...Poem I Made...
Posted on: January 13, 2008, at 09:46:09pm

My pains and aches scream for mercy as I attempt to flee from its presence.The desire of hatred burns through me as if a candle were burning in a dark room filled with anguish.Suffocating in feelings that will overwhelm a person. They are yet love and hate...Love is yet powerful but a feeling that no one will ever know what it really is.Like a fish attached to a hook you have been caught by love. Being attached to that so called hook called love, it has held on for a while. As soon as your heart feels replenished you know that love can't be stopped. It take you, devours your heart heart soon as the missing pieces are put back together again. As soon as your heart fully has been recovered it is soon to shatter like a dropped glass vile and you are now scared and you have a feeling, a very cold feeling.You shake you twitch you breakdown in sadness, and in depression again as you were before. Your cold flesh lying there like the ground beneath you while your drowning in tears in tears. Now knowing theres no point or care for living on so your yet to die in agony hearing voices yelling in your head forcing you to end this continues pain but with doubts and worry.

1. 1: dark_soul
   Posted at 9:47pm on January 13th, 2008

   Thats really beautiful
2. 2: Who Knows
   Posted at 11:36pm on January 13th, 2008

   :O! that is really good.
3. 3: Crzyboutcoco
   Posted at 4:25pm on January 18th, 2008

   =D i think its wonderful!!!
   heh luv ya
4. 4: keeller_Zebra
   Posted at 4:51pm on January 23rd, 2008

   WOW... like..wow i love it
   very touching