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The sadness of ones heart Posted on: August 3, 2008, at 02:04:12pm Wet streams of tears fall down my face. People know me but don't know the case. Sometimes I let these feelings out, But most of the time I let them fly about. I'm locked behind closed doors Thinking about all my horrors. Losing your love, to the above, Breaks all the strong, Making them fall; but for how long? |
Posted at 2:04pm on August 3rd, 2008
hahah harp its up!
Posted at 9:56pm on August 3rd, 2008
Haha, and the first word is a typo...
And the second line doesn't make sense.
I hope I didn't make you rush too much!
Posted at 11:03pm on August 3rd, 2008
haha its ok.. tpyos are my thing haha.. i will fix her up right away
Posted at 11:17pm on August 3rd, 2008
O.O..aaweessomee!...did i ever tell u write so damn good..cause u do..^-^
Posted at 11:18pm on August 3rd, 2008
haha thanks pina :D
Posted at 11:36pm on August 3rd, 2008
ur welcome!..and i truly mean it..i love it.^-^...hmm..wat do u plan to be when u grow up..because writing is in ur bones..xD..but yea im serious..lmao
Posted at 12:07am on August 4th, 2008
haha i want to be a therapist or a eacher or somethin like that.. and write maybe on teh side :D
Posted at 11:45am on August 4th, 2008
Much better. Now just capitalize your "I"s and fix the punctuation and I'll be satisfied. Yes, I'm picky.
It's pretty good, though. I'm dreadful at poetry, so I can appreciate this all the more.
Posted at 2:37pm on August 4th, 2008
u pricky prick person haha.. find time to fix it up .. again
Posted at 2:59pm on August 4th, 2008
oh thats so sad
its very good
Posted at 7:35pm on August 4th, 2008
awwe thanks
Posted at 10:24pm on August 4th, 2008
Hmm, the punctuation is still a little off. How about this:
line 2 - "don't"
line 3 - "out,"
line 5 - "doors"
line 7 - "above,"
line 8 - "strong,"
line 9 - "fall;"
Because I enjoy being a nuisance.
Posted at 10:38pm on August 4th, 2008
hahah there hahaha i am thinking u are having fun with being a nuisance too
Posted at 10:49pm on August 4th, 2008
Oh, I'm having a blast!
Please continue peppering your future poems with minor grammar and spelling mistakes so I can pretend to fix them.
Posted at 10:51pm on August 4th, 2008
hahaha i do what i do hahaha
Posted at 11:15am on August 5th, 2008
And I am forever grateful.
Posted at 5:21pm on August 5th, 2008
I love this poem. It reminds me of the one I did. *^_^*
Posted at 8:19pm on August 12th, 2008
omg its so sad its like we write the same stuff
Posted at 12:53am on August 15th, 2008
ohh..looky u wrote bk..my bad..lmao..thats such a cool career..and knowing u..u'll rock at it!!..omg..ill get u a ruler as a gift so u have something to hit ur pacients and kids with when they dont listen..xD..but awesome!..^-^..u have skittles..dont u forget :P
Posted at 5:35pm on August 15th, 2008
yay a rule adn ys i have skittles hahaha... ok i wont forget haha