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Originally posted by Funnygurl555Originally posted by DaBackpack
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
Congratulations. You're getting the OP for Carnival Phantasm. It's gonna be the new Ageha
Originally posted by Funnygurl555Originally posted by DaBackpackComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
Have a preview of what to expect of file numero 2 :U
Tryng to do x-mod stuff on a dump file while incorporating color theory is tricky yo x.x
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
sent another one
Originally posted by bluguerillaComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
Gone Fishin' (Scintill) - all of my yesComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
Exile of the Floating World (Klaius) - This is a great follow-up to and the vulture beholds. Both of the files have this unique blend of standard technical metal charting and well-employed creative liberties, and your song choice supports this rather than fighting it. I have a couple of specific comments as well as a major general one.
80s- This stuff is kind of hard to spot sometimes. Basically you're opening a short 2/3 anchored double runningman pattern with a 1[12] 12th jack. This is the kind of thing that would be at home in a pa/AAA goal type file. My main issue here is that while some of the other stuff in the file leans more towards that this is an extreme outlier that feels out of place and is likely going to badly trip up players going for AA runs.
84.3s- See above.
88.6s- I know only 16ths are being played but I'm pretty sure you could get away with at least a 24th burst to the prominent guitar here to separate it out from the drums being played.
89.6s- See above.
115.87s- This part feels a little light for how heavy the snares are. If I have the stepping scheme right you have the 16th jumptrills going to the guitar and then the snares following out at single note 16ths. Stepping the snares as jumptrills would detract from the guitar which is why I'm guessing you didn't do it. I propose turning the 16th at this timestamp to a [34]. Then shift the following 8th/16th notes one column to the left so you have a 4 set [12][34] that leads into a short runningman. This would probably be unimaginably gay if it weren't just 16ths. It also might end up being unimaginably gay even at 16ths but you should try it anyway.
The last third or so feels a little empty to me so the following suggestions are mostly places where I feel like things can be justifiably beefed up without getting too extreme. Any places you had reservations about making a little harder in any way should be reconsidered/revisited.
147.8s- There are 48ths (or close enough to it) here. I don't think you should put down 48ths. 24ths would lead into the 12th jumps just fine I expect.
153.8s- See above. You could probably get away with rolly 48ths here (not that I would advise it) but that would just be weird if you use 24ths earlier for the same sound. At the same time I also can understand why you chose to ignore this sound, if you've already tried putting stuff down to it and it just doesn't work let me know.
155.27s- So as someone who can play this on 1.0 without any effort I'd like to see 16ths here. As someone gunning for a 1.3 aa maybe I would hate that, I'm not sure. I'll put em down and get back to you on it.
159.74s- [34] jump here.
165.67s- Probably the biggest missed opportunity here. You are super justfied in a 3 note 16th jack or xxxyx pattern here and the fact that you're coming off of vanilla 8th chords for a measure or two makes it very manageable. I would just make sure the freezes in the area don't make it too hard to transition into/out of.
176.87s- Like 90% sure the guitar here starts playing 16ths. If you leave the 12ths I would put single notes on 8ths.
only other comment is that the sync gets a little muddy in some areas (~17s, ~50s, ~183s). Sometimes it's better to ignore sync in the interest of keeping the bpm static. It's usually easier for the player to hit to a rhythm, particularly an established one, rather than hitting exactly to the sounds. Personally I'm more partial to pure sync and I'd like to see the section at 183s dick synced at least. The sections at 17s and 50s are half and half but whichever you decide the same thing should be done in both places. If you want I can do the sync myself.Last edited by MinaciousGrace; 04-13-2017, 04:45 PM.Comment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
Ants (Carmelo) - stepmanias music. offset is wrong. understepped. overstepped. 64th rolls at 140 bpm are not "ma crap". 20 second intermission of kms 8ths. 20 second outro of kms 8ths. Most of the parts that aren't understepped and aren't overstepped would need to be repatterned in order for me to consider this chart for this pack. Basically you'd have to restart from scratch just to get into the pool and even then the music choice alone would put it at a severe disadvantage. Tbh I think the song is pretty dope and there are definitely non-stepmanias silly dumpy memey shit, which, you curiously left empty, but it's still like 90% stepmanias musics. I could see a file for this getting accepted, but it's not this one.
That's not to say the chart in its current incarnation is irredeemable. Cut the dumb as shit outro. Redo the dumb as shit 64ths (maybe 17s, definitely 53s, definitely 92s), redo the dumb as shit 48ths- 109s is the worst offender in this category. Make the intermission less boring and actually put notes to the vocals. Fix the offset. Then find someone to play the file and tell you what might need to be changed further. It won't be a masterpiece, but it'll be playable and probably pretty fun. Don't mistake those pointers for an invitation to make a few fixes and resubmit. You need way more experience as both a technical charter and a dump artist first. You can resubmit this if you think you can send it to me under a different name and convince me it's from a different person.Last edited by MinaciousGrace; 04-15-2017, 09:31 AM.Comment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
speaking of being an incorrigible asshole I'm awaiting fixes for eurydice/blow me one last kiss/city of revelry/good day/tassa elama on/golden sky/others for review of full acceptance status. There's no rush but in most cases edit suggestions haven't been acknowledged and I don't know whether or not edits are completed/planned.
For those of you who want I can just made edits directly and then send you back a proposed revision of the chart. Which tbh is probably easier for all of us.
Also future swag is back cause it was a single release.Comment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
reviews are brutal wowI think Japanese should be taught because if animes have taught me anything it is that Japanese is superior. *strokes neckbeard and contemplates next cheeto*Comment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
tell me if I should finish this geared towards this pack or if I should scrap it and do an sm5 chart for it
also send me golden sky again I accidentally nuked itComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
my patience wanes every time I reject a file for the exact same reasons the last files were rejected
do something for your pack or just regularmanias, it's not something I'd be particularly interested in getting a sub for
I'll pm it to you shortly with a refresher on the parts I think need attention
Funk With Me (Xeostyle) - Consider this a reject and resubmit. The second half of this chart shows some promise and is quite fun, but the first half needs significant work. You need to be able to identify places where you can make things more interesting on your own. Representing vocals with generic freezes usually won't fly here. This is something that you'll have to figure out and I can't and won't coddle you through the process, but I can give you a few starting points to look at.
7.415s- generic freeze
10.115-17.015s- you could do the buildup here completely differently
17.015s- generic freeze
17.615-19.415s- follow up the earlier buildup by doing something a little harder
29.615-37.415s- assign the trumpet some sort of note identity and layer it in with the percussion
55.415s- highlight the vocal burst here
generally speaking the buildup should feel like a buildup
if you want a prime example of what that's like look at midare's reflections chart in midare 3
basically spend more time molding the chart to the feel of the music rather than falling back onto vanilla technical layeringComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
review brutaleComment
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Re: THREAD MOTHAFUCKAS MINTY 2 BITCHES NEW PACK YEAH
u got it bub, and t.hanksComment
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