FlashFlashRevolution

Don't know what to call this, help me out here.
Posted on: June 27, 2008, at 08:56:32pm

Darkness falls
As do I
Pain evolves
Within the eyes

Of the one who truly hate
Those of us that love
Who cannot find it in them selves
To care for a simple dove

I see my self described with these words
My life summed in these sentences
Astonished I see my image on this page
Reflecting my pretences

1: Zheant
Posted at 5:08pm on June 28th, 2008

About the title, it could be something with mirror included :). it's not as long as the others, but it's still good literature by you ^^ . By the way, was it the meaning that the sentences are shortest in the beginning and longest in the end?
2: Sakura_haruno2266
Posted at 9:35am on July 5th, 2008

omg this is soo good
im going to be putting up some of my poems on my profile soon :)
for the title i think it should be
lost sole
or
reflection of dark shadows (just an idea) o.o
3: Sterlingmagi
Posted at 7:39pm on November 12th, 2009

I'm not sure why they were longer, just the thoughts flowing out more.
thank you! I'll be using the second title possibly- credit all to Sakura_haruno2266!