FFR Player
        • Oct 2004
        • 129

        #108
        Re: Red Fraction Pack

        Originally posted by kommisar[os]
        please don't...
        What's wrong with pretty green onions?

        AKA OMEGAspike (omegaspike)

        Total number of sims as of 10/26/07: 75

        Spread dfjk , C650 Solo

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        • ShadowDragon!
          FFR Player
          • Feb 2007
          • 152

          #109
          Re: Red Fraction Pack

          Originally posted by Rebirth0
          Nobody has played Bagpipe yet, but here is what one of our judges said for Alien Temple
          I thought the song was cool and who ever judge it, thanks. I'll fix those problems and put it in the FFR database. Like you said, the song isn't that good anyway. It doesn't derserve to be in a pack like this, my steps aren't that good anyway lol.
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          • Professor Raine
            FFR Player
            • May 2007
            • 1560

            #110
            Re: Red Fraction Pack

            I sent in Blue owl & Mt. Red - a Symbol of Thrill a while ago. Now I gotta cross my fingers.


            My simfilez ----
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            • Rebirth0
              FFR Originalbro
              FFR Simfile Author
              • Jun 2003
              • 8751

              #111
              Re: Red Fraction Pack

              Tribe Attacker:

              In measures 5 - 12 the little 16th streams should start with jumps

              I'm questioning the layering, at least on the 12ths. They all feel like single note jacks and jumps instead of jumps and triples

              It has some 16th triplets that are all jumps, and the last two are kinda like jacks (example: end of measure 16). The first two jumps in those should be removed

              double jack gallop things (measure 20 and some other places) don't feel right. That yellow note doesn't need to be a jump, or even a jack maybe



              Some other things too maybe but I'm too tired to think about any more errors. This sim could actually be pretty good and maybe accepted if these things are changed

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              • Alioth
                Banned
                • Jul 2007
                • 526

                #112
                Re: Red Fraction Pack

                Legacy did his half of LunaMarionette Full Version and I am gonna do my half. If I am correct, you (Rebirth) stepped this already, right?

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                • Rebirth0
                  FFR Originalbro
                  FFR Simfile Author
                  • Jun 2003
                  • 8751

                  #113
                  Re: Red Fraction Pack

                  If he did 2:30 of the song in like one day theres no way its gonna turn out to be a good sim

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                  • revolutionomega
                    FFR Veteran
                    • Mar 2006
                    • 2240

                    #114
                    Re: Red Fraction Pack

                    Unless it was about 18-24 hours of that day. And then he'd have no life. LoL
                    "AW MAN, WE SUCK AGAIN!"
                    - Rob Schneider, The Waterboy (1998)

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                    • Alioth
                      Banned
                      • Jul 2007
                      • 526

                      #115
                      Re: Red Fraction Pack

                      My ideas that will make this improve:

                      Replace Legacy with Iamme, Yessss (OMG PLEASE DO IT AS ****), Patashu, or aperson.
                      Make Kn33groW a judge.

                      That's it. I'll be making songs shortly for the pack, but having them heavily critiqued first before I submit since I kinda need it.
                      Last edited by Alioth; 10-29-2007, 10:19 AM.

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                      • Necros140606
                        FFR Player
                        • Jun 2006
                        • 1088

                        #116
                        Re: Red Fraction Pack

                        Originally posted by revolutionomega
                        Unless it was about 18-24 hours of that day. And then he'd have no life. LoL
                        hahaha

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                        • Necros140606
                          FFR Player
                          • Jun 2006
                          • 1088

                          #117
                          Re: Red Fraction Pack

                          sure aperson will join i can alredy see him hanging out with us guys and sendin 7 sims to our pack.

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                          • Alioth
                            Banned
                            • Jul 2007
                            • 526

                            #118
                            Re: Red Fraction Pack

                            lmao idk, but Yesss needs to do it since his files are the best IMO.
                            Last edited by Alioth; 10-29-2007, 09:06 AM.

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                            • kommisar[os]
                              Banned
                              • Apr 2006
                              • 4097

                              #119
                              Re: Red Fraction Pack

                              uhh

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                              • leadafro
                                Tykeem Ultimatum
                                • Dec 2004
                                • 975

                                #120
                                Re: Red Fraction Pack

                                uhhh...Resubmitted tribe attacker.
                                Last edited by leadafro; 10-29-2007, 09:53 AM.
                                I'm black yall I'm black yall I'm blickity black black and I'm back.

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