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Father's day
Posted on: August 13, 2008, at 12:48:15am

Lilith walks to school on a fogy but cloudless day. She’s not a super happy person today. One its Monday and it's her least favourite day of the year.

"Ugh! I shouldn’t of go to school today. Maybe I can fake something and go home. but Ms. Clue hates me. She doesn’t get me for someone with clue as her name she doesn’t have one." Lilith says to herself.

She sees looks at her watch. It's five minutes till class starts.

"Ahh! I’m going to be late. Just as I think this day couldn't be worst it does." she says as she starts to run to get to school.

She full out ran but she was still later for class. She tries to sneak in before her teacher see's her. She sits in her desk, puts her head down pretending she was always there.

"Ms.Lane you late! One more late and you get a D.T. with me and I know you love those. But anyway as everyone knows is its fathers day today. So today we will spend the morning making crafts for our dad's." Ms. Clue said to the class.

She keep going on but Lilith wasn’t listening so was the guy beside her.

"Hey tough break. She's so mean. huh?" said John. Lilith shakes her head. "You really don’t like today. I know why. Poor you…" He tries to say more but he gets cut off.

"I know your my bud trying to be nice John. But I don’t need the pity card from you." Lilith says trying to be calm.

John nods and starts working on the craft the teacher gave. Lilith puts her head down trying to kill time and waits for the day to end while Ms. Clue checks on everyone’s work.

"Lilith get to work. Come one this isn’t hard." Ms.Clue says.

Lilith looks up and starts to stare at Ms.Clue. "Are you kidding me. I told you I don’t like today and probably wont do a thing all day." says Lilith.

The class starts to stare watching what is happening. Lilith looks around see all eyes are on her. She sinks down in her chair.

“Stop horsing around now do work or go to the office. Now what will you do?” Ms. Clue says not so calmly

“You better give me a hall pass then.” Lilith says and gives a wow-your-unbelievable look.

Ms.Clue gives the hall pass and continues checking everyone’s work, Lilith walks out trying not to cry and barely pulling it off.

“Someone woke up on the wrong of the bed today. Hahaha.” Ms. Clue says.

Two girls giggle, then say “No Ms. C Lilith’s dad ran out of her house two years ago.”

Ms. Clue looks at the girls. Her month drops. And thinks about what she just did.

“Sam and Clair that was mean. What if it happened to you? You guys are so mean. If you weren’t girls I would so hurt you. Lilith is nice to everyone and you are so rude. Ugh!” John snaps.

“Ok class calm down. Be quite and just work and I will be back in ten.” Ms. Clue says, and exit’s the room.

Five minutes later Ms. Clue and Lilith come back into the room. Lilith sits back down in her chair. Then leans over to John.

“Thanks John. C told me what happened.” Lilith said.

‘What are friends for?” John said.

  1. Cute. Lilith is such a pretty name. Were you inspired by the Biblical counterpart?
    You should probably go over and proofread it a bit more though, as some parts came off as slightly confusing.

  2. no i dont know the biblical counter part.. i was reading a book and it say lilth and i loved the name. haha i will cheak it over. thanks.. i just wantd to try a story for once..

  3. this is rly good!

  4. o.m.goshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!! that was sooooooooooo coooool!!! finally someone else that writes random stories!!! yay!!! I'm not alone!!!!!!!!!
    and lilith is a pretty name!!!!
    my favorite name is charlotte!!!^-^! just some random info!
    LOVE THE STORY!!!!
    can you make more pleeeeeeeeeese?

  5. thanks pal.. i probly could.. just would need time to think up mosr storys.. tho and charlotte is a awesome name.

  6. What book was it? I used to have a story with a protagonist named Lilith. I also have one with a Charlotte...
    If you take some time to smooth out the rough edges, I could see it as a nice opening to a series of shorts (or even a longer work).
    Hey, I write random stories too!

  7. i dont remember but it was in school and i just saw the name and liked it.. thanks harp.. im just happy its desent. and ok as my poems. yuppers u do... haha oh yeah i didnt tell u this your random storys made me like umm i want to write one too.. an i have had this idea that when i get my job im working at i will try to write stuff on the side.

  8. Oh? It's good that you feel so motivated to write - now I feel like writing something again! I look forward to your next work, and will try to have mine out soon (hopefully).

  9. ok yupper me too

  10. love it..^-^..is it based on a true story..just asking no reason..but yea totally awesome..damn those biatches u laughed..slap them slap them!..lmao..lovin it...<33

  11. haha.. it's somewhat true but... i dont know my dad and one teacher was bein a pain on fathers day adn was like amanda make a craft for dad.. and i was like i have no dad... he never even wanted to see me.. and the chick just kept going make craft for dad and my friend aka the guys of teh class told her to shut up and i laughed and then we had d.t. so its kinda real but not.

  12. tht was rly good i right alot of stories but i dont but them on here maybe i should idk lol but tht was a great job 10 for u and i would tottally give more