Ember [Dance Gavin Dance] :: FFR Batch Submission
storn42 - Ember [Dance Gavin Dance] - Dance Gavin Dance [6.75 / 10]
Autumn 2024 Seasonal Batch
PublicPurchased
Rejected
from the album "Jackpot Juicer" released under rise records.
I think this chart could use more quads.

- The sim folder name isn't as expected: "Ember (Storn42)" vs "Ember [Dance Gavin Dance] (storn42)"

Simfile Folder Name

Ember (Storn42)

Note Count

3042

Chart Length

3:39

Average NPS

14.066

Estimated Difficulty

90.84

First Note

0:03

Ending Note Delay

0:01

Hand Bias

x -22

Framers

0 - 0 1 - 0 2 - 0 3 - 386 4 - 920

Jumps

x 631

Hands

x 384

Quads

x 113

Color Jumps

x 0

Color Hands

x 0

Color Quads

x 0

Most notes in:

1/3 of a Second
10 - 30.00 nps 0.5 Seconds
13 - 26.00 nps 1 Second
25 - 25.00 nps 2 Seconds
49 - 24.50 nps 5 Seconds
118 - 23.60 nps 10 Seconds
234 - 23.40 nps 30 Seconds
629 - 20.97 nps 1 Minute
1092 - 18.20 nps

Color Count

x 927 (30.47%)
x 868 (28.53%)
x 1 (0.03%)
x 1181 (38.82%)
x 1 (0.03%)
x 19 (0.62%)
x 18 (0.59%)
x 17 (0.56%)
x 10 (0.33%)

Largest Note Gaps

1.13s1.13s1s1s1s1s1s0.77s
35
28
21
14
7

A new chart file was uploaded with the following changes:
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Title changed: Ember => Ember [Dance Gavin Dance]
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Note Count changed: 2963 => 3042
AVG NPS changed: 13.70068 => 14.06597
Hand Bias changed: -11 => -22

Permission good (riserecords)
Sync good
Metadata good

** 16.407-31.657, 1:56.407-2:11.657: these are both the longest and densest chordjacks by far. At merely 1.1x rate I can hit the rest of the chart fine, but can't even keep up with these. The layering should be reduced, either quads to hands or yellow jumps to singles.

** The rest of the chart also has some dubious one-hand patterns:
- 1:23.907-1:24.782 left hand, 8-jack plus awkward jumps and transition
- 1:39.282-1:40.782 right hand, two jacks at once
- 3:03.656-3:04.406 left hand, 7-jack plus awkward jumps
- 3:05.906-3:06.781 right hand, long snake

This chart suffers from a similar problem to A Bridge Of Iron And Blood, in terms of difficulty spike and one-hand controls, albeit to a lesser degree, and the same feedback would apply here. Especially for the quad ones, the patterns themselves look simple since almost every 8th is a quad, but their sheer density makes them inappropriately hard compared to the other chordjacks in the chart.

Judge Score: 6.50 - Rejected

Ember (storn42) [7/10]
>Perms, metadata, sync good

8.157-8.282/10.157-10.282 - Not going to use the same jump PR like in 0.157-0.282? Compare 5.157-5.282/6.157-6.282/13.157-13.282
1:12.532/1:14.157/1:22.157/1:28.532/1:38.532/2:52.531 - Why are these hands? Kick/Snare = Hand. Vocals aren't automatic Hands in this section (e.g. 1:14.532/1:14.907/1:15.907/etc)
1:15.657 - Should be hand. Kick
1:16.782-1:17.657/1:32.782-1:33.657/2:56.781-2:57.656/3:12.781-3:13.656 - There's a Kick Hand, then a Snare Kick of the same PR, and then a Kick Jump that sounds the same as the previous Kick Hand. Plz fix
1:41.407/1:49.407 - Why is this Hand? Compare 0.407

>>Kinda S&C

Judge Score: 7.00 - Change Recommended