Air (step by Djsmall and linus)
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There is a LOT wrong with this.
For one, the GAP is off. For two, none of the patterns made any sense at all. For three, you had unnecessary triples in BOTH sets of steps. There's a lot more I could say about this... like the piano part, with the 32nds and 24ths... that didn't make any sense at all.
This was pretty bad. I'd give it like a 3/10.
Good thing I'm making my own steps to this, because the song is amazing. -
The steps make sense if you play with 4 fingers XD Perfect sense...the 16ths flow perfectly.
But there are still flaws. Gap doesn't count, it was sync'd perfectly for me. 32 perfs and I didn't fix the gap.
The 24ths at the start are ok (note if you are playing with 4 fingers). The piano part with 32nds and 24ths was weird and kinda double, and the quick triple doubles were dumb. The rest was alright, except the ending. That didn't need to be there at all.
The heavy was too sloppy.
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Heavy was bad, challenge was good. So I'm gonna have to give it a 5/10I left the forums, but if you want to talk to me, hit me up on AIM
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What's the gap for? Just to make sure the main beat is right on the 4th. djsmall did a really good job on the gap.Originally posted by MoogyFor one, the GAP is off.
Its flow is perfect. I just used mirror, left and right every 4 bar.Originally posted by MoogyFor two, none of the patterns made any sense at all.
Man, you don't want the song have the same pattern throughout every 16 bars right? It'll be just.....boring.
How many triple are there? Three.Originally posted by MoogyFor three, you had unnecessary triples in BOTH sets of steps.
Listen it carefully on 0.5x music.Originally posted by MoogyThere's a lot more I could say about this... like the piano part, with the 32nds and 24ths... that didn't make any sense at all.
I'm waiting for yours.......Lemme see how good it is.....gone.Comment




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