help me write a rap....nevermind...I'm DONE. Grab the mp3!

[SuperGreenX]

Ok. I'm going to enter in the FFR rap competition thing with a remix of B4U from DDR (I'm making the remix). I'm doing the rapping. But, I want to change the lyrics to be about FFR. I need help doing that. If anyone could help come up with the lyrics, that would be great. You could post em here, PM them to me, AIM them, whatever.

Please don't be offended if I don't choose to use what you've made. I'm not garunteeing that I'll be using something I get from here (assuming it's offered . I might just bite the bullet and do it myself, or I might just use the original lyrics and replace DDR with FFR.

Here are the original lyrics. I need something similar in style and umm..like amount of sylables. I just need the two verses.

Let's get it on don't stop us now
When we step on the scene
We came to get down
Check the moves you know they can't be dissed
Ain't 2 many that can flow like this
We humming, coming at ya!
And the rhythm gonna get ya!
Need I, should I say no more
Tell me what the deal?
Yo check my flow!!!

*Jump Jump Jump D.D.R.
Yo everybody feel the beat with D.D.R.
Jam Jam Jam D.D.R.
Everybody dance let's get down

Could it be that you wanna be more like me
No shame, I bring my pain for the year 2 G's
Now we gonna turn this party out
Put your hands in the air move 'em all around
Can you feel the beat down in your soul
Don't fight the feeling just let it go
4, 3, 2, 1 let's count it down
Wanna see you move we you hear that sound

Thanks a lot for any help! Any ideas are welcome.

Oh, btw, the remix is running signifigantly slower than the original. This one is about 110bpm, and the origina was around 170 bpm I believe.



EDIT: NEVERMIND. I just finished the song. Check out www.mp3.com/supergreenx

[jewpinthethird]

I made a rap already....you aint going to win....NOT AGAINST ME PINEAPPLE-GREG.

[SuperGreenX]

Ah yes, but I bet that song you're supposed to use isn't as kewl as my mix! (I haven't heard it though).

[Arch0wl]

Uh....

If you did that, you'd have to change DDR to FFR

And add a whole different bassline

[SuperGreenX]

......yea, those are the original lyrics for B4U. I just put them up there as a sort of template so people can write lyrics with similar rhythm and stuff. No seems too interested though.

Why do I need a new bassline?

[Arch0wl]

Because it would sound like absolute shit otherwise

[SuperGreenX]

Yeah, I'm remixing it, not midi-ripping it. Don't worry about the music. It will be good. Its partly done already. I just need the rap. But I don't think anyone wants to work on the lyrics with me, and I don't think I can come up with anything creative about FFR to say. I'll probably just keep the original lyrics but use FFR.

[SpookG]

no offense supergreen.. but the idea of the rap contest was to write original lyrics. By ripping another person's song and lyrics but just changing the wors ddr to ffr is not really in the spirit of originality that was intended with the contest.

[ArK]

mine won already.


actually, prolly not. at least i hope not, no effort went into it whatsoever, and i was stoned when i did mine and my extremly deep voiced freind was half drunk.

[SuperGreenX]

no offense supergreen.. but the idea of the rap contest was to write original lyrics. By ripping another person's song and lyrics but just changing the wors ddr to ffr is not really in the spirit of originality that was intended with the contest.

Right I know. Synth already has heard my first version of it and he loved it. So If I don't re-write the lyrics, I don't think it will be in the contest, but it will be in FFR.

[Satsui]

..what? Rap competition? Where?

[jewpinthethird]

THE ONE THAT I ONE!

I'd post the bitchin' lyrics, but I dont want to spoil the majesty that is "My White Ass Trying To Rhyme"

[QreepyBORIS]

Here is my favorite freestyle of mine:

Well--My name is Leo and I am a Greek.
I like my olives, green and black are neat.
I like Greek feta, it is very yummy,
I like Greek feta--get it from my mommy!

[Arch0wl]

MY NAME IS ARCH

AND IT RHYMES WITH STARCH

HOLLLLAAAAAAAAAA

[QreepyBORIS]

Sorry for posting "LOL", but SHIT I like that!