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Vampires.....
Posted on: June 23, 2008, at 07:39:32pm

Vampires...are they real or are they not?..... They come out at night hiding in the shadows...waiting.
anticipating your every move. They are smart...oh so clever. They would never get caught. They have you in a trance...yes you have just gotten caught by a vamp. They almost peirce their razor sharp fangs into your flesh. For they live forever. But they fear the rays of the sun. The burning sun that burns them to ashes. You see a few flashes and your free.They havent caught you yet....but i bet they will sooner or later. You cant run or hide from their vicious bite. Oh vampires are wonderous creatures of the night. They bring so much fright into peoples hearts. Your heart starts to beat fast...at last they have found you once more....you are surely done for. Being a Vampire is so much fun.....well you see i would know because i am one.....

  1. holy moly lil bri got that poetry down...haha..its awesome!..*tear*..imagine when your older..your writing will be even greater which seems impossible now..^-^

  2. omg *tear* you r the best!! *hugs* i got an editors choice award when i entered a poetry contest!! im so happy now thank you!!! *MEGA HUG*

  3. congratz!..your welcome..but its all you..^-^.*huggles*

  4. awww thanx!! *SUPER MEGA HUG*

  5. this is awesome!!
    extra points for it being about vampires.
    vampires are cool!

  6. omg thank you so much i thought i could have done better but know ppl seemed to like it im sooo happy thanx *hugs* yea i LOVE vamps read the about me, and interests section of my pro. it says it there ^-^

  7. its awesome i realy like it
    c U have more awesome poems so that makes u more awesome

  8. NO UR MORE AWESOME!! except it!!!

  9. wow dat shit was niiice =] eh you could do betta though lolz jk