in my tiny room
Posted on: June 19, 2008, at 03:55:59am

Here in my tiny room i sit.
deciding weather its my wit or just me. Maybe its just me sitting here but for all i know your here too. Then again why would you sit here with me in my tiny room of dispare? Yes its small and cramped but maybe i can fit u in some where....... Is it me that sees you or are you just my imagination. I dont know anymore, so for the reader tell me, is it me or am i seeing her everywhere? I wish i knew. If I did your face wouldent be showing up on every woman i look at.... please........ if anyone cares to listen tell me what u think.

1. 1: MusicChick18
   Posted at 10:43am on June 19th, 2008

   I am here the person that u seek to see. I am the one that comes in the night to see you there in ur tiny room of dispare. Its not just you imagining because if it was I would be imagining also in your tiny room...your tiny room of dispare....this was a very good story. It tells a lot about ur writting
2. 2: pina626
   Posted at 10:12am on June 21st, 2008

   this is great Jon..you write beautifully..^-^