"Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

[Guest15937]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Song: Those Who Fight Further
Artist: The Black Mages
Difficulty: 55-ish?
Style: 4key
Length: 4:23-ish
Link: https://mega.co.nz/#!qVVHBIaY!Kq78xQ...r4-4lyXsGOYPL4

Notes: I'm planning to submit this to the batch, so any comments would be greatly appreciated

[Choofers]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

dling both files, will post again later with reviews

[rCaliberGX]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

nope

[shenjoku]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Moving this post here since I put it in the wrong thread the first time. >.>

Song: Gourmet na Aitsu
Artist: YMCK
Difficulty: Not sure what the standard scale is so I just went off of the ODI3 pack scale. Put it as a 16 since the 48th run is pretty insane, but if anyone has a better number I'm all ears.
Style: 4key
Length: 3:40
Link: YMCK - Gourmet na Aitsu
Notes: I know some parts are a little messy but it's pretty much complete (for this difficulty anyways). The banner and background are just temp as well. I'm no artist :P Mostly just looking for tips since I haven't done this in years and I was never really super good at it to begin with I think.

EDIT: Updated the file so it now has three difficulties just for the hell of it and fixed some random things. Still doesn't feel right though...

[sticklydude]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Moving this post here since I put it in the wrong thread the first time. >.>

Song: Gourmet na Aitsu
Artist: YMCK
Difficulty: Not sure what the standard scale is so I just went off of the ODI3 pack scale. Put it as a 16 since the 48th run is pretty insane, but if anyone has a better number I'm all ears.
Style: 4key
Length: 3:40
Link: YMCK - Gourmet na Aitsu
Notes: I know some parts are a little messy but it's pretty much complete (for this difficulty anyways). The banner and background are just temp as well. I'm no artist :P Mostly just looking for tips since I haven't done this in years and I was never really super good at it to begin with I think.

EDIT: Updated the file so it now has three difficulties just for the hell of it and fixed some random things. Still doesn't feel right though...

Offset is supposed to be 0.838 instead of 0.800.

just gave it a quick playthrough, im not a fan of hold usage. makes for some awkward patterns and seems extremely excessive almost all the time, but i did like the long holds that played along with the chorus holds.
The 13 should be the main chart. 48ths create ridiculous difficulty spike.

I'm sure someone else can give you more detailed notes. Has potential.

[shenjoku]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Offset is supposed to be 0.838 instead of 0.800.

just gave it a quick playthrough, im not a fan of hold usage. makes for some awkward patterns and seems extremely excessive almost all the time, but i did like the long holds that played along with the chorus holds.
The 13 should be the main chart. 48ths create ridiculous difficulty spike.

I'm sure someone else can give you more detailed notes. Has potential.

Yeah this one didn't turn out very well...Think I might just toss it XD Thanks for taking a look though.

[johnnyboy898]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Title: Daiki Kasho, Alan Brey - Princia Ramode's theme (from f-zero gx/ax)
Style: 4key
Length: 1:36
BPM: 120
Difficulty: hard 9footer
Additional info: i'd say it's complete (looking for crit though), and probably suited for spread players
dl: http://www.mediafire.com/download/jv...cia_ramode.rar

tried my hand at layering of some sort, in contrast to my other simfiles from years ago which were just notes after notes. also i have no idea how to add cdtitles, banners or backgrounds to it

[rCaliberGX]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

do people even look at this thread anymore lol

may as well pm random people to get them to playtest

[ilikexd]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Title: Daiki Kasho, Alan Brey - Princia Ramode's theme (from f-zero gx/ax)
Style: 4key
Length: 1:36
BPM: 120
Difficulty: hard 9footer
Additional info: i'd say it's complete (looking for crit though), and probably suited for spread players
dl: http://www.mediafire.com/download/jv...cia_ramode.rar

tried my hand at layering of some sort, in contrast to my other simfiles from years ago which were just notes after notes. also i have no idea how to add cdtitles, banners or backgrounds to it

m1 the 48th trill is significantly harder than anything else in the file, consider making it a roll or something. it is really short though so w/e.
m8-m16 i wouldn't use holds for both the lead and bg guitar at the same time
m11 don't understand why these are jumps, see in m15 the same sound is just single notes
m25 vocal 12ths aren't correct. it's just 1 note
m28 16th vocal should be a 12th
m29 the 12th triplet should be a 16th triplet at the 2nd half of the beat
m32 not really a good reason for it to be a quad, especially a quadhold

i would consider stepping the snare as jumps in a lot of places like m16-29 for example

otherwise it's pretty good in general. i'm not a fan of spamming miniholds but that's subjective.

[johnnyboy898]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

m1 the 48th trill is significantly harder than anything else in the file, consider making it a roll or something. it is really short though so w/e.
m8-m16 i wouldn't use holds for both the lead and bg guitar at the same time
m11 don't understand why these are jumps, see in m15 the same sound is just single notes
m25 vocal 12ths aren't correct. it's just 1 note
m28 16th vocal should be a 12th
m29 the 12th triplet should be a 16th triplet at the 2nd half of the beat
m32 not really a good reason for it to be a quad, especially a quadhold

i would consider stepping the snare as jumps in a lot of places like m16-29 for example

otherwise it's pretty good in general. i'm not a fan of spamming miniholds but that's subjective.

thanks for the input! i went over the file again and made some changes. here's the revised version: http://www.mediafire.com/?n2xkeyaerko2nxa

[powerfox112]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Song/Artist: Stress - Justice
Style: 4key
Length: 2:50
Difficulty: 9 feet
Notes: My first finished file, hope it's not too bad
hxxp://www.mediafire.com/?5o8p3p8ufcu5e2t
hxxp cause it wont let me post urls for some reason

[TC_Halogen]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

You can't post a link until you have at least five posts, if I recall correctly. It was put in place to prevent spam bots from running rampant on the forums immediately after registration.

[rCaliberGX]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Song: Brainfog
Artist: Static-X
Difficulty: 12, 10~ NPS
Style: 4k
Notes: Just want to get some feedback on this. Still a WIP and I plan on making 2 charts for it. Nothing too difficult, 24ths bursts and 16th jumpstream at 150 BPM.

Link: http://www.mediafire.com/download/97...erGX%29_v1.rar

[axith]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Song: Brainfog
Artist: Static-X
Difficulty: 12, 10~ NPS
Style: 4k
Notes: Just want to get some feedback on this. Still a WIP and I plan on making 2 charts for it. Nothing too difficult, 24ths bursts and 16th jumpstream at 150 BPM.

Stuff from a bored guy without credentials:
A majority of the file made sense to me. For the most part you follow percussive stuff (standard procedure). But there's a couple things that confused me. The start to 26.848 felt heavy on the doubles to me. You switch what you have jumps on a couple times, then add triples to accent different things. It seemed inconsistent to me. I got confused on the last jumpstream because I wan't sure what the doubles went to. After opening it up in ddream and slowing the music down I figured it out that you were following a synth thing. Point being I couldn't tell why I was supposed to hit a jump at 121.713 and 124.899. A majority of the file, you have doubles on the clap (for lack of a better word) sounds. The clap things are going on in the last jumpstream where you're following a synth thing and your arn't doing anything about the claps that you obviously liked earlier in the file. The last thing that bothered me was the ending where you have the 4 3 [12] triplets. Add a beat at the tail end of the file and finish out the bass thud things. The arrows just end so abrubtly while the roll that you've been stepping keeps going when the arrows stop. I don't think there should be a double at 139.134 and you should have a jump near 139.260.

I want to say one thing about the mines. I don't really think they add much to the file. You can definitely justify the quad of mines separating parts of the file, but there's nothing going on at that moment. I didn't like the string of mines at the beginning on the right either. The first one in that string should suffice given the situation. I'm tired now, and when I looked at it a second time I had paused ddream when the autoplay was on a right arrow hold. So I got a string of mine sounds that cracked me up. I'm tired. Ok?

I don't hate the file (or the song choice). I think you stepped the middle hold section well. And the heavy guitar sections seemed clear to me. Have fun making this WIP to a completed file!

[Zephei]

Re: "Play/Test/Judge my simfile" thread V2

Song: Virt - Micro Media Broth
Style: 4-key
Length: 3:03
Difficulty: 70? (1-99)
Notes: Use cmod. I think I'm going to send this in to the batch, but I want to hear some final opinions before I do so. Critique as harshly as you like!

DL:
Micro Media Broth (Zephei)