ok fine I'll do something to make It's Only Natural more even.
And RWOB can't wait to make those changes and get this song into the game. I'm so happy that it came out the way it is in my head I can't even express it properly.
I saw a flyer on a bulletin board at school asking for high-functioning aspergers/autism people to participate in some kind of experiment, and all I could think was, that sounds like a great place to meet girls.
- m7,31: missed a 16th (fixed)
- m27,30,33: missed a 4th (I don't hear it. )
- m34-38,62-63,77,79,82-84: missed a lot of steps, mainly on drums
- m49: last 32nd not needed (fixed)
- m68: jump on the emphasized 4th? (fixed)
- m71: extraneous 8th (fixed)
- m87-89,91: step more to percussions (fixed)
- m93: should be more 32nds (fixed)
- m108-109: one-handed trills not the best patterns to use (fixed)
- m111-119,121-125,127: feels underlayered; check over these parts carefully
- m121: fun if you added more jumps to emphasized drums
- m127: last arrow should be an 8th (Sounds like an echo to me, but fixed.)
And you'd better not be lame and not do the fixes and forget about the file like that Venetian Snares song you stepped. I liked that file and I never got to see it again.
edit: hmm, maybe that wasn't you. Whatever.
And you think that's a lot:
Originally posted by bmah
Red Wings Over Baron (FFIV Medley) / Powerglove / bluguerrilla & HighAndr0id
rating: [+?]
- m9-10: 24th up arrows nonexistant
- m14-22: step guitar more accurately; offsync in some places (e.g. right before m15 or m16)
- m37-40: incorrect steps; drums not playing to that many 16ths; also, layer the guitar melody more
- m45: more jumps for guitar melody?
- m56-58: incorrect steps; guitar and drums not playing to that many 16ths; also, there should be 12ths/24ths near end of m57 instead of a 32nd
- m67: start off with a jump
- m72,75: some 16ths nonexistant
- m78: incomplete layering
- m80,98,110,214,245: step more accurately to drums
- m95-96: optionally, you might want to step some quick bursts according to orchestral strings
- m152: needs better PR
- m165,209: forgot a jump
- m168-170: should be all jumps according to your previous layering
- m178-182: some 8ths should be removed; ignore unimportant hi-hats
- m185: incomplete layering
- m198: step more accurately to guitar
- m199: would be fun if you stepped to drumroll; you should offset the timing with a pause so that the oncoming section won't have 8th arrows on 4th-note beats
- m238-242,275-281: don't hear all those 16ths
- m253,257: should be 16ths near the end, not 12ths/24ths
summary: Extremely long song, but it's varied enough to keep people playing the whole way through. However, there are still too many errors. Keep on going!
Last edited by bluguerrilla; 08-24-2009, 07:29 PM.
And you'd better not be lame and not do the fixes and forget about the file like that Venetian Snares song you stepped. I liked that file and I never got to see it again.
edit: hmm, maybe that wasn't you. Whatever.
I don't remember stepping a V-Snares file that was worth fixing--Concrete Dandelions was pretty bad. xD
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