a poem i wrote tell me what you think
Posted on: June 23, 2008, at 06:38:27am

i love writing, heres one of the many...



Why

Why cant i be the one
thats dead on the news
why cant we be in control of
the life that we choose

why cant i change who i am
why cant i be someone new
why is it that everything i wish for
never seems to come true

why is it that every wish
seems to turn out being bad
its like im meant to fail
and to lose all i ever had

why do people get what they want
and some are left with nothing
some people will have everything
and still wont stop their fussing

they want more things
to keep and to cherish
why cant people like these
just go off and perish

its people like those
who make us feel bad
about not having it all
or having stuff they once had

why cant i be the one
who gets everything they dream of
i cant even have someone
close enough to love

i wanted this girl
i wanted it to be you
i wanted to always tell you
how much i wish it was true

why am i the one
who always falls for you
and always heart broken
why do i love you?

ive never been given a chance
and yet i still fight on
so much that even
all my love is gone

youve broken my heart
and ive wrapped it up in gause
and im starting to even wonder
if this is just a lost cause

i dont really want to say that
but thats what it seems to be
or at least what i think
whats how it feels to me

1. 1: Sun Ce
   Posted at 1:55am on June 24th, 2008

   sad.. but very great
2. 2: gaaraxsasuke
   Posted at 2:27am on June 24th, 2008

   this is very nice
   <3
   poetry = Love
3. 3: katastrophex
   Posted at 2:58pm on June 27th, 2008

   i love this,fantastic job :]