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a poem i wrote 5 mins ago, 3 pgs total
Posted on: July 14, 2008, at 09:25:03pm

This pain is endless
it slowly brings me down
it bends my knees
send me to the ground

I begin to wonder
where this pain comes
and can i try
to find what its from

this pain it hurts
it hurts me so
i just wish
i could let someone know

I try to keep feelings
hidden deep inside
their only escape
is when i cry

crying frees my soul
from this dwelling pain
making my body feel
normal again

But normal only lasts
as long as you hide
the feelings that are
eating you from inside

They eat you from inside
and tear your thoughts away
they can almost have you
not make it through the day

They tear you down
you build back up
Im about to quit
and give it up

to stop this pain
and end this sorrow
so i wont feel
worse tomorrow

I can end it so quick
can end it all so fast
so i can finally
see peace at last

So I can end this pain
and end my thoughts
all my actions
that i have brought

upon myself
that hurt me more
makes my heart and brain
feel so sore

Im so tired of fighting
im about to give up
im about to sit back
and call it enough

im done with this pain
im done letting it hurt me
some times i wish
it would leave me be

id show you my feeling
let you see my thoughts
but i dont want
you to get caught

in this twisted maze
in this endless drop
into depression
i wish it'd stop

I wish i could end this
with out saying goodbye
the only end i see
is for me to die

i dont want to let go
of everyone and everything
for im in fear of the pain
that death will bring

(CJC)

1: gaaraxsasuke
Posted at 12:29am on July 15th, 2008

i cant...find words....
this is so sad but just...i dono.
this really what u feel inside?jw
dont turn emo on us =P
2: fighting sword
Posted at 12:52pm on July 15th, 2008

ah I can't.... find the words, but um is this how you really fell....don't turn ELMO(emo)
3: fighting sword
Posted at 12:52pm on July 15th, 2008

ah I can't.... find the words, but um is this how you really fell....don't turn ELMO(emo)