2019 September/October Set 4

[Ghost_Medley]

Re: 2019 September/October Set 4

1.006: Ghost note
1.071 - 1.630: Rest of the notes in this intro after the ghost note drag, sync here needs to be adjusted

Adjusted them to be in-sync.

22.010: This piano grace burst and the one just after should be adjusted so you don’t have repeated (3) happening both times. Shifting one of the notes in the flourish to (4) would play smoother

I changed one to [124] then the other to 2[134] to make it better.

44.721: (suggestion) This could even be a 24th trill to be honest, to better match the flute, but if this is done I would 100% recommend changing that (14) jump to (12) so there’s no split jump in a trill that fast.

I changed the jump in the middle to [12], but I thought it'd be better to just change the second half of the trill to 24ths.

48.973: jumps you’ve got starting here should be even earlier starting at 45.409 (same sound prominence)
49.170: single, not a jump

The layering's more consistent here now.

76.107: One-hand minitrill at this speed and notesnap is too much, should change to something more along the lines of 123(14) or 432(14)
76.996: Hand here changed to jump to avoid forced one-hand minitrill
77.785: Same as above or change the burst just after the hand from 4 notes to 3 too also avoid the forced one-hand minitrill
83.903: Same as above
I’m not gonna keep repeating the same note about your bursts so just noting here you need to go through them again with regards to your forced mini-trills. I’m certain you did it for difficulty but going for it through purposefully awkward patterns (not even whole sections mind you, but just 3 notes) isn’t the way to go about it, especially with it being such a huge spike compared to the rest of the file

I cleaned up most of the bursts in the drop section, whether through removing notes or reducing from hands to jumps. Hopefully it's better overall.

99.890 - 106.206: Not sure of the layering here, what are the jumps to?
118.098: single, not a jump

I actually don't remember that last one, but I removed the unnecessary jumps.

122.292 & 122.686: Unsure of what the jumps are to

I made those jumps layered to the background percussion, feeling that the mini jumptrills would be smoother to play.

126.979 - 127.078: Actually only 2 notes here instead of 3
128.574: Ghost note

Fixed and adjusted a tiny bit.


Updating my submission very soon, it should be good to go now.

[psychoangel691]

Re: 2019 September/October Set 4

Giselle (Ghost_Medley) has been moved from conditional to accepted

[psychoangel691]

Re: 2019 September/October Set 4

Chronostasis [blanky] {黒皇帝}
Rating: 7/10
- offset is good
- intro PR’s decent
- 43.192: these 12ths really interrupt flow being jumps; you accent them as polyrhythms earlier on and it’s probably still fine to do that
- 49.365: very audible piano note missing here
- 49.212/etc: at least for the first half, I really wish there was more noticeable pitch relevance like there was in the intro; the layering seems entirely agnostic to the melody here, which is a bit of a shame
- 59.008/etc: not a fan of this section; a bit too cluttered - it makes sense, just disapprove of the approach
- 1:21.355: this tempo change should occur at 1:21.049 for proper coloring; this quantize shift is very strange looking
- 1:45.539: numerous missing 24ths here
- 2:02.069: not really feeling this tempo change either; the thing it tries to accent is barely noticeable above the chaos of the main soundscape
- 2:04.059: piano very clearly continues to run past this note and doesn’t really stop
- 2:05.130: numerous missing 24ths here
- 2:07.273: some missing notes after here too
- solid structure but needs a bit more of a tune-up
- when in doubt, consult the BMS chart for proper rhythms/points where streams can be found

[psychoangel691]

Re: 2019 September/October Set 4

Happy Rainbow has been moved to rejected, no re-submission was found.

[Reshiram]

Re: 2019 September/October Set 4

I'll work on Happy Rainbow a bit and tool it up with a few rainbow sections to give it a sort of color theory, it's fine in rejected

Hoping to have it tooled up in time for the OT batch