Smile Forever: A request to step.

[flipsta_lombax]

A friend and I came up with the idea to mix most of Smiley's songs. We thought it was quite an idea; we were curious enough to know how hardcore happy the song can get. It is okay; transitions needed work and I am not sure if there is much of a BPM change (though I doubt it).

Anywho, I would like to ask a favor from my fellow FFRers and see if they can step this one. If you even feel like editing the song file, be my guest.

Just please give credit to the editor of the file (who is flipsta_lombax and jmoneyh). =) Thanks.

Oh, this is the direct link to the song:

http://h1.ripway.com/Flipsta/SmileForever.mp3

[Ramengan]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

There would probably be small bpm changes, depending on which song is dominant. Most of smiley's songs are very similar in bpm. Speaking of dominance, it seems like the songs are fighting against each other, especially towards the end. It ruined the song for me. It was a nice idea, though.

[jmoneyh]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

omg i made this !!!!! u stealer. lol lol. But yea i made this song, by jmoneyh, but i had to do it with a crappy mixer that didnt even have automatic speed adjustments so i basically had to do it by hearing it. and it wasnt my idea to make it, it was flipstas but he told me to do it for him so i just went onto the ffr site and downloaded 6 random smilie songs and mixed it

[Triplex72]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

That sounds...Terrible. it isn't much of a remix, it's pretty much just all playing at once.

[jmoneyh]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

okay first of all, haters, this was one of my early works, and im no pro at this, and i had to do it with a crappy remixer called the wave pad. yea we can all spend $100 plus into buying something real good, but who do u think i am, im not made of money!!!. post something when u can create a song better than this with the wave pad!!!!!!!

[wickedawesomeful]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Wow, chill. Take it as constructive criticism.

[Xception704]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Lol ... It sounds pretty good ... but some parts have too many layers ... you might want to remove some layers from those areas.

Heh ... the "Classical Insanity" of Smiley if you would touch it up some more.

[MCRenaissance]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Wow, chill. Take it as constructive criticism.

Eh, how can he/she take it as constructive criticism when all he said was that it was terrible?

[wickedawesomeful]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Eh, how can he/she take it as constructive criticism when all he said was that it was terrible?

If you want to survive as an artist, you have to learn to take everything as constructive criticism.

[Dj_Ossa]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Very true. I'll listen to the song and tell you what I think.


EDIT: It has a LOT of errors and was annoying to listen to. Sorry dude, good idea but you have a LONG WAY TO GO. Keep working on getting better I guess, until you make something you can actually call a "remix" out of something.

PS I'm not flaming.
PPS If you think I am, too bad your loss.
PPS This is constructive criticism.

EDIT2: HOLY **** dude I just realized you made this in MONO, what were you thinking? Whenever you make a mix or a song in a computer, or you're just recording stuff, please... PLEASE make sure you record in STEREO. MONO is just annoying for several channels.

[flipsta_lombax]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

okay first of all, haters, this was one of my early works, and im no pro at this, and i had to do it with a crappy remixer called the wave pad. yea we can all spend $100 plus into buying something real good, but who do u think i am, im not made of money!!!. post something when u can create a song better than this with the wave pad!!!!!!!

Oo
You just need to chillax there young grasshopper...

I did not see any hate towards the song; people had opinions to say it needed improvements. You and I know it was not at all perfect.

*sighs* Next time, let's use Fruity Loops. All we need to do is haxxor on Torrentz.com and get one for free, kk?

[MCRenaissance]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

I just took the time to listen to the song, but I couldn't get through more than half of it. Sorry, but man, that was honestly horrible.

I wish I could say something positive, but there really isn't anything redeeming about it. All you did was play a couple of songs together at the same time, I doubt you put any effort into this thing.

Edit: Someone got in a post while I was typing.

I doubt a better program would help when it just seems that you're not putting any creative effort into this at all.

[flipsta_lombax]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

Geez, thanks for the words of encouragement.

=\

[jmoneyh]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

omg flipsta calling me a grasshopper, if im a grass hopper then ur liek a micro organism, cuz u cant mix if ur life depended on it!!! And yea, constructive cristism isnt " its terrible" ok. thats just flaming. and in my opinion, yea it was kinda jumbled up, but its hard to take away layers when ur just copying and pasting things. i cant take certain aspects from the song cuz wav pad isnt a music creation program, its just copying and pasting. so because of that, i think i achieved a incredible feat. i did this from pure listening and counting.

[Ramengan]

Re: Smile Forever: A request to step.

No, that's not flaming. A flame is a personal attack. People have said the song is horrible (they've said nothing about YOU), and they've given reasons why. People aren't interested in how you made it, only in the end result. And it didn't turn out well. That's all.